It's better to change it to ... the future tense and the present tense ... the feeling that happiness is not so happy when it is passed on to others ... the words you and I represent too few people ... Whose achievement is this? Why do customers want to create achievements for you .. The purpose should be implicit ..: Drive to Jindi (homophonic: going also means driving), put aside your troubles, and everyone (four people in the real sense) will sing together, and tomorrow will be brilliant! (There is motivation, vision, future goals, and the glory of Jindi Music Plaza tomorrow ...)
Just follow your format and add any additional requirements, and just answer a question and relax when you are free at work in the morning. ...