1. Quotation method at the beginning of the composition
Tips for quotation opening method:
Regardless of quoting poetry, aphorisms or aphorisms as the beginning of the article, there is always a way to highlight the center of the article, Deepen the theme and play the role of the following.
When using this method, you should pay attention to:
1. The poems quoted must have the effect of enhancing persuasion and inspiring.
2. The poems and lyrics quoted must be able to express your own emotions.
3. The poems and lyrics quoted must be familiar to people, easy to understand and accept, and must be consistent with the identity of the characters.
Example:
"He who has not been to the Great Wall is not a true man." This is Chairman Mao's famous saying. Last summer, I was lucky enough to climb the world-famous Great Wall and realize my long-awaited wish - to become a hero.
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"The spring water ding-dong, the spring water ding-dong, the spring water ding-dong..." After listening to this melodious song, I couldn't help but think of the clear spring water, and I felt anxious I want to see the wine spring and listen to the gurgling water with my own ears. 2. Quote a lyric or a famous saying as the beginning of a coherent sentence, no less than 150 words
Liu Xiang of the Han Dynasty once said: "Books are like medicine, and good reading can cure stupidity." Since books are Medicine has two functions: one is good medicine, which can cure diseases; the other is poison, which can kill people. Isn't it? In Germany in the 1920s, many people saw Hitler's "Mein Kampf" and were adversely affected by it, saying that they were buried in Hitler's grave. "A bad book is like a bad friend, it may kill you." It’s not false at all. Nowadays, some students are obsessed with martial arts or romance novels. They read those weird books all day long and “throw away” their homework, which leads to a continuous decline in academic performance and finally results in a failure to draw water from a bamboo basket. All in vain. Just think about it, can "opening" such a "volume" of a book be said to be "beneficial"? "A good book is better than a treasure, and a bad book is worse than a robber." Therefore, whether opening a book is beneficial depends on what kind of book you open.
OK? 3. Quote mottos, famous sayings, the first 100 words of poems
If a young man does not work hard, he will be sad for the old man.
(Han Dynasty Yuefu "Long Song Xing") The edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold. A slight difference is a thousand miles away.
("Book of Han") If you encounter a difficulty, you will gain wisdom. (ancient proverb) Without rules, there is no way to make a circle.
(Mencius) Read it a hundred times, and its meaning will appear by itself. (Three Kingdoms) He has read more than ten thousand volumes, and his writing is like a spirit.
(Du Fu) The method of reading is to proceed step by step, to read thoroughly and to think carefully. (Zhu Xi) Time flies like an arrow, and the sun and moon fly like a shuttle.
(Ming Dynasty's "Zengguang Xianwen") Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you. (The Analects of Confucius) Fullness leads to loss, modesty benefits.
(Shang Shu) is sensitive and eager to learn, and is not ashamed to ask questions. (Confucius) With perseverance, gold and stone can be carved.
(Xunzi·Encouragement to Learn) There is no end to learning. (Xunzi) Who would have known that every grain of food on the plate is made from hard work, from diligence and frugality, to luxury. Honesty can dispel the darkness in people's hearts; honesty will make human beings have more and more sincere love.
We should vigorously promote the virtue of honesty, make people's minds higher and make the world a better place. Be kind to others and be sincere.
(Chinese proverb) Be an honest person, speak the truth, and do honest things. (***) Tolerance and generosity are the glue. Being able to tolerate others means uniting all kinds of people and being supported by others. Being narrow-minded and unable to tolerate others will lead to a lonely person.
To be kind to others is to be good at forgiving. ([US] Frost's "New Hampshire") Being able to endure can make a true gentleman, a man who can bend and stretch.
(Chinese proverb) If you endure one sentence, you will calm down your anger. If you endure one thing, you will lose one thing. (Chinese proverb) If you are not tolerant of others, you do not deserve to be tolerated by others.
([Russian] Turgenev's "Roting") The world in your heart is wide, and there are always boats to ferry people. (Chinese proverb).
4. Write a composition on the topic of support and quote famous quotes at the beginning of the composition
A neck without self-esteem cannot support a confident head; without a background, just run to the foreground.
