1. Tips at the beginning

⑴Suppress your desire first and develop your appetite

Oh, why did the teacher let me sit at the same table with him? She is the fiercest girl in my class! Because of this, everyone calls her "Tiger Girl". -- "My Deskmate"

⑵ Straight to the point, straightforward

My relationship with Amin is not ordinary - my deskmate for three years in junior high school. I have a lot to say to her. --"Tablemate"

⑶Depicted and vivid, the impression is lifelike

She is really ugly: yellow and thin face; pointed chin; so pale that it is almost invisible Under the eyebrows, a pair of narrow eyes; a flat and big nose; a mouth of uneven teeth, slightly yellow... Alas! Don't mention it, her appearance really doesn't match such a beautiful name - Zhu Lili. --"Tablemates"

⑷Natural explanation, quoted below

At the beginning of the new semester, I noticed a problem: There are thirty-three boys in our class, twenty-seven If there are two girls at the same table, there will be exactly one extra boy at the same table, and the same is true for girls. There will definitely be a crisis of a boy and a girl sitting at the same table. But I never expected that this crisis would befall me. --"Tablemate"

⑸The beginning of the lyrics resounds through the clouds

"Will you remember tomorrow/the diary you wrote yesterday/will you think about it tomorrow/the most important thing you have ever written?" You who love to cry..." A melodious song "My Deskmate" came out from the roadside audio and video bookstore. The sentimental music brought my thoughts back to the time three years ago... -- "Tablemates"

⑹ Parallels and repetitions, creating melody

A friend is someone to whom I can devote my sincere emotions; a friend is someone to whom I can give all my trust ;Friends, share with me in joy and walk with me in times of crisis. Life without friends is like life without sunshine. I have such a good friend. -- "Friends"

⑺Ask the beginning of the chapter, boundless

The past is like smoke. As time goes by, most of them are gradually forgotten. But how can those eyes make me forget? -- "Friends"

⑻ Famous quotes point the way and make things clear

Francis Bacon once said: "A person who has no real friends can be said to be a truly pitiful person who will always be trapped in a lonely life." His words convey the importance of friends. Yes, if a person loses friendship, he simply cannot survive in the world. -- "Friends"

⑼Contrast and contrast to highlight key points

As the years go by, many people are gradually forgotten by me. However, there are such a pair of eyes and a voice. The figure still lingers in my heart and cannot be forgotten for a long time. -- "Friends"

⑽The beginning of the flashback attracts readers

When we left the National Defense Education School, I don't know why, tears actually rolled in my eyes. Is it nostalgia? Are you nostalgic for that period of life that was hard and tiring but full of vitality, or are you nostalgic for the harsh but sincere and kind soldiers, our instructors? -- "Friends"

⑾Changing the chaos and seeing the sun

Some people say that indifference means seeing through the world of mortals, seeing through everything, and thinking that everything is fake and hypocritical... This view is a reflection of indifference. misinterpretation. If we look at the dictionary, we will understand that "indifferent" means not pursuing fame and wealth...--"Indifferent"

⑿The mountain is overwhelming, and the point of view is strong

At present, the campus comparison The wind is raging, and I think this trend really needs a break. -- "The wind of comparison, stop now"

⒀Associative symbols, endless wonders

A dream was once buried under the gunboats of Western robbers, leaving behind the bitterness of the older generation It is the heartache of endless tears and the hope that can’t be seen through as witnesses. Growing up with the tearful Yangtze River, we are just teenagers who have already tasted the sorrow. We follow the expectations left by our predecessors and look forward to one day... -- "Expectation"

⒁Environmental description and rendering Atmosphere

October 9th is here again. Mr. Lu Xun has passed away sixty years ago. From evening to midnight, quietly, a person sat in front of the window, letting the cold rain hit the window lattice. Under the lamp, a pot of spider plants lightly paints a wall of green bookcases. The night wind was blowing, and there was a slight chill on my body. Thinking of Mr. Lu Xun, tears fell down.

⒂The inscription is the crown, and philosophy comes first

Everything in the world cannot escape the dialectics of nature. What is right and wrong, what is good and what is bad, what is happy and what is worried, how can it be summed up in one word? Of? -- "If Memory Can Be Transplanted"

⒃ Read a lot of books and pick them up at your fingertips

It is said that in the wilderness of Africa, there is a kind of insect-eating flower, which is colorful and fragrant. There are many Flying insects could not resist the "temptation" and were buried in it...--"Resisting the "temptation""

⒄Express emotions and move people with love

In the dusk, a few wisps of smoke came from the farmhouse Ribbed up. I held a bouquet of gardenias and stood in front of Teacher Zhang’s window. Teacher Zhang, are you still so busy? It's time to take a rest, today is your holiday - Teacher's Day. I came to see you with my harvest. -- "Miscellaneous Memory"

⒅ Using things as metaphors for people has profound meanings

In the endless wilderness, an ancient tree, although its life has reached its last moment, is still Growing stubbornly. Beside it, a small tree is sprouting tender buds.

