2. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot to the article.
4. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
5. The introduction of father is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
6. The central sentence revealed at the end of the article is a clear pen and summary, short and powerful.
7. The metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.
8. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article, full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
9. The description of the appearance is very funny, which highlights the lovely introduction ... which is very infectious because it is integrated with his own thoughts.
10. rhetorical questions began to attract readers.
1 1. The article is clear and forms a complete image.
12. The article melts into the scenery, and draws the scenery while expressing emotions. The full text can add literary interest to the article. However, the length of your article needs to be strengthened, and being too concise is also a small shortcoming. I hope you will continue to work hard and walk up a flight of stairs. Come on!
13. The method of enumerating figures and giving examples is very vivid.
14. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
15. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
16. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
17. This article is lyrical in narration.
18. The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.
19. He described with passion ... focused and detailed. The metaphor is apt and the words are vivid.
20. It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience.
The evaluation of correcting composition is clear at a glance 2 1. The plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
22. Although you can live happily in your own world, the growth of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to people's lives with a brand-new attitude and conform to the growth of society.
23. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the use of the expression "seeing the big from the small".
This paper has three main advantages: 1 This paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write the process of … completely. 2. The structure is rigorous and focused. 3. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.
This article is a mature narrative work, which shows the whole process of the experiment with accurate and fluent language, ups and downs and full of interest. The little author carefully observes and narrates in order.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to deal with it. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
27. A major feature of this article is the detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements.
28. This article is short and pithy. The language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel kind to read. Son, the teacher saw that your homework was faster this semester, and the content of your composition was much richer. All this is the result of your efforts, and the teacher is happy for you from the bottom of his heart. Because I see passion in you, how comforting it is! Come on, kid!
29. Write a scene in the narrative, measure people and care about people.
30. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling. This statement is wordy, but it doesn't convey the meaning. Just verbose.
3 1. Disadvantages: individual language expressions are not accurate enough. For example, the second paragraph "wonderful is your own harvest" should be deleted; The content of the third paragraph can be handled better.
32. Your language is simple and full of philosophy. I recommend it to everyone!
33. the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
34. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
35. There are many elves in nature. As long as you observe them carefully, they will give you rich associations and beneficial enlightenment. Some people observe bees and praise their selfless dedication; Some people observe ants and admire their industrious character. You observe the little crab and like its stubbornness. Look, these elves really give us a lot of inspiration. As you said, it's cute for crabs to walk sideways, and it's annoying for people to walk sideways. You found this, and adults have to admire it.
36. Briefly describe the time, place and results. ......
37. Motivation: Students' writing level is uneven, and some compositions only contain partial or individual sentences and words. Therefore, when writing comments, teachers should seize these bright spots of students and stimulate their interest in writing. "The two metaphors in the article are wonderful and unique. I feel immersive after reading it. I like them very much and hope to like them in the future. The teacher believes that you won't let me down. " Although there are not many words, the role of this kind of incentive is immeasurable.
38. The article is balanced from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
39. The use of parallel names adds a lot of color to the article.
40. This article shows readers with rich imagination and colorful language ...
The third chapter of correcting composition evaluation is clear at a glance 4 1. Highlight the theme directly in the content, be clear and to the point, and have no unnecessary meaning.
42. The design of the work is ingenious, and the writing is concise and fluent. The imagination is bold, creative, novel and attractive to read.
43. The beginning is simple and natural.
44. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
45. The description of the scene arouses suspense.
46. Your article is like a slow-moving stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
47. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
48. There are always many absurd stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
49. The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
50. In this letter to my aunt, Shen Si described an important event at home-grandpa found her a new grandmother. She knows this should be a happy thing, but she "will never be happy" because she loves her grandmother too much. Shen Si, don't you love grandpa very much, too? Don't you also want grandpa to be happy in his later years? Then please leave a place for your new grandmother in your heart and love her as your own grandmother! Quanxin has sincere feelings, fluent and appropriate language and correct format. It is very good for beginners to write letters so well. "
5 1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
52. Composition evaluation 2
53. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating, attracting readers ... the combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and detailed.
54. The dry content is like boiled water, with no taste at all. It will be delicious to add more soft sentences. I believe you will give me a surprise!
55. The selection of materials is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes, old ideas and bland.
56. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.
This article may not be particularly attractive in plot, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the characters well; on the other hand, it has vivid language and rich life, which has a good effect of expressing ideas.
58. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
59. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
60. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
Make sentences quickly
1, when I turned around and saw Elizabeth? When Gilbert describes the painful marriage, the achievements of the western feminist movement are clear at a glance.
2. If there are too many subfolders in a folder, it is clear at a glance, you can consider establishing an alphabetical menu.
3. An aging society may also affect elections, although it is not clear at a glance.
It is clear which camp Jonathan will stand in four years.
Looking down from the tower, the scenery of the whole city is clear and refreshing.
6. Of course, the situation of this group is quite grim. However, what Argentina has done can only be worse, because their ingenious arrangement is clear at a glance.
The spinning goods in this supermarket are arranged in an orderly way, so customers can see them at a glance as soon as they enter the door and find what they want to buy soon.
8. Comics tend to exaggerate the story in order to be clear at a glance.
This design is so detailed that even a layman can see it at a glance.
10, at a glance, some examples and data show that China has made great progress in gender equality-at least in the government field.
1 1. If every potential opportunity is converted into hourly salary, it is obvious whether it is worth spending time and saving money.
12. On this page, you can sort the activities by priority, and the latest updates of all activities can be seen at a glance.
13, insiders can see at a glance that the problem of this factory is that the quality control is not strict enough.
14, I think this decision is clear at a glance, but not all my consultants agree to do so.
15 but even in such a golden age of enterprise research and development, the role of science in commercial profit is not always clear at a glance.
16, my brother's expression made my mother know at a glance that he was lying, but he kept a straight face. I just hope my brother can admit his mistake.
17. Google Earth shows that small-scale local projects have swallowed up the valleys along the river and some deserts in the east and west of the delta.
18, things are clear at a glance, even if we use our own resources, we will not provide a panacea.
19 well, the result is clear at a glance. Our brains are not only in a "rest" state during rapid eye movement sleep or slow wave sleep.
Clear slogan of community fire safety
At a glance, the fire safety slogan of the community 1 1. Enterprises should take the lead in fighting for upstream fire safety.
2.？ Don't tamper with the fire control facilities, it is very useful to put out the fire.
3.？ Everyone should turn off the fire, get ready and pay attention to safety.
4.？ Don't relax the fire prevention work during the Spring Festival.
5.？ 1 19 Life Hotline Safety Notes
6.？ The fire company is safe, you, me and him.
7.？ Create a safe home from primary school fire fighting.
8.？ Doing a good job in fire prevention will make the family happy.
9.？ Protect fire control facilities and maintain fire safety.
10.？ Love fire fighting wholeheartedly, and the family will be safe for a long time.
1 1.？ Learn a little knowledge of fire fighting to add peace and happiness to life.
12.？ The fire started with a subtle disaster caused by negligence.
13.？ Everyone cares about fire control, and every household keeps safe.
14.？ National fire protection, life first.
15.？ If you don't fight fire with fire, you will suffer.
16.？ * * * Build a "firewall" in your heart and set up a life safety net.
17.？ Eliminate fires and cherish homes.
18.？ Do a good job in fire prevention and self-help.
19.？ Always pay attention to safety and fire prevention everywhere.
20.？ Maintain fire safety and protect fire control facilities.
At a glance, the fire safety slogan of the community 2 2 1. Eliminating fire hazards and building a harmonious society
22.？ Keep your family away from the fire
23.？ It is forbidden to occupy fire control facilities to ensure the smooth evacuation passage.
24.？ Everyone participates in fire fighting, and everyone is happy and healthy.
25.？ Enhance fire prevention awareness and master common sense of escape.
26.？ Fire prevention propaganda into wanjia safe company has you, I have him.
27.？ Fire laws and regulations are the guarantee of life's conscious compliance.
28.？ Family fire prevention is booming.
29.？ Cherish your home and eliminate fire hazards.
30.？ Mobilize the whole people to learn fire fighting and run towards a well-off society.
3 1.？ Mobilize the whole people to build a fire safety firewall.
32.？ Everyone is responsible for fire control work.
33.？ Fire prevention, heart to heart, life-long safety
34.？ Don't forget the fire alarm 1 19, a true friend in times of crisis.
35.？ Don't wet your nose and mouth with a towel when it is on fire.
36.？ Disaster prevention and fire prevention, everyone is safe and happy
37.？ People's lives are paramount, and fire hazards must be eliminated.
38.？ Eliminate fire hazards and keep your family safe forever.
39.？ Publicity every day, safety every day, fire prevention every day, peace every day.
40.？ The most important thing is that fire is merciless and prevents people's lives.
