Ill sentence: A sentence that is incomplete or wrongly connected between words.

Types of common ill sentences:

1, incomplete composition. A complete sentence should be "branches and leaves" complete, with complete and clear meaning. If a sentence lacks "branches" or "leaves", it means that the composition is incomplete.

2. Improper use of words. Improper use of words means that the words used in the sentence do not conform to the context, or words with similar or even opposite meanings are used.

3. Improper collocation. A pair of words in a sentence can't match or violate language habits.

4. Repetition. Repetition refers to the simultaneous use of two or more words with similar or identical meanings in a sentence.

5. Improper classification. Improper classification refers to putting things that do not belong to the same genus together.

6. Inconsistent. Inconsistency refers to ambiguity and contradiction in sentences.

7. The word order is reversed. Word order inversion means that the words used in a sentence are not formed in a certain grammatical order, but the word order is reversed.

8. The reference is unknown. Unknown reference means that things or people in a sentence are not clearly explained, which leads to confusion in the meaning of the sentence.

9, unreasonable. Unreasonable means that the meaning of a sentence is unreasonable and unconventional.

Methods to modify sick sentences: First, read the original sentence carefully for several times, see the context clearly, understand the content of the sentence, and see if it is smooth; Then, according to the characteristics of the types of sick sentences, find out the reasons and correct them; See if the basic meaning of the original sentence is retained after the revision, and whether punctuation is used correctly.

Second, modify the sick sentences.

1, extracurricular activities, the playground presents a vibrant scenery.

The Children's Palace held an exhibition of scientific and technological achievements.

Yesterday, there was a strong wind all night.

Xiaohong expressed her opinion in the conference room.

I can assure you that we will win the championship in this school sports meeting.

I haven't heard Xiao Ming's crisp singing and happy smiling face for a long time.

7. All the teachers and students in the school basically attended the "June 1st" party.

8. I watched the TV series "Heroes Without Regret" and gained a lot.

9. In the early morning, the golden sunshine rises slowly from the east of Ran Ran.

10. If everyone pays attention to hygiene, our health and diseases will be guaranteed.

1 1. Even though I study so hard, my grades are still not as good as yours.

12, papermaking is the four great inventions in ancient China.

13, we actively responded to learn from Lai Ning.

14, during the Qingming Festival, we visited the grave with lofty feelings.

15, Xing 'an Mountains in summer is the best season of the year.

16. His grandfather often recalls interesting past events.

17, Lei Feng spirit is an example for us to learn.

18, Zhang Ming was awarded the title of "Excellent Young Pioneers".

19, no difficulty can frighten the heroic Red Army soldiers.

20. "Flying down three thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days." This is a figurative sentence.

2 1 Premier Zhou lived a simple life.

22. My mother bought vegetables, pork, apples and cucumbers from the market.

23. After a whole hour or so, Fanka fell asleep with sweet hope.

24. In spring, all our classmates and young pioneers are going to play in the wild.

After reading this article, I can't help thinking of something that happened to me.

26. Mr. Wang told us something he met recently that he never forgot.

27. I said to myself, "How did I make a mistake again?" .

28. After class, the campus immediately boils.

29. Compass is the four great inventions of ancient China.

Although compressed air can bear huge weight, it has many wonderful uses.

3 1, in the construction, to prevent accidents.

Teacher Li won the title of "model worker" in the national education system.

33. Zhan Tianyou overcame various difficulties and tests and presided over the construction of the Beijing-Zhangjiakou Railway.

34. It is inevitable that a person has shortcomings and mistakes. Just improve.

After the teacher's explanation, the students understood the profound meaning of this fable.

We went shopping and bought many things, including pencils, notebooks, erasers, stationery and markers.

In recent years, our living standards and environment have been greatly improved.

38. The burning sun shines warmly on the earth.

We should learn from and carry forward Lai Ning's heroic deeds.

Sweet birds and blooming flowers can be heard everywhere in the park.

4 1, the bell rang, and everyone walked from the playground to their classrooms.