The roots of the old tree have withered, and they have lost their life juice to the young trees; the leaves of the old trees have turned yellow, and they have injected green life into the young trees. The old tree has gone through many vicissitudes of life and has completed its difficult journey. Now, the young tree has just sprouted branches and leaves, but the old tree has left it... This is just like my grandpa leaving me. He left me in a hurry before he could accept my repayment for him. -- "Miscellaneous Memory"

⒆Solve the problem and lay it out, clearly stating the center

Responsibility is what a person should do. Soldiers have the responsibility to protect their families and the country; doctors have the responsibility to save lives and heal the wounded; teachers have the responsibility to train successors. Workers, farmers, clerks, businessmen... everyone has their own responsibilities. In our society, there are many conscientious people from all walks of life, and they form the most beautiful scenery - please allow me to capture a moving picture from these beautiful scenery paintings.

⒇ Set up contradictions and attract people

"I don't believe that you have lived in this class for more than two years and you have no feelings for this group?..." This is this morning What my head teacher, Teacher Chen, said to me. I looked at Teacher Chen's angry eyes, tears of grievance welling up in my eyes, and I said mentally: "Teacher Chen, you misunderstood... How can I not love our class?"

II ． "Structure" skills

There are many ways to structure a composition with full marks in the high school entrance examination. For example, when writing a narrative essay, you can use objects or emotions as clues to structure the article. The article can be structured in other ways, or it can also be structured like stripping bamboo shoots. Here, we will give some explanations on the structural form of the "division"-"tiger belly" part of the full text in the form of total points.

1. Parallel segmentation.

Example: The 2005 Hainan Provincial Curriculum Reform Zone materials semi-proposition "I live in the middle" full score composition "I live in the challenge" after laying out the argument at the beginning, starting from "challenging inferiority", "challenging inertia" "," "Challenging Jealousy" and "Challenging Greed" discuss the four objects of challenge in layers.

Interpretation: Using one sentence at the beginning of each section to lead the entire section actually has a similar function as a sub-argument. Or sum up the entire section in one sentence at the end of each section. This kind of juxtaposed structure of parallel sections appears to have clear levels and a well-proportioned structure, which makes people feel refreshed and pleasing to the eye.

Example: The full score composition "Beautiful Mood Four Seasons Edition" written in Changzhou, Jiangsu Province in 2005 on the topic of "Having a Good Mood", at the beginning of each section, are the following four sentences: Spring - the first flight of the paper kite , spring is warm and flowers are blooming; summer--the lotuses first appear, and dragonflies touch the water; autumn--the rice fields are fragrant and the fruits are abundant; winter--the snow falls silently, and the auspicious snow is a good year.

Interpretation: Many students like to use spring, summer, autumn and winter as subtitles, but this candidate added eight words at the end to indicate the following content. This is an innovation, and then moved it to The beginning of the paragraph will certainly give people a fresh and beautiful feeling.

2. Prompt paragraph format

Example: In 2005, the full score composition "The Small Street is So Beautiful" in Yichang, Hubei Province in 2005 with the topic of "beauty" adopts the method of expressing desire first and suppressing it, writing I hate the quietness and obsolescence of small streets, and then praise the small streets from three aspects: 1. The small streets are beautiful, and the beauty lies in nature; 2. The small streets are beautiful, and the beauty lies in harmony; 3. The small streets are beautiful, and the beauty lies in Simple; finally ends with poetic language.

Interpretation: The prompts for each aspect are regarded as an independent unit and placed in front of this level. As a separate section, in addition to the role of triggering the following, it also plays the role of emphasis. and attracting others' attention.

3. Summary paragraph type

Example: The 2005 full-mark essay "The Taste of Jiangnan" with a semi-proposition "Taste" of Shenzhen, Guangdong also adopts the structure of total points. It begins with "The passionate Jiangnan has haunted the dreams of many literati." In the middle, I write four sections based on the poems I have learned: 1. The taste of Jiangnan is the sweetness of clear water; 2. The taste of Jiangnan is the bitterness of first love; 3. The taste of Jiangnan is the pain of leaving home; 4. The taste of Jiangnan is the pain of compassion. Finally, the full text is summarized.

