There is a kind of fruit, which is praised as smooth as cheese, fragrant teeth, drooping eyes and loving life; But some people think it stinks like cat shit, so they will take a detour when they see it. This is my favorite fruit-durian. Contrast leads to the theme. Very good!

Durian is hard to compare with other fruits in shape, taste and taste. Its shape is oval, like watermelon, but its surface is covered with steel thorns as hard as a sharp cone. Always be wary of animals looking down at it. A closer look shows that under the dense spikes, there is a layer of khaki skin, and the dark brown stripes on the skin are unpredictable, which I am afraid is difficult for any painter to describe.

Carefully break the hedgehog-like skin outside, revealing five or six pieces of pale yellow flesh, each as big as a goose egg and in different shapes. Some have two sharp heads, shaped like melon seeds; Some are flat at both ends, like a giant peanut. The appearance is good. If you add your own tactile feelings, it will make durian more vivid.

Take out a piece of pulp, slowly put it in your mouth, chew it gently, and a sweet juice overflows, which suddenly arouses the carnival of taste buds. Very anthropomorphic! Move your tongue, and the slippery pulp flies up and down, sweet and fragrant, delicate and soft. After eating, there is still fragrance in my mouth.

Although durian is delicious, its stinky tofu-like smell and sharp thorns are often daunting.

Durian is not only delicious. The food made is also very unique. For example, durian crisp is oval and has many layers of pastry piled up. The top layer is golden, crisp and shiny, with a few white sesame seeds on it, which looks beautiful. With a gentle bite, the pastry will soon melt in your mouth. A closer look reveals that there is a layer of pale yellow durian meat hidden among many layers of cakes, which exudes a rich fragrance and has a faint sweetness when eaten in the mouth. Makes people want to go back and forth.

Yes, judging a person is the same. You can't judge a book by its cover. A person's inner beauty is the real beauty. Like durian, we should be a person with inner beauty. Lenovo is good, but the previous article lacks foreshadowing, and the sudden transition to people is a bit blunt. The title is "My favorite fruit" and there is no digression at the end.

Teacher's comments:

The full text is clear in level and fluent in language, which vividly describes the taste and appearance of durian.

What needs to be improved is:

1, buckle at the end. Don't deliberately make the article abstruse at the end, it must be based on deduction. Your topic is "My favorite fruit", so the ending should stick to this theme, not to the person with inner beauty.

2. Lack of core events. Unless it is explanatory text, there needs to be an event fragment in the middle to show your love for durian. For example, the salivating of the family who bought it, the excitement when you cut it, and the subtle feeling of the entrance can all be expressed through events.

3, mobilize the description of the five senses. Food is written from two aspects: first, how it makes you feel. Write about seeing its vision, eating its sound, touching its feeling, its sense of smell and its taste. How do you feel about this? This is your favorite fruit. What do you like best? Describe your joy. Keep trying!

2. How to write a favorite fruit composition in 300 words? I like to eat fruit, and I can be called the famous "king" of eating fruit. There are many kinds of fruits, such as top-grade watermelon, queen litchi and crystal pearl grape. . But I like apples rich in Shandong best, because they left a deep impression on me.

I remember when I was a child, my mother once bought five or six big and red apples. I washed a red apple, touched its smooth "red clothes" and smelled it. A fragrant smell came to my nose, and I wanted to bite it one wolf at a time.

Apples are round, as big as oranges, and slippery all over. There are no mature apples, and green is slowly occupied by red. Finally, the apple ripens and turns red and yellow. When you take a bite, the undercooked apple tastes sour and astringent. Well done, just My Sweetie's, people like it more and more.

It is said that there are many ways to eat apples. Can be processed into dried apples, apple juice, apple salad and so on. . Apples contain many vitamins. Eating more is good, but not bad!

My favorite fruit is pear. My favorite fruits are red apples, bright grapes and lovely cherries. ...

But my favorite is pears from Huang Chengcheng.

Pears are rectangular with countless sesame-like dots on them. All of Huang Chengcheng.

Like a tumbler in a yellow dress.

Peel off the skin and the white and delicious pulp will be displayed in front of you, as long as you

Bite it open with your teeth, and the sweet juice will make you like it more and more.

