The common ending skills of the senior high school entrance examination composition are as follows:
1, echoing from beginning to end, highlighting the main idea
Example 1:
Beginning: pa? As soon as I entered the corner, I heard the sound of broken cups all the way. My heart tightened and I hurried home. I met my neighbor head on. I saw it in her eyes? Something must have happened to my family again.
Conclusion: It is so difficult and easy for parents to cross this gap from war to peace on this day. When I was eating, I picked up food for my parents and said simply. Please remember this day. Never, never forget. "Mom and dad nodded hard. From their determined eyes, I believe that this time their promise will be realized forever. (Remember this day)
Comments: Does the article start with parents? War? Write your parents' at the end here? Peace? . Structurally, it plays the role of head-to-tail coordination; In content, from? War? Arrive? Peace? , highlighted as? Messenger of peace? what's up Me? Credit; Emotionally, emphasize the desire for family harmony.
Example 2:
Beginning:? These years, a person, the wind has passed, the rain has passed, there have been tears, there have been mistakes, remember what to stick to. ? Emil Wakin Chau sang affectionately on TV, and my thoughts drifted away with the song?
End: The ear rings quietly again? Friends have been together all their lives, and those days are gone. In a word, they love a glass of wine all their lives. Friends are never lonely. If you are friends, you will understand. There is still hurt and pain. Do you want to leave me? true friendship
Comments: The author begins with exquisite lyrics, echoing the end of the song, expressing sincere friendship incisively and vividly, which makes people feel excited.
2, words for the heart, call for the call
Example 1: Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school and to those lonely old people? Bring it to everyone around you. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
Ex. 2: Give love a sky, and don't let love become a shackle that binds us. Leave a sky for love, don't let your love become a weapon of sadness. Leave a sky for love and make your heart stop crying. Leave a sky for love and make your heart clear and bright! (Leave a sky for love)
Comments: The composition in the examination room pays attention to emotional sincerity, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false, evil and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. The little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighted the theme and gave readers a strong spiritual shock.
3. Ask questions skillfully and introduce deep thinking.
Example 1: Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Taste nature, is it not to taste life?
Comments: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Example 2: Different words have different influences, different perspectives have different visions, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and looks, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province, "I in the Haha Mirror")
Comments: At the end of this paragraph, I would like to express my views on the teacher's comments. First, I use the form of parallelism to explain that every student has his own personality, and teachers don't have to obliterate students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.
3, lyrical discussion, revealing the theme
(1) highlights the theme and is touching.
I want to say that shaking hands can build the most intimate, practical and beautiful bridge in the world. shake?hands;?handshake?(n.)
Comments: Naturally, just right. This is an article full of wisdom and rationality. The above narrative makes readers feel many benefits of shaking hands. At the end of this paper, the author puts forward his earnest hope, which naturally closes the whole paper and further increases the persuasiveness of the article.
Example 2. Everyone is not alone. Let's get closer to each other. Let's pay attention to the blooming and falling of this gardenia that conveys maternal love! I firmly believe that the fragrance of gardenia will stay in my heart forever! ("Let the fragrance of flowers stay in my heart forever") ending
Comments: complement each other and combine perfectly. The examinee designed the postscript ingeniously, with exquisite language, profound meaning, repeated suspense and exciting. The postscript echoes from a distance and sublimates the theme.
(2) far-reaching thinking. broad and profound
Remember this day. We bid farewell to confusion and move towards self-improvement: remember this day, we are no longer afraid of wind and rain, we are United as one: remember this day, we hold our heads high and we are moving towards a new era. (Postscript to Remember this Day)
Comments: The postscript at the end is the point to discuss lyricism, which plays the role of finishing touch, and each clause takes care of the above respectively. Small authors can jump out of the small circle of personal life, enlarge their horizons and broaden their minds, and put aside the joys and sorrows of the Chinese nation with heart. He recorded what we can't forget from a broad perspective and from the depth of history? This day. " From this perspective alone, this article is remarkable.