Interpretation: Contrary to the prompt paragraph type, the summary paragraph type uses the summary words of each level as an independent unit and puts them behind each level. It is a separate section to highlight and emphasize Summarize the role of this layer.

4. Subtitle style

There are many kinds of subtitle styles. Here are some common ones.

A. Comparative type

Example: In 2003, Nanping, Fujian Province used "Change" as the topic of the full score essay "Ears are Picky Eaters" with four subtitles in the middle: One of Changes : Eat soft food instead of hard food; Change two: Eat hemp instead of spicy food; Change three: Eat fat but not thin; Change four: Eat up but not down.

Interpretation: The savvy candidates have deep eyes and rely on their ears. Each subtitle uses contrast to satirize the bad phenomena of bureaucracy, flattery, money first, and bullying. Reveals the reason why the truth "disappears".

B. Metaphorical style

Example: In 2005, Henan’s full-scoring essay on the topic of "friendliness", "Farming, Friendliness and Joy," used three subtitles in the middle: A tidbit - -Friendship at first acquaintance, two flower blossoms - resolve hatred, three flower blossoms - connect friendship.

Interpretation: Three subtitles compare the written content to highlights. Three friendly flowers form a friendly world. Dashes serve as explanations.

There are also other uses of dashes, such as "laughing--amusing children, laughing--increasing courage, laughing--turning life around" in "A Friendly Smile".

C. Verse style

Example: In 2004, the perfect composition "Water Festival" with "Landscape" as the topic in Zibo, Shandong Province used four subtitles: Landscape 1: Qingming Festival It rains heavily; Scene 2: Pedestrians on the road are in despair; Scene 3: May I ask where the restaurant is; Scene 4: The shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village in the distance.

Interpretation: The candidates’ four subtitles cleverly quoted four lines of ancient poems by Du Mu of the Tang Dynasty, and wrote four landscapes, comparing ancient and modern times, and demonstrating pros and cons. They went deep into each other and told people about the pollution of water resources. The damage is alarming and should cause people to be on high alert.

Example: The 2005 full-mark composition "The Applause Rings Again" in Suqian, Jiangsu Province uses three sentences quoted from Wang Guowei's "Three Realms of Learning" in the middle three subtitles: Last night's west wind Withered green trees, I climbed up to a tall building alone and looked across the road to the end of the world; my clothes became wider and wider, but I didn't regret it, because I was so relieved that I felt haggard; when I suddenly looked back, I saw that I was there in the dim light. Write your own learning story.

D. Situational style

Example: In 2005, the perfect composition "Scenery of Infatuation on the Heartstring" with the topic of "Landscape" in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province used four subtitles: People Go The building is empty and silent, I miss the old days so much, I sing the dusk with my sentiments, and two lines of hot tears fill my heart.

Interpretation: It can be seen from the four subtitles that the author, as the lyrical protagonist, highly integrates "emotion" and "scenery", which is worth learning from.

There are many forms of subtitles. They can be in the form of shot one, shot two, and shot three. They can also be in the form of act one, act two, and act three of a drama. They can also be in diary form. No more wordiness here.

E. Subcategory

Example: In 2005, the full score composition "Start from the 'Head'" was used in the essay "Start from the 'Head'" in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province. There are three subtitles: the "head" of the king, the "head" of the brave, and the "head" of the winner.

Interpretation: These three subtitles are considered from three smaller entry points. The text after the first subtitle uses the famous saying "There are talents in every generation, and each leads hundreds of others." Year", and then write the story of Chen Sheng; the second subtitle is followed by the poem "Thousands of hammers carved out the deep mountains, and the fire burned them as if it were nothing", and then writes that Xu Xiake went through untold hardships to find the source of the Yangtze River and opened up an adventure for the brave men. The story of the road, after the third title, I used the beautiful sentence "There will be long winds and waves, and I will hang my clouds and sail across the sea", and then write the story of the sports athlete Liu Xiang winning the championship. These three points are all closely centered on the "head". Finally, local materials are used to call on candidates to be confident and make this wonderful "head", a brilliant "head" and a dancing "head". It is simply wonderful.

There are also those who choose from family life: the "boss" who makes money (write as dad), the "boss" who manages money (writes as mom), the "boss" who saves money (writes as himself), and the structure is also Very reasonable.

