How to write a composition for the material?

Composition with materials means that the proposer provides the writer with certain materials (including words or other language forms) and asks the writer to write according to the connotation of the materials, and how to write the material composition. The materials given mainly include:?

1? Describe a relatively complete thing; ? 2? Quote the complete story; ? 3? Quote news reports or news; ?

4? Famous aphorisms (one sentence or several paragraphs) closely related to the author's moral cultivation or a certain aspect of his study life; ?

5? A clear-cut and profound exposition; ? 6? One or more lyric words that highlight a central point; ?

7? One or more cartoons that expose ugly phenomena in social life ...?

To write a good composition for the material, you must read the material. ?

Since matter itself contains profound truth about the composition of matter, and? "? What is the intention of becoming a writer? ”？ Then reading materials are the key to writing a good composition, and reviewing topics becomes reviewing materials. Generally speaking, the literal surface of the material is not difficult to understand. The question is whether you can accurately analyze the profound truth expressed in the material, and then determine your correct attitude towards this truth. ?

Must be "consistent". ? The consistency mentioned here refers to two aspects. On the one hand, the theme determined by the writer should be consistent with the intention of the material; On the other hand, the materials chosen by the author should be consistent with the theme. Only in this way can we have a sense of reading. ?

Must we make a mountain out of a molehill? . ? The philosophies contained in the materials given by the proposer are all great truths, and it is beyond the author's ability to explain these great truths comprehensively and profoundly. Therefore, it is necessary to link his familiar social life with the truth and make the big topic smaller; However, this does not allow the author to analyze the problem superficially and simply. On the contrary, what material composition requires is to start from life practice, find truth from small things and problems, and make sense, that is, to analyze the problems more deeply and sharply, which is to make a mountain out of a molehill. The "big topic" of "making the big topic smaller" refers to truth; "Make a mountain out of a molehill" refers to writing materials. ?

We must grasp the "requirements". "? " Specific requirements are put forward for material writing, such as the content, style, topic and number of words of the composition. A writer must master these requirements to write a composition. ?

Single material? Multi-angle conception:

Examination process:? First, find the element. Second, analyze the reasons? Third, distinguish the relationship? Fourth, the proposed center?

Who is the hero? What's the matter? What was the result? Then analyze the reasons, and get the center of writing from the reason analysis. ?

Material one? Curie? The lady gave her daughter a gold medal awarded by the Royal Society of London. The visiting guests were very surprised. Ma' am You give such a heavy medal to children to play with? " ? Curie? Madame said? :"? I played for her on purpose? ,? I want children to know from an early age that honor is like a toy. If you let your child lie on your parents' honor book? ,? Nothing will be achieved in the future. ? "？ Thanks to Madame Curie's good education? ,24? Years later? ,? Her daughter also won the Nobel Prize. ?

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words. ?

First, looking for elements? (? 1? ) Madame Curie made outstanding contributions to mankind. (? 2? ) educate your daughter to treat honor correctly? ,? Use medals as toys. ? (? 3? ) what about the result? ,? My daughter also won the Nobel Prize. ?

Second, analyze the reasons? My daughter won the Nobel Prize because of her mother's correct guidance and her own efforts. ?

Third, distinguish the relationship? There is a causal relationship between the three elements. ?

Fourth, the proposed center? (? l？ ) by your own efforts? ,? In order to succeed. (? 2? ) people should treat honor correctly. (? 3? The importance of educating the next generation correctly?

Material 2? Read the fable "Fill in the blanks", choose your own angle, your own ideas, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words. ?

Multi-angle conception-

Analysis?

(1) from the perspective of Mr South China. Positive: criticize Mr. Nan Guo for not pretending to understand and muddling along. Conversely, it is affirmed that Mr. Nan Guo's "slipping away" is a manifestation of self-knowledge; ?

(2) from the perspective of Qi Xuanwang. Criticize Qi Xuanwang's hedonism; ?

