Family accidents What are the accidents at home? These accidents are very worrying. Have you ever been worried by your parents?
That night after school, our classmate Chen Keyu invited Geng Mengzhe to his home for dinner. Chen Keyu asked him, "Do you want to go home and tell your parents? He replied brightly: "No need. "They don't know that the consequences are very tragic. However, they are indeed included in Chen Ke's collected works.
After a while, Geng Mengzhe's parents were anxious and called the head teacher. Teacher Wang was worried when he heard that some students were missing. Teacher Wang sent a text message to every parent's mobile phone, hoping to get news from Geng Mengzhe soon. Zhang, the monitor of the class, and Zhang Gexi, the representative of the Chinese class, all heard this and sent short messages: it may be at Chen Kejia's house. The teacher sent a text message to Geng Mengzhe's parents. They ran to Chen Ke's language, and when they saw that Geng Mengzhe was really at home in Chen Ke. Taking Geng Mengzhe home is a beating.
This incident inspired me: I can't go out at will, I have to tell my parents when I go out, and I have to tell my parents when I come back, so I can be a good boy.
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In the family, mother is great, just like mother's smile, it is the warmest spring breeze in the world, it is a symbol of courage and tenacity, it is ......
My mother is such a person.
I remember it happened when I was in primary school. On that day, my mother couldn't move at home because of her foot injury, so she said to me, "Son, my mother hurt her foot and can't take you home today." Please go home by yourself! " "Oh!" I should cry. I thought: is mom okay? ? Today, I must show my mother that I have grown up and can go home alone! But the weather is unpredictable. It was fine in the morning, sunny and sunny, but it changed in the afternoon It was really dark! I saw dark clouds in the sky, lightning and thunder, lightning and thunder, and it rained. Really opaque!
School is over, but it is still raining, and it is raining harder and harder. I have no umbrella. Seeing other children being picked up by their parents, I feel more and more anxious and helpless. I thought: My mother's feet hurt again after such a heavy rain. Can she pick me up? Forget it, wait a minute! So I waited for a while, but I still didn't see my mother. Just as I was about to put my schoolbag on my head and rush into the rain, I suddenly saw a familiar figure: a pair of blue sneakers and a colorful umbrella-ah! It's mom! She is coming to pick me up! I shouted excitedly, "Mom, I've been waiting for a long time. Why are you here! " "My mother came step by step and tried to pretend to be relaxed, but I still found my mother's feet. Her foot was injured a few days ago, so it is very inconvenient to walk! I rushed to my mother excitedly and shouted, "Mom, your feet ..." "I'm fine. Sorry, son, mom is late! "My mother put her arms around me." Come on, let's go home. "
I hid under my mother's umbrella and we walked into the heavy rain. On the way home, my mother always leans her umbrella against me, but half of her body is exposed. My mother's feet are not suitable for walking. She held back the pain and limped me home. ......
Every time it rains, I think of it. My mother's limping in the rain with an umbrella is deeply imprinted on my mind. Mom, I will never forget your love for me!
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During the holidays, our family played chess when they had nothing to do. On this day, we held a family chess game.
At the beginning of the game, I first took the "door cannon" to launch an offensive, and my father jumped "horse" to take care of it. At first, the smoke began to diffuse and the atmosphere was tense. Later, later, I used a car with a gun, and my father's car, horse and pawn were quickly eaten by me. I couldn't help feeling smug, my brow rose slightly and I had a contemptuous smile on my face. Seeing this, my mother knocked at the door at once. "Don't be proud, it's not over yet!" "I just hold my horses and stare at my father's moves. Finally, he defeated his father with the "three immortals alchemy method".
Then there is the confrontation between my mother and my brother. No sooner had my mother taken a few steps than my brother killed her "elephant" and "scholar". Mom just got off the bus, and the rest of the elephants and scholars were wiped out. Internal chaos, my mother quickly weaved the crew generals together to form a "car that knows later" and hit my brother's camp hard. My brother is also very careful, rushing three "pawns" and killing with my mother's general. In the end, my mother lost very little and was taken away by my brother in a car.
