I always thought that writing a composition should find my truest feelings. It's been like this since I came into contact with composition. Whether I am happy or sad, I will write it in my composition, giving off my truest feelings.
However, because of the big exams and quizzes again and again, for me, the first feeling is always that I can't write my composition. Why? You see, here comes a topic "My favorite-". To tell the truth, what I like best is singing, but it's not the classic that the teacher said. Everyone likes different songs, but if you want to get high marks, you really have to get rid of those pop songs that are called "affecting learning". I have always been a good boy in the teacher's mind. In this case, I have to write compositions that I don't like or pretend. These compositions tend to score higher. I suddenly feel sorry for my composition! ! ! ! ! ! Does the teacher really like the "excellent work" made of words?
I know I can't convince the teacher through the words in the examination room. I have neither ability nor courage. This makes me often write in another form during exams. Therefore, I am determined to study writing hard. Maybe one day, I have the courage and strength to convince the teacher. Overcome one's own psychology: I want to write but dare not.
Yesterday, I sent a composition, and my tricky Chinese teacher gave me 88 points. I got 85 points at my deskmate. She wants to tell me something. She said, "My cousin writes her composition with great care. Every time she writes a composition, she will turn over the composition book, copy down the good sentences inside, and then write them into the composition. " composition
I heard it and found it ridiculous. How can the composition belong to someone else? This is my own composition, and even copied from others. I don't feel anything. What's the point of such a composition? Too much beauty seems artificial; Too much emotional expression, feel fake; Too many words make people feel that they are pieced together.
I believe our simple words will be more touching. And those gorgeous, let it be gorgeous!
2. How to write down my feelings in my emotional composition
It has been five years since I came to the experimental primary school. In these five years, I have experienced countless joys and sorrows. Everything is like a wonderful movie, which was shown in my childhood. Sometimes it makes you feel very happy and you want to try it yourself. Sometimes it will make you feel a sense of loyalty and want to show your strength; What's more, there is always discord between classmates. As an adult, you may find it funny, but for us, it may not be a joke.
In recent years, I have spent a day and a night laughing and laughing in this noisy day. Do you want to know my story? Then listen to me-play (say) seriously.
My family is poor. In order to get me into a real primary school, grandpa worked hard outside. When I was eight years old, my grandfather had an accident, but he insisted on sending me to primary school. In this way, I entered the experimental primary school. At first, no one wanted to be friends with me. I am very lonely. At this time, I secretly made up my mind and began to work hard. After a period of time, my efforts finally paid off, ranking high in my class and making my classmates sit up and take notice. I am very happy, because I won't be lonely now.
Now, I don't care about the embarrassment between classmates. I decided to study hard and not let my sick grandfather down. So, I began to put forward higher requirements for myself, but my grandfather died soon, which brought me a great blow. Teachers and classmates comforted me, and I cheered up when I was lost. I can't be knocked down by a sad thing. I have to repay my parents who work outside and my elderly grandmother, so I will study hard for my dead grandfather.
What's the matter? Do you know me? Then cheer for me. I won't give up.
3. How to write a good composition at the beginning As the saying goes, "Everything is difficult at the beginning."
He also said, "A good beginning is half the battle." The same is true of composition, especially narrative.
At the beginning, it is very important to create an atmosphere, set the tone for the article and give the reader the first impression. If the beginning of a composition is just right, it can often catch the reader at once and increase the highlights of the article.
Therefore, whether you can write the beginning of a composition flexibly, uniquely and accurately is often related to the success or failure of an article. There are many ways to start a narrative, and the common ones are as follows: First, a narrative with the writer as the main topic can directly explain the characters or point out the topic through the description of the portraits, language and actions of the characters; Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event at the beginning and enter the theme.
At the window of the sunset, a beautiful girl stood there, staring at the beautiful scenery of early spring outside. She sighed and looked down at the pink roses in the blue and white porcelain vase.
She closed her eyes and recalled the past. (Pink Rose) 2. On that day, a red notice was posted in front of the flower shop: Book flowers for Mother's Day.
Oh! Mother's Day is coming. It's time for me to prepare a holiday present for my mother. ("Mother's Day Gift") Second, write about the scenery and render the atmosphere. At the beginning of the article, starting with writing the scenery, it shows the environment of the characters' activities or explains the background of the story, and renders the atmosphere to set off the characters and unfold the story.