42. As the sun sets, we head for the suburbs.

43. The beautiful prairie stretches for 1000 miles and is green everywhere.

44. Lushan Mountain is a famous tourist and summer resort in China.

45. The interesting things that happened in the summer camp still flashed before my eyes.

Today, Miss Li told us many stories about Lei Feng.

After listening to the teacher, Xiao Ming was deeply inspired.

I often see Xiaoming sometimes running on the playground.

49. The levels and sentences of this composition are very clear.

No matter what meeting, he always speaks first.

5 1, Li Ming is wearing a red coat and a white hat, which is very energetic.

52. People's living standards are constantly improving.

He brought a pen, ruler, eraser, reference books and other stationery.

Because Xiaoming studies hard, he has made rapid progress.

55. Before going to school, my brother could write and write Tang poems.

Xiaohong and Xiao Li are good friends. She often helps her review her lessons.

57. People who don't do what they say is a very bad style.

I was eating when Xiaohong asked me to go to the movies.

With the help of my teacher, I gradually developed good study habits.

60. A young girl came running in the rain with a pickup truck.

6 1. The author of this song is Max Zhang.

62. We should keep clean in public places.

He reviews his homework very carefully.

64. The old man's pointed chin was covered with a gray beard.

65, do a good job in class work must give full play to the role of class cadres.

66. People expressed their opinions at the meeting.

Zhou Xiao accepted his classmates with an open mind.

We have a good habit of not eating snacks since childhood.

This is the largest ocean-going ship made in China.

Our school didn't pay enough attention to health work in the past.

7 1, be sure to correct it carefully and carefully check the mistakes in your homework.

We are watching a beautiful dance.

The level and language of this article are beautiful.

74. The phenomenon of students spending pocket money indiscriminately has been obviously corrected.

75. Gu Jing is like a warm mother, feeding her children in her hometown with sweet milk.

76. The typos in Xiao Fang's composition have been greatly improved.

77. Because of his excellent grades, Li Ming studies very hard.

78. She tries her best to help her classmates who have difficulties in academic performance.

79. The peach trees are covered with many big and red peaches.

80. I have finished my homework and Chinese homework carefully.

Her hometown is Beijing.

82. Xiaohong and Xiaojun told the teacher that she took half a day off in the afternoon.

83. The classroom is quiet. No one is there, only Xiaohua is doing his homework.

84. My classmates' criticism of me is basically completely correct.

In the school sports meeting, our class made gratifying achievements.

86. The children performed their own programs happily.

My father used to tell me interesting stories about his childhood.

In the past, our class didn't pay enough attention to health work.

89. I must get rid of my bad shortcomings.

90. The National Day is coming, and many new slogans and slogans are posted everywhere in the streets.

9 1. Colorful red flowers are blooming in the park, which is very beautiful.

92. I was having breakfast when Xiaojun called me to school.

93. After hearing this story, I laughed in unison.

94. It's time in physical education class, and the students are happy on the playground.

95. I finished five of the six assignments, and I finished one without doing it.

96. I record and watch educational TV programs.

97. Pay attention to the stroke order and strokes when writing, and the typos have been greatly improved.

98. The buildings such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Palace Museum and the Asian Commercial Building are very modern.

99. My mother often rewards me for studying hard for the four modernizations.

100 in order to have a good squadron meeting with the theme of "dedication", we scrambled to speak.

10 1. After reading the works all night, I love the great Premier Zhou even more.

102, my mother often teaches me to be willful.

103. The train runs along the railway on the Gobi Desert.

104, Grandpa Zhou loves our children, and we love Grandpa Zhou.

105, I am very interested in this book.

106, after the teacher's education, I finally realized my mistake.

107, Xiaohong participated in the third live composition competition for primary school students.

108, young pioneers should give play to their fine traditions.

The students listened attentively to Grandpa Sun's story.

1 10, I can't help but blurt it out.

1 1 1. Every student should study hard.

1 12. There are many places of interest in China, and Huashan is the only one.

1 13. Miss Wang and her classmates have deep feelings.

1 14, colorful red flowers are in full bloom in the park. .