F. Sensory type

Example: The 2005 semi-propositional essay "Wonderful" in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province used three subtitles in the middle of the essay "Wonderful Moments": Look, the sun is rising in the east. Listen, the water lilies are blooming; Taste, the true meaning of life.

Interpretation: The first subtitle is about the aunt giving birth and the rising sun, full of hope. The second subtitle is difficult to understand at first glance, but after careful reading, it turns out that the examinee turned his head and closed his eyes slightly to listen to the clear "bang" sound when the flowers bloomed. This detailed description is convincing. The third subtitle is about the intoxication of a dandelion flower blown away by a critically ill girl who was still thinking about donating her corneas. The three exquisite moments reveal the true meaning of life, giving people hope, smile, and help, which are worth savoring by readers.

Three. Ending Techniques

If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruits and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think about it again and again." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. Wouldn't it be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was disappointed by an unfavorable ending at the end? In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending must also be restricted by the beginning. In this way, the ending is even more difficult to write. People call the ending of a good article "leopard's tail". From the perspective of high school entrance examination composition, although it is not necessarily required that every article ends with "leopard's tail", the ending is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.

Generally speaking, the common mistakes students make at the end of their compositions are: ① Superfluous. That is to say, the full text has come to an end, and it could have been thought-provoking, but the author is still worried, so he insists on trembling a few sentences to explain the whereabouts of the characters that do not need to be explained one by one, and to reveal the meaning that could have been understood. ② Shouting slogans in vain. At the end, in order to express one's position and attitude, shouting slogans that have nothing to do with the content of the article, this kind of ending ruins the theme. ③ Sloppy. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it still refuses to wrap up, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the composition for the high school entrance examination is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the composition in the examination room? The following ending techniques are commonly used in high school entrance examination essays.

1. Highlight the theme. This kind of ending means that at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text, using concise language to clearly express the theme idea, or when the full text is about to end, the writing intention is clearly explained, so this ending method is also called "The finishing touch".

For example, at the end of the high school entrance examination composition "Special Answer Sheet": "Six years have passed, and this special answer sheet has been kept in my drawer. I want him to always warn me: knowledge cannot tolerate any falsehood."

At the end of the article, the topic is highlighted with the help of concise discussion, which is deeply enlightening.

2. Echoing from beginning to end. The ending should echo the beginning, and write sentences that echo the beginning but are not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common way to end all kinds of articles. This binding method can arouse the reader's psychological sense of beauty and create a sense of harmony and integration. For example, "A Precious Shirt" begins with "In my home, I keep a kind of white, high-definition shirt." It ends with: "For four years, I have carefully collected this precious shirt and have never been willing to wear it. It once. "The ending of "Praise to Poplar" echoes the beginning: "I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!"

3. Lyrical argumentative style. Concluding the article with lyrical discussion can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotions, and arouse readers' cries, which has a strong artistic appeal. This ending method is mainly used in narrative essays about people and events, and can also be used in expository essays and argumentative essays. There are many forms of lyrical argumentative endings, so it is more free to end in this way. A good "lyrical argumentation" ending will inevitably give rise to true feelings, giving readers a sense of reality and adequacy. For example: the end of the high school entrance examination essay "The Touch of Happiness": "I remember a poet said this: 'How can I thank you? When I walked towards you, I originally wanted to harvest a ray of spring breeze, but you gave me the whole spring; How can I thank you? When I walked toward you, I wanted to hold up a bunch of waves, but you gave me the whole ocean. 'Yes, how can I thank you, Mom and Dad, for giving me life. You have given me strength, and you have given me happiness, but I cannot repay you. There is a feeling called happiness, and a kind of happiness called touching. I understand your hardships, and I understand your hopes. I will do my best to give you. May everyone be happy and let everyone learn to be moved!"

4. Ingeniously introduced and clever couplets. End with famous quotes, aphorisms, poems, sayings, lyrics, etc., aiming to extend the article and reveal some kind of true meaning of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives, and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, making it deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers and serving as a reminder that "the words have been exhausted, but the meaning is endless." Effect. For example: "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road" ends with: "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road are blooming everywhere." Another example is the ending of "How I Want to Have You, Childhood": "'If time could go back, I would like to go back to my childhood, mother. Are you still standing at the door of the hut...'The singing is still as clear and sweet as ever." The ending of the lyrics adds to the charm of the writing and arouses the reader's sense of beauty.

5. Lens editing style. That is, the ending outlines a clear and vivid image, has a sense of lens, and is full of poetry. For example, at the end of the examination essay "Little Parrot, Fly": "It went, dressed in colorful clothes, and flew towards the vast and boundless sky of its own."