For example, 1, the morning sun came out and the lake dressed it up; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. (Forever Love) 2. As the sun sets, the dim glow renders half the sky. I am lonely on the balcony.
On the old poplar outside the window, the unknown big bird is still tirelessly feeding its baby. Its mung bean-like eyes looked gently and lovingly at the bird that wanted to fly out of the nest.
This photo, like this, reminds me of my mother ... ("Facing Mother's Eyes") Third, I always dominate the whole article and prompt the main points. This kind of opening briefly summarizes the main content of the article, and you can know the main points of the article at a glance, such as: 1, the opening of Zheng Zhenduo's cat, "I have several cats at home, and the ending is always gone or dead." This sentence is a summary, indicating that the main content of the full text is about the process of raising three cats at home.
2. "I have a habit, and my mother says it's a good habit." ("I have a good habit") This opening comes straight to the point and dominates the whole article. The main part of the article focuses on a good habit of mine.
3. "Looking back at the traces of the years, I found that there are always some things that can't be erased by the wind and rain of life." ("Knocking on the Door Ring of Memory") This beginning prompts the main points of the article with concise language, so that people can know at a glance that the composition is about some unforgettable things in life.
Fourth, lyrical discussion, determine the tone, use a few appropriate comments at the beginning, make a lyrical essay, or infect readers, or point out the main idea, which will affect the whole body. (Fan) For example: 1 With the crackling firecrackers at the end of the year, stepping on the melting snow in Yuan Ye, you come slowly, and your eyes are full of affection.
You make my yellow face blush with the warmth of love; You sang with love, which awakened my confused faith. I, no longer depressed, no longer dull, no longer hesitant, no longer waiting, no longer watching, no longer praying, I will cheer up, find, find you, and find the colorful dreams you have woven for me! ("Love Send Spring Breeze") 2. Birthday is a line, one is me and the other is my grandmother; Birthday is a circle, surrounded by grandma's smile and my memory; Birthday is a river, and the swift current carries my thoughts of my grandmother.
(Birthday Speech) 5. Setting questions to lead to the following beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's interest and thinking, and play a fascinating role. Did you jump off the cliff in order to get rid of that cold and hunger? Did you throw yourself off this cliff to avoid the shame of being captured? (The tree on the cliff) 2. Friend, have you heard how crocodiles cry? Have you heard the story of orangutans eating people? Do you know how aliens came to earth? ..... Oh, you shook your head.
Don't worry, it's all like this-what "Anecdotes in the World" told me made me feel the fun of reading after class. (The Fun of Reading After Class) 6. Quoting poems, starting with the punch lines and famous sayings of poems, can not only stimulate readers' interest, but also improve the taste of articles.
At the same time, it can also reveal the main content of the article and highlight people and events. For example: 1, "I came to this world to see the sunshine."
I haven't forgotten this sentence of balmont for almost a day since I first read it. The poet, like a person who has never been hurt, sincerely, happily and quietly praises the earth, sunshine and the noisy world.
("I came to this world to see the sunshine") 2. "Mom, you are a lotus leaf, and I am red-violet. The raindrops in my heart are coming. Who is the shadow of my sky except you? " Every time I see Ms. Bing Xin eulogizing her mother's words, I can't help but think of my little loving mother, who bears the burden of family life alone.
(Boundless Motherly Love) VII. Contrast and contrast, the beginning of the clouds can make the content to be expressed more prominent and eye-catching in contrast with other things, thus giving people a very clear and profound impression.
4. How to write the beginning of the feeling after reading There are generally six ways to write the beginning of the feeling after reading, namely, retelling method, straightforward method, extended association method, bedding method, questioning and thinking method, and setting method.
1, text retelling method.
This is the simplest and most common way to start. At the beginning, I introduce my reading works in narrative language, and then I explain my feelings in concise language. This feeling is the viewpoint of the article, which belongs to the demonstration of the three elements of argumentative writing.
2. Straight-through method.
This method of beginning is the method of "coming straight to the point and expressing your mind", and writing out the general feelings after reading a certain work at the beginning.
3. Expand the association method.
This way of starting is caused by some phenomena in real life, which leads the author to read a work directionally and then talk about his true feelings.
4. pave the way.
This method of beginning is to talk about this first and then that, trying to lay out things related to feelings, and then lead to the feelings of reading works. This is similar to the metaphor in The Book of Songs.
