Introduction: As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle." Everything is difficult at the beginning, so is doing things, and so is writing articles. The ancient writers in China were very particular about the beginning of the article, so there was a saying that "the head of a phoenix is like a pig's belly and the tail of a leopard". The "phoenix head" is the head of the legendary phoenix. No one has ever seen it, but in the painter's pen, we can see the feathers on the head of a small phoenix.

Skill analysis:

Tip 1: Use rhetoric skillfully.

Function: Clever use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism, personification and questioning can make the beginning of the article vivid, imposing and picturesque.

Example:

(1) Years of study and life are like a flick of a finger, which can never be taken back. Looking back, we always take struggle as the rudder. Now, it's the third day, and we should set sail with struggle.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will build a steel-like character and make you and me indomitable.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will make new achievements and meet new joy.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will spread your wings and fly to the blue sky of victory.

(2) The morning light in March opened the window and the first ray of sunshine shone on people. In this way, spring approaches us from the window. Spring is the beginning of the four seasons, which brings us new hope.

(3) "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively? ("What is Beauty")

(4) How to describe the dance of Indian Karama sisters?

If I were a poet, I would write a long poem to describe their various dances.

If I were a painter, I would touch them with various colors and dye their bright brow and gorgeous clothes.

-(Bing Xin's Watching Dance)

Secret 2: quoting classics and literary talent flying.

Function: Ingeniously quoting ancient poems, famous sayings, lyrics, proverbs, two-part allegorical sayings or predecessors' profound and incisive expositions can save a lot of pen and ink, make literary talent soar and get twice the result with half the effort.

Example:

(1) "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows away the petals of ten thousand pear trees". In front of me is a world made up of powder and jade. I can see the beautiful scenery written by the poet Cen Can before my eyes. Winter morning

(2) We will experience many difficulties and setbacks in our life. Face it with a calm mind, meet it with high emotions, and overcome it with positive actions. You will succeed, just as the lyrics say, "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" No one can succeed casually! " ("Laughing at Frustration")

(3) As the saying goes, "Everything is difficult at the beginning". When you start doing something, you will feel strange and at a loss. If we don't grasp every beginning, we will lose not only an opportunity, but also a success.

(4) The aesthetic master Rodin once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of angle. " Many times, we are confused about the problem or wandering at the intersection of multiple solutions, how to go. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")

Tip 3: Set up suspense skillfully and lead the topic.

Function: Everyone is curious, especially those who love reading literary works. When you set a lot of suspense at the beginning of the article that can arouse people's curiosity, your article has undoubtedly succeeded more than half, that is, it has aroused readers' curiosity from the beginning.

Example:

(1) There was a bitten apple on the stage, and I sat at the bottom of the platform with a blank face.

-"Incomplete Beauty"

(2) "Where is the antelope?" My mother suddenly asked me. -antelope woodcarving

(3) I often think that everyone has his own secret garden, which is full of secret flowers and plants, and there is a pink door outside. Who can open it but himself?

-"Love, Open My Heart"

High intensity training

In your growing journey, you will always leave your footprints everywhere, with happy memories, beautiful yearning, unremitting pursuit, the joy of success and the trouble of failure; There are also parents' nagging, friends' concern and classmates' trust; There are happiness, worry, gratitude, anger, embarrassment, misunderstanding and so on, but you must correctly treat the bitterness, gain and loss, success and failure in your growth, face life bravely and face challenges, and your front must be bright.

Please write a composition of more than 600 words on the topic of "the taste of _ _ _ _ _".

Requirements: 1. Use one or more of the above opening techniques to make a good start for your composition.

Standardized writing, neat surface and fluent language.

Wonderful opening demonstration

1. Quote famous words and sentences

1. Ask what the world is like and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His problems are eternal. Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as everyone's face.

Shi said, "Love is a tool ..."? ("Ask what the world is")?

In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money. My things are for everyone." In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through money, which is mine for everyone." ? (Saints and Thieves)

Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of angle. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wander at the intersection of many solutions, and how to get there has become a mystery in our hearts. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")

2. Clever use of letter format

(1) Dear Grandpa Confucius:

Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. I dare to write to disturb you after a thousand years, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to wait for your guidance with several difficult problems. (A letter to Confucius)

(2) Damn standard answer:

When I saw you, I was really angry. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you just put on a "standard" hat. You know, countless tragedies are caused by the word "mark". Here are your three major crimes: a letter with a standard answer?

3. Borrow Zhang Hui's novel brushwork

(1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era when Wei Shuwu was torn apart no longer existed, and Gone for Never and Waves wiped out all the heroes of the past. Adou, the former successor of Shu, has also become "happy", and the world has become Sima's world. ("Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")

Juyitang in the water margin is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred men and eight men gathered here, and everyone argued endlessly. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to judge the hero who killed the tiger recently. This honorary title is so great that whoever wins can sit in the second place of Liang Shanbo. So many heroes gathered here and argued endlessly. Who is the hero who fights tigers?