(3) To express one's ambition by holding things, with deep feelings.
Exodus 1. I suddenly realized that giving up is a kind of wisdom! Indus, with a quiet and ethereal mystery, obeys and resists nature, respects and understands nature! Indus leaves early, in fact, it is not a compromise, not a retreat, but an accumulation of growth strength for the coming year in advance!
Looking at the fallen leaves on the ground, I seem to hear your voice! (At the end of "It's not like this")
Comments: According to the natural phenomenon of Chinese parasol falling leaves in late autumn and the influence of a sudden strong wind on Chinese parasol, the author wrote the truth that Chinese parasol knows how to give up. At the end here, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi sublimated the theme.
(4) Implication and reverberation.
In fact, anger only punishes itself with other people's mistakes.
In fact, God closed a door and opened a window for you.
In fact, there is a kind of happiness close to you? (There is a kind of happiness near you at the end)
Comments: The little author stepped out of the hot topic of pursuing happiness and reminded us to cherish the happiness around us and in front of us from places that people easily ignore. The ending here not only echoes the topic, but also summarizes the full text, which is more intriguing and memorable.
I long for too many white wings, and my dreams are endless? White wings decorate the end of my dream.
Comments: What is the main part of the article? Give me two pairs of white wings that travel through time and space. I am willing to travel through just visiting and exploring Li Bai's Tang Dynasty? 、? Give me a pair of white wings and take me to beautiful Venice? It consists of four seemingly independent parts, which support the theme from four aspects: history, literature, reality and future, making the article both layered and heavy. At the end, ellipsis completes the sublimation from concrete to generalization and from point to surface, which enriches the connotation of the article and makes the meaning of the article more profound.
(5) Reveal suspense and highlight the theme
She said to herself:? Care? Angel, thank you! Your concern is the happiness of my life! ? ("other? Happiness? " End)
Comments: This is the full text of an examination room full of suspense and ups and downs. The author started by flipping a coin himself. I didn't expect the result to be accurate, and then it was written? A little note? It is even more magical and full of suspense; At the end of the article, the author saw the note for the last time before he understood his intention. At the end of the article, we still don't know who created the note, but it doesn't matter anymore. The important thing is. A little note? Played its role. The end here means:? She? Finally understand? A little note? Does she feel that she has this silent intention to help? Happiness? . At this point, the feelings sublimated, the theme highlighted, and the title echoed.
4. Quote beautiful sentences, rich and colorful.
Example 1: Tomorrow Song says: Tomorrow follows tomorrow, there are so many tomorrows. I'm going to live tomorrow, and everything is in vain. I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow. (selected from "Creating a Better Tomorrow")
Example 2: Zola said: Life? Only two and a half minutes, a minute of smile, a minute of sigh, and a half minute of love. In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress, that minute's smile was not forced. After that one-minute sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transmission of love. My mother melted her love for life, her love for life, and her love for her loved ones into everyday dribs and drabs, and I lost myself? ("intoxicated")
Comments: There are many famous sayings all over the world. At the end of the composition, if you can quote skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article. Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the range of quotations can be wider, such as proverbs, proverbs, popular lyrics and so on.
5, scene contrast, scene unity
Example 1: The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance. (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Reading in the Rain")
Comments: The characteristics of this ending are very prominent, and the role of scene contrast is also obvious. The author's description of the scenery after the rain implies the disappearance of the emotional barrier between the two generations and the organic combination of emotion and scenery. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless.
Ex. 2: At this moment, a ray of sunshine shone into the ward from the outside, and I felt like a wounded little tree bathing in it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from the full text of "Growing in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)
Comments: This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combining sunshine with growth, implying that although the road to growth is bumpy, it is full of sunshine and expresses an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.
