It is best to have a primary and secondary distinction, focusing on one case and another case as auxiliary materials to enrich the content of the article. If the examples are used properly, they will add points to the article.

But pay attention to the transition when starting another paragraph.

3 See the ending pattern below. Personally, I think the ending is actually the same strain of emotion, as long as we dig the topic into a profound place along the way of emotional expression (such as expanding the scope and writing the theme more realistically), which echoes the beginning. Some articles come to an abrupt end when the mood is high, and they can be memorable. Deliberate sublimation is very incoherent.

The following ten forms are all good moves at the beginning of a narrative.

First of all, cut to the chase:

At the beginning of the article, point out the topic and get to the point. If a classmate is writing the article "The Teacher's Eyes", it begins with an inscription like this:

Teacher, your eyes, sometimes deep and sometimes bright, welcome my progress, feel uneasy about my depression, and get a satisfactory answer from your eyes without asking for anything in return. It was under your nose that I finished junior high school by a naive child. ...

Second, tracing the shape and drawing the spirit:

From the beginning, the article describes the characteristics of the protagonist's appearance and form, and describes the characteristics of the protagonist's appearance and form with vivid language and appropriate expression, which is a style of describing shape with form and describing shape with spirit. A female classmate wrote this article "Introduce me to everyone" in this way:

Standing in front of you is a junior two student, tall, with a round face and two heavy eyebrows across his modest eyes; Lips with little blood are often pursed, and the lower lip is often more prominent than the upper lip, showing a picture of never being convinced. My black hair is cut short like a boy-this is me.

Third, the dark ambush pen:

At the beginning of the article, some methods are described to let readers know the hero's later situation at first sight. For example, if you want to write about an unhappy mother, you can start by writing:

At the age of 25, an unfortunate car accident took the life of her dear husband, leaving her with endless pain and two young children.

As soon as the reader sees the beginning, he will come to the conclusion that when the woman loses her child, her situation will be even more difficult. However, in order to train the child into an adult, she will certainly go through vicissitudes and hardships, and her deep love and lofty maternal love for her son are reflected between the lines. However, it is really unfortunate that a deep maternal love is exchanged for an unfortunate hug.

Fourth, express emotions:

At the beginning of the article, the author expressed his strong feelings with full passion, or expressed his thoughts for distant relatives, or revealed his sadness between vicissitudes of life, or showed his sadness that his ambition was hard to pay, or expressed his praise for new people in society. Some students successfully used this writing method when writing "The Flower Season of Seventeen".

Seventeen years old, poetic years, like vibrato in the melody of life, like a smile on a flower in spring. Seventeen-year-old, thoughtful years, because the world has never been so grand as it is today, a lot of new things and new information have rushed into our field of vision at an extremely fast speed, so many new problems and troubles are also filled with our hearts.

Fifth, promote the first inhibitory type:

In order to praise the hero, the author tried to belittle the hero from the beginning, saying that he was neither good nor bad, and then made a 180 degree turn, revealing the noble spiritual quality of the hero from the opposite side. In this way, you want to raise first and then suppress. When writing about my father, a student successfully used this method in order to create a very strict father image because his children failed to live up to expectations and got the worst grades, and hated iron for their children.

I hated my father since I was a child, and my father hated me.

In just two sentences, I want to praise first and then suppress. I hate my father because he is strict with me, and I hate me because I am naughty and disappointing. However, it is precisely because of my father's strict control over me that I changed my bad habits and made further progress in my studies. This opening style can be said to be wonderful.

Six, contrast:

That is to say, at the beginning, the author stated two situations completely different from the protagonist in a comparative way, so as to set off the outstanding quality of the protagonist in a certain aspect. One candidate used this writing method at the beginning when writing the article "I found beauty", which played a leading role.

Where is the beauty? Some people say that beauty is in the night sky and the twinkling stars are her eyes; Some people say that beauty is in a stream, and the falling petals are her tears; Some people also say that beauty is in the canyon, and the morning mist is her veil ... beauty is sacred and illusory in people's minds. But not long ago, the appearance of a girl made me really realize the true meaning of beauty.

Seven, by things and people:

At the beginning, the writer sees an object related to the hero, and thinks about people by seeing things, which leads to the following writing about the hero's events. This kind of writing is often used to trace the past of the ancients. Some students successfully used this writing method from the beginning when writing the article "Little Girl Selling Tofu".

Every time I see white and tender square tofu, the body of the little girl selling tofu will pop out from the depths of my memory.

Eight, first smell its voice:

It refers to writing a sentence that can express the protagonist's personality or psychological characteristics at the beginning, followed by the content of the protagonist's appearance, that is, the writing of the first sound. Mr. Lu Xun's description of Yang Er's daughter-in-law in Hometown and Wang Xifeng's appearance in A Dream of Red Mansions skillfully used this writing method to vividly depict the hero's personality characteristics.

"Please, Grandpa, sell me a bunch of roses."

This is the writing method used by a young author at the beginning to write a little girl who is short of money and desperately wants to buy a bunch of roses. The simple voice vividly depicts the little girl's desire to buy flowers.

Nine, set meditation:

At the beginning, the article describes some sentences that arouse readers' attention to the development of the event and the fate of the protagonist, causing a suspense. Such an opening can stimulate readers' desire to read the following, which is very attractive.

When a classmate was writing the article My Brother's Secret, he used this writing method from the beginning and won the praise of some reading teachers. He wrote this:

I discovered my brother's secret. Tell you, don't tell outsiders that my brother is seeing someone! Really, to be honest, I found this in his diary. That day, my brother was writing a diary. I leaned over and took a look, but my brother waved his hand and wouldn't let me read it. At that moment, I caught a glimpse of a boss's words: "love". Think about it, a young man in his twenties like my brother, what "love" is there besides love? No wonder my brother comes home late every day.