4. Use rhetoric skillfully?

① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively? ("What is Beauty")

5. Clever use of fables?

Gong Yu's family has lived here for generations, and Wangwu Mountain and Taihang Mountain at the entrance stand in the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated from the world. What is new in the city has long been old news, and this life really needs to change. The foolish old man thought: We must find a way to move Taihang Mountain and the King of Wu. (The Story of New Gong Yu and Zhizuo)

② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out all-round quality education to ensure that your children become omnipotent generalists and remain invincible in the competition. Tuition fee is 3000 yuan per semester; Training fee, 2000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 15000 yuan? (all-round school)?

6. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme

(1) there is no tree, but there can be grass green; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! ?

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Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl hair and gentle and elegant dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it was all over, and fate left her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times? (starry night talk)?

If you lose money, you only lose a small part; ? If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt.

What is "sincerity", honesty and trustworthiness. Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has permeated it.

How many people shed blood and tears? Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? )

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7. Clever use of problem-solving forms

Once, a friend gave me a unique question: which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best?

A. A piece of pure white feather falls leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water.

C. a meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.

Ending skills of composition in examination room

If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an unfavorable ending. In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending is also restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". From the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although it is not necessarily required that the end of the article is "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, students are prone to make mistakes at the end of their compositions. However, the author was still uneasy, insisted on shaking a few words, and told the whereabouts of people who didn't need to confess one by one, debunking the meaning that could have been realized. 2 empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted slogans irrelevant to the content of the article. This ending is a great evil. The meaning at the end is clear, but he refuses to finish it, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the closing techniques commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

1. Natural clustering type

No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, the full text will naturally be closed, and there is no need to design profound philosophical sentences or carve rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the problem of the end of the article, is concise, lively and unremarkable, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so it is impossible to care too much. What is "law"? As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. For example, at the end of Yunnan Song Club, "When I was a child, I often listened to the old woman's oral words," Once in ten years, it comes once in a blue moon ",which means that the grand event is rare.

Step 2 echo from beginning to end

The ending and the beginning should echo each other, and write sentences that echo the beginning and are not simply repeated. This way of ending is a common way of closing the beam in various articles. This method of closing the beam can arouse the psychological beauty of readers and produce a feeling of ending and ending. For example, "The Back" ends with "Alas! I don't know when I can see him again. " That is, echoing the beginning of the article, "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and what I can't forget most is his back."

3. Zhang Xianzhi's style chess pieces

This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of The Pearl Bird, "My pen moved, and my feelings flowed down later: trust often creates a beautiful realm."

4. Famous aphorisms

Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' minds and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings" For example, at the end of Talking about Life, "Happiness is of course". I once read an adage, "May there be enough clouds in your life to make a beautiful evening". The life of the world, the country and the individual is nothing more cloudy than today. "

5. Lyric argument

Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers, and arouse the hearts of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used to write narratives that people can remember, and it can also be used to write expository and argumentative essays. There are various forms of lyric discussion ending, which is relatively free and a good style of "lyric discussion". (A Chang and Shan Hai Jing)

Another example is the ending of Snow: "Yes, it is lonely snow, dead rain and the soul of rain."

The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should conform to the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of the composition is the same as the beginning, and each article is different, but it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically.

A collection of excellent compositions by students at the beginning or end.

Being cared for by teachers is a kind of happiness, being helped by others is also a kind of happiness, and helping others is a kind of happiness. Although this is a little help, my heart is full of joy and pride. If everyone can help others, then the world will become a beautiful world! )-Tan Xiutao's "The Taste of Happiness"

The autumn wind gently blows the fallen leaves, and the birds seem tired of flying leaves and hide in their nests. The grass is dead, and the cool autumn wind seems to be tired of drifting. I can't help but think of one thing in the third grade. Although it was very small, it embarrassed me at that time and was a great education for me. The autumn wind is still blowing the fallen leaves, still blowing my cheeks, gentle and cool. As a man, you must be honest. Deceiving others is also deceiving yourself! )-Liu Yingxiu's "The Taste of Embarrassment"

On the road of my growth, I always leave my footprints everywhere. There are happy memories, beautiful yearning, joy of success and trouble of failure in my footprints. Most of them are happiness, emotion, resentment and anger. However, what I can't forget most is that embarrassing morning. I should thank that embarrassing morning for not being at a loss, but I should also say "goodbye" to that embarrassing morning because it was embarrassing.

