Excerpted from Chapter 9 of "Luotuo Xiangzi"
①The expression on Huniu's face was very complicated: there was a glimmer of desire to see him in her eyes; her mouth was a little open. , showing a little sneer; the nose has some wrinkles, folded with some disdain and eagerness; the eyebrows are ridged, showing enchanting and domineering on the strange pink face.
Appreciation: This sentence has simple language and describes Huniu’s expression in detail. Use words just right to create an impression in people's minds!
Chapter 18 - Under the scorching sun and storm
②The rain falls on the rich and the poor; on the righteous and on the unjust. In fact, the rain is not fair because it falls in a world without justice.
Appreciation: Just two sentences, contrasting before and after, showing the injustice of this world
Chapter 20
③Love or not, the poor get it Determined in terms of money, "love" is only born in wealthy families.
Appreciation: Use contrast to measure the bad social trends in money, showing the helplessness of the poor people and the harshness of the world
Chapter 21
④Experience It is the fertilizer of life. The experience you have will determine the kind of person you become. You cannot grow peonies in the desert.
Appreciation: Use metaphors to vividly describe the meaning of experience in life
Chapter 11
⑤The red clouds break apart and a golden light shines One after another, the horizontal line is clouds and the straight line is light, weaving into a great brilliance spider web in the southeast corner of the sky (pointing to the city of Beijing): the green fields, trees, and weeds have all changed from dark green to luminous. Jade.
Appreciation: Vivid words such as "broken"... are just right, using metaphors and colors to depict a gorgeous scene
24, the last chapter
⑥“Money will lead people into a bad society, put aside their noble ideals, and willingly go to hell.”
Appreciation: In just a few words, money will It depicts the persecution of people and vividly reproduces the social atmosphere at that time