The temperature today is very dry and uncomfortable.

1 16, Chinese is particularly interested in him.

At the squadron meeting, the students criticized each other.

1 18, when I finished the exam, I quickly handed in my papers.

1 19, lin li answered the teacher's questions.

120, I must correct the bad shortcomings.

12 1. The streets are quiet and pedestrians are in constant stream.

122, the role of computers is very extensive.

123, Xiao Ming's good academic performance is the result of his serious study.

124. There are many vegetables in the garden, including cucumber, eggplant, green vegetables and watermelon.

125, Beijing in spring is the most beautiful season of the year.

126, in the face of difficulties, we must stand the test.

127, Teacher Zhang has a healthy figure and a fast pace.

128, Dong Hui of our class volunteered to be a librarian.

129, grandpa loves me so much.

130, during the football match, the players put forward the concept of "winning without arrogance and losing with grace".

13 1, the people's living environment is constantly improving and improving.

132, I guess he probably went out to see a movie.

133, with the help of teachers, typos have been greatly reduced.

134, if the weather is so cold, he will keep exercising.

135, China has the Great Wall of Wan Li, which is not found in the world.

136. It was windy all night last night.

137. As soon as the bell rang, the students flocked out in an orderly way.

138. At the get-together, the students sang beautiful songs and danced happily.

139, the bright moonlight filled the earth, and the stars in the sky blinked naughtily.

140, we should not only attach importance to Chinese and mathematics, but also develop in an all-round way.

14 1. This semester, our school launched an upsurge of "learning from Lai Ning and loving the collective".

142, I won a reputation for the school in the district sports meeting.

143, the teacher said that Kong Fansen rescued Tibetan orphans.

144. A winding path flows between two mountains.

145, exciting passwords resounded through Shan Ye.

146. In spring, green trees are planted on both sides of the road.

On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, I looked at the moon and stars in the sky.

148, I gave the old and new sweaters to the children in the disaster area.

149. Red flags fluttered in the wind on both sides of the school gate.

150. We discussed and listened to the report of the old Red Army.

15 1. The sun shines on the table through the glass.

152. This deeply interesting idea was printed in my heart.

153. In the mountain village, there are fruit trees everywhere.

154. All the teachers, students and principals of our school took part in the tug-of-war competition.

155. I have a red scarf.

Third, judge whether the following sentences are complete, tick "√" for completeness and "×" for incompleteness.

1. Mantis catches cicadas. ……………………… …… ………………()

2. Little match girl. ……………… ……… ……………()

3. Serve the people. …………………… ………… …………()

4. The operating table is the position. …………… ………… ……………()

5. Visit Tiananmen Square in Beijing. …………… ………… …………( )

6. Birds learn skills. ……………………… ……… ……………()

7. I love Yangmei in my hometown. ……………… ……… ……………()

8.* * * jointly founded the great Marxism. … …… ……………()

9. Wan has become a world of makeup. … …… … … ……( )

10. This is Premier People's Republic of China (PRC). … … … … …( )

1 1. Please think twice about your relatives during the festival. ………… ………… … … … ……( )

12. Such a magnificent project. …… ……… …………… ……( )

13. In order to earn a piece of bread, I have to sell my labor at a low price. ( )

14. That bird's paradise is indeed a bird's paradise! ……… …………( )

Laser is the fastest. ……………… ………… … …………( )

4. Judge whether the following statements are correct, tick "√" for the correct statement and "×" for the incorrect statement.