5. Doubt the way of thinking.
This method of opening is to carefully set questions after in-depth analysis of the original work, causing readers to think deeply, and then answer questions in combination with the work. This method can attract readers and has a strong appeal.
6. Use the environment as a foil.
The way to start this way is to set up a typical environment related to the feelings expressed in the works you read, and then make clear your knowledge and understanding of the works you read. This method is suitable for the feeling after reading serious works.
Extended data
1. The feeling after reading focuses on "feeling", which originates from a specific "reading" and "introduction" is the foothold of "feeling". The so-called "quotation" refers to quoting the original text around the feeling point.
2. After introducing the content of "reading", we should make some comments on "reading". We can analyze the content of "citation" on the basis of facts; It can also be excavated from the phenomenon to the essence, from the individual to the general.
5. Who can tell me how to write the beginning and end of my reading? The beginning is usually: 1. Today, I read it. This article deeply touched me.
2. Open the book. A few words printed in my eyes can't help reminding me.
3. Or quote a famous quote at the beginning and then introduce the content.
The ending is generally: 1. This article inspired me deeply.
For a long time, I was in deep thought.
Here are some examples: at first, 1. "Who has never died in life since ancient times, and shines in history with a pure heart" comes from the poem "Crossing Zero and Ding Yang". Today, when I watched Crossing the Zero Ocean, I saw a touching picture.
2. The book "Flowers at Morning" is the work of Mr. Lu Xun in his later years. This collection of essays is all about Mr. Lu Xun's childhood. Looking back on childhood in old age is like picking flowers in the evening and early morning. Although you have lost the splendor and fragrance when you are in full bloom, the reflection of the sunset has added a charm to it, and the faint fragrance is even more imaginative and memorable.
End: 1. The poem "Crossing the Ocean" is like my lamp, little teacher, telling me to love my motherland and study hard; It is also like colorful sunshine, accompanying me to the future.
2. Childhood has drifted away, leaving only scattered memories. It is better to read "Flowers in the Morning" carefully, experience the childhood dreams of that different era, and love nature and yearn for freedom with Lu Xun.
6. How to write a good example of the beginning of the post-reading feeling (article).
1, reading; Feeling:
I finished reading the text Fanka in one breath. Tears blurred my eyes. I cried. I feel sorry for nine-year-old Fanka. She leads an inhuman life. I seem to see Fanka being beaten and scolded again.
2. A Dream of Red Mansions: I have read the Dream of Red Mansions many times, and I always feel that Lin Daiyu's life is so bleak. I can't bear to read the burning manuscript of Daiyu for the next few times. Baoyu is married. I think the cruel ending is enough, and I don't want to relive that sadness over and over again.
3. In a hurry by Zhu Ziqing, a famous modern writer, depicts the trace of the passage of time delicately and expresses the author's helplessness and regret for wasting time.
4. Memories of Autumn Today we learned the text Memories of Autumn, which deeply touched me. Let me understand that it is not easy to be a mother, and also understand the deep affection between mother and child.
After learning the text "Little Match Girl", I can't help thinking.
5. "Little Match Girl" I deeply sympathize with the tragic life of the little girl. All she has is fantasy; And what I have, everything is reality.
6. "What is happiness?" "Happiness" is a beautiful word that many people are pursuing. However, people have different understandings of what happiness is. Take me for example. I used to think that Chinese New Year was happiness. I can get lucky money and put on new clothes. You can eat delicious food and visit the colorful Lantern Festival. In short, eating well and dressing well seems to be happiness. In fact, I think it seems too naive, but I always feel a little confused about what happiness is. After reading fairy tales, I was inspired and found the answer.
7. Among the four classic novels of Water Margin, one of them, Water Margin, was finally finished by me. It was so hard! However, I finally understand a lot of truth.
8. How Steel was Tempered: I read this novel several times during my holiday. It is one of my favorite extracurricular readings. I can recite paragraphs about the meaning of life!
7. What should I write at the beginning of my review? After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "feeling after reading".
The basic idea of post-reading is: (1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc.
This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, the word "Jane" must be highlighted, and the specific contents of books and articles must not be described in large paragraphs, but the parts directly related to feelings should be simply described, leaving out things unrelated to feelings.
(2) clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences.
Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article.
The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
(3) Put facts and reason around basic viewpoints. This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing.
In this process, it should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view. (4) Combining basic ideas with practice.
