Candidates for the entrance examination

It is said that four Tang masters and apprentices completed the task of learning from the Western Heaven and were promoted to rank and title respectively in Nyoraiji.

The Monkey King has high self-reliance and outstanding achievements. He has high expectations for the official seal, and he calls himself a bureaucrat. However, the result surprised the Monkey King, who was almost "optimized". Tang Priest passed a bureau-level examination, and Pig Bajie and Friar Sand were elected as deputy bureau-level cadres. The Monkey King was so angry that he took out his golden cudgel and made a scene. After that, he found the Tathagata Buddha and asked him why.

The Tathagata closed his eyes slightly, thought for a moment, and smiled gently: "The Tang Priest is your master, older and more stable than you, born as an adjutant, and he is your guide on the way to learn the scriptures. You have no problem with him getting a bureau level? "

"My old grandson has no problem with the master." The Monkey King said.

"Friar Sand is an honest man. He provoked all the burdens on the way to learn from the scriptures. Although there are not many achievements, there are still efforts. You won't have a problem with getting a deputy bureau-level cadre, will you? " Tathagata goes back.

"My old brother said nothing to the sand. My problem is that my grandson has to subdue demons and take care of master all the way. I have broken my heart, worn my mouth and my body is dying. Why can't I even get an official position now? And Bajie is above me now, and my old man refuses to accept it. The Monkey King said angrily.

After a moment's reflection, the Tathagata said, "You are not cut out to be an official. First of all, you have a sharp mouth, a sharp throat, a sharp cheek and a frivolous manner. There is no "official body" at all, and Bajie is a fat man with a big belly and looks like a cadre at first glance.

"Secondly, the practice of learning from the scriptures all the way proves that you have collided with Tang leaders many times. The Tang Priest said it was not a monster, and Bajie followed suit and said it was a good man, but you argued that it was a monster. The head is always correct, and the deputy must learn to obey, follow the class and obey in front of the head. We must faithfully safeguard the authority of the positive vote and spare no effort to maintain the face of the positive vote. Can you compare with Bajie in this respect?

"Third, the leadership is not a fairy, and no one will make any mistakes in my life, but you can't let the leadership be anathema and lead the naysayers in front of all demons. It's just that he has no talent or brains. To be such a senior official. Is the leader in charge or you in charge? But Bajie is obedient to his master, because Bajie knows that his deputy doesn't need to make a decision, but only needs to follow closely, only needs support, and only needs to implement it, which Bajie knows better than you. Bajie deliberately mumbled a few words after seeing that he violated the rules at most. The organizational discipline is much stronger than yours.

"Fourth, now you are still a virgin and an old bachelor. You don't have any help, and you don't have a woman in a room. You can't get rid of Bajie because of nepotism. Bajie married the daughter of a senior official in Gaolaozhuang, with rich furniture and strong economic foundation. Besides, the old gentleman values morality and business, and has many social relations. Pave the way for a virtuous husband, and Bajie can make ends meet. Do you have such conditions?

"Fifth, in the wrong environment, you always complain that the master doesn't listen to your advice, and Bajie always takes the initiative to take responsibility. Because you don't know that there are two principles when you are a subordinate: no matter what the environment, your grades must be superior, and your mistakes must be your own; The greatest advantage of subordinates is to make superiors feel that superiors are always stronger than subordinates.

"Sixth, on the way to learn the scriptures, you always go ahead, and Pig Bajie always follows the leadership of the Tang Dynasty. In front of the camera, the deputy must hide behind his head; Two people alone, not equal to the head. You don't know.

"Seventh, as we all know, you made too many enemies on the way to learn from the scriptures ..."

Tathagata wanted to go on, but when he saw the Monkey King flushed and sweating, he stopped. Q: "What are you dissatisfied with?" After a pause, the Monkey King said, "I am convinced of what the Buddha said above, and I know my ignorance, but I have some questions in my heart and I want to ask you again. My old grandson is all vain, and he has never been a womanizer. Everyone can't forget Pig Bajie playing Chang 'e in the upper world, can they? "

Upon hearing this, the Tathagata chuckled to himself and said, "Once Bajie becomes the leader, what is it?"