1. Zhou Yu and Zhuge Liang debated the military together. ……………………………( )

2. A red sun slowly descended the mountain. ………………………………( )

We should consciously observe the things around us. ……………………………( )

4. How many provinces and cities have not used the wood in Xing 'an Mountains? …………………( )

At noon, the sun shines brightly on a forest. ………………( )

6. The habit that we must think when reading. …………………………( )

7. The merchant lost one of his camels. …………………………………( )

8. We should safeguard the honor of our school. …………………………………( )

9. Sunrise at sea is a wonder. …………………………( )

10. We will lift you from the grass. …………………… ………( )

1 1. A fresh sea breeze blew into the house. ……………………… ……( )

Reference answer:

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1, change "scenery" to "sight". 2. Replace "achievement" with "achievement". 3. Change "one night" to "one day" or change "day" to "night". 4. Change "Xiaohong" to "Everyone" or change "expressing opinions" to "actively speaking". 5. Remove the "possibility". 6. Remove "and happy smiling face". 7. Delete "basically". 8. Add "I" before "get". 9. Remove "light". 10, remove "harmony disease". 1 1, change "even" to "though". 12, add "one" after "invention". 13, after "Lai Ning", add "Appeal of". 14, change "sublime" to "reverence". 15, put "Summer" and "Xing 'anling" in the correct order. 16. Delete "past" or "future". 17, remove the "spirit". 18. Delete the title of ""or change "being rated" to "obtained". 19, delete "any" or "everything". 20. Change "figurative sentences" into "exaggerated sentences". 2 1, change "simple" to "simple". 22. Remove "pork apples". 23. Delete "left and right" or "whole". 24, delete "and young pioneers" or "classmates and". 25. Delete "can't help" or "can't help". 26. Delete "recently" or "recently". 27. Delete "to yourself" or "to himself". Delete "immediately" or "immediately". 29. Add "a" after "invention". Replace "although" with "not only, but also". 3 1, ranking of "not occurred" and "accident". 32. Delete the title of ""or change "being rated" to "obtained". 33. Delete "and test". Replace "improvement" with "correction". 35. Remove "make". 36. Delete "stationery and". Replace "environment" with "quality of life" or delete "and environment". 38. Change "warm" to "strong". 39. Delete "and carry forward". 40. Delete "and blooming flowers" or add "see" before "blooming". 4 1, add "classmate" before "Du". 42. Delete "at night". 43. Get rid of "green everywhere" or "thousands of miles away". 44. The order in "Summer" and "Famous Articles". 45. Get rid of "endless fun". 46. "Many" and "Lei Feng" are in the same order. 47. Remove "make". 48. Delete "often" or "sometimes". 49. Delete "and the statement is". 50. "Always" and "every time" are reversed, and "first" or "first" is removed. 5 1, add "Dai" before "One Cap". Delete "progress and". 53. Delete "reference". 54. Replace "and" with "so". 55. Add "reading" or delete "and Tang poetry" before "Tang poetry". Change one of "She" to "Xiaohong" or "Xiao Li". 57. Remove "people". 58. Remove "positive" or "happy". 59. Add "I" before "step by step". 60. Change "urgent" to "slow". 6 1, delete "author" or "written". 62. Replace "maintenance" with "maintenance". Change "homework" to "homework" or change "review" to "doing". 64. Remove "a face". 65. Put "full" before "play". 66. Add "everyone" before "one by one". 67. Add "criticism" after "classmates". After "want", add "cultivate". 69. Put "biggest" before "ocean-going ship". 70. Put "health work" after "past". 7 1, arrange "serious rectification" and "serious inspection". 72. Remove "beautiful". Delete "hierarchical sum" and "all". Replace "phenomenon" with "defect" or replace "correction" with "reduction". 75. Change "cultivation" to "cultivation". Replace "improvement" with "reduction". 77. Replace "because" with "so". Delete "by all means" or "by all means" and "to achieve success". 79. Delete "more" or "full". 80. Delete "assignments in all subjects" or "language assignments". 8 1, remove "people" or "hometown". 82. Change "She" to another specific name, such as Zhao Hai. Change "only" to "except" and add "outside" or delete "no one" or "only Xiaohua is doing his homework" at the end of the sentence. Delete "basically" or "completely". Replace "achievements" with "achievements". Delete "happy" or "cheerful". Delete "once" or "often". 88. The order of "ten points" and "attention" is reversed. 89. Remove "bad". 90. Remove "and slogan" .91,and remove "red". Delete "completed" or "in progress". 93. Change "I" to "we" or change "happen to coincide" to "can't help it". 94. Add "playing games" after "on the playground". 95. Delete "just finished" or "not done". 96. Put "record" and "read" in order. Replace "progress" with "decrease". 98. Delete "The Palace Museum". 99. Replace "reward" with "encouragement". 100, add "classmate" before "competition". 10 1, add "we" before "more". 102, change "arbitrary" to "decisive". 103, change "Pentium" to "Mercedes-Benz". 104, put "love" and "affection" in order. 105, put "this book" and "I" in order. 106, add "he" before "finally". 107, replace "attendance" with "participation". 108, replace "play" with "develop". 109, delete "concentration" or "concentration". 1 10, remove "blurt out" or "speak out". 1 1 1, add "cultivation" before "efforts". 1 12, replace "unique" with "among them". 1 13, change "profound" to "profound". 1 14. Remove "red" or "color". 1 15, change "temperature" to "climate". 1 16, put "China people" and "he" in order. 1 17. Delete "mutual" or change "mutual" to "one by one" or "all". 1 18, change "fast" to "fast" and delete "and submit papers". 1 19, delete "Answer" or "Answer like a stream". 120, remove "bad". 12 1, delete "pedestrian flow" or "quiet". 122, replace "extensive" with "extensive". 123, delete "the result of". 124. Delete "and watermelon" or change "and watermelon" to "etc". 125, Spring and Beijing. 126, replace "inspection" with "test". 127, change "figure" to "figure" and change "fast" to "stable". 128, replace "undertaking" with "service". 129, change "love" to "love". 130, add "the slogan of" at the end of the sentence. 13 1, delete "and improve". 132, delete "probably". 133. Replace "decrease" with "decrease". 134, replace "if, then" with "even if, also". 135, add "other countries" after "world". 136, change "night" to "night" or change "overnight" to "for a while". 137, delete "orderly". 138, changing "singing" into "song"; Add "jump up" or delete "and dance happily" before "happy". 139, remove one of the two clauses. 140, arrange the "two courses" in the order of "Chinese and Mathematics". 14 1, change "upsurge" to "activity" or "development" to "lift". 142, replace "reputation" with "honor". 143, add "deeds of" at the end of the sentence. 144, change "path" to "stream". 145, change "password" to "slogan". 146, remove "green". 147, remove the "stars in the sky". 148, switch "two pieces" with "old and new". 149, put "red flag" in front of "windward". 150, switch between "discussion" and "listening". 15 1. Toggle "shine on" and "through the glass" and delete "de". 152, switch between "deep" and "interesting ideas". 153, delete "everywhere" or "everywhere". 154, delete "and the principal". 155, change "scarlet" to "scarlet" and remove "very scarlet".