6. Natural Bandana . No matter what kind of literary style, after expressing the content, the article naturally concludes the whole text without designing profound philosophical sentences or carving out rich symbolic shapes. Such an ending is called a "natural ending". It completely avoids the superfluous and unnecessary ending problems of the article. It appears simple, bright, and unpretentious, and is widely used in high school entrance examination compositions. The atmosphere in the composition examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. It is impossible to pay too much attention to what "style" and what "method". As long as you are passionate and expressive, you can write wherever you want, and you can express your thoughts fully, which is a good article. However, being "natural" does not mean doing whatever you want, being sloppy, but following the natural trend of literary development to complete the overall situation.

For example, at the end of the article "My Teacher": "Unfortunately, I did not finish junior high school, so I transferred to the county fifth primary school. From then on, Teacher Cai and I were separated." Everything reflects the author's sincere and deep feelings for Teacher Cai Yunzhi, and the author's longing for Teacher Cai is reflected everywhere. This difference at the end expresses the author's feelings for Teacher Cai more deeply.

7. Sublimation theme. This method is a method of revealing the essence through phenomena. The sublimation theme should be appropriate and appropriate, not random. For example, at the end of "Remembering My Mother": "My mother has left me now. I will never be able to see her again. This grief is irreparable. My mother is an ordinary person. She is just one of the millions of working people in China." However, it is these millions of people who created and created the history of China. How can I repay my mother’s deep kindness? I will continue to be loyal to our nation and people, and to our country. The hope of the nation and the people - the Communist Party of China, enables people who live like my mother to live happily. This is what I can do and I will definitely do it. "May my mother rest in peace!" The ending elevates the theme to a new level: from loving mother to praising ordinary working people in China, the intention is profound.

Attachment: Wonderful passages <1>

1. Life is like a path winding in the mountains, bumpy and uneven, with ditches and cliffs on the sides. If you fall down, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Don’t pretend to be pretentious! This is straightforwardness, not weakness, because crying does not affect the journey, but can actually increase caution.

The mountain flowers are blooming and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, just laugh if you want, but don’t pretend to be reserved! This is straightforwardness, not pride, because smiling once does not affect the journey, but can actually increase confidence.

2. Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which makes the hungry and cold people feel the warmth of the world; love is a clear spring in the desert, which allows those who are on the verge of despair to see the hope of life again; love is It is a sweet rain sprinkled on the long-drought land, which allows the lonely and helpless people to immediately get spiritual comfort

3. The days are always like fine yarn passing through the fingertips, slipping quietly inadvertently. The sorrows and misused injuries of the past have gently passed away under the wash of the passing years, while the joy and smiles left behind remain fresh in the depths of memory.

4. Some memories are burned, and some memories are buried deep in the heart. The age of innocence flows through the golden age like running water.

5. Maternal love is a masterpiece that I will never be able to finish reading; maternal love is a sky that I will never be able to fly out of. ...Zhang Weiwei

6. When the withered autumn leaves swayed in the wind, the late autumn floated outside the school. Under the moonlight, the shadow of my father was very long. The huge windbreaker wrapped the skinny father in it. I There is a burst of sadness in my heart

7. The true love in the world is like a big net, which always warms people's hearts. Just like a mother's love, it never ends.

8. Time is a poem, a poem containing rich philosophy. Time is like a camel, carrying the dreams of countless people.

9. The fate of a boat is to drift; the fate of a sail is to chase the wind and waves; the fate of life is to grasp it. Only by grasping and believing in life can you be young and guilt-free

10. The past is like a song , in the journey of life, despite the ups and downs and regrets, the beauty of youth has not been lost. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let us remember that sentence: I will not cry if I miss the sun, otherwise, I will miss the moon and stars.

11. If you fail in life, please don’t write sad tears on your face. Failure is also a kind of gain. The most important thing in life is to have full courage and the courage to start a business.

12. I once thought that a helpless cry was all the vicissitudes of the world; a small setback was all the failures in life. It was the fourteen-year-old who told me...

13. The moonlight is quiet and quiet. Pattering raindrops hit the hut. Under the dim light, my mother was sewing the clothes of the wanderer closely. Suddenly, a gust of cold wind squeezed through the window of the hut. My mother seemed to have caught a cold and coughed several times with a strong sense of tiredness. . I woke up from my dream and stared blankly at my elderly mother under the lamp...

14. At night, the spring breeze blew softly.

I held my chin and sat on the colorful steps, and another unforgettable thing came to my mind