Fuck it.

Pears are not only beautiful, but also have the effect of treating diseases.

Pear can relieve dry and itchy throat and treat chronic tracheitis, whooping cough and chronic pharyngitis.

Shape.

I remember once, my voice was always hoarse and uncomfortable. My mother said, "Eat more."

A small pear! It can cure diseases. "So, I will eat pears as my mother said, and the result is less than.

Two days later, my voice recovered. Since then, I have loved pears.

Pear is a fruit that I can't live without. I like pears!

4. A 400-word composition about your favorite fruit. I like many fruits, such as cherry tomatoes, persimmons, oranges, bananas, watermelons, and so on. But my favorite is the attractive oval oranges.

Look at an orange from a distance, like a fire, like a small fist, like a small lantern. Those many oranges, hanging on trees, are like hanging small lanterns to illuminate passers-by.

Mature oranges are golden yellow with only a little blue spots, which are found on all oranges. I'm afraid this is a mark made by citrus reticulata's mother for Baby Orange, in case Baby Orange is too naughty and disappears.

The orange peel feels a little rough, just like the wrinkles on the old man's forehead. Put the orange on your nose and smell it. There is a faint fragrance coming at me, and there is a sour taste in the middle, which is very interesting.

Looking at the attractive orange, I couldn't help peeling off the orange peel and exposing the orange pulp inside. When the orange peel has not completely fallen off, the pulp is in the middle, and the orange peel is surrounded like petals, like a blooming lotus, which is very beautiful!

Oranges are not only rich in vitamins, but also very effective! Dried tangerine peel can be used as medicine, tea, bacon, preserved fish and so on. Orange meat can be made into a fruit platter or squeezed into juice to make canned oranges. ...

This is my favorite orange, my friend. What do you like best?

5. Write a composition about my favorite fruit. How to write my favorite fruit

I have a lot of favorite fruits, including oranges in Huang Chengcheng, pomegranates that love to laugh and watery lychees. . Among them, my favorite food is bent bananas.

Naughty bananas are blue when they are immature, but they turn yellow immediately when they are ripe, as if wearing a golden dress, which looks particularly good in the sunshine. On the "skin" of bananas, there are small black spots dotted. Don't feel ugly, it's a sign of maturity!

Peel off the banana and you will see milky white flesh. It gives off an attractive fragrance from time to time, which makes people want to eat. I still can't help taking a bite. The sweet, soft and delicate flesh makes me like it more and more.

Bananas are like the first quarter moon hanging in the sky, like a boat floating in the river, and like a sickle for mowing grass. . In short, no matter how the banana changes, it still keeps its lovely shape.

According to my mother, bananas are not only delicious, but also beautiful! The effect of beauty is even more unpredictable. Many aunts rely on bananas to have youthful skin. After listening to this, my mother took a banana without hesitation and ate it with relish.

Bananas, like a moon boat, slowly sailed into my food court.

6. My favorite fruit composition (400) is 1.

I like fruit.

I like to eat fruits, such as golden bananas, red apples and purple grapes, and I can't put them down, but among these fruits, I have a soft spot for watermelon.

In summer, watermelons are ripe. On the roadside car, there are big green watermelons all over the floor, which really makes me like it. Its smooth body seems to be oiled. A bright green coat with dark green stripes is really cute. Watermelons are all the size of a basketball, ranging in size from a dozen catties to three or five catties.

When you cut the watermelon, you can see the red pulp, and you can't help swallowing it. Black melon seeds are like cute little dolls, dull, as if playing hide and seek. I think they will never find each other, or why don't they all live together in their own way?

There are many kinds of watermelons. Some skins are thin, so long as they are touched lightly, they will pop open with a bang. This kind of melon is not big, and the biggest one is about five pounds. I like this kind of food best. I often dig with my sister and eat with a spoon. I really enjoyed it. There is also a seedless melon with a thick skin (I call it cheeky). This kind of melon is big, one weighs more than ten kilograms, and it tastes delicious. But if you make a bad choice, you will lose if you meet someone you don't know well.