X. Rendering atmosphere:

At the beginning of the article, vivid language is used to describe the unique environment or scenery and render the unique atmosphere related to the hero's mood or fate. This way of writing is to render the atmosphere. In junior high school Chinese textbooks, many articles are written in this way at the beginning, such as Seven Games, Last Lesson and Hometown.

When a candidate wrote the article "I hate this life", he made good use of this writing method from the beginning and won the invigilator's smile and silent sigh.

It's another rainy morning, and the mood is as dull as this weather. I am walking alone on the "straight line" determined by the two "points" of school and family. Although the rain is not heavy, my clothes are soaked through. I hate this sky, I hate this monotonous life. I looked down and stared at two toes that kept moving. ...

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1. Classification of narrative styles at the beginning and end

General formula: Ye Shengtao and Jinhua caves.

Landscape Style: Sun Li's Lotus Lake

Lyric Style: Guo Moruo's Ginkgo

Discussion: Land in Qin Mu

Quotations: Cao Jinghua's Memories of Xiaomi

Collar: Wei Wei, my teacher.

Flashback: Lu Xun's blessing

Suspicious style: wedding on the execution ground

Question setting: Wang Zhong's concern about wind and waves

Set off: Yuan Ying's remoteness.

Similarly, according to common styles, the ending of narrative can also be divided into lyrical, argumentative, deductive, echoing, close-up, suggestive, philosophical and moral styles, and typical paragraphs are quoted accordingly.

2. Classification of narrative description

Commonly used narrative description methods include portrait description, behavior description, language dialogue description, psychological description, environmental description, detail description, profile description and so on. The comprehensive application of these descriptions is an important means to reproduce "specific events full of life interest" As a teacher, we should select and record famous passages from the classic works of famous writers at home and abroad according to different descriptions, infect students with excellent and popular famous passages, and guide students to understand various description methods in reading. There is no essence, which is not enough to convince students' psychology; There is not enough subdivision to expand students' horizons. As Confucius said, "Climbing Mount Tai and Being Small in the World" should give students high-grade and high-level appreciation and provide high-level and insightful description means.

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The end of the narrative

Like the beginning, the end of the article is also very important. A successful ending can make readers more profound.

Understand the content of the article more thoroughly and further understand the central idea of the article; A wonderful ending can resonate with readers.

Thinking and * * * voice, enhance the appeal of the article. The method of choosing the ending must also be considered from the overall situation.

Make the narrative events complete and clear, and make the structure of the article echo from beginning to end, so as to better express the center and achieve

The purpose of writing. Here are some common endings.

(1) Natural Smoothing Result Calculation Method

Nie Hualing's "Man, One Less" wrote a different image and spirit of a female beggar three years ago.

State, showing the profound theme of personality degeneration. The author didn't add any comments and analysis, just used.

Line drawing describes the course of the event. At the end, it said, "Bang, the door was kicked open. The girl

People turned around, sneered and looked at me indifferently. She won't recognize me anymore! "This is not.

The natural ending of embellishing leaves readers with infinite thinking space, which is memorable.

(2) Full-text summary method makes the finishing point.

This method is generally used to summarize the center of the full text or the characters and events in the text by discussion or lyric.

Comment on it. The last paragraph of "Who is the cutest person" belongs to this type, and this paragraph can do both.

At the end of the paper, the title of the last sentence is: "You will deeply love our soldiers.

-They are really our loveliest people! "

Sometimes famous sayings, epigrams or poems can be used to summarize the full text, and the ending is more concise.

Play the role of finishing touch. For example, in the last paragraph of "Pear Blossom Blossom in the Post Road", "I look at this group of energetic Hani people.

The little girl and the white pear can't help but think of the sentence' Pear blossoms everywhere in the post road'. "

(3) Implicit and profound heuristic association method

The ending of Lu Xun's Hometown is the most typical example: "I think: Hope is nothing,

It doesn't matter. It's like a road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "

This passage is implicit and profound, and it is a pun. Encourage people to bravely open up the road to create a new life, so that the whole

Wen's thoughts and feelings have been sublimated, which embodies Lu Xun's "tough" fighting spirit.

(4) The head-tail echo method begins to quote.

The ending should echo the beginning, which is the general writing of narrative, and many articles reflect this feature. Outer city wall

At the beginning of Mr. Morrow's "Egret", he said: "Egret is an exquisite poem." Finally, he said, "White.

The heron is really a poem, a prose poem that rhymes in the bones. "Egrets are poems", which is unusual.

Metaphor, especially the ending is embodied in "prose poem", which highlights the ordinary and beautiful, simple and noble of egrets.

Characteristics, praised the beauty of egrets.

The ending of "Who is the cutest person" mentioned above also echoes the beginning of the article. no

I only answered the question "Who is our loveliest person" again and expressed it.

Strong feelings add to the appeal of the article.

(5) methods to inspire readers to express their feelings

The end of some articles is neither a summary center nor an inspiration, but the author's direct expression and expression.

Strong love and hate. At the end of Praise of Poplar, he shouted: "Let those who look down on the people, look down on the people.

The people and the stubborn retrogressive people praised and despised the noble Nanmu (also straightforward).

This is a very common and easy-to-grow poplar. I want to praise the poplar loudly! "

The end of the article is the same as the beginning, with flexible methods and no fixed model.

The methods provided are for reference only, and should be used appropriately according to the needs of the content and center when writing, and cannot be mechanically copied.