Comments: There are many versions of Tang Priest's master and apprentice's modern stories, and there are also many criticisms of various official vices. However, this article is equally amazing. We habitually call "innovation is difficult" and think that innovation is a genius. Isn't that what it is? You see, isn't this a masterpiece full of creative significance?

Kuafu chasing the sun

I'm Kuafu. I am chasing the sun.

When I was a child, I heard from my elders that the descendants of the Emperor of Heaven are great gods that no one can match.

I am not a mediocre person. I was born with infinite power. Pulling up trees with one hand was a game when I was a child. Sun, I want to break your myth. I want to catch up with you.

So, I told other hometowns and embarked on the road to the East.

I am strong and can walk twice as fast as during the day. The wind whizzed past my ears, as if to inspire me: Come on, keep running! And I know I can do it!

Live in the wind and eat wild fruits. I occasionally stop to replenish energy, but I never stop.

Catch up, catch up ... I am full of confidence and work day and night.

During the day, the sun rises, he gives me dazzling light to fiddle with, and I am as calm as water, burying my head in pursuit; Night, sweet-scented osmanthus floating on the moon, the night is as cool as washing, and I still don't stop. The night gave me black autumn water, and I will use it to find the light.

However, one day I lost my way. The sun hung high overhead and seemed out of reach. Which direction should I go? Where is my way?

I came to a small room and tapped on the wooden door.

An old man with silky white hair came out to meet him. I asked him the way with my head down, and he smiled, moved his feet trembling and pointed to the overgrown land. The road is under your feet.

The road is at your feet! There is no road in the world, only one person's faith. If you keep your faith, you keep the way of life.

I had an epiphany. Thanked the old man and hurried on.

After countless sunrises and sunsets, I am exhausted, but I have that road in my heart, and I will follow it and catch up with the sun.

I don't run around day and night anymore. I need a rest at night to recover my strength. The earth is a pillow and the canopy is a quilt. I look at the stars, but I can't close my eyes. I'm afraid that when I wake up, the sun is gone and out of reach.

The morning star cheers for me, the wind cools me, and the birds sing for me.

The Yangtze River and the Yellow River can no longer satisfy my thirsty throat, but I still insist on catching up. ...

I never look back and I can't look back. I am afraid that once I turn around, I will never have the courage and determination to continue chasing the sun. I decided not to miss the smoke in my hometown or the cries of my parents and relatives.

I know, I don't have much time. In the remaining days, I can only go all out and try my best to catch up with the East, and my life will never stop.

Catch up, catch up. ...

Slow heartbeat and weak breathing. I feel that I can't control myself, and the fire of life is going out.

I landed gently, and the mountains and rivers trembled. And the sun, still shining brightly in the air.

Thank you, Sun. I closed my eyes and suddenly realized that what I was chasing was actually the sun in my heart. The happiness of life is in the process of catching up with me, and my life is full and rich.

Catching up is the embodiment of life.

Comment: This is a "new story". This new story is a difficult article to write. "Without Jin Gangzuan, don't take this porcelain." Candidates should use it with caution and never think it is a shortcut to the south. There is no "new story" in this article, which focuses on Kuafu's inner turmoil and highlights his life course of going forward bravely and constantly enriching himself. It is really commendable for the author to practice calligraphy and put pen to paper with momentum.

Seven. Dialogue:

Dialogue is oral communication. The forms of conversation can be face-to-face conversation, telephone conversation and online conversation. Writing with dialogue is also a kind of creation. For example, the title of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Hebei Province in 2000 is: you can write with "stress" as the topic, or you can add appropriate words before, after or after the word "stress" according to what you want to write, and then write your own composition. This topic can be written in a dialogue way, for example, the topic can be drafted as "dialogue about stress"; The content can be written. I was under great study pressure and heavy ideological burden, so I called the psychology major. Why is the pressure so great after "reducing the burden"? How should family society attach great importance to it? How to guide correctly? This kind of writing is flexible and clear, and it is sure to be outstanding.

