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1. Think of some specific writing examples. My philosophy of life is work. I want to reveal the mysteries of nature and benefit mankind.

-Edison Only by obeying nature can we master nature. -Bacon It's not that I don't love human beings, but that I love nature more.

Byron Nature never deceives us. It is always ourselves who deceive us. -Rousseau Only by obeying nature can we conquer nature.

Darwin was born to be a kind mother and a cruel butcher. -Hugo Every field of nature is wonderful.

-Aristotle Heaven always exists, not for the existence of Yao, not for the death of Jie. -Xunzi can not only force nature, but also obey it.

-Aeschylus lives only according to the experience revealed by nature. -Schopenhauer I think this natural law is the highest law in all laws and regulations, and it is also the most mandatory law.

-Mark Twain When mankind cheers for the victory over nature, it is the beginning of nature's punishment for mankind. Hegel We have turned our backs on nature. She used to show us the way accurately, but we want to teach her a lesson with her teaching.

-Anonymous nature is not doped with half silk. Kick away whoever resists; Whoever obeys it will inherit its grace.

On February 26, 2004, an earthquake measuring 8.9 on the Richter scale occurred in the waters north of Sumatra Island, Indonesia, which was equivalent to the power of at least 3,000 atomic bombs and triggered a strong tsunami. Water walls as high as 30 meters swept the coastal areas of Sri Lanka, Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, Bangladesh, Maldives and other countries. The disaster could have been smaller.

The submarine earthquake is the main cause of the tsunami, and it is also the murderer who claimed hundreds of thousands of lives. This seems to be a purely natural phenomenon, and humans can't stop it. In the face of great disasters, human beings call themselves "the weak"-all this seems to have nothing to do with human beings.

"Human beings have paid a price for destroying the environment, and we should learn from it and deeply reflect on it. Although this is a pure natural disaster, human destruction of the environment has increased the generation and impact of the disaster. "

Mangroves have been cut down in large quantities, and 70% of coral reefs in the global waters have been destroyed by humans. Economic development is at the expense of the natural environment, which determines its fragility, and the uncontrolled spread of greed for wealth finally punishes mankind.

The tsunami caused economic losses of $654.38+0.4 billion, which means that the wealth accumulated by coastal areas over the years was wasted in front of nature. Man must know how to get close to nature instead of disturbing it.

Otherwise, you will naturally say "no" in your own way. The tears of Mother Earth (the great destruction of nature by human beings should stop) The vast Amazon rainforest contains the most precious and scarce tropical rainforest resources in the world.

There are 30 million biological species here, which is an ideal place for animals and plants to survive and multiply. Some people call the tropical rain forest in the Amazon basin "the lungs of the earth".

However, today, the beautiful natural scenery along the Amazon River is gone forever. Since 1970s, Brazil has begun to cut down forests in the Amazon region.

By the 1980s, the annual deforestation in the Amazon region was 2 million to 3 million hectares. It is estimated that the timber production in the Amazon region has increased 34 times in the past decade, at the cost of a sharp decline in tropical rain forests.

In order to grow cash crops, 320,000 hectares of virgin forests in Colombia have been destroyed. In Peru, more than 654.38 million hectares of forests were destroyed by drug cultivation.

In the 1990s, the trend of deforestation began to deepen in marginal areas. At present, the forest area left along the Atlantic coast of Brazil is only 2% of that when Columbus discovered the New World.

In the Bible, Adam and Eve were expelled from the Garden of Eden for stealing forbidden fruit, which began their lifelong suffering. If people continue to cut down forests with axes and stubbornly destroy Mother Earth, then mankind will eventually embark on a long road of atonement.

The bitter tears of Mother Earth are warning people that nature wants nothing from human beings, and human beings can only survive under her protection. The earth is not an inexhaustible cornucopia.

She is the only home for mankind, but it is not the Eden forever. Tragedy in Jiuzhaigou (environmental awareness needs to be strengthened) Shortly after the crew of Heroes led by Zhang Yimou left, the location of the TV series The Condor Heroes was chosen in Jiuzhaigou, and a group of "heroes" with high martial arts skills were about to enter the "fairy tale world" to show their skills.

Jiuzhaigou is a "world natural heritage", and the beauty of its original ecological environment amazed the world. In recent years, due to the rapid warming of local tourism, Jiuzhaigou scenic spot has long been overcrowded.

The influx of Chinese and foreign tourists has overwhelmed Jiuzhaigou's ecosystem. People of insight have long expressed concern about this and warned that any man-made destruction will bring irreparable losses to Jiuzhaigou's fragile original ecological environment. To this end, the relevant administrative departments have taken some protective measures, such as limiting the number of tourists going up the mountain and closing the mountain regularly, and achieved initial results.

