The first is a factual error. Take the university as an example. How many students really have "I am proud of my alma mater" at school? I believe that when I was in college, I was mostly dissatisfied with the university, let alone proud of it. Of course, what I am talking about here is mostly. Some people mention the history and celebrities of the school to teachers or schools and brag to others, but this is just vanity. "Proud of this" should be a sense of identity, honor and belonging from the heart, not vanity. From the perspective of the school, is the school really "proud of me"? I'm afraid there are not many schools that are proud of this.

Secondly, there are ideological mistakes. This sentence seems to encourage students to become talents, but more often it will be counterproductive. There is no need to position the purpose of education as a social person who pursues truth, goodness and beauty and cultivates independent personality, but it is always possible to cultivate diversified talents useful to society.