(3) From the perspective of King Qi Min. Praise Qi Min's spirit of reform. ?

④? From a musician's point of view. Combining with the philosophy of "good man", a common social phenomenon in real life, this paper points out that "moderation" and "good man" are still a major drawback that hinders social progress. Enlightener: Everyone should have a high sense of responsibility for the country and the people, and be brave in fighting against all the bad guys, so that there will be hope for China and the country's rejuvenation. ?

A variety of materials? Seek common ground while reserving differences and find the center?

For example? l？

Someone asked Pele, the king of the ball, which ball he liked best? ,? He said? :? My favorite is Next. ?

Someone asked Xie Jin, a famous film director, which of his works he liked best? ,? Xie Jin said? :? My favorite is Next. ?

(3) Hundred Flowers Award's Best Supporting Actor Liu Xinyi? ,? When answering the audience's questions about his favorite character? ,? He said, "If you want to say your favorite? ,? I think it should be my "next". ?

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words. ?

Analysis?

For example? l？ The meanings of the three materials are basically the same? ,? Same direction? ,? It's all about how to treat a person correctly after he makes achievements. ,? Should be modest and prudent? ,? Ask yourself questions about higher enterprising goals. From this? ,? Can you determine such a center: an achievement? ,? Should the goal be "next"? ,? "From scratch"? ,? Keep forging ahead. Achievements belong to the past. ? There is no best, only better (or regard today as backwardness, or unremitting pursuit, etc.) )?

A variety of materials? Contrast trade-offs? Find the center?

For example? 2?

Some people think that if everyone in the country saves me the value of a match, then I will be hundreds of thousands of rich people. ?

Some people think that if I can contribute the value of a match to everyone in the country, then my life is the most valuable. ?

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words. ?

Analysis?

For yourself or for others? What kind of life is more meaningful? ?

For example? 3?

(1) near Zhu Zhechi? ,? Black is close to ink. ?

(2) out of the mud and not dyed? ,? Clear and wavy, but not demon. ?

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words. ?

Analysis?

Material ① Metaphorically shows that the environment can change people, emphasizing that the environment will have a great impact on people; ?

Material 2 also uses metaphors to illustrate that people may be self-perfect and innocent in harsh environments, emphasizing that people have the subjective initiative to adapt to the environment. ?

These two viewpoints emphasize one aspect each, although both of them are reasonable, but both of them are one-sided. In fact, these two viewpoints are unity of opposites, both of which are about the relationship between man and environment, and environment is the "contact point" between them. When writing, you can use "environment has influence on people, but people also have subjective initiative" to demonstrate. ?

Summary?

Examination of material composition?

The first step is to read the material and grasp the main idea. ?

First of all, we should pay attention to the characteristics of materials:?

The single material should grasp its main idea as a whole; ?

Many materials should find out their similarities and differences, so as to grasp the center; ?

Metaphorical materials should understand their metaphorical meaning; ?

Materials containing philosophical fables should grasp their meanings. The so-called grasp of the theme (that is, the intentional tendency and emotional tendency of the material)? . ?

Step two, choose the angle and make an accurate idea?

A single theme material can be conceived according to the material? . ?

Rich materials can be conceived from multiple angles, namely divergent thinking and multi-faceted conception. Generally speaking, a material can be viewed from at least two perspectives: the material of "one thing with many people" often has several perspectives when there are several "people"; There are several "causes" in the material of "one thing with many causes", and there are often several perspectives. An event, according to its different background and writing purpose, has produced several different perspectives. ?

Material composition writing?

1, write an argumentative paper:?

(1) Choose a certain angle and summarize the writing topic or argument from the materials. ?

(2) It is best to have materials in the composition. ?

(3) The materials provided can be used as written arguments. ?

(4) summarizing the materials; You can't copy materials. ?

2. Write a narrative:?

(1) Summarize the writing center from the materials. ?