Finally, the decisive battle between me and my brother. We are at the same level and often tied, so we won two out of three games in this game. My brother has a characteristic in playing chess: he has many ideas, loves to play dirty tricks, and often takes his opponent by surprise.
At the beginning of the confrontation, he took his time and I was calm. It's raining, and I came up with a trick of "being bold". This move is actually "hiding the sky from the sea", in order to distract his guards. Brother didn't see it and fell into my trap. I won the first game after only a few rounds. In the second game, my brother launched a fierce offensive from the beginning, which left me unprepared. I was accidentally defeated by the "car" he left at the base camp. It turns out that he deals with a man as he deals with you. In the third game, none of us was to be outdone. The Vietnam War has become more and more brave and fierce. He came to "return the carbine" and I came out to "lie the trough horse"; He used the trick of "borrowing a gun to make a horse" and I used the trick of "borrowing a car to make a gun". The battle was tense and slow. In the end, the generals and ranks of both sides were all killed and tied.
Mother said, "You two diamond cut diamond, whether you win or lose, let's tie for first place!" " My brother thinks I'm young, so I should win the first place. Finally, I became a chess champion, and my brother became the first in manners.
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A warm big family is always warm. There are seven people in my family. Let me introduce them to you.
Let's talk about me first I have a changeable personality, but I always like to laugh. When I laugh, I get a stomachache, and sometimes I laugh my teeth off. But I don't like crying. Even if I do, I will change from "cloudy" to "sunny" in an instant. My laughter is everywhere in the house. Therefore, they are called "happy elves" by their families. "Ha ha", this is not, a little thing makes me very happy. But I'm not that good-tempered. I always have a bad temper.
As for my brother, his name is Duan Jinting, and he is a real troublemaker at home. His temper is worse than mine. As soon as there is something he doesn't like, alas, it is conceivable that a "war" will break out. He loves to cry, too, and will cry when he meets any difficulties that cannot be solved. Because of this, we call them "troublemakers" and "crying babies". Although we are biological brothers and sisters, we are the opposite in everything: I love to laugh and he loves to cry; I don't like studying, but my grades are good. He loves studying, but his grades are not as good as mine. I always give up easily, but my brother can persist. ...
At home, my little brother is the most honest. His name is Duan Wenchang. He is gentle and knows how to be modest. Whenever there is something, either mom or dad will try it. Anyway, let the whole family taste his taste before eating, and we all appreciate his noble character.
My father is a middle school teacher with a pair of glasses on his high nose. Dad loves Jin Ting very much and often buys him delicious food, so he won't buy it for me. Although he wears a pair of glasses and looks like a teacher, he has no teacher's airs at all. He is always "disobedient" and tells him to go east, west, north and south ... He is often said by his grandfather, and sometimes he almost makes my mother cry.
My mother is very strict with me, but she cares about my grades. She has a pair of big watery eyes. If my grades drop, she will have to "cut me off". Besides, my mother is also very hard, taking care of us every day, washing clothes, cooking and washing dishes for us … but she never charges a penny.
My grandfather is a primary school teacher. Like his father, he wears a pair of glasses and has no teacher's airs at all. He often plays with his classmates. The students also like him very much. Grandpa is responsible for taking us to and from school every day. ...
My grandmother is very nice and wrinkled. She is nearly 70 years old, but she still looks so lively and full of youthful vitality. Mom and dad go to work in other places, and grandparents share the responsibility for food, clothing, housing and transportation at home. They are also very hard.
My family is always warm! What about your family?
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I am a member of this family. The first story of I am a Member of the Family moved me very much, because Meng Peijie lost two mothers at the age of five, and the third mother was seriously ill. At the age of eight, she was able to take care of her foster mother while going to school, and she was able to earn money to support herself and her foster mother. I think she must love her foster mother very much. I also think that Meng Peijie is a very strong girl. From the story, I can see that no matter what kind of blow she receives, she will persevere and never back down. Another place can be seen that she loves her foster mother very much-"take her foster mother to college." It can be seen that she is worried about her mother, so "taking her foster mother to college" makes me very moved. I think I should learn from Meng Peijie's perseverance and never back down's willpower.