My father buys melons for me and my sister almost every day when the melons are ripe. I always can't wait to eat the melon, and the sweet juice runs down my arm until my stomach is round. I remember once, my mother was afraid that the juice would flow to my clothes and let me squat on the ground to eat. Unexpectedly, after eating watermelon, my stomach swelled like a watermelon, so I couldn't stand up naturally. My sister laughed her head off, patted my bulging belly and said, "Haha, we also have a pig at home. What a glutton. " Only my mother picked me up in love and called my sister "what pig eight quit?" You see, my son is like a mighty general. " But I don't feel terrible, I just feel a little bloated.

Now that technology is developed, I can eat sweet and delicious watermelons all year round, but I still like watermelons that mature in summer best, which is incomparable to other fruits.

I like fruit.

There are many kinds of fruits, such as watermelon in melon, litchi in fruit and grapes in water ... but my favorite is apple.

Apples are round, as big as oranges. All wet. There are no mature apples, and the green ones gradually occupy the green "territory" from red. Finally, the apple ripened and turned deep red. When you take a bite, the undercooked apple tastes bitter and astringent. Cooked, it smells fragrant, and I can't wait to eat it all. My Sweetie's disease makes people want to eat more. The more they eat, the more they love to eat. When the apple is cut, the meat is white, the seeds inside are black and the juice is fresh. The whole apple tastes sweet, crisp and delicious, and the pulp is delicious. The taste, color and shape are pleasing, round, like a small lantern.

Apples not only taste good, but also have many functions.

Eating apples often can reduce blood fat, blood pressure, prevent cancer, have anticancer effect, strengthen bones, maintain acid-base balance and lose weight. There is a western proverb: "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." Among many fruits, apple is the most common and peaceful one. But its nutritional value doesn't allow me. Among many fruits, apple is the most common and peaceful one. But its nutritional value should not be underestimated. Chinese medicine believes that it can nourish the lungs, strengthen the spleen and stimulate appetite. Nutritional analysis shows that apples contain many kinds of fructose, organic acids, pectin, trace elements, cellulose, vitamins, minerals, polyphenols and flavonoids. "An apple a day" is a well-known health slogan, and apples are called "all-round healthy fruits" by scientists.

There are many ways to eat apples, which can be processed into apple juice, apple salad, etc ... Apples contain many vitamins, so eating more is good!

7. My favorite fruit composition is followed by my favorite fruit.

My favorite fruit is watermelon. Watermelon is like a big ball. Its skin has stripes, some are light green and some are dark green. The flesh of watermelon is big red. When you smell sweet, take a bite. Cool and sweet. Very delicious. Through searching information on the Internet, we know that watermelon is native to tropical desert areas in Africa and has a planting history of more than 4,000 years. About the 10th century AD, it was transplanted from the western regions to China, first cultivated in Xinjiang, and then introduced to the mainland.

There is also my favorite fruit-mango.

I like mangoes best. It has an attractive appearance: golden skin and a fat crescent. As long as you peel off its golden smooth skin, you will see yellow flesh. With a gentle bite, the unique fragrance of smooth pulp immediately fills the whole mouth, making you want to swallow it in one gulp. Mango is not as fragrant as other fruits, but if you put it under your nose and smell it carefully, you will smell a faint fragrance. Once, I put the skin into my mouth as pulp, and suddenly felt sour and astringent. I took a sip of water at once, which was better. I am in a hurry to eat something else. As soon as I put the food in my mouth, I felt as if my tongue had lost a layer of skin, as if a brush was rubbing on it. Only then did I know that the skin of mango was sour and astringent. It turns out that skin and meat are very different, just like judging people, I can't just look at the appearance.

One more ~ ~ my favorite fruit

Autumn has come and the fruits in the orchard are ripe. You see, there are red apples, big pears and golden oranges in Huang Chengcheng ... but oranges are my favorite.

Oranges are round It is wearing a golden coat, much like a beautiful little lantern! Peel off the golden coat, expose the orange petals, and hug each other like brothers and sisters who help each other. Open an orange petal and put it in your mouth. Sour and sweet, cool and refreshing. It is really delicious! After a while, I ate an orange.

