But Louberg is different. She is the kindest person I have ever met. She always helps me when I am in trouble. I must cherish this friendship.
My mathematician's work was going to be revised at noon today, but I was sorry that I couldn't do it, so I asked others everywhere, but no one paid any attention to me. At that time, I was very sad. Why didn't anyone want to help me? I thought about it carefully before I felt that I really deserved it. Because whenever I am busy, there are always some people who ask for help: "Cai Panzhen, how to do this and how to draw that?" .................................................................................................................................................................................. Can't you see that I am busy? " Over time, no one wants to help me anymore.
a good friend, what is a good friend? It is a pair of good friends who can care for each other and care for each other. I also have a good friend. She has a Zhang Yuanyuan face with a ponytail, and a round face with big eyes. He is my classmate-Louberg.
But Louberg is different. She is the most kind person I have ever seen. She always helps me when I am in trouble. I must cherish this friendship.
Sentences
A, fluent and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, are very smooth ... The metaphor is very apt, which shows that you have always been careful in observation ... How did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate the rhetorical question is to be used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted to the right advantage, and I will also use what I have learned in the future. It hurts my stomach to laugh ... cooperation agreement
B, the composition is bumpy, and it is hard to read. It seems that if you walk on a bumpy road in the country, you will easily fall down if you are not careful ... The sentence seems to have been cut off by someone, and it is incomplete ... After you read it carefully, you will find the center that is impassable ... Don't be afraid of poverty, and good articles are all changed for you ... One section contains so much content that I feel breathless when reading it ... There are too few sub-sections, so you can't bear to add more ... The middle section can be divided into several sub-sections ... The first and second sub-sections should not be divided and merged ... This section can't be contacted with the above sub-sections.
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A, the sections are clearly divided ... the sections are appropriate ... each section has a layer of meaning and distinct paragraphs.
Extended reading
Writing is the "half of the country" that determines the result of Chinese examination, so the success or failure of writing often determines the success or failure of the whole Chinese examination. So how do you get high marks in the exam composition? I think the following points must be noted.
1. Topics and Intentions. All exam compositions must be examined because candidates should compete fairly in the same environment. Examining the questions is to make a comprehensive and accurate reading and understanding of all the contents displayed in the questions, read out the intentions of the proposer, examine the various limitations of the questions clearly, and make clear what I should write, how to write it, and to what extent, so as to truly understand it comprehensively, grasp it profoundly, and write the composition without bias or omission. The composition evaluation of the college entrance examination clearly stipulates that the final score of any test paper with problems in the examination is generally not more than the lowest score of the second type of paper. It can be seen that the accuracy of the examination is the key factor in the success or failure of the composition. The idea is to ask the author to stand at the height of the times, observe and understand life, refine the theme, make the theme reflect the spirit of the times, reflect the times, act on the times, beat the pulse of the times and promote the progress of the times. The "meaning" of the article is actually a kind of thought gradually nurtured by the author in the experience of life, and it is the product of the collision between the author's subjective understanding and objective reality. It reflects the author's ideological level, cognitive level and the world outlook, outlook on life and values formed in social life. In recent two years, the composition teaching reform advocates students to be true to life and true to themselves. Some students ignore the grasp of the ideological tendency of the article, see the problem incompletely, and have extreme views. What's more, they doubt the party's leadership and policies because of corruption. Although today's China is politically clear and free of speech, if you make a mistake, you won't pursue any political issues, but as a builder of the future society, you should still have a correct view of right and wrong. This must be noted.
2. Titles and paragraph titles are the eyes of the article, and also the first impression of the marking teacher on the article, especially the writing of self-made topics. The marking teacher attaches great importance to the titles drawn up by candidates. As the saying goes, "half the grain is planted well, and half the text is written well", which shows the importance of the topic. Some candidates write the text first and then draw up the title. After the article is written, they may not have time to write the title, or they may forget to make up the title. Although the score stipulates that 2 points will be deducted if there is no title, the actual result is far from 2 points. Someone has done such an experiment, and asked two groups of teachers to mark several well-written compositions according to the two types of retaining titles and hiding titles, and the difference in scores is generally above 5 points. This is because the marking teacher has a psychological distance from the untitled composition and unconsciously lowers the grade. As for how to draw up the title, I think we should do the following: ① be exact. It means to conform to the content of the article, and it also means to choose words and make sentences in accordance with the norms. ② Refinement. The number of words in the index question is appropriate. 3 vivid. Refers to the topic can reflect a kind of vitality, readability and interest. 4 novel. Refers to having a new perspective, new ideas and new insights, which can give people a sense of freshness. (5) meaningful. Refers to the inherent meaning. There are various ways to propose a topic, such as using rhetoric, quoting common sayings, using ancient sayings, borrowing idioms, applying buzzwords, skillfully using formulas or symbols from other disciplines, etc. Candidates can use it flexibly according to their own situation. Paragraph: the structure of the first, abdomen and tail paragraphs is the most taboo in exam composition. It is better to divide the article into several paragraphs. For a composition of less than 1, words, I think it is enough to divide it into 5-8 natural paragraphs. Because the more natural the natural section is, the more mature and sophisticated you are. In addition, write the first sentence of each paragraph well. The first sentence of each paragraph is like a person's eyebrows. Write the first sentence well, "with fine eyes", and the whole paragraph is remarkable in spirit.