A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality.
This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting.
The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged.
Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written. We should pay attention to the following issues when writing the post-reading feeling: First, we should attach importance to reading, which is the premise and foundation of feeling in the relationship between reading and feeling; Sense is the extension or result of reading.
You must "read" before "feel". If you don't study, you won't feel. Therefore, to write a post-reading feeling, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp the basic content of the original text, correctly understand the central idea of the original text and the meaning of key sentences, and deeply understand the author's writing purpose and the thoughts and feelings expressed in the text.
Second, we should choose the feeling point accurately. After reading a book or an article, there will be many feelings and experiences. For the same book or article, different people think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "teasing others" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people who have no real skills will "expose their stuffing" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we consider the reason why Mr. Nan Guo Can spent half a day in Qi Xuanwang, we can think that leaders should have a realistic leadership style, not flashy, otherwise it will leave loopholes for those who fish in troubled waters. If we think from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides objective conditions for people like Mr. Nanguo to muddle along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up.
After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose what you feel most and have something to say to write.
We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing problems, pay attention to our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text.
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The first example of post-reading feeling: 1. Feeling after reading Fanka: I finished reading this text in one breath, tears blurred my eyes and I cried. I feel sorry for nine-year-old Fanka. She leads an inhuman life. I seem to see Fanka being beaten and scolded again. 2. A Dream of Red Mansions: I have seen A Dream of Red Mansions many times, but I always felt that Lin Daiyu's life was so bleak before. I couldn't bear to watch the burning manuscript of Daiyu for the next few times. Baoyu got married. I think it's enough to know the cruel ending, and I don't want to relive that sadness over and over again. 3. Hurriedly: The "Hurriedly" written by Zhu Ziqing, a famous modern writer, describes the traces of the passage of time and expresses the author. Let me understand that it is not easy to be a mother, and also understand the deep affection between mother and child. 5. "Little Match Girl" I deeply sympathize with the tragic life of the little girl. All she has is fantasy; And what I have, everything is reality. 6. "What is happiness?" "Happiness" is a beautiful word that many people are pursuing. However, people have different understandings of what happiness is. Take me for example. I used to think that Chinese New Year was happiness. I can get lucky money and put on new clothes. You can eat delicious food and visit the colorful Lantern Festival. In short, eating well and dressing well seems to be happiness. In fact, I think it seems too naive, but I always feel a little confused about what happiness is. After reading fairy tales, I was inspired and found the answer. 7. Among the four classic novels of Water Margin, one of them, Water Margin, was finally finished by me. It was so hard! However, I finally understand a lot of truth. 8. "How Steel is Tempered": I read this novel several times during the holiday and it is my favorite.
9. How do you write the beginning of your thoughts after reading? The first six methods of reading after reading. This is the simplest and most common way to start. At the beginning, I introduce my reading works in narrative language, and then I explain my feelings in concise language. This feeling is the viewpoint of the article, which belongs to the demonstration of the three elements of argumentative writing.
Example 1: After reading a short article, Zhong Yong's ending can't help but make people think. When Fang Zhongyong was five years old, he could "write poems by referring to things" and "both arts and sciences are considerable". However, his mercenary father did not provide conditions for him to continue his studies. By the time he was twenty, he was "out of touch with the crowd". From this, I realized that no matter how talented a person is, it is difficult to succeed without the efforts of the day after tomorrow. In other words, talent is the basic condition of success, and diligence is the decisive factor of success.
Second, the direct method. This method of beginning is the method of "coming straight to the point and expressing your mind", and writing out the general feelings after reading a certain work at the beginning.
Example 2: the seed of love, the germination of love-the first paragraph of the article "The Motherland is in My Heart": After reading the book "The Motherland is in My Heart", I was filled with emotion, and my love for the motherland came into being. This book has vivid language and touching content. After reading it, I was infected and edified, and planted the seeds of loving my China in my heart.
Third, the extended association method. This way of starting is caused by some phenomena in real life, which leads the author to read a work directionally and then talk about his true feelings.
Example 3: "Don't let people wear good colors, just be compassionate and full of enthusiasm"-read the first paragraph of the article "The Party is in My Heart";
People often sigh: "The folk customs are getting worse and worse, the party style is not correct, and the social atmosphere is in a mess." After listening to a lot, I even doubt the lyrics of "Without * * *, there would be no new China". With a question mark, I opened this book-"The Party is in My Heart" and read it again and again devoutly. My thoughts gradually became clear and my doubts gradually disappeared. Finally, I once again affirmed the unpretentious lyrics: "Without * * *, there would be no new China!"