Now think about me. Actually, I like her. When I was eight, my parents divorced. I live with my father. Now there is an adoptive mother, but sometimes she always listens to her mother and sings against her. For example, once, my foster mother and I were angry. I didn't do my homework at that time, so I stayed in my room all day. Besides, she hasn't eaten yet, and her foster mother is in a hurry. After reading the above article, I think we should respect our foster mother, don't be angry with her, and be a polite pupil.
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Pressure from my family I am a sixth-grade student, and I am about to take the junior high school entrance examination. My family put a lot of pressure on me.
In the past, I would read for a while after finishing my homework every night. But now, it is common practice to finish homework, dictate new words and sentences, do exercises and go to bed at ten o'clock every night. On Saturday and Sunday, I often play ball, read books and sleep in my spare time. But now, I don't even have any spare time. Like Monday to Friday, I dictate new words and sentences and do exercises all day.
I am glad that my mother has become a librarian. I think, this time you become a librarian, and if you want to see me, you have to take me to the library. How can you manage me now? Ha ha ha! But I was wrong. My mother did take me to the library, but she put me in the study room and lent me a lot of problem sets, which made my plan "perfect" fail.
My mother also enrolled me in many cram schools, such as English, math and Chinese, which made me very weak and tired. These extra homework make me unhappy and preoccupied every day.
How I wish these terrible pressures would disappear and stop weighing on my mind, even if they were less. How I wish I could relax myself, play with other children, read books and play ball together, and feel the leisure on Saturday and Sunday and the incomparable happiness brought by it.
Mom, stop pressuring me, okay?
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"Family BBQ" and "Family BBQ"
The smell of baking, scattered smoke and burning black charcoal fire all make people want to stop. This is the barbecue in my eyes. Roasted eggplant, roasted corn, roasted yam, roasted chicken wings ... It makes my mouth water. Today, my family came to Qingjiangpu and had a "in full swing" barbecue.
At night, Grandfather Sun, who should have waited among the white clouds, did not know where to hide. Clouds covered the blue sky, and the slightly humid air made me a little stuffy, but it didn't affect my happy mood at all. Look! In order to have a good barbecue today, I came to help early. I am so excited to see that bunch of delicious food lying quietly on the big plate. "pa!" A teapot fell to the ground. Looking back, I found that Huang Chengcheng's oil has been "heroically sacrificed". Woo-this is a great help. My brother was giggling and my mother pretended to be angry and called me, "Mary!" If you stir it again, you will ruin this barbecue stall! " Listening, I threw a charming smile: "No, Mom, then I won't collapse, Ralph?" ? This ruined your reputation, mom! "A word provoked everyone to laugh, before the rigid atmosphere no longer exists. And the sky, but also render a different kind of beauty, a rosy cloud slowly stretched out his hand from the clouds, as if shyness would soon disappear. The happy atmosphere is in harmony with other bright colors in the sky. After a while, there was smoke everywhere-
"Come here! Fresh roasted wings are out of the oven! Come and grab it, if you don't grab it, you will be gone! " When I looked intently, it turned out that my father had brought delicious chicken wings. I feel sorry for his old man. Yesterday, my father got sick because of drinking too much, and now he contributes to our "family barbecue" for free! Yes, he tried! Look at the chicken wings, the chicken skin is golden and bright, and the oil and water are crisp. Take a bite, psst-it's really spicy! Although there is an old saying that "you can't eat hot tofu if you are impatient", we are still "fools" who are still munching there knowing it is hot. Mmm, it's delicious. The more we bite, the more brittle we become, and the brothers and sisters are full of praise. I am also very happy, jumping up and down like a little monkey.