Oranges are not only delicious, but also can cure cough and help the body to supplement the vitamins needed by the human body. Of course, don't throw orange peel. Oh, you can soak in orange water. Look, what did the orange do!

Oranges are not only delicious, but also beautiful, so among many fruits, I like oranges best.

8. My favorite fruit ingredients sometimes pop when I don't eat much.

Now, my mother is afraid that the juice will flow on my clothes and let me squat on the ground to eat. But among these fruits, I have a soft spot for watermelon, and there are pigs and eight quit in our family. My son is more like a mighty general, and I can't help but be happy. I like this one best, otherwise why don't we all live alone?

Sister laughs her head off? Look, that golden banana, you can't help swallowing it. Red apples Speaking of fruits and peaches, my stomach swells like a watermelon. I didn't expect the watermelon to be finished. "

But I don't feel terrible. I don't think they will ever find each other. Dad buys melons for my sister and me almost every day. There are big green watermelons all over the floor, which really makes me like them and tastes refreshing.

Only my mother held me in love. What a glutton! ":"Ha ha. When the melon is ripe, it is really pleasing. It seems to be playing hide and seek, which is a waste of money, because I like eating fruit very much since I was a child.

Summer? There are many kinds of watermelons. This kind of melon is too big to stand naturally. Watermelon is ripe, but not ripe.

This kind of melon is not big, such as grapes and apples. Its smooth body seems to be oiled, and purple grapes make me fondle admiringly.

Watermelons are all the size of basketball, and the big ones weigh more than ten kilograms. I just feel bloated. While patting my bulging belly, I kept saying, it's like watermelon, but I like to eat a lot of fruit every day, just like a cute little doll. I called it cheeky and called my sister "what a pig" until my stomach was round. Some skin is thin.

The car on the roadside, that kind of feeling is really enjoyable, as long as you touch it gently, the sand is very thick (. I always can't wait to eat melons; There is also a seedless melon.

A bright green coat with dark green stripes is technologically advanced. The small one is also three or five pounds. When you cut the watermelon, you can see the red flesh. But if you don't choose well,

I remember once, people can eat sweet and delicious watermelon all year round. The largest is only about five kilograms, and one weighs more than ten kilograms. I often dig and eat with my sister, and the sweet juice runs down my arm, but I still like watermelons that mature in summer best. Black melon seeds.

9. My favorite fruit is peach. I like many fruits: monkey peaches, bananas, pomegranates, pears, apples, peaches ... among them, I like eating peaches best.

Peach looks like a small pink tennis ball from a distance, and looks like a hill from a close distance. It is pink. Looking down, there is a concave hole in the middle. If you pour the water up, it really looks like an altar lake. There is a crack by the lake, just like a small ravine. The lake will extend along the canyon to the foot of the mountain. Isn't this peach like a mountain?

Put the peach on your hand, and you will feel that the surface of the peach is furry, just like a furry ball rolling on your hand, which is very comfortable!

Cut the peach and smell it carefully, and you will see the pink flesh. Take a bite, and the thick sweet juice will go straight to your heart. It's delicious, and the pulp is soft and easy to bite. It will get more and more sour after eating. After eating, you will see a peach pit with many holes on it, which looks like a miniature version of a meteorite.

Peaches are not only delicious, but also nutritious. Peaches are really a unique panacea in TV series. I like to eat juicy peaches with rich nutrition.

10. My favorite fruit composition is unlimited in words, including two kinds of fruits. My favorite fruit is watermelon.

Watermelon is like a big ball. Its skin has stripes, some are light green and some are dark green.

The flesh of watermelon is big red. When you smell sweet, take a bite. Cool and sweet. Very delicious. Through searching information on the Internet, we know that watermelon is native to tropical desert areas in Africa and has a planting history of more than 4,000 years.

About the 10th century AD, it was transplanted from the western regions to China, first cultivated in Xinjiang, and then introduced to the mainland. There is also my favorite fruit-mango. I like mango best.

It has a charming appearance: golden skin and a fat crescent. As long as you peel off its golden smooth skin, you will see yellow flesh.

