With the global temperature rising, the frequency and intensity of extreme meteorological events such as hurricanes, floods and droughts are increasing, and climate warming has become a challenge that all mankind must face together.
Extreme meteorological events (improper collocation due to lack of "occurrence" of components after "extreme meteorological events")
2. Because teenagers are immature, curious and lack the ability to distinguish things, they are easily induced by bad information in the mass media, leading to deviations in their thoughts and behaviors.
Due to the abuse of the preposition "because", the subject is missing. )
3. On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. Through the perfect recitation art of many famous performing artists, the college students present were excited and deeply shocked.
"No-object head-talk performance after many famous performing artists read the art perfectly";
4. According to the company's strategic development plan, it is necessary to introduce a large number of outstanding talents, including clothing testers, group purchase salesmen, technical directors, senior design managers and many other grassroots and high-level positions.
Improper preposition leads to the lack of subject, so put "according to" after "company"; Improper collocation should be "including a large number of grass-roots positions such as clothing surveyors and group buying salesmen, as well as high-level positions such as technical directors and senior design managers"
5. Due to the gradual loss of the unit advantage, the children of the employees of the Eighth Hydropower Bureau in the hinterland began to choose the city as the goal of realizing their lives, especially the generation born after 1980, who are more eager to integrate into the city.
If the composition is incomplete and the object is missing, add "where" after "target".
6. The research and development of vaccine is a huge project, which requires years of painstaking research, and it is by no means a battle for one person, but a battle for all mankind.
In the latter clause, the subject is secretly changed or the predicate center is incomplete. You can add "need" before "time consuming" and remove "essential".
7. Perhaps even the author didn't expect that because this memorial article mourning cranes was carved on stones, the fate of words was linked with the fate of stones, leaving many mysteries for future generations.
Incomplete components, "because" and "make" keep one.
8. This work report not only comprehensively summarizes the continuous reform and development of medical and health undertakings in our county in the past 30 years of reform and opening up, but also points out the direction for the construction of medical and health security system in our county.
"To sum up ..." Missing object.
9. Several popular movies with the theme of Nanjing Massacre released this month restored many historical details, which made us deeply feel the courage of film creators to face the human tragedy.
Incomplete components, prepositions drown the subject and remove "in" and "in".
10 In order to better arouse teachers' enthusiasm, we must do a good job in assessing teachers' teaching achievements and give appropriate material rewards to teachers who have made outstanding contributions and are willing to contribute.
The head language of the object is incomplete, and "work" is added before "achievement".
. 1 1, the online bidding for the 90th Olympic Games with special numbers ended in Beijing, with a total price of12,836,500 yuan, and the average price of each Olympic Games exceeded 1400 yuan.
The words "every" and "average price" and "all" in item A are ideologically redundant, because "average price" is the price of each one, which is repeated with "every" and only "average price" is reserved.
12, the once famous table tennis player has returned to the motherland, and now he is a professor in peking university health science center, engaged in the teaching and research of sports medicine, and contributed to the national sports cause.
The composition is redundant, and the word "Yu" is removed from Ren Ren Yu;
13. The Association for Relations Across the Taiwan Straits and the Cross-Strait Exchange Foundation held the last preparatory consultation on the agreement text of the third Chen Jiang talks this afternoon, which lasted about one hour.
"About" and "many" are repetitive.
Improper collocation
1, Chinese classroom is actually a miniature social verbal communication field, where students learn the verbal communication skills and literacy they need to step into the broad society in the future.
There is no good match between "learning" and "literacy"
On March 5th, ten thousand young volunteers in our city took to the streets to learn from Lei Feng. The general slogan of this activity is "carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng, participate in voluntary action, serve youth entrepreneurship and build a harmonious city together".
The lack of predicate leads to the mismatch between "learning" and "activity", which should be "learning from Lei Feng".
Walking along the path, the wind brings a fragrant smell. Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall, releasing its fragrance.
The verb-object collocation is improper, so "Jian" and "Xiang" cannot be matched. The last sentence was changed to "Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall, from which the original fragrance was released".
When the strong typhoon hit this coastal city, the roaring wind roared down with dense raindrops. An hour later, the water in some areas was as deep as 60 cm, and the traffic was once paralyzed.
"The wind ... is falling", which is an inappropriate match.
The influenza A virus that has attracted the world's attention is not fatal, but it spreads quickly. If we don't find a way to understand its evolutionary principle, it will spread quickly and pose a great threat to human health.
"The disease is easy to spread quickly" leads to improper collocation. The original subject is "influenza A virus", and we can add it before the related word "if" in the latter sentence "I don't want to find its evolutionary principle, and the disease is easy to spread rapidly".
6. The National Autonomous University of Mexico recently held a seminar on influenza A virus H 1N 1. Some experts believe that Mexico is about to enter a hot summer, which may help reduce the spread of influenza virus.
Improper collocation changes "minus" into "minus"
7. The recent performance of the Suns is not satisfactory. The problem of poor defense has not improved, and the game has been defeated again and again. Even against the weak warriors, they lost.
Improper collocation of "problem … improvement", lack of predicate before "competition" and increase of "cause"
8. Since June last year, Mr. Liao and two friends from Jinjiang District of Chengdu have visited the disaster area in send warm many times. So far, they have visited more than 20 communities and nearly 400 families, with a journey of more than 3,000 kilometers.
Improper collocation, "visit" and "more than three kilometers from Qian Qian" can't be matched.
9. In this dialogue work, the author expounds the publicity of human ideal spirit concealed by modernity, such as respecting life, fearing nature, persisting in faith, and distinguishing between love and hate.