Recalling one's own growth process is like an overturned five-flavor bottle, which is sour, bitter, spicy and astringent, but not sweet. Although failure is hateful, it is the first step towards success. I drank a bottle of Rhizoma Coptidis and said, "The taste of failure is really unpleasant." )-Dong Chenggong's "The Taste of Failure"

When I was a child, it was you who spent so many happy days with me. Let you tell me that you still have maternal love, so no matter how long the days are and how far the land is, I want to enjoy your love in your arms. The taste of missing is like a bitter cup of coffee. Although you can add some sugar, it still makes people haggard. )-Yang Chen's The Taste of Missing.

Wildfire never completely devoured them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze. Spring has come, Sister Liu's long hair flutters gently in the air, floret's cheeks show a bright smile, and naughty little grass makes faces at you in the wind. Bathed in the spring breeze, looking at this beautiful scenery, my thoughts have drifted to four years ago. -Yi Yongqiang's The Taste of Success.

People will experience a lot in their life, but happiness is often the most desirable. Because happiness is a psychological experience, it can be said that it is far away or just around the corner. Happiness is scattered around us like stars, almost at your fingertips, don't you think? As long as people face the complicated life with a childlike innocence, always pursue the light and yearn for happiness, you will definitely become a happy pony.

There are clouds in the sky, with a straight face and contempt; Trees bow their heads and laugh contemptuously; The grass is whispering in the field, as if deliberately avoiding me. Everything is ruthless. The first time I tasted failure, I wandered in frustration. The dark clouds in the sky cleared, the tree raised its head and the grass showed its head. Seeing this, I thought about it, and quickly returned to the classroom and picked up the textbook ...)-He Yangming's The Taste of Failure.

Childhood dreams are colorful; The stars of childhood shine forever; Childhood is fresh in my memory. Recalling my colorful childhood, scenes emerged in front of my eyes. At that time, I really succeeded. I overcame myself and made up for my shortcomings. I'm really happy. That kind of happiness is beyond words. Please try the joy of success! )-Wang's "The Taste of Success"

"Little teenagers seldom worry ..." Every time I hear this familiar song, I think of myself. Teenagers in songs are always so carefree. Why do I have so many troubles? Studying is like climbing a mountain, and passing the exam is like climbing a mountain every day. Let's say goodbye to our troubles, let happiness linger around us forever, give us a blue sky and make our life better! Please get on the ideal horse and start with the whip. Spring has just started, and the sky is sunny. )-Tang Li Jie, The Taste of Trouble

"Oh, dear, that's not me. I really didn't do it! " I almost cried. Oh, no, I'm in the field! Oh, my God. Who did I piss off? God doesn't have to treat me like this. It's not fair. It's so unfair! )-Xia Tingting's "The Taste of Being wronged"

On a hot afternoon, Class 3, Grade 5 will have a math exam again. "Rinrin bell ..." The bell rang and the math teacher opened the door with a stack of papers. We immediately precipitated like carbon dioxide and clarified limewater. Then there was a voice: "Wow, there is a math exam again, dear! It's inhuman! " The students screamed loudly. Only when the teacher coughed did the classroom become quiet again. From the beginning of this exam, I understand: never be proud or underestimate your enemy, otherwise it will be a big mistake. Holding hands in the exam is really unpleasant! )-Shen's "The Taste of Holding Hands"

"A mother's love is like the sea, and a father's love is like a mountain". Motherly love is like a warm spring breeze, so gentle and loving; However, fatherly love is the winter wind, so severe and deep. Today, I have experienced the love I have never experienced before-fatherly love, and I understand the profound charm of fatherly love. )-Kang's The Taste of Love.

Love is fireworks, illuminating a brilliant life; Love is a medicine, so it needs to be traumatized; Love is a red flag that welcomes you to the dawn; Love is a torch, which lights the street lamp of our life. -Zheng Jiabin's The Taste of Love.

That was two years ago. I went climbing with some classmates. The scenery on the mountain is really beautiful: delicate grass, domineering cypress trees, elegant chrysanthemums ... everywhere exudes a strong fragrance. I deeply feel the taste of happiness, and I am in a good mood! How I wish I had a happy time! Let this happy smell haunt me all the time! )-Qi Leijun's "The Taste of Happiness"

In my vague memory, that summer was my happiest day. The hot weather has turned cool. Free fish in the water, free birds in the air, insects whispering on the ground, green grass, graceful flowers and swaying willows are full of infinite vitality, and my heart is full of infinite happiness. They seem to face the loess. They fight for their children, and they stick to their jobs like screws. Their love is wider, bigger and deeper than the sea, as high, as stable and as heavy as a mountain. They are my hardworking parents. )-Shao Yingying's "The Taste of Happiness".

It was the mid-term exam last year, a day that made me completely awake. On that day, I felt my selfishness, pride and willfulness for the first time. It's really a shame to lose badly. In retrospect, I am selfish and will not easily teach others what I know; I am proud that even if I teach other students how to learn, I always take the tone of exhortation; I am willful, always doing things as I please, regardless of the consequences ... I really deserve it! )-Zhang Tianyi's The Taste of Failure