3. Style and content There are two types of requirements for style in the composition questions of the college entrance examination: one is to stipulate that a certain style must be written, such as "writing an argumentative essay"; The other is to exclude writing a certain style, such as "any other style except poetry". Candidates must write according to the prescribed style. In recent years, there is no limit to the style in the composition questions of the college entrance examination, so that candidates can freely choose the style. Here, we should pay special attention to the fact that the style is not limited to not wanting the style, but that after you choose a style, you must write according to the characteristics of this style and what you want to write. You can't write a nondescript "four unlike" article at will. Content of the article: Never write what you can think of without thinking; Don't write what you think after a little thinking; Take a few minutes to write something that others can't think of. It's best to set the protagonist as himself in the narrative, and use the first person to enter the article, so that the passion of "I" shines in the article, and it is sincere and sincere, causing * * *. Argumentative writing should avoid boasting, rhetoric and nonsense, and avoid empty arguments, moaning without illness, indiscriminate slogans, indiscriminate calls, empty expressions of determination and so on. Writing can be fictional, and "allowing" to write stories does not mean advocating "writing stories". Writing stories should be "bold imagination and self-justification". You will never get high marks if you make it up indiscriminately.
4. The beginning and end of the exam-oriented composition is the blade of the article. All the methods of beginning and ending learned in and out of class can be used in exam-oriented composition. No matter what method you use to start and end, you must get to the point at the beginning and point out the main idea at the end. In order to give a good impression to the marking teacher, don't smear the beginning and end. There is a saying: a good beginning is half the battle. But some candidates are guilty of "slow entry": some copy all the raw materials in large sections; Some expand the original simple raw materials; Some start with materials, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, and slowly come. The opening is loose, which takes up a lot of space, but the content that should be said behind is "long-awaited", and some of them just pass by, and the proportion is seriously out of balance, which makes it difficult for teachers to measure their actual writing level. The ancients paid attention to "phoenix head", "pig belly" and "leopard tail" in writing articles, which made sense. But some candidates don't have time to stop writing, or use a sentence to break it, or click on a string of ellipsis, so even if you carve a "phoenix head" and grow a "pig belly", you won't be a good article because there is no "leopard tail" and you won't get high marks. The marking teacher measures the quality of an article, first of all, by looking at the whole. Therefore, what the examinee gives to the teacher should be a complete composition anyway.
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5. The writing language in the language and word count test should be standardized and accurate, with individuality and vitality. Don't be literary and white; Don't use dialects and words that others can't understand; Use less long sentences and more short sentences; We can introduce some new words of the times, quote famous sayings and epigrams, quote the lyrics of popular pop songs, and quote the oral folk songs of the people, but the orientation must be positive and make the language really light up. It is reasonable to say that an article is a tool to express one's feelings. If you have words, it will be long, and if you have nothing, it will be short. It seems that there should be no limit to the number of words. However, examination composition, as a special form of composition, generally requires the number of words in order to achieve a certain purpose of examination and take into account the examination time and other factors. We must follow the rules. If there is a minimum number of words, you must write enough or slightly more than 5-1 words. If the number of words is insufficient, although the scoring standard stipulates that if the number of words is insufficient, 1 point will be deducted for every 5 words, but the actual situation is that the lack of words is often considered as the content of the article is thin and the score is difficult to grade. Do not exceed the maximum number of words. Otherwise, it gives people a bloated feeling. Besides, writing a long composition takes more time and solving the previous questions takes less time, which will definitely be affected. If there is no limited maximum number of words, it is generally limited to the composition paper, that is, writing in the composition paper grid. Never flatter yourself, beyond the composition grid, so as not to be ungrateful.
6. Writing and rolling paper In recent years, writing has accounted for a considerable score in the composition scoring standard of the college entrance examination. Generally speaking, it is not required to write well, but it is required to write neatly and easily, with clear strokes and no cursive characters. Punctuation writing should also be standardized, especially the format should be correct, and periods, commas, question marks, exclamation points, pause marks and semicolons should not appear at the head of a line; Quotes, brackets, and book names do not appear at the end of a line in the first half. You can write a word after these symbols. Quotes, brackets, and the last half of the book name do not appear at the beginning of a line, and these symbols can be squeezed at the end of the previous line. Ellipsis and dash occupy two spaces, which can't be broken, and they are crowded at the end of a line when they can't write. As for the volume of a composition, just like a person's appearance, the impression is important, especially for the college entrance examination composition. Whether the volume is neat or not directly affects the psychology and mood of the marking teacher. The writing is neat and the volume is clean, which makes people feel happy at first glance, and the result is predictable.
7. Checking and revising the exam composition questions is the same as other questions. After finishing, you need to check carefully to see if there are any typos, sentences that are not fluent, and contents that need to be adjusted. When typos and misused words are found in the review, they must be corrected. For paragraphs that should be deleted, they should be added, just to make them clear and neat, so that people can see them at a glance. The neatness of the coil surface should not be affected by the modification.