Composition title: On a gentle and drizzling morning, a breeze and a drizzle can move people to create beautiful music in nature; on a night with a sparse moon and stars, a little fragrance and a ray of moonlight can move people around them. An elegant and quiet atmosphere. The joy flashing in the tears is touching; the eternity frozen in time is touching. Touching is a shock deep in the soul. It comes from our devout adherence to responsibilities, persistent pursuit of ideals, and the most comprehensive love for life. Please write an essay on the topic of "Moving", no less than 600 words. Chinese Soul 13th Middle School 3rd Grade (8) Wang Yile I have been moved by countless things, and sometimes even shed tears, but there is only one thing that shocked my heart. The Olympic men's 110-meter hurdles final was in the early hours of the morning, and my father had been watching the TV. My mother went to bed early because she was "uncomfortable." I hid under the quilt in the air-conditioned room, waiting for the excitement to begin. Suddenly I heard the alarm clock in my mother's room ringing, but it only sounded a few times. Almost at the same time, my mother and I rushed from our room to the living room. We all looked at each other and smiled, understanding. In fact, there were still 15 minutes before the game started, and I saw my father blowing smoke rings non-stop. I know he's nervous. Mom seemed to be very leisurely, eating melon seeds, but I saw her hand holding the remote control tightly. She was also nervous. It was as if I could see through their skin and see an essence in their bones, a Chinese soul that would only be revealed at critical moments. With the firing of the starting referee's gun, the game begins. 1 second, dad took a puff of cigarette; 2 seconds, mom put a melon seed in her mouth; 3 seconds, Liu Xiang was in the lead; 4 seconds, dad stood up; 5 seconds, mom took another melon seed; 6 seconds, one In a beautiful arc, Liu Xiang crossed a step; at 7 seconds, his father took a step forward; at 8 seconds, Liu Xiang's opponent was half a body behind him; at 9 seconds, his father grabbed his mother's hand; at 10 seconds, his mother grabbed his father's hand; At 11 seconds, Liu Xiang's opponent made a mistake and was almost knocked down; at 12 seconds, someone stamped his feet upstairs; at 12 seconds, 91, his father knelt on his knees, and his mother scattered melon seeds all over the floor. Many people stamped their feet upstairs, and someone sang the national anthem. , looking out the window, every house was brightly lit, and my tears fell down. I have never seen a father hugging his mother like a child, and I was moved; I have never seen a mother dance and mess up the melon seeds, and I was moved; I have never seen the excitement that all Chinese people broke out at that moment. , I was moved... That night, I grew up. I felt proud to be a Chinese, and my soul was baptized by being moved. Comments: The emotion expressed in this article has a process of changing with the development of things. It not only expresses the depth and intensity of emotion, but also makes the text vivid and colorful. This way of writing is not only convenient, but also effective. Zhu Ziqing's description of his father's "back" is like this, and Yang Shuo's lament about the "bee" spirit is also like this. (Recommended by Ma Lin) People, Cars, Dakar, Junior High School 13 (10) Chen Xin The Dakar Rally—the most difficult event on earth, attracts the attention of millions of people every year. Her charm comes from the strangeness of the desert scenery, the hardship and excitement of the competition, and even more from that tragic and high-spirited feeling! I am touched by the racing driver! I am moved by the racing! Dakar, I am touched by you! In the desert, the relationship between people is the most sincere. There is no deception or deceit, and it gives people spiritual baptism and touching. Vehicles are traveling in groups, and I run out of gas, so you walk down with the spare gas tank; when you fall, I stop the car and lend a helping hand. During the game, people behave less like rivals and more like brothers, forming lifelong friendships. Chinese Paladin driver Xu Lang said this experience in an interview: He met a foreign driver while driving. He asked Xu Lang to stop the car and then calmly told him that the sand in front was very soft and to pay attention to safety. At this time, Xu Lang discovered that a foreign racing car was trapped in the sand on the roadside. Xu Lang said, with a surge in his eyes. I know that he must have been very moved at that time, because I also felt my soul shocked in front of the TV: What a great character this is. The foreign driver's own car was still stuck in the sand, but he was thinking of other drivers. safety. In front of nature, people are so insignificant, but in front of united people, nature is not invincible. Isn't this worth touching? Perhaps cars are among the thousands of machines created by humans that are worthy of being described as "beautiful". Fighters and tanks may be more "beautiful", but after all they are tools for killing people and cannot be associated with beauty. .

On the journey to Dakar, the warriors and their racing cars are inseparable: the car and the people are one, the car is there, and people are killed when the car crashes. The car has long been part of the racer. The yellow sand in the sky is endless, and the beauty of cars and people speeding between heaven and earth, how can it not make people feel inexplicably moved! The end point of the race - Dakar Rose Lake. The dream-like name has attracted many warriors to embark on the journey. This is the dream of human beings to defeat nature. Since the birth of the Dakar Rally in 1979, 48 people, including 30 riders, have lost their lives on the way to Dakar in the past 27 years. Rally organizer Sabini was also involved in a helicopter crash. Although he is sleeping in the desert, the wheels of the Dakar Rally will not stop. Sabini's father inherited the business from father to son, allowing the dust of racing to continue to rise in the desert. The 2005 race was even more tragic. Four riders and two locals died in car accidents, including two-time motorcycle champion Meoni. When his teammates heard the sad news of his passing, they all knelt gently beside the car. Everyone mourned for him that night. The next day, the drivers all wore black ribbons to commemorate this warrior. The race started again...the sun will still rise. , the desert is still windy and sandy, and what the warriors bring to people is courage and faith. This is a tragic and firm touch. "Before you set out, it's always just a dream, and hitting the road is the challenge." This is the famous saying of Sabine, the organizer of the rally, and it is probably the reason why everyone, including me, was moved by it! Comments There are rich emotions hidden in everyone's heart. When we write articles, we want to pluck those emotional strings and awaken the feeling in everyone's heart. What the author of this article touches is the three strongest strings: the sincere unity of people in the face of difficulties, the selfless state of unity between people and vehicles, and the firm choice to face death and ideals. The emotion of beauty is always moving. (Recommended by Ma Lin)