1. How to grasp the center of the composition

Material composition is a form of composition that analyzes and refines the materials based on the given materials to arrive at certain views and opinions.

In material composition, the sources and forms of materials provided are diverse, such as fables, historical facts, poems, cartoons, famous quotes, recent events, newspapers and periodicals News published on etc. Sometimes these materials are single, sometimes they are a series or a group.

The genres of materials composition are also very wide. Some require it to be written as a narrative essay, and some require it to be written as an explanatory essay. However, more often it is required to write an argumentative essay based on the materials. Some material compositions may require the author to associate, imagine, etc. based on the given materials, and continue, expand, or abbreviate the materials into a complete article.

The characteristic of writing on the basis of "given materials" determines the basic requirements for writing materials and composition: stick closely to the materials. The central content and main points of the composition must be closely related to the material and cannot be irrelevant to the material, but it cannot be copied mechanically.

This determines that correct analysis of materials, rational application of materials, and grasping the main contradictions of materials are the basis for writing material compositions. How to analyze materials correctly? First, read the material carefully and extract several possible viewpoints.

If there are multiple materials, you should sort out their similarities and grasp the main contradictions. Materials in material compositions mostly come from historical facts or real life. They often reflect certain aspects and problems of reality. Therefore, in material compositions, the refining of arguments must have practical significance.

Advocating or criticizing these views will guide practical study, life or work to a large extent. Therefore, when writing, you must combine objective reality and strive to write articles with practical significance. When writing a composition for the material, you should pay attention to the following four points: 1. Choose a good angle and establish the topic first.

First, read the material carefully and summarize the writeable perspective. From what "that person" said in the material, the following perspectives can be summarized: 1. Let the wings of your soul fly, 2. Don't rely on other people's gifts, 3. Don't complain about God's injustice, 4. God is fair.

From the same wings, different animals have different uses, the following views can be summarized: 5. The road is made by people, 6. Destiny is in one's own hands. You can also use the theme "Eagle, Ostrich, and Penguin" to talk about the perspectives of adapting to the environment and surviving and developing in a harsh environment to achieve success.

Then choose the most relevant content that you are familiar with from many angles to write, so that you will feel comfortable writing it. Classmate Ji Min's composition "Fly with the Wings of the Soul" has a striking, clear and vivid title.

2. The structural arrangement must be reasonable. The structure of a material composition should consist of at least three parts.

That is, summarize the arguments from the reading materials, analyze the arguments in connection with reality, and summarize the full text to emphasize the points. The reading part should be concise and clear, and avoid copying the original text.

The practical part is the focus of the full text and should be written in detail. The final part summarizes the full text, which should reflect the material and the title of the article, and should be concise and comprehensive.

3. Use rhetorical language to be beautiful. A good article should not only have correct ideas and reasonable structure, but also have beautiful language.

Using more metaphors in the article will make the article more vivid and charming. Use personification more often in articles to make the language lively, interesting, and full of energy.

Using parallelism in articles will make the article more powerful. The use of rhetoric and careful choice of words and sentences in an article will add a lot of bright colors to the article.

4. The text must be contagious. As the saying goes: A person is like a person.

A person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance, and rudeness will all be reflected in his articles. Do you want your articles to impress people with kindness, humility, and elegance? Then don't write questions that are vicious, arrogant, or rude into your article.

After reading a neatly written and fluent composition, one will think that the author is a serious, responsible and meticulous person. The marking teacher will always be arrogant and give a few extra points.

It is natural to give an article a cold reception or even be criticized for an article with lots of typos and illegible handwriting. Whether the text is contagious and whether the copying is neat is also a very important part of the exam composition.

High school entrance examination compositions can be divided into two categories: one is proposition composition, which includes full proposition composition and semi-proposition composition; the other is composition based on materials, which includes topic composition, reading composition and picture composition ( Topics, articles and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of composition based on materials is that candidates first read the materials and then write their own composition based on the materials.

Composition based on materials has been the highlight of composition in the high school entrance examination in previous years, so it is the focus of composition review; in previous years, candidates tended to digress when doing this type of composition, so it is also a difficulty in composition review. Once the key and difficult points are broken through, other types of compositions will be easier to solve.

How to write a good composition for the material? The first step is to accurately grasp the gist of the material. This is the most critical step in writing this type of essay.

In previous years, candidates tended to go off-topic when writing this type of essay because they did not accurately grasp the main theme of the material. So, how to accurately grasp the gist of the material? Here are some easy-to-master methods.

1. Pay attention to the title of the material (article) (if there is a title). For some articles, the title is the topic of the article.