When I was very young, there was a popular game: a child puts his hand in the palm of his parents' hands, holds his hands up, and flies his feet into the air. I love this feeling. I always beg my father, and sometimes my grandfather, to spread their rough hands and help me. He raised his hands and lifted his feet into the air. Every time at this moment, I really felt that the big hand supporting me quickly tightened and grabbed my little hand. Although those big hands were shaking in support, they held the joy of my childhood firmly. Later, I grew up and taller, and I could no longer fly in their hands. I learned to play parallel bars. Yes, hold up your hands and fly your feet into the air. However, the feeling of soaring into the air is no longer the joy of flying, but a trembling of fear. What is grasped in the palm of the hand is no longer warm love, but a cold metal bar. My palms became numb due to either the temperature or the pressure, causing me to lose my balance. I never understood why the parallel bars rammed into the cement floor made me feel so unsafe, but the hands of my relatives trembled slightly and gave me solid warmth. Only now do I realize that the source of support is actually love. When I was a child, I relied on the power of love in those big hands; when I grew up, I was afraid of the indifference of the parallel bars. The big trees support the birds' nests. Birds sing carefree every day because they know that no matter what the storm, their home will be safe. The majestic trees support the birds' paradise with love. Marble columns support creeping vines. The vines take a leisurely walk every day, because they know that until the sea dies and the rocks rot, this tough Optimus Prime will stand here, allowing them to climb and live. The towering stone pillars support the future of the wisteria with love. Support comes from love, a deep emotion poured into a timeless gesture. Supporting love flows between hearts with strength. Just like the pair of Chinese butterflies on the ice rink in Turin. They clasped their hands, intertwined their fingers, raised their hands, and lifted their feet into the air. The love conveyed in the support allowed the injured Zhang Dan to write the legend of the chrysalis turning into a butterfly with a smile through the wet tears. Precisely because support comes from love, it will be sublimated in transmission and return. The flying birds rewarded the forest with a lively sky, the mature vines rewarded the stone pillars with the joy of a good harvest, and the victorious Zhang Dan rewarded his partner with an affectionate hug. And how can I repay the support of yesterday’s love? Maybe today and tomorrow. Today, love is a struggle in growing up, supporting the hope in the hearts of loved ones. Tomorrow, love turns into a crutch, supporting a brilliant sunset 5. Please write a 100-word essay using famous quotes
Sima Qian once wrote in "Historical Records: Preface to the Biographies of Huozhi": The world The bustling world is all for profit, and the bustling world is all for profit. In other words, all people's activities are inseparable from one word - profit! (Perseverance is the condensation of sand and stones on a thousand-mile embankment. Only by accumulating bit by bit can you have the magnificence of never seeing the beginning or the end; perseverance is the surrounding strands of spring silkworm silk. Only by persisting bit by bit can you break out of the cocoon. And out comes the brilliance of seeing the light again; Perseverance is the sail of a ship on a long voyage. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success. The true nature of the heart should be like this, like the bright moon shining on the flowers, the deep pool with gentle waves, no matter Success or failure, regardless of success or failure, is the detachment that spurs the horse to climb high and is far away; failure, still drips water through the stone, merges into the sea, is limited and becomes stronger, the proud shore that will not fall into the blue clouds, there is "The general has no owner, a man should strengthen himself." The stubbornness and glory, the mountains and rivers are still the same, the style is still the same, Wushan is just across the sea, I see the years flow like a river, the glitz and glamor, I disdain the smoke and clouds; humiliation, Han Xin under the crotch, the pines under the snow, like an immortal who has emerged, take a step back, the sea and the sky are brighter , refuse to give up eating because of choking. 6. A good beginning for the 150-word essay
At the beginning of the essay, Jia Baoyu said a very insightful saying when commenting on the Grand View Garden: All beauty must "have natural principles and obtain natural principles." "Interesting".
To be outstanding in the college entrance examination essays of millions of candidates across the country, it is inseparable from a "reason" and "interesting". "College Entrance Examination" magazine has collected and sorted out the outstanding college entrance examination essays in recent years. In the composition, I found that there are many remarkable things, but all of them sparkle with "wit" and "rational interest".
Just looking at the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and inspired. We have made some classifications of them for you, maybe you can also learn from them.
1. Be the first to read the opening chapter. The most taboo thing about the opening chapter is that it gives people the feeling of digressing from the topic. It tells the marking teacher directly that the author has not reviewed the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginnings of several essays from the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.