"Clarified ... Zhang Yang" Improper collocation of verbs and objects "
illogic
1. Our work in last year's competition was well received. This year's competition ranges from proposition, final, sea election to award. We are also assigned to participate in the whole process of the activity. We must attach great importance to it and cannot ignore it.
It should be "proposition, sea election, final to award"; Sentences are mixed together or subjects are switched. "We are assigned to participate in the whole process of the activity" should be "We will participate in the whole process of the activity".
2. Whether the school can form a good and promoting campus culture and whether learners can really adapt to and integrate into it plays an important role in the effective development of teaching activities.
"Whether or not" refers to two aspects of things, so the corresponding conclusion should also be two aspects, while "effective development" only refers to the positive aspects, which obviously does not correspond.
3. More than 1800 Fujian business elites from more than 40 countries and regions at home and abroad, 3/kloc-0 provinces and municipalities directly under the central government gathered in Fuzhou.
The words "at home and abroad" and "country, region and country" are repetitive and have vague meanings. Delete "more than 40 countries and regions, 3 1 province and city".
University graduates should not only pay attention to their own flexion and extension, but also pay attention to the hunger of their families. What they really need to pay attention to is their responsibilities and obligations to the group, society and others as individuals who have received higher education.
"Group, society and others" are not juxtaposed properly, and several concepts are not well crossed and cannot be juxtaposed.
5. For post-80s writers, the biggest problem is to overcome the tendency of homogenization, and publicizing artistic individuality is their development path.
An illogical "existentialism" ... tendency "
6. The tourist souvenir shopping mall in Grand View Garden is full of famous calligraphy and painting, root carving works, guide maps, antiques, ornaments and other handicrafts, which are dazzling and beautiful. Tourists are busy choosing and bargaining.
Some "celebrity calligraphy and painting, root carving works, guide maps, antiques, ornaments, etc." It does not belong to the category of "handicrafts", so it should be changed to "commodities".
7. Plant nutrition is to study how to increase crop yield and improve the quality of agricultural products through fertilization and other measures, so plant nutrition is very important not only for food quality and safety, but also for food quantity safety.
The misuse of related words, logically speaking, "so" refers to cause and effect, and the causal logical relationship of sentences is "cause and effect should be" because;
Incorrect word order
1. This development forum was held in Shanghai. During the two-day forum, people from all walks of life at home and abroad expressed their opinions and exchanged views on many topics such as environmental protection, personnel training and universal education.
Put "two days" before "this time" as an attribute, or change "two days to express opinions and conduct various exchanges" to "two days to exchange opinions".
2. According to the preliminary identification by the Institute of Zoology, Chinese Academy of Sciences, this golden yak is a newly discovered wild animal in the world, named "Golden Yak".
The discovery of new wild animals is the content of identification. Secondly, the subject-predicate collocation is improper, and it is renamed as "this golden yak is a newly discovered wild animal in the world and has been named' Golden Yak'".
Brocade is a kind of silk. In ancient times, because of the precious raw materials, complicated production technology and limited number of fabrics, it was a fashionable luxury that only dignitaries could enjoy.
Improper word order, "precious raw materials and complicated production process" was changed to "precious raw materials and complicated production process"
In recent years, in the beautiful land of South Guangdong, a number of multifunctional new buildings such as Jiuzhou City, Hainan Qiongyuan and Fengcheng Building have sprung up like mushrooms after rain, which makes people linger, with strange ideas and wonderful workmanship.
Improper word order should be "... a group of multifunctional new buildings with strange ideas and wonderful workmanship, which makes people linger."
structural disorder
1. Whether many high school graduates give priority to majors or schools when filling in their volunteers is largely influenced by market demand, social trends, parents' wishes, personal preferences and other factors.
These two expressions are "influenced by".
Lin Ping is an ordinary employee of an insurance company. Her story of donating dirty work to irrelevant girls moved netizens to leave messages on the Internet spontaneously, and everyone enthusiastically called it "the pride of Ningbo".
Two sentences mixed together, "deeds touched the majority of netizens to leave messages on the Internet spontaneously" should be "deeds touched the majority of netizens, and the majority of netizens left messages on the Internet spontaneously".
3. The reason why the real estate market fell into a year-long depression was that, in addition to the cyclical adjustment of the market, some developers pursued profiteering and bid up housing prices, which was also an important reason for the accelerated bursting of the bubble.
Sentence combination
4. Fruits are rich in nutrition, but bacteria and pesticides harmful to human body often adhere to their surfaces, so it is safer to wash and peel the fruits before eating them.
Change it to "so it is safer to wash and peel the fruit before eating" or "so wash and peel the fruit before eating".
5. The opening ceremony of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games took the word "harmony" as its core concept, which not only integrated the essence of China's traditional culture, but also displayed the new Olympic concept and won rave reviews from the masses.
"rave reviews" is a mixture, and we should only keep the words "rave reviews" or "rave reviews".
Ambiguous expression
1, get along with each other day and night, no one can have contradictions, but once there is a contradiction, they will hold their own opinions, quarrel endlessly, and do not give in to each other. This is actually the stupidest opinion.
Ambiguous meaning: The meaning of "this" is ambiguous. If it means "there can be no contradiction", it means "we don't agree after the contradiction"
2. At the end of April this year, influenza A (H 1N 1) broke out in parts of Mexico and the United States. The World Health Organization attached great importance to this and quickly adopted a series of emergency measures.
The ambiguity of "Mexico and parts of the United States"
A few days ago, he just received a group of provincial and municipal leaders, including the secretary of the provincial party Committee, to come to the county to investigate the problem of returning migrant workers.
Ambiguity of "A Group of Provincial and Municipal Leaders"