Unfortunately, however, these measures can't stop tourists from visiting, but they can't stop "heroes" and "heroes" from entering the mountains. Jiuzhaigou, which is picturesque, is now armed with swords and shadows. It is reported that the crew of "Heroes of the Condor" is going to shoot all the major scenic spots in China, and another "world natural heritage" Zhangjiajie scenic spot has also been identified as the location.

Welcome to the Chinese online website of Zhang Guangxiang Middle School. Many years ago, when a Hollywood film named The Beach was shown in Thailand, many Thais resisted and protested.

The reason is that the film crew destroyed the original ecological environment of a famous island in Thailand when shooting the location. Although the film crew tried their best to make up for it, it still caused strong protests from the public. The Thai people's strong awareness of protecting the primitive ecological environment is worth learning.

No scenery, only business (development or protection) A few days ago, an American friend came to Mount Tai, a world cultural and natural heritage. The endless stream of ropeways, cable cars and downtown Daiding, where there are many shops, made him not feel the grandeur of Dongyue at all.

He said regretfully, "Mount Tai has no scenery, only business." This order.

2. Ask for some examples about "truth". I used the most popular words.

real

1: There was a female teacher in the earthquake. She gave up her children and rescued the students at the first time. Then the school collapsed and her children were crushed to death.

You can write: two aspects, the idea of being a teacher and the idea of being a mother.

My mother is still a garbage collector, and her feet are crooked. She is in a small mountain village, but she has to carry her paralyzed daughter to see a doctor every week 10, 10 years.

Acura:

1: Tell me why our flying people in China hurt their feet during training. We can also tell you the reason why we will always support him, although we feel painful about his failure this time.

2. Tell me what made our soldiers fight bloody battles during the War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression period, and what made the people at that time prefer to live alone to raise food for our soldiers. Speaking of today, I believe that China will become the largest country.

Celebrity:

Fashionable husband-Han Xin

Our great Lu Xun

Li Bai (many, although their frequency is very common, but believe me, 100 people can write 100 flavors of Li Bai, just depending on the level)

Here comes the classic (you'll never expect it):

Qin Shi Huang

You just write about the good things he did for our descendants because he had his ideas later, and then he wrote them in a grandiose way. Write "what makes us, who should be praised by the world forever, become tyrants who may be spurned by the world?" Just write that he lacks unity and China lacks the concept of Li xx behind him.

3. Composition conception, seeking examples, seeking general examples and practical examples, new materials composition "Divide oranges" Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.

(60 points) Two children get an orange, and they compete to eat it. Finally, an agreement was reached that one child was responsible for cutting oranges and the other child could choose the cut oranges first.

They each got half of the oranges according to the agreed method and took them home happily. Children go home, peel off half an orange, throw it away, and squeeze the pulp into juice to drink.

Another child went home, dug out the pulp and threw it away, leaving the skin to be ground, mixed with flour and baked into cakes. What kind of association or sentiment did the above words trigger? Please write an article according to your association or feelings, no less than 800 words.

Ask for the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style and draw up your own title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. This is a new material composition test. The material is selected from the column "Stones from Other Mountains" in the sixth edition of China Education News on June 24th, 2009. The original title is "Management Philosophy of Divided Orange".

The content is that two children fought for an orange and reached an agreement of equal share through negotiation, but the result did not get the ideal ending and did not achieve the best effect. The central meaning of this story is: full and effective communication is the premise of making the best use of everything; Without effective communication, the value of things will be wasted.

Before dividing oranges, both of them are very clear about their needs, one wants orange peel and the other wants orange meat, and the goal is also very clear; In the process of cutting oranges, two people also had some cooperation and negotiation-but ultimately failed to maximize their interests-each got what they wanted, but only half of what they wanted and the other half was wasted. The crux of the matter is that the needs of two people are exactly complementary, and it is not only possible but also necessary to maximize their respective interests.

However, why can't such a reasonable thing be done and cause unnecessary waste? The reason is that the two sides failed to communicate effectively in the process of cooperation; If both sides can tell each other their own needs, the result will definitely be happy. Based on the above analysis, we define the best idea of this composition as: there should be sufficient and effective communication in cooperation.

There are various cutting angles. The premise of paying attention to materials can be expressed as "full communication is the premise of cooperation"; Focusing on the moral results of material things can be expressed as "each needs his own needs on the basis of communication", "Only by full communication in advance can better cooperation be achieved", "communication, exchange and win-win" and "people and things should make the best use of their things and must communicate effectively". The division of oranges in materials can be expressed as "seemingly fair distribution may not achieve the maximum value (maximum benefit) of people or things", "we can't blindly pursue formal fairness" and "we can't just seek fairness without seeking practical results"; Focusing on the negotiation between two children, it can be expressed as "democratic negotiation may not always achieve the best effect" and "lack of adequate communication often cannot solve the problem satisfactorily"; Focusing on the dispute between two children can be expressed as "blind fighting often makes people lose sight of the essence of the problem"; Focusing on the comprehensive behavior of the two children in the material, it can be expressed as "speaking your thoughts to each other loudly" and so on-as long as it can be associated with communication and communication, it can be regarded as a class.