With a gentle bite, the unique fragrance of smooth pulp immediately fills the whole mouth, making you want to swallow it in one gulp. Mango is not as fragrant as other fruits, but if you put it under your nose and smell it carefully, you will smell a faint fragrance.

Once, I put the skin into my mouth as pulp, and suddenly felt sour and astringent. I took a sip of water at once, which was better. I am in a hurry to eat something else. As soon as I put the food in my mouth, I felt as if my tongue had lost a layer of skin, as if a brush was rubbing on it. Only then did I know that the skin of mango was sour and astringent. It turns out that skin and meat are very different, just like judging people, I can't just look at the appearance. One more ~ ~ My favorite fruit is autumn, and the fruit in the orchard is ripe. You see, there are red apples, big pears in Huang Chengcheng, golden oranges … but oranges are my favorite.

Oranges are round It is wearing a golden coat, much like a beautiful little lantern! Peel off the golden coat, expose the orange petals, and hug each other like brothers and sisters who help each other. Open an orange petal and put it in your mouth. Sour and sweet, cool and refreshing. It is really delicious! After a while, I ate an orange.

Oranges are not only delicious, but also can cure cough and help the body to supplement the vitamins needed by the human body. Of course, don't throw orange peel. Oh, you can soak in orange water.

Look, what did the orange do! Oranges are not only delicious, but also beautiful, so among many fruits, I like oranges best. In addition ~ ~ My favorite fruit-strawberry When it comes to fruits, I can't help being happy, because I like eating fruits very much since I was a child, such as watermelons, peaches, grapes and apples. Sometimes I don't eat much, but I eat a lot of fruit every day. My parents always say that I am a beautiful daughter who grew up eating fruit.

Among my favorite fruits, strawberry is my favorite, because it not only ripens early, but also ranks first among all melons and fruits, and it is fresh and delicious, with less sour taste, light sweetness, sweet and sour taste and no harm to the stomach. In order to understand how strawberries grow, I also looked up a lot of information about strawberries on the Internet, from which I learned that strawberries belong to Rosaceae perennial herbs, also known as cranberries, which are native to South America.

There are many varieties of strawberries, including more than 2000 varieties. Strawberries like warm weather and are not cold-tolerant.

Strawberries are planted in Hebei, Shandong and many southern provinces and cities in China. The fruit of strawberry is spherical or oval.

Mature fruit is red with uneven surface and many small seeds. When I was a child, I thought a lot of sesame seeds stuck to it. Strawberry fruit is bright red, tender, soft and juicy, sweet and sour, and rich in vitamin C. Besides, it also contains carotene, multivitamins, glucose, protein, fat, iron, calcium and phosphorus, so some people call strawberry a "beauty fruit". Pick one up and chew it gently in your mouth. Pink juice has a sweet and sour feeling in your mouth, and the pulp is fresh and tender.

Whenever my parents buy strawberries, as long as I have time, I will personally pick the green leaves under the strawberries. If the leaves are bright green, then the strawberries must be fresh. I really hope to have the opportunity to go to the place where strawberries are planted and see how long strawberries are. I also have many ways to eat strawberries, some of which were told by my parents and some of which were invented by myself. For example, I wash strawberries, cut them into four pieces with a knife, put them on a plate, and sprinkle some sugar on them, so that they won't feel sour even if they are not ripe.

You can also put cut strawberries, cut cucumbers and tomatoes together, add salad dressing and mix well to make a delicious fruit salad. In a word, strawberry is one of my favorite fruits. Although I have written so much, it seems that there are still some unfinished things.

Previous ~ ~/stuu/pull latespace/writing/zw _ detail _ p04x? Wri_id=47632 oh! I also forgot an article ... My favorite fruit is charming litchi. When I peeled off the skin, sweet juice sprayed on my face. When I peeled off the peel again and took a closer look, I saw that the pulp of litchi was as white as snow, smooth and tender. I opened my mouth and took a bite. Honey-like juice is flowing in my mouth.

So I ate four in a row. Litchi has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages of litchi are bright color, large fruit, thick meat and small core, sweet and delicious. The disadvantage of litchi is that it has a nosebleed after eating too much.

Ah! I love litchi, and I prefer sweet litchi.