2. Pay attention to the beginning of the material (article). In some articles, the center of the article is highlighted at the beginning. 3. Pay attention to the end of the material (article). More articles will have questions at the end.

4. Pay attention to the lyrical sentences in the materials (articles). Authors often use argumentative and lyrical sentences to highlight the center of the article.

For example, there is a composition material for the high school entrance examination. It first writes the story of two calligraphers. One strives to be like the ancients with each stroke, while the other strives to be natural with each stroke. The last paragraph of the material is: "Mr. Qi Baishi said: 'Those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me will die.'

'If you cannot get out of the framework of your predecessors, you will naturally not have your own world." This paragraph Words are discussions.

Considering this discussion in conjunction with the story, it is not difficult to see the theme of the material: dare to innovate. 4. Pay attention to the requirements or prompts behind the materials.

For example, in a high school entrance examination essay question, it first attaches the original text, and then makes a request: "After reading the article "One Tree Three Lessons", we have been inspired a lot. Please give us one aspect ( Such as success and failure, temptation, opportunity...), write your own topic, choose your own style, and write an article of no less than 600 words. ”

After reading the materials carefully, it is not difficult to find out the requirements. , three of the materials. 2. How to grasp the central theme in writing

The first trick: chewing over and over again is to make a book of all the exercises you have done before, and focus on reciting the wrong questions over and over again. This is the best way to quickly improve your basic score. effective way.

For one type of question, carefully summarize it every three questions, and then verify the summary by doing the questions; and regularly keep various knowledge systems, problem-solving ideas and techniques in your mind After combing and filtering through it, the recorded "traps" and misunderstandings must not be let go. The second tip: Multiple-choice questions are the top priority. You must look for breakthroughs based on your own weaknesses in the multiple-choice questions.

If you want to get high scores in Chinese, you have to rely on multiple-choice questions. You must not lose points for the first three multiple-choice questions.

Pay attention to collecting vaguely remembered words. If you organize all the correct writing methods of pronunciation, typos, and idioms that you have done in a notebook, open the notebook every day, browse through the compiled content, and often compare similar sounds, words, or idioms horizontally, even if you don’t deliberately memorize them, All have the effect of getting twice the result with half the effort.

Don’t blindly seek novelty and novelty when answering questions, but pay attention to the standardization of question types. Past papers are the best sample questions, so you must understand them thoroughly.

Think more about the question makers’ common test points for multiple-choice questions and compare similar questions in several papers. You will gain a lot. We should further improve through repeated daily summaries and maintain the feeling of not losing points.

For the review of ancient Chinese, content words and function words are the basic skills. If you put together the common explanations of a type of words and compare the differences vertically, you will find that there are only a few usages, which will have the effect of eliminating the rough and refining. During review, strengthen your inferential thinking and grasp the basic principles of translation.

If you start preparing now, you will be confident for the college entrance examination. The third step: Write a good composition tetralogy 1. The most important thing is to review and highlight the questions.

The theme expression of the narrative is relatively implicit, so you must click on the topic. Make it clear to the marking teacher that the topic you are writing about is related to the essay question.

Some candidates suffered from last year's essay question. When writing narrative essays, they kept thinking that the theme of literary works should have implicit "commandments". The essay they wrote was difficult for the marking teacher to determine after repeated identification. Whether it is related to the test questions, the score for such an essay will naturally not be high. 2. Avoid "referring" to already published articles, and don't let the marking teacher mistakenly think that your article is borrowed.

Plagiarism here is actually reciting an article that has already been published. This type of plagiarism cannot be "copied" word for word, so as long as the main paragraphs of the two are determined to be the same, the case can be "finalized".

3. Pay attention to the structure of the article. An article of about 800 words must be written quickly and use exquisite and beautiful language to achieve an engaging opening effect.

Avoid dividing the article into three paragraphs: beginning, middle, and end. It is best to divide the middle section into several small paragraphs, which can not only express your ideas clearly, but also effectively reduce the visual and mental fatigue of marking teachers, so that they will not affect the accuracy of scoring.

The ending should be short and concise, with expansion or aftertaste. 4. Write the composition based on careful thinking.

To conceive seriously means that there must be a conceiving process before writing, which means making a simple outline. Outlining is a creative process. It is based on accurately reviewing the topic to establish the theme of your article and determine the style, so as to conceive the overall framework of the article.

Without such a process, if you write at will, you will often not be able to express your views well. In the end, you will even have problems with the number of words or too many words, and the structure will not be perfect.

Some compositions are filled with scrawlings and corrections, or they ramble at the end, or when they are finished and the ruled paper is not enough, they add an ending and write it on the reverse side.