This composition topic is difficult to test. On the whole, there is no obvious tendency; Looking for the tendency between the lines, you get a trap: "fighting for it" gives people an impression, don't fight blindly for some trivial things; "Reaching an agreement" and "Everyone is happy" indicate that the result is good and both sides are satisfied with the orange score; The feeling of "squeezing juice to drink" and "baking cake to eat" is also quite pleasant, showing a sense of win-win cooperation.

This situation is not common in the college entrance examination in recent years. It is also difficult to choose materials, and most of the celebrity allusions used by students are inappropriate. Only those candidates who pay attention to reality and think about life will find suitable writing materials from their daily lives, while those candidates who are used to seeing disease-free writers will certainly feel helpless.

Notes on the tag 1. Examination questions. Because the central meaning of the material is relatively hidden, the mistakes made by candidates in the examination of the questions are really varied.

More often, we only talk about cooperation (goal and direction) without communication, or the article also talks about communication, but the focus of the article is cooperation (goal and direction). For example, "good cooperation, bad competition", "win-win cooperation" and "sincere cooperation"; Or just talk about the importance of the goal, such as "the goal is more important than the method" and "the goal is unclear, even if the method is proper, it will not achieve the best effect".

These are just classified as second-class volumes. There are also some themes related to the materials, but they obviously deviate from the meaning of the materials, such as blindly praising democratic consultation, or just for fairness and mutual happiness; Or "harmony is more important than anything else", or talk about choice, value, environmental protection and making the best use of everything. These are all good, related to the materials, but far from the central meaning of the topic materials.

2. Express the problem. In the process of marking papers, we will find that some compositions are not very high even if they are accurate in examination and correct in conception.

This is mainly a matter of expression, such as: ① the overall planning is not good, and the form of the article is not enough. Some compositions have good ideas, but they are not finished, or even half finished.

Poor thinking and clumsy expression. Most of this composition can be seen from the coating on the surface of the roller.

(3) Full of vernacular, the language lacks literary talent. In the whole article, it is difficult to find good rhetoric, good sentence patterns, accurate idioms with rich meanings and quotations that highlight certain cultural connotations in the rapid "scanning" of the marking teacher's eyes.

4 limited ability, hard work. For example, an essay numbered 29277 is also named "Choice". Aside from its intention, just look at this sentence, and you will find that the author's "writing style" is not enough: "Choice is a kind of balance, called autumn colors; The choice is cold plum and fragrant cardamom; Choice is a breeze that blows an impetuous mind. "

You can say that.

4. Regarding the composition of the law, it is required to give examples, be concrete and realistic, and 400 words about the composition of natural law.

Everything is green in the ecological park of our school. However, one place has lost its vitality and its color is yellow. This is a can of cucumber.

It is not beautiful, but it is so eye-catching. I still remember when it just poked its head out of the soil and looked around, so fragile, but so energetic. Like a newborn baby, very delicate, but full of vitality.

When I looked at it later, it had been a while and it was no longer like a baby. Its vines spread wantonly, covered with bamboo frames, and opened the first flower in its life. That flower is unusually beautiful: the golden flower is so dazzling that it emits soft golden light under the sunlight; The petals are covered with a layer of white fluff, as if the girl had added a thin gauze to the yellow skirt.

When I went again, the shelves were covered with cucumbers. These cucumbers are really cute and watery, with yellow flowers on their heads, as if wearing a beautiful hat. The vines and leaves crawling all over the shelves are swaying gently in the summer breeze, as if to welcome me again!

As the weather turned cold, when I saw it for the fourth time, it lost its old vitality-withered, and the once-full green disappeared, replaced by yellow; The cucumbers that used to be everywhere have long since disappeared. It seems to have completely lost its vitality.

I looked at the yellow vine and couldn't help feeling: once it was so full of vitality, now it is so yellow. Maybe this is the law of nature!

5. Write a composition about the deeds of "Dust". This is a composition about love. Behavior should be true. Every kind helping hand, every face with different looks, records a name with the same meaning-Dust-Ming. He is my occasional fragrance, called dust. He comes from the crowd, like a grain of dust, meager, fine and tiny. Without Jay Chou's wonderful singing skills; Celebrities have no aura on their faces. But he has a simple and kind heart. In order to grow beautiful flowers, he scattered dust everywhere. Dust is not a person, but a group of people. Only a grain of dust can't cultivate beautiful flowers and plants. Only a lot of dust can spread all kinds of flowers and plants all over the world. Nobody knows who they are. Maybe they are friends around you. Maybe it's the waiting person next to the bus stop; Maybe it's a netizen in QQ network ... how many grains of dust are there in the world? Dust was originally a person, giving his love; What they harvested was a lot of dust. Their backs, their arms and their smiles are just a pile of dust, leaving people with some locked memories. Dust is not only a tiny dust, but also a small star in the sky. A little glow in the summer night gathers together and competes with each other, dazzling. They thought they were small, but they created greatness. "Giving away roses" is the motive force of human dedication and the messenger of purifying the soul. Dust has a heart, dust has feelings, dust settles, and love is silent. In today's materialistic world, we need to pursue more dust. May they become little stars in the sky, little sparks in summer nights, and light up the brilliance of life. -Postscript.