Fourth, the method of bedding. This method of beginning is to talk about this first and then that, trying to lay out things related to feelings, and then lead to the feelings of reading works. This is similar to the metaphor in The Book of Songs.
Example 4: the beginning of "road"-reading Ode to China;
There are many roads on the earth, and no one can answer how many. There are roads on the vast plains, roads on the rolling mountains, roads on the vast Gobi, roads on the vast desert, roads in thorns and weeds, roads in the ice and snow ... roads are built by people. As long as people go, they leave their way.
The book Ode to China is only 66 pages, which shows people the difficult road that modern China has gone through with its unique style and majestic momentum.
Fifth, question the way of thinking. This method of opening is to carefully set questions after in-depth analysis of the original work, causing readers to think deeply, and then answer questions in combination with the work. This method can attract readers and has a strong appeal.
Example 5: "There is an oath in the depths of the sea to be the Lu Chen of China-reading the beginning of the article" The Motherland is in My Heart ";
Why did Su Wu almost freeze to death in the heavy snow and still cling to the Han Festival, which represents national dignity? Why did the students of the May 4th Movement light a blazing flame and devour Cao Rulin's lair, Zhao Jialou? Why did Han Meilin, known as "China Picasso", refuse high-paying employment in the United States and resolutely return to China? Why are those Chinese descendants who are drifting overseas facing a cup of loess, facing the east, and crying?
Because-the motherland, in their hearts.
Sixth, the setting method. The way to start this way is to set up a typical environment related to the feelings expressed in the works you read, and then make clear your knowledge and understanding of the works you read. This method is suitable for the feeling after reading serious works.
Example 6: The first paragraph of the article "After reading Hongyan":
Late at night, there was silence all around. The breeze is blowing gently, blowing my hair and blowing my hot cheeks. I stared at this peaceful and quiet night, and a huge relief gradually appeared in front of my eyes: on a magnificent and bright red rock, tall and burly Xu Yunfeng stood beside Jiang Jie, and Jiang Jie was in the prime of life, who also held the post of "advance newspaper" ... Their firm eyes stared confidently into the distance, with a calm death smile unique to revolutionaries. They look forward to a bright future of productism, and they are convinced that their ideals will be realized. Look, they give off a splendid glow. In this beautiful luster, there are four golden characters-* * * people.
"There is no definite method in writing", and the six methods introduced above are intended to play a role in attracting jade. I hope students can explore boldly in their writing practice and create more and better feelings after reading.
10. How to write (an article) at the beginning of reading? The more, the better. Examples at the beginning of "reading" 1 Reading experience: After reading the text Fanka in one breath, my eyes were blurred with tears. I cried. I feel sorry for nine-year-old Fanka. She leads an inhuman life. I used to think that Lin Daiyu's life was so bleak that I couldn't bear to read her burning manuscript in the following chapters. Baoyu got married. I think it's enough to know such a cruel ending, and I don't want to relive that sadness over and over again. 3. In a hurry: In a hurry written by Zhu Ziqing, a famous modern writer, describes in detail the traces of the passage of time and expresses the author's helplessness and regret for wasting time. We learned the text "Missing in Autumn", which deeply touched me. Let me understand that it is not easy to be a mother, and also understand the deep affection between mother and child. After learning the text "Little Match Girl", I can't help thinking. The little match girl deeply sympathizes with the little girl's miserable life, and all she has is fantasy. Everything I have is a reality. 6. What is happiness? Happiness is a beautiful word that many people are pursuing. However, people have different understandings of what happiness is. Take me for example. In the past, I thought it was happy to spend the Spring Festival because I could get lucky money and put on new clothes. I can eat delicious food and visit the colorful Lantern Festival. In short, eating well and dressing well seems to be happiness. In fact, I think it seems too naive, but I always feel a little confused about what happiness is. After reading fairy tales, I was inspired and found the answer. 7. The Water Margin, one of the four classical novels, was finally chewed up by me. It's good. However, I finally understand a lot of truth. 8. How Steel was Tempered: I read this novel several times during my holiday. It is one of my favorite extracurricular readings, and I can recite paragraphs about the meaning of life.