(2) Draw up the title of the article around the center. ?

(3) Writing should stick to the center or theme to prevent digression or deviation from the center. ?

(4) articles? The title should be deducted at the beginning, middle and end of the article. Center? ), point (? Center? )。 ?

(? 5? ) generally do not need material to appear in the article. ?

Here are some examples from the composition questions of the senior high school entrance examination. ?

1. Read the following materials and write as required. ?

A young man contracted a highly contagious skin disease. Many parents warned their children not to contact that little friend again for the sake of their children's health. ?

But there was a little boy who went to school as before and played with his sick partner. The neighbors were surprised. Because the little boy's parents are both doctors, he should receive more health education than others since he was a child. He has no reason not to know the danger of doing that! A kind neighbor reminded the little boy, and the little boy replied, "? Mom told me that a healthy body is not afraid of infection! ? "？

Sure enough, the little boy was not infected until his sick partner recovered. He said:? "? If I am healthy, I am not afraid of infection. If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people can't learn badly. ?" ?

Requirements: you can write a narrative in combination with real life; You can also arouse feelings from the materials and talk about your own views; Self-made topics; No less than 600 words. ?

Material analysis: This material tells the story of how a child got a highly contagious skin disease and how to treat it. The point is that the little boy whose parents are doctors has been with him all the time without being infected, because? "? Good health and not afraid of infection? ”？ . This reveals the profound connotation of the material. What is health? In addition to physical health, of course, it also refers to ideology and morality and so on. Only by grasping this point can the composition meet the requirements of the topic. As the little boy finally said, "? If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people can't learn badly. ? "？

Is it necessary to be near the ink? ?

"He who is near the ink is black" is a long-standing proverb. People often regard it as truth. There is a story: a partner has an infectious skin disease, and many parents tell their children not to be with him, but a little boy whose parents are both doctors continues to go to school and play with his partner. A kind neighbor reminded him: "if I am healthy, I am not afraid of being infected by others;" If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people can't learn badly. "Sure enough, the little boy was not infected until his sick friend recovered. After reading this story, I am puzzled: Is it necessary for people who approach Mexico to be black? ?

I once heard of an example: before liberation, a young writer named Mu Shiying once named "The North and South Pole" as a novel to expose the darkness of the old society, which caused quite a stir at that time. However, after he entered Shanghai Shili Foreign Firm, he was influenced by decadent lifestyle and even sang praises to people who lived a drunken life. This is an excellent example of "those who are close to ink are black". Mr. Lu Xun, a writer who also lives in Shanghai, has always maintained the true colors of a revolutionary, with a pen as a knife and a gun as a gun, and waged an indomitable struggle against the dark society he hated. ?

Whether a person who is close to ink is black or not depends on a person's will quality and whether he can "get out of the mud without being stained". If his will is weak, I believe he will soon catch a "virus". In today's society, some people can't help being tempted. The balance of the soul tilts towards money and power, falls down and finally becomes a sinner. Really good people maintain a strong will, excellent quality and upright style, only for the masses, not for individuals. They can really be called "the backbone of China". "Always walk by the river, you don't have to wet your shoes." This spirit that those who are close to the ink are not black should be carried forward in our generation. ?

Comments: This is a relatively successful composition. It seems that this student has mastered some composition skills. First of all, he chose? "? What kind of will quality should it have? ”？ From this point of view, a healthy body is not afraid of infection, and the theme is focused and clear. Secondly, the structure is also very clear. 1 paragraph, quote a proverb at the beginning, but don't discuss it in a hurry, but then quote the main content of the material and ask questions? "? Is it necessary to be near the ink? ?" "? Doubt? ”？ In fact, it contains the author's distinct attitude. The second paragraph and the third paragraph are demonstrated by positive and negative comparison. Finally, it ends with one sentence. The language is also clean and tidy, and proper quotation adds a lot of color. ?