People come and go in an endless stream, and the smell of barbecue lingers. Father and sisters and brothers were busy baking cakes, and sweat flowed down from their foreheads. From a distance, it seems awkward, but if you look closely, you will find that this sweaty appearance has a beauty hidden in the dark. The ancients said, "No pains, no gains." I quite agree with this sentence. How can people who have never experienced darkness know the light? How do people who have never worked know the sweetness of fruits after labor? All this is related. Just like I am sitting in this chair now, waiting for the baked food to be delivered to my mouth, such an easy thing makes me unhappy at all, because the feeling of doing nothing is so frustrating. Slowly, I realized that I understood: in life, you need to experience with your heart, work with your body, and finally share the fruits of your work with everyone. This is true happiness! Looking at the young and eager faces of my brothers and sisters in the firelight, I suddenly realized, stepped forward and shouted, "I'm coming to help!" " "My family looked up and greeted me with a smile. I was surrounded by a long flame. In a trance, I think this is the real warmth, and this is the real understanding of the beauty of labor.
Happy times are always so short. When we are full of food and drink, the night has come, and the night song is singing for these people after work. Our family left this happy and comfortable place with a happy and satisfied mood.
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A happy family life is the most indestructible fortress, which always protects you with its strong body.
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In the eyes of many people, home is a warm harbor and a habitat for the soul, but in my opinion, home is the source of laughter.
I live with my father, mother and grandfather. The small house is full of laughter and laughter, and every corner is filled with the smell of happiness.
When we eat at home, we have a bad habit that looks like it to outsiders-eating while watching TV. At noon, we especially like watching Jiangsu Satellite TV's If You Are the One. Grandpa is very funny and likes to comment on female guests, saying that this female guest is too thin and that female guest is too black. Every time a male guest chooses to give up in the "hand in hand" session, grandpa will put down the chopsticks with a fork in his hand and point at the TV with one hand and say, "You have no vision! I don't want this beauty, I want it, I want to sign up, I want to hug her! " We laughed every time we heard it. Dad especially likes to make trouble. He loves watching the midday news of CCTV, but he dare not oppose grandpa. He is helpless for this reason, so he often plays tricks on us. Once we saw a wonderful moment, my father stood up with a "remote control" in his hand and said, "Aha, I want to watch the news!" The three of us shouted "no" excitedly, and when we looked intently, it turned out that Dad was holding a mobile phone instead of a remote control! Alas, I was teased again. Dad saw that all three of us were "fools" and laughed out of breath. Of course, the three of us pretended to be silent, just like dad started the "self-hi mode" again.
Every time after dinner, Dad and Grandpa smoke and make tea. My mother always criticizes my father: "It's not good for you to smoke and drink tea just after dinner!" ! What a scandal! ""Oh, a cigarette contest after dinner is a living fairy! "
Dad always answers like this. Of course, mom won't stop there. She picked her father up from the chair and said in a commanding tone, "Wash the dishes for me!" " "Dad will have the cheek to say with a smile," wife's adult, the child's mother, don't get excited, don't be angry. Listen to your husband, as the saying goes,' a man is a woman, which makes his ancestors angry'. You know, I am a filial person, so ... "Before I finished, I started to back off, turned back to my room and slammed the door. Grandpa and I laughed from ear to ear. As soon as mother came, we stopped laughing at once, and we were afraid to laugh with a stuffy face. I saw my mother say angrily, "This is a slacker! I'm too lazy to talk to my ancestors! I really regret marrying the wrong person! " I also said to my grandfather in a coquetry way: "Dad, you are judging. See if your son did it right, regardless of your son! "My grandfather is very witty. When this kind of mother is angry and spoiled, she usually goes back to her room and sings "The river flows east". "As for me, I would have slipped back to my room to smile.
This is just the tip of the iceberg in my family life. It is our laughter that has built this indestructible fortress!
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My family I have a happy and warm family, in which live the boss's father, the translator's mother, the manager's sister, and me, the head of the family. What the hell is going on here? Please listen to me.
"Boss" and "Dad"
The boss, as the name implies, is the boss with a straight face. My father is a veritable "boss", but his strictness made me deeply understand the meaning of the sentence "strict teachers make excellent students".