6. Relax, it will follow.
Example 1. After returning home, my mother asked me with concern. It rained so hard, how did you come back? I lie on my mother's ear. Whispered to her: It was God who sent me back with the wings of love. ? (at the end of an angel's wing)
Comments: How to get a rain and an aid? Wings? Can the topic be linked? This is all because of the finishing touch at the end of the article:? It was God who sent me back with the wings of love. ? It turns out that with the wings of an angel, love can fly anywhere.
7. Contrast, beautiful structure
For example, Xu Zhimo believes that he is gold and has a Cambridge in his heart; Leonardo da Vinci believed that he was gold, which made Mona Lisa smile; Su Shi believes that he is gold, so there is? I wish people a long time, thousands of miles away. . I believe I am gold, so that I can realize my confident life and bright future. ("I am gold")
Comments: The first three parallel paragraphs set off the last one? Make the finishing point? The end of the bundle is powerful! The ladder arrangement makes the article beautifully structured.
Anyway: To sum up a sentence is like ringing a bell. ? The end of the article should be concise and rich in connotation. Accumulate life philosophy and sublimate life sentiment; It contains deep feelings and expresses a unique experience. Enlighten people to think, give them lessons, make readers have a strong buzz, arouse rich imagination, chew repeatedly, reverberate around the beam, and have endless aftertaste. There is no fixed method for writing, but it is single-minded, flexible, harmonious and natural, and it is a good article.
Final problem of composition for senior high school entrance examination
The ancients said:? A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think twice. ? So, what are the problems at the end of the senior high school entrance examination composition?
1. gild the lily or something.
Students, believe in smiling and believe in tomorrow. Believe in yourself, and your future will be brilliant. It will always be full of sunshine.
Finally, I want to send a word to those who make unremitting efforts for their own ideals and their own future. One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea? ("Face Life with a Smile")
Comments: It is thankless to say something irrelevant at the end. ? Finally? The latter words are superfluous. The full text has come to an end and should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease and has to say a few words to debunk the meaning that could have been realized. The formulaic ending is too far from the point and does not serve the center.
2. Talk to yourself and leave a loophole.
The road ahead is still very long. What should I do in the future? It depends on us, but I want to tell you one thing. Don't give up anything in the future. Giving up is not the best way. (Excerpted from Never Give up)
Comments:? I'm going to tell everyone, okay? Commanding. Speak vernacular; ? Giving up is not the best way? Wrong point of view. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, it seems that he is sending slogans to people all over the world, or shouting slogans irrelevant to the content of the article. This ending is a big theme.
3. Deviate from the subject and drag your feet
For example. Ideal is the beacon, without ideal, there is no firm direction; And without direction, there is no life? . This sentence is correct. One should have firm ideals. With a firm ideal, we can judge whether our life path is correct, and with the correct direction of life path, we can have a brand-new life. Let's embark on the right path of life. (Excerpted from Light in My Heart)
Comments: Unconsciously? Ideal? Where does this topic drift? How to take a good life path? Yes The meaning of the ending is very clear, but it is too late to finish, which dilutes the theme of the article.
4. Have a head and no tail. Anticlimactic ―― like a lion
Exodus: It seems that the charm of lotus is really great! The charm of lotus is not limited to these, so let's go to see the lotus and get to know it!
Comments:? Is the charm of lotus really great? With what? The charm of lotus does not stop there. Empty and anticlimactic ending has affected the expression effect of the whole article.
5. Pursuing new styles and painting tigers and dogs.
In fact, there is love everywhere in life. It's just that we are not good at finding love. We all go back and forth for our respective careers or studies. For the love of life. We don't care. Now, I really understand love, beautiful flowers have quietly bloomed in my heart, and the fragrance is overflowing.
Life is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of eyes to find beauty.
? postscript
Comments: The author added one in pursuit of novel form? Postscript? , but I don't know? Postscript? The content changed the theme and diluted it. A well-written ending can leave readers with a complete and vivid impression of the article, giving readers a feeling that the ending of the article is round and well-structured.