These are all caused by not carefully conceived, which will affect your score, so you should pay special attention to it.

Famous teacher: Pan Zhuying, senior teacher and head of the Chinese language teaching and research team at No. 69 Middle School in Harbin. Nowadays, many candidates plunge into sets of comprehensive training questions in the hope that practice makes perfect, but the results are very little. Candidates now have short review time and heavy tasks. If you want to quickly improve your Chinese language scores, you need to find the shortest piece of your bucket, that is, the type of questions that you have often been deducted in previous exams, and conduct special training on weak links. .

Pay attention to the use of idioms. It mainly depends on whether it is consistent with the emotion of the original sentence; whether it is consistent with the point of view of the original sentence; whether it is consistent with the people and things written in the original sentence; whether it is consistent with the meaning of the words in the original sentence.

Pay attention to the appreciation of famous lines from ancient poems. Appreciation of ancient poetry should not only stop at understanding the content of the poem and experiencing the author's feelings, but also pay attention to the unique expression technique (writing skills) of the poem.

For example, in question 7 of the 2004 mid-term exam, the author's emotional experience has already appeared in the question stem, and it is easy to understand the content. This poem is about a snow scene. The key lies in the writing method. You must answer "spring flowers as a metaphor for winter snow" so as to capture the "novel idea and strange association" in the question.

For example, the 5th question in the 2005 high school entrance examination analyzed the Tang poem "Rewarding Lotte and Seeing Gifts at the Banquet for the First Time in Yangzhou". One of the errors was to test students' mastery of the expression techniques of famous sentences. The main reason why many candidates lose points on this question is that they ignore the writing method of poetry.

Pay attention to the review questions. When answering questions, you must grasp the key words and even punctuation marks in the question stem to grasp the points.

For example, questions 14 and 22 of the 2004 midterm exam questions: Question 14 requires "summarization", so many candidates directly copy the central sentence is wrong; question 22 requires "differentiation", so many candidates It is inappropriate to talk about the functions of two quotations of ancient poems together; another example is question 27 of the 2005 mid-term exam: From the selected text, how should we appreciate others? Please choose one of the angles, combine it with reality, and talk about your understanding. This question consists of two questions, but many candidates ignore the question mark in the stem of the question and answer it as one question, resulting in a serious loss of points.

Pay attention to the method of answering subjective questions. It must have a purpose, a level, and literary talent.

For example, in question 23 of the 2004 midterm exam, a student answered this way: I like the fallen leaves in autumn. As the saying goes, spring flowers and autumn leaves are the most beautiful. In autumn, the fallen leaves float down with the satisfaction of harvest. They are pure, sincere, graceful and tranquil, forming an autumn dance with the empty sky and yellowing earth.

It always inspires me to seize the time and enrich myself, otherwise when the autumn fruits are on the branches, I will not have my own harvest. That’s why I love autumn leaves the most.

Being able to write such beautiful and calm words in a tense examination room requires not only accumulation, but also daily training. Pay attention to the difference between topic composition and material composition.

Topic writing. 3. How to grasp the characteristics of characters in writing

There are two main reasons: one is not observing carefully, and the other is observing improperly. For example, if you observe classmates wiping tables, just looking at them may not necessarily capture their characteristics. If you use the comparative method to observe, you can grasp the characteristics of the characters at once. By comparison, you will find that some move quickly and some move slowly; some work very finely, even the parts under the table legs are meticulously wiped; some work very roughly, just click to the touch; Sometimes they are laughing and joking, but sometimes they are taciturn, and so on. With such a comparison, wouldn’t it be easy to grasp the characteristics of the characters?

Another example is writing the head teacher. You may not be able to grasp the characteristics for a while. But if you compare the class teacher with teachers in other subjects, you will immediately find that the characteristics of the class teacher are either strict, funny, lively in lectures, or approachable... When writing about dad, compare dad with mom, and the characteristics are very obvious. Easy to catch.

People are divided into ugly and handsome people, tall and short, and black and white. These are all comparative and can be seen through comparison. If there was only one person in the world, none of the above would exist. Therefore, comparison is the most important way to grasp the characteristics of things (including characters).