6. Composition example "The Gap between Theory and Reality" The reality that each of us is experiencing, each of us has our own dreams, and there is only a gap between dreams and reality, and the gap in this film is caused by the pain of this world. When dreams first appear, it is time for us to think about the meaning of life!

Li Bai, a poet of the first generation, came to Chang 'an with the political ideal of "making the atlas bigger and making the sea county clear", but failed to do so. My heart was trampled under my feet, so I had to return to the mountains and leave Chang 'an. He traveled around, drank crazy songs and expressed his grief and indignation. "One day, I will ride the wind and waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea." He never gave up his dream of making achievements. After the Anshi Rebellion broke out, he thought he had a chance to make contributions and joined the Wang Yong Lilin shogunate. Recite the majestic poem "but laugh for you with the stone of Xie Yong's bank in Dongshan, and laugh for the quiet lake sand for you". But dreams are always illusory, reality still cannot escape, and dreams still cannot shine into reality. Wang Yong's army was quickly wiped out by the Tang Dynasty, and Li Bai was also implicated in exile, leaving only a gorgeous dream in his life.

Dreams always bring us the best things, but reality always breaks them, leaving an empty nonsense for life-

In those sad and beautiful worlds, dreams exist and are a sign to measure a person's happiness. However, dreams and reality cannot exist at the same time, which constitutes a measure of happiness, and the distance between personal dreams and reality is proportional. Who is calling in that beautiful world? It turned out to be him-Watanabe Jun. The cruel reality made him unable to bear the pain of losing his lover. He only dreamed of finding her and being with her. But the lonely devil found him, but the angelic Qing Zi saved him from the devil and brought him back to reality. He finally woke up, found the sunshine on the green child and found the breath of life.

When the people around me raise their glasses, I am sleeping and meet your silent bud. The dream in bud is like ebb tide, waiting for his naive answer.

I dreamed that he slept beside me, but I didn't feel his presence. Bud's silence let me know that he had left. I can only pray that God will not bring me back to reality. But heaven seems to be against me, letting me know that the low tide will not come. It will stop when it rains, and the rain will flow into the sea one day; If it is snow, it will melt one day and become a source of saliva. Stop is not permanent, inflow is not over, and melting is not over.

At night, lying on the roof and looking up at the stars in the sky, darkness contrasts with light. Under the night sky, it highlights its own loneliness and loneliness. Maybe this is the gap between dream and reality.

7. A few weeks ago, I forgot what afternoon it was. Gong Keying and I are classmates. It's still early, and there are almost no people at the school gate. We took the opportunity to run into school. Suddenly, I tripped over a big stone, threw myself forward and fell heavily on the gravel road at the school gate. The stone cut the skin of my knee. It's just a small stone that will be plunged into the meat. "ouch!" I let out a cry of pain. Gong Keying immediately turned around and ran to me with a scream. She bent down and held out her hand to help me. She wants to straighten my legs and stand up. "ouch! No! " I called again, and she frowned and said to me anxiously, "Your right leg can't be straightened yet. You walk on your left foot first, and I'll help you to the infirmary. " My right hand was held by Gong Keying, my left hand supported the floor, and my left leg supported the whole body. This is Gong Keying pulling me, and I finally stood up.

Gong Keying and I limped to the school hospital. Gong Keying looked at my wound with wide eyes: "It's terrible, you seem to have lost all your meat!" " "I also looked at my wounds nervously, thinking about how my parents would criticize me when I went home tonight." New small steps! You're injured and you're not looking at the road! "Gong Keying loudly reminded me that I woke up at once. When I arrived at the infirmary, Dr. Yang washed my wound and applied some medicine. Gong Keying stood by and said that he would send me back to the classroom after applying the medicine. I said to her, "Go home first! I can go by myself! " "It doesn't matter! I just want to see how doctors use drugs. . . . . . "Gong Keying originally wanted to help me go back, but she made an excuse to see how the doctor prescribed medicine.

Back in the classroom, Gong Keying told me to take medicine regularly when I got home. I gratefully said to her, "Thank you, the wound will definitely heal soon."

Later, I read a sentence in a book that "friends should be friends all their lives", which reminded me of this incident that almost covered me with dust.