At a glance, the fire safety slogan of the community is 3 4 1. The fire engine whistled to make way for passing vehicles.
42.？ Master fire control knowledge and live a safe and happy life.
43.？ Cherish life and stay away from fire.
44.？ Eliminate fire hazards, create a happy life and build a harmonious society.
45.？ Fire protection concerns thousands of households, and peace and harmony depend on everyone.
46.？ Be prepared for danger in times of peace.
47.？ People's firemen put out fires for the people.
48.？ Obey the fire laws and regulations and live a happy life.
49.？ Don't tamper with the fire control facilities. Fire fighting is very useful.
50.？ Popularize fire prevention knowledge and enhance fire prevention awareness
5 1.？ Don't forget fire safety when setting off fireworks.
52.？ Hidden dangers are more dangerous than open fire prevention, and the responsibility for disaster relief is more important than Mount Tai.
53.？ Give priority to prevention and combine prevention with elimination.
54.？ Take good care of fire equipment and abide by fire laws and regulations.
55.？ Fire protection is ruthless, fire prevention is the first.
56.？ Live a happy and safe life far from home.
57.？ Life first, peace and harmony.
58.？ Abide by fire laws and regulations to reduce fire accidents
59.？ Don't underestimate the fire hazard caused by throwing cigarette butts casually.
60.？ Learn a little fire fighting knowledge to increase peace and happiness.
Comment on composition correction
1. This article has a clear theme and is very vivid, which meets the requirements of our writing this time. Delicate description, accurate wording and sentences.
2. Through rich language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other means, through the disparity and differences between things, strongly support the center of the article. The article is reasonable in imagination and vivid in narration.
Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
4. Although the events with certain narrative value are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation. However, the article has a clear point of view and a clear position on likes and dislikes, which makes people clear at a glance.
Such a rich content is similar to that written by the screenwriter. Your exercise is flesh and blood, and reading is really a great enjoyment. Your composition is specific, and I am addicted to it. Before you write so many words, you must like to see it as a document.
6. The logical reasoning ability of this paper is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough. There are many loopholes and the language is incoherent, but it is desirable that the article is clean and tidy, which makes people look comfortable.
7. Whatever. Why isn't the handwriting like a cat's? The word is not in the middle of the grid. Of course, they don't like it. Your handwriting is uneven. Is it because of the strong wind today? I don't believe your handwriting is bad. If you always scribble carefully and patiently, you will write better than me.
8. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.
9. The topic is old-fashioned, and people will not be much interested in reading your composition. Everyone will think of such a topic. It seems that the general content does not match the topic. Use your head. It's more appropriate to change the topic. I think it's better to call it.
10. Dash), not the same. I like your interesting topic very much.
1 1. The works are ingenious in conception, concise and fluent in writing, bold and creative in imagination, novel in articles and fascinating to read.
12. The composition is bumpy and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, it is easy to fall down if you are not careful. This sentence seems to have been cut off. If you read it carefully after writing it incompletely, you will find that you can't be afraid of trouble. Good articles are all corrected. You should learn to correct every sentence by yourself.
13. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
14. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines. In this paper, a series of verbs expressing the actions of characters are accurately used, and the foil technique is well used.
15. A famous saying at the beginning of the article hits the theme directly, which makes people shine. Later, flashbacks were used to attract people's attention, and I couldn't stop this article. Clever use of writing skills to achieve the best effect of this article is an excellent composition.
16. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this article.
17. Pay attention to the details of key parts. The story is clearly described in detail, which is a good thing. The scenic spots are described in the order of tour, with emphasis on description.
18. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can grasp the main features of things. The length is short and pithy, and it is worth reading.
19. The topic is novel and closely related to the theme. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it.
20. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
2 1. The scenery description is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate, and the scene is full of emotion, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.
22. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
23. Adopt the method of Miao Yin ballads. Quoting familiar poems, ballads, proverbs or famous sayings at the beginning of an article can give people a vivid and cordial feeling. The article is a masterpiece with rich content, strong readability and clear theme.
24. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which makes it feel very happy from beginning to end.
25. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it.
26. Being able to have a reasonable imagination embodies a meaningful philosophy and is thought-provoking. The style of writing is fluent and concise, which gives full play to one's imagination and is a good article.