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Practice of modifying sick sentences

Ill sentence: A sentence that is incomplete or wrongly connected between words.

Types of common ill sentences:

1, incomplete composition. A complete sentence should be "branches and leaves" complete, with complete and clear meaning. If a sentence lacks "branches" or "leaves", it means that the composition is incomplete.

2. Improper use of words. Improper use of words means that the words used in the sentence do not conform to the context, or words with similar or even opposite meanings are used.

3. Improper collocation. A pair of words in a sentence can't match or violate language habits.

4. Repetition. Repetition refers to the simultaneous use of two or more words with similar or identical meanings in a sentence.

5. Improper classification. Improper classification refers to putting things that do not belong to the same genus together.

6. Inconsistent. Inconsistency refers to ambiguity and contradiction in sentences.

7. The word order is reversed. Word order inversion means that the words used in a sentence are not formed in a certain grammatical order, but the word order is reversed.

8. The reference is unknown. Unknown reference means that things or people in a sentence are not clearly explained, which leads to confusion in the meaning of the sentence.

9, unreasonable. Unreasonable means that the meaning of a sentence is unreasonable and unconventional.

Methods to modify sick sentences: First, read the original sentence carefully for several times, see the context clearly, understand the content of the sentence, and see if it is smooth; Then, according to the characteristics of the types of sick sentences, find out the reasons and correct them; See if the basic meaning of the original sentence is retained after the revision, and whether punctuation is used correctly.