Writing ideas: Simplify the task language directly. In the narrative, we must change direct narrative into indirect narrative and simplify the character's language as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentences are "concise".
"Turn around the Zhu Pavilion, look down at the door, and look at the sleepless people. There should be no hatred. Why do we have to be reunited when we say goodbye? People have sorrows and difficulties, separation and separation, and the moon waxes and wanes. This matter is difficult to complete in ancient times. I wish you a long life and a long journey ahead of you.” - Inscription
Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival that Chinese people all over the world have long awaited. I think the moon today must be extra round and brighter than usual, so I look forward to a night of complete silence.
This time we went to grandpa’s new building to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival. As soon as we opened the door, we saw grandma and grandpa busy making dumplings for us. They greeted each other in a festive atmosphere.
After the sun took away the last light in the world, the moon came out. We put the table on the balcony, and the whole family sat together. It was filled with moon cakes and fruits. Mooncakes vary in size and have different fillings. There are many varieties such as five-kernel ones, red bean paste ones, and mung bean paste ones. We all sat together, chatting about work, study, and everyday things at home.
"The moon is out!!!" I don't know who said it, and everyone looked at the sky. I saw that the moon was very round and very bright. I stared at the moon intently and couldn't help being attracted by her beautiful face. The moon was dressed in white gauze, skillful and peaceful, warm and kind. Her silver plate-like face shines through the treetops on people's happy and peaceful faces.
I looked around, trying to find Fairy Chang'e and her cute little white rabbit living on the moon. I wonder, is Chang'e looking at us in Guanghan Palace like us now? Thinking of this, I couldn't help laughing.
Grandma cut the largest moon cake. There were seven people in the family. Grandma cut it carefully and cut it into long pointed pieces. The mooncakes are crispy and sweet in your mouth, making you have endless aftertaste.
I was eating the sweet and delicious mooncakes, looking at the beautiful moon, and thinking in my heart: Next year's Mid-Autumn Festival, the moon will be more beautiful and rounder.