27. The beginning of the article is too complicated, the level is not clear, the process is detailed, but the end is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
28. Smooth and vivid sentences, such as Lushan Waterfall, flow downstream. The metaphor is very apt, which shows that you have been carefully observing how you came up with such a clever rhetorical question of personification. How appropriate is it to use here? This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time, and the quoted ancient poems are just right. I will use the poems I have learned in my composition, and write the two-part allegorical sayings wonderfully, making my stomach laugh.
29. The article perfectly explains your language skills, and there are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which adds literary interest to the article. The whole article has a rigorous structure and a clear theme, and it is an excellent composition.
30. The article can read fresh and interesting language and describe things. Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
3 1. In this paper, the description of scenery is concise and accurate, while association is touching the scene and blending the scene, giving people a beautiful feeling, and the language accurately renders an immersive atmosphere.
32. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
33. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description. Miscellaneous but not chaotic, but detailed and focused. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple and profound, which is thought-provoking.
34. This article imagines fantasy, which not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are also described in detail, authentic, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth. The article is consistent from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
36. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and weak. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
37. Neat, just like the streets of seaside towns, it is really comfortable to find a little dirty handwriting. Your handwriting is as beautiful as printed, and I am ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours.
38. The article melts into the scenery, portrays the scenery while expressing emotion, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete.
39. The dry content is like boiled water, with no taste at all. Might as well put in a good word. It doesn't have as many words as Vivienne Liu (or the names of other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed? Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and everything is missing.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. Use spoken English in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.
4 1. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring the reader into a happy paradise, making people accept the baptism of the soul and leave a deep impression.
42. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style.
43. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
44. The article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.
45. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always interesting and pleasing to read.
46. The language is too brief and seems to be an outline narrative, but the outline is not available, the meaning is incomplete, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.
47. Focus is prominent, the center is clear and the concept is clear. The details are appropriate, the priorities are clear, the plot is tortuous, and accidents happen at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent. The ending is very interesting.
Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
49. The article is clear in theme, rich in content, persuasive in quoting famous sayings and classic examples, and can express the author's views more effectively. At the end of the topic, there is a well-founded ending echo.
50. The beginning is concise and informative. The language is fluent, meticulous and vivid. The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
5 1. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
52. This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.
53. This is an enjoyable article. First of all, my thoughts and feelings are very strong, which of course comes from the profound and fresh views in your article. The so-called mountaineering has feelings, and watching the sea has feelings. You touched others with your true feelings, which is the greatest success of your composition.
54. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The plot is closely linked, rarely out of touch, the language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it is very kind to read. This is a simple but sincere article that is impressive.
55. imaginative and innovative. First of all, let me introduce myself. In addition, the language of the article is concise and humorous.
56. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
57. It's interesting, and it fits the previous metaphor. Finally, in a few words, the author showed his feelings about it, which was touching.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read.
59. Section X is too verbose to see the significance of this composition. It's not the point. It should be simple.
In contrast, at the beginning of the article, different people and things or the same person and things were compared and introduced at different times and in different aspects. Make the depicted image more prominent, enhance the expression effect of the article, and leave a deep impression on people.
The contents before and after 6 1. are not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
62. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, but the clever use of personification in the content of the article makes the objects in the article have the characteristics of human behavior and thoughts and feelings, which adds some highlights to the article.
63. Your article is like a slow-moving stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
64. The hierarchy is chaotic. There are so many sections in one section, but too few sections are read. Can you give me more? Can the middle section be divided into several sections?
65. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
66. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
67. This article is full of passion, and between the lines, you can feel the little author's love for it. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
68. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.
69. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two characteristics of this article, and the content is more abundant.
70. Don't divide the second section, if you want to merge this section, you will not be able to contact the content of the above section.
7 1. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
72. Close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
73. The structure of the article is reasonable, the language is forceful, and the most important thing is that the main idea of the article is clear. Although rhetoric is not gorgeous, it is simple and touching, and the echo from beginning to end has the effect of making the finishing point.
74. Clear paragraph division applies to paragraphs with hierarchical meaning and clear paragraphs.
75. The title of the article is sharp, and the author's point of view is repeatedly emphasized from different angles and aspects, and the reasoning is thorough and clear.
76. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough. The content of the article uses parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
77. The topic is fresh, like bamboo shoots in spring, tender and crisp. The topic is so interesting that people can't help reading it. Tell me, where did you come up with such a wonderful topic with punctuation marks (ellipsis)
78. This paper adopts the first-person writing method, which makes readers feel the same way and directly hits the depths of the soul. The characters created in the article are vivid, the plot is fascinating, and the whole reading is cordial, natural and credible.
79. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is also a relatively successful work.