Take the example of the United States.

Two solutions to the generation gap

Mother: Can't you turn down your "three turns left" and "three turns right"? Aren't you tired of "twisting your neck and ass" every day?

Woman: Mom, your Yue Opera has been crying for a long time. Aren't you in a hurry?

Mother: Your skin itches, doesn't it? Let me ask you, who is the boy who called just now?

Female: classmate! He asked me homework questions, so don't guess.

Mother: There is no silver here for 320! You don't have to laugh like that to discuss the topic? I told you before that my daughter should be reserved. You got it? You are a big aunt, and you laugh with boys all day! When we were studying, boys and girls were afraid to say a word.

Woman: Times have changed!

Mother: If the time is different, you will be my daughter. I warn you: don't imitate others' puppy love!

Woman: Mom, there is no such thing as "love"! Boys and girls fall in love when they play together? That's friendship! Always treat "friendship" as "love"

Mother: What "friendship"? It is "problematic" for boys and girls to be together. Don't think I don't know what you're thinking all day. Do you think no one will know if you write it in your diary and lock it in a drawer?

Woman: Mom, you have gone too far! You read my diary! This is an invasion of my personal privacy!

Mother: Privacy! Before the wings are hard, there is privacy? Tell you, children have no "privacy" to their parents!

Woman: Everyone is equal!

Mother: Equality? As long as I am your mother and you are my daughter, there is no equality!

Woman: You-this ... is ridiculous!

Mother: I'm unreasonable? You should be unreasonable! We didn't catch up with the good times and didn't read much. What a pity! What a pity! There is nothing I can do, I can only pin all my hopes on you and try my best to create conditions for you to study hard! What's wrong with you in your life? Dress, eat, for you! I just hope you can live up to expectations and get into college! This is not only for your own good, but also for your own good.

Woman: Mom, can I say something? I know you do it for my own good, but you really want me to do what you want to do but can't. I also want to go to college, but I have my own way. You keep putting pressure on me, but it will make me very tired. You are a good mother, but you can't be my friend!

[Comment] There is not an objective evaluation of a word in the full text, nor is there a long and short refutation. The generation gap between mother and daughter is vividly outlined in the seemingly casual dialogue, which shows the ingenious layout and unique expression of the author.

Eight. Interview style

The forms of interview can be face-to-face interview, telephone interview and online interview. Interview has the characteristics of freedom, flexibility and intimacy. If you write a composition on the topic of "reading", you can write it by interview. If you ask me and answer, it will be wonderful.

The essay topic of Chongqing senior high school entrance examination is "Facing criticism or praise". A candidate put forward the topic "a live broadcast of the communication column", and began to narrate in the form of live TV broadcast, and new ideas emerged one after another. The appearance figures designed by the author are Elsa, a famous educational psychologist, Mr. Carefree, Mr. Zhang, a famous entrepreneur, and Mr. Li, a farmer. The full text accepts the vertical structure of "monitor's introduction-interview 1- interview 2- professor's comment-monitor's summary", which fully meets the routine requirements of live TV programs. The article aims to objectively and truly show the profound influence of praise and criticism on students' psychology, and the above-mentioned expression form of face-to-face zero-distance TV live broadcast has become an ideal carrier to interpret the text. It's refreshing

Gong Yu's new biography

Accepting this task, I interviewed Mr. Gong Yu, the general manager of Gong Yu Tourism Development Company.

"Manager Yu, why did you decide to move the mountain?"

"People in our village are suffering from the barrier of two big mountains, so we are determined to let everyone have a good date." The stupid old man stroked his beard.

"Later, why didn't you move mountains?"

"The matter of moving mountains is really a moment of confusion for me! I used to lead everyone to move mountains day and night, but I never touched a hair on the mountain. The goal of moving mountains is too vague. Although the world is convinced of my determination, it does not recognize me moving mountains. " Yugong seemed a little sad, and then said, "Although the goal is good, we can dig like that, and everyone will not live a good life if they are exhausted!" My heart is struggling in that great and unrealistic goal, and it is useless to struggle.