Lens one
Last summer vacation, the teacher asked us to practice handstand. I am timid and never dare to kick my feet. The teacher said that he would go home to practice the examination next time. This broke my brain, so I went home and complained to my father. Without saying anything, my father led me to an empty place, put a mat on it and said, "Stand upside down, I'll hold you." I dare not! Trying to find the reason, alas, I really regret telling my father about it. Dad used his magic weapon to count to "one, two ..." I had to give up. I took my hand away and never kicked again. For a long time, my legs were straightened by my father. I panicked, my arm went soft and my head hit the ground. "Dong ...". But I don't know why, the second time I didn't flinch, but I was very strong and kicked myself to the wall ... I finally succeeded, and my father's eyes showed a trace of relief. This is my serious father.
"Translate" Mom's chapter
I have a mother who can easily turn off her phone-"translator". Her trick to deal with my little sister and me is: be soft first, but not hard at once.
Lens 2
One day there was no homework at school. When I get home, I play computer and watch TV. At this time, my mother's voice rang out in my ear: "Qiao Yun baby, do you want to practice the piano for a while?" Hey! ""then ... just 20 minutes! "I feel a little sad when I watch the program" Happy Camp "being broadcast." Thirty minutes. ""20 minutes! " "30 minutes!" "I don't want it!" "Don't give me practice 1 hour! Go and practice! "Mom turned against me, faster than turning pages, so I had to practice. Alas, it's really "dumb people eat coptis-they can't say anything bitter"!
Sisters of the manager
"Sister, play with me!" As soon as I heard it, I knew it was my crazy, self-righteous elder sister calling me. By the way, "managers, managers, always feel that they are right." My elder sister is a good excuse to do something wrong, so she is called "manager".
Lens 3
It was a beautiful night. My sister and I wore roller skates and walked with my mother. My sister's roller skating skills are not very good, but she still insists on doing "difficult movements". She got into trouble and broke her mother's mobile phone, saying, "This road is too steep and slippery, don't blame me ..." "Don't blame me, just make an excuse." I gave her a white look and whispered. She can always find a "suitable" reason to defend herself for what she did wrong, but she can't help it!
"Chairman" (1)
The boss, translator and manager are all here, except the chairman. And I am the eldest daughter who studied well at home. I love dancing, sports, knowledge and understanding, hehe! Therefore, he called himself "Chairman".
This is my family, a humorous, harmonious, happy and happy family. You are always welcome to visit!
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A family storm Everyone's family is different. My family is a happy and harmonious family, but sometimes there are quite big storms in this family, but these storms are also deeply imprinted in my mind, and the deepest impression is that time. I remember one Sunday, when I got up that morning, I saw the whole room was "foggy". What happened at this time? Don't think about it, it must be that dad is using his "smoking" method again! This is not the first time. Although my mother and I have been trying to persuade him, he still refuses to change his mind. I'll go up. My mother couldn't stand choking, so she rushed up to cover her nose and mouth, grabbed the cigarette from my father and said with a fork in her hand, "Why are you smoking again?" How many cigarettes did you smoke? See what you have done to your family? " But regardless of my father, my mother also "attacked" him several times, but it didn't work at all. When mom saw that dad didn't respond at all, she began to talk about the disadvantages of smoking. Looking at mom's verbosity, dad seems a little tired. Seeing that she advised her father not to "surrender", her mother immediately asked her father, "You must quit smoking today!" "At this moment, I seem to smell a strong smell in the air, and there seems to be a big storm! Then there was a fierce quarrel between mom and dad, and there were signs of fighting. It seems that I will finally solve this problem! So, I quickly pulled them away and said to my father, "Dad, you'd better quit smoking quickly. Your smoking also affects our health and is not good for you! " "Dad seemed to hear that it would harm our health, so he immediately lowered his head, apologized to my mother and me, and promised not to smoke again. It seems that dad is still very concerned about our health! As a result, the storm was resolved and the family became more harmonious than before. Dad has given up smoking since then. It seems that a family that does not experience wind and rain will not be a happy family!
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