When a classmate was writing "My Team Leader", he didn't know where to start and said that the team leader's characteristics were not outstanding. The teacher said: "There are four group leaders in our class. Compare the four of them and see what is the difference between your group leader and the other three?" He blinked and said, "There are four group leaders and three are women. Only our team leader is a man, and our team leader is tall and thin..." He said a lot in one breath. The teacher said: "This is mainly about appearance. Then we compare in terms of personality, hobbies, and work." The classmate also talked about many characteristics. What about "cheerful personality", "responsible work", etc. The teacher asked: "Can you give examples? Let the facts speak for themselves." The classmate gave several more vivid examples. The teacher said happily: "Look, didn't you capture the characteristics of your team leader? You came out in one comparison. What's so difficult? Write! If you write it down, it will be a good article!"

Please remember: Comparison is a good way to grasp the characteristics of things.

Why describe the character’s appearance? The purpose of describing a character's appearance is to express the character's spirit, character, and quality. Therefore, when describing the appearance of a character, it is first necessary to clarify which aspect of the character's spirit, personality, and quality the article is going to express. This is the main basis for deciding what to write and how to write it. In the lesson "Grandpa" in the sixth volume of Chinese language for five-year primary schools, the author, in order to show his father's love for labor, diligence and frugality, closely grasped the character's frugal clothing and healthy complexion to write: "He has a white towel wrapped around his head. Wearing an old sheepskin coat, with a cigarette pouch on his waist, and a dark-red face with a silver-white beard, he looks like an old fairy in a fairy tale. "You can tell at a glance that he is a simple and tough old farmer. Some physical features that have little to do with this, such as the height of the body, the height of the bridge of the nose, the size of the mouth, etc., are omitted. 4. How to teach primary school students to write a central sentence in a composition? When writing a narrative composition, you must grasp a central sentence to write, so what?

When writing a composition, after you select the materials, determine the center and title, you will definitely think about it. Think: What to write first? What else to write? What to write next? The answers to these questions are usually the "central sentence". As long as you can answer these questions, you have the "central sentence", so there is no need to deliberately arrange the central sentence in the composition. A good article is changed. After writing, You can make revisions, adjust the central sentence during revision, and "write the central sentence well" during the adjustment. This is the trick of Brother Chi. The so-called "central sentence" is actually an ordinary declarative sentence, but it has a certain generality, paragraph The other sentences of " have not left the category it states. Therefore, in the conception of the composition, you already have a "central sentence". 5. How to write an essay on the topic of wings is a writing method (such as how to grasp the center square

Fold your wings and fly. When the feathers gently brush the corners of your eyes, draw the silhouette of the wings on your forehead. When The water droplets of dreams melted into the tearful eyes, and the white hair of the wings grew. The people used their old hands to carve the haggard years while flying. They spread their wings, used thinking and poetry, and flew. There was a light wind, attracting With a wing named "Relegation". Suddenly, the wings turned into a fisherman casting a net, and then rowed the boat forward. Suddenly he encountered a peach blossom forest, and fallen flowers fell lightly on his shoulders, suppressing the weight of the fragrance. He moved forward again, looking for Once you step into the small mouth of the mountain, you will find a completely different world. Men are tilling the fields and women are weaving. Their faces are full of joy, their yellow hair is hanging down, and their joy is revealed. These are Tao Qian's spread wings, but when he wants to flap them, he is surprised. Falling heavily, then there is the fruit of "succession"? Or, someone has spread their wings and looked for the last red rose facing the sea, the spring is warm, and whose nightingale has looked for the last red rose, but they In fact, we have never flown. Emptiness cannot breathe life into emptiness. We cannot fly if we spread the wings of fantasy. Then, please fold your wings and look at this world and this life with peace and joy. It is not just dirty and filthy. Field.? Thousands of years ago - the fisherman's picturesque lights illuminated the night, the pretty woman in plain clothes smiled lightly, the Lantern Festival lanterns quietly appeared, yesterday's years are today's thoughts. These gentle details, Just the pure white feathers on the folded wings.? To this day - the shoemaker in the corner is thoughtful and smiles with satisfaction as he looks at the finished product in his hand; the old people supporting each other walk slowly as the lights come on, their kind faces evoke Little memories in my heart; the red fan in the square is swaying slightly, the corners of my clothes are flying, and the old woman has returned to her youth with black hair. These are the beautiful things we have paved with our hearts after folding our wings. There is no paradise in Wuling, and there is no Taoyuan. Fly. If we fold our wings and savor the beauty of this world carefully, it is the dance of the most beautiful soul in our hearts. If we just flap our wings blindly, we will play the world like a treadmill and cannot keep up with life. Huqin tunes. What touches the corners of the eyes, what paints on the forehead, what melts into tears, and what grows in the hair are all moved by the ubiquitous flight in the heart. Folding your wings does not mean refusing to fly, but refusing to fly. The crazy thoughts and the pure heart dance in this world. Fold your wings and fly.