Example 1 "Remembered by Language and Communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, and the clouds rolling and relaxing. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green clothing in midsummer indicates autumn. The harvest is abundant; the abundant fruits of golden autumn indicate the desolation of winter.
The four seasons cycle, autumn turns to winter, and everything in nature performs wonderfully. How can we look forward to the early spring if we have not experienced the baptism of severe winter. Hope? Our human society is like the natural world. Without the connection of language and different lifestyles, how can we connect the world as a whole and build a bridge of communication? "This metaphor is inappropriate at the beginning. The metaphor section does not lay out the similarities very well.
Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where does this relationship exist between "green clothing" and "harvest", "fruit" and "bleakness"? In particular, the rhetorical question "If you have not experienced the baptism of severe winter, how can you hope for the hope of early spring?" is even more inaccessible to the topic. Example 2 "Soul Interaction": "The big trees never laugh at the weakness of the grass. Although the grass is weak, it adds to the greenness of the grassland; peonies never laugh at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.
The reason why big trees and grass, peonies and wild flowers can live in harmony is because they have the same language, communicate with each other, and have spiritual interaction. " When this beginning moves closer to the topic, it also fails to identify the similarities and seems far-fetched.
Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, communication is a green shade; language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a A sea of ??flowers." This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as the relationship between the individual and the whole, without understanding the connection between the two.
The above three examples are all writing methods that use metaphors to break into the topic in order to increase literary talent. This is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic and gets off track at the beginning, his or her score will be seriously affected.
The following example illustrates the role of language more accurately and vividly. Example 4 "Communication starts with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.
Only language can be accurately understood Only through expression can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may cause unpredictable consequences.
So how can the language be accurately expressed and the communication be successful? "So, is the opening paragraph good? The core issue is still to examine the topic; when reviewing the meaning of the topic and solving the problem, first seek accuracy and then image. Here are some ways to get started.
1. Quote famous quotes ①Ask what love is in the world, and it will tell you how to make love between life and death. Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions.
His question can be said to be a question of eternity. Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price.
But the words of each family are as different as each person's face. Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool.
..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World") ②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "The reason why I became Holy man, it’s because I have seen through money, and what’s mine belongs to everyone.” With a snap of his fingers.
In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I saw through money, everyone's is mine.
" ("The Saint and the Thief") ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery. "
Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of a problem or wandering around the intersection of multiple solutions. How to go becomes a puzzle in our hearts. We are often undecided and swayed. At this time, it is necessary to think from another angle. This will Give you more chances of success.
("Spinning the Kaleidoscope") 2. Use letter format skillfully ① Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours. Thousands of years later, I dared to write you a letter, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions ("A Letter to Confucius") ②Abominable standard answer. : When I saw you, I was filled with righteous indignation.
So, driven by the flames of anger, I wrote this letter to denounce you. The answer is colorful, but you insist on wearing it. The hat of "standard".
You must know that countless tragedies have occurred just because of the word "standard". The following are your three major crimes:... (One of the "standard answers". "Letter") 3. Borrowing the writing style from Zhang Hui's novel ① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be united if it is divided for a long time, and it must be divided if it is united for a long time. "
The era when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds no longer existed. As the Yangtze River moved eastward, the waves wiped out all the heroes of the past. And Adou, the heir to the former Shu Kingdom, also became "lucky to miss Shu." Now, the world has become the world of the "Sima clan"
("The Meeting of the Heroes of the Three Kingdoms") ② The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people. Gathered here, everyone is arguing.
What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to be selected for the honorary title of "Tiger Fighting Hero". Whoever wins the award can sit on it. The second highest position in Liangshanbo.
So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly ("Who is fighting." 7. Examples at the beginning of the composition (famous aphorism style)
Famous aphorism style
Quoting aphorisms, famous quotes, poems, sayings, proverbs, etc. at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center. For example, "Echo" quotes a poem by Ai Qing at the beginning. "Doubt and Knowledge" begins with a quote from Cheng Yi: "Scholars must first understand doubts." This method of opening is also easy for ordinary candidates to grasp and use. Just imagine, which candidate can't remember a few ancient poems or a few maxims? How about a few famous quotes? The essays vary according to the topic, so why not use the famous quotes at the beginning, which can often enhance the momentum of the beginning and make people feel abrupt, majestic and lofty. Be as accurate as possible when citing to avoid intellectual errors