"How did you get involved in tourism?" I asked again.

"This has to start with digging mountains. That day, I was too tired to dig and fell asleep on a stone. In a daze, God sent two immortals to help me move mountains. Standing on the top of the mountain, they were very excited and said,' I didn't expect such a wonderful place in the lower world. It's a pity that the world is ignorant, but it's ridiculous to blame this mountain for doing the opposite and digging it up. Do they think this mountain is consciously active? I woke up with a start, and when I opened my eyes, there was no fairy. I know that it is up to us to change our destiny. I reconsidered the matter of moving mountains, discussed it with you, and found a realistic goal-setting up tourism projects according to local conditions to promote the development of local economy. Now, our tourism industry is booming, and the government has given strong support to this project and encouraged us to introduce foreign capital and create new achievements ... "

Gong Yu's success has given us a profound enlightenment: before unremitting struggle, we must set a suitable goal. This goal is not necessarily the most valuable, but it is certainly achievable.

[Brief Comment] The story of Yishan in Gong Yu is well known. Gong Yu's determination and courage to move mountains are commendable, but it is difficult to move mountains. It is futile to strive for a Japanese standard that is impossible to achieve. Later, Gong Yu re-established his goal-reasonably leading everyone to develop tourism according to local conditions and achieve success. It can be seen that the author's examination is very accurate The article is fascinating and thought-provoking.

Interview with Gong Yu

It is said that after Gong Yu moved mountains, the local traffic was convenient, but Gong Yu will never get rich. Recently, everyone was surprised to hear that Gong Yu had moved back to Taihang Mountain. I am very lucky. I have just been hired as a reporter by a TV station, and I was instructed by the director to interview Yu Gong personally. After breakfast, I drove to Taihang Mountain, a famous scenic spot, for an interview. Gong Yu has been waiting at the company gate for a long time. He was dressed in a suit and tie, full of energy and flushed, not at all like the silly man depicted in the textbook.

Q: "Grandpa Gong Yu, your spirit of fighting in Taihang Mountain and Prince of Wu was passed down as a much-told story by later generations. What do you think? "

Gong Yu: "You're welcome. I am ashamed to tell anyone. "

Q: "Why? People have always praised your consistent spirit and unwavering will. "

Gong Yu: "In the past, I had a simple mind and developed limbs. I only know how to work hard, but I don't pay attention to efficiency and don't know how to think. " I wish I had listened to Zhisou, and there was no need to do so many things in the mountains for nothing, which greatly hurt my vitality. "

Q: "What's wrong with moving two mountains? In this way, the traffic will be much more convenient. "

Yu Gong: "What's so good about it? If we hadn't moved them, we wouldn't have to move back to Taihang Mountain. "

Q: "Then why did you move here later?"

Yugong: "Because I later saw that the tourism industry has been very prosperous in recent years, I found that there are beautiful scenery and rich tourism resources, so my whole family came back here to engage in tourism development."

Q: "What do you learn from moving mountains and fields?"

Gong Yu: "A man should have a long-term vision. He should not only see the immediate interests, but also seize the opportunity, so as to achieve his career."

At sunset, I drove away from Taihang Mountain and found that Taihang Mountain was so beautiful at sunset.

Interview with mother eagle

Hebei examinee

According to a report of a bird-loving association, when the baby eagle grew big enough, the mother eagle drove it off the cliff in a cruel way. When the young eagles begin to fall to the lowest point, they will flap their wings desperately to stop themselves from landing, and at the same time they have mastered the basic skill-soaring.

Some reporters found this report very interesting. The next day, the reporter interviewed an eagle mother.

Reporter: Hello, mother eagle! I read a report about you, saying that when you taught your children to learn to fly, you drove them off a cliff without giving directions in person or playing the trick of cultivating people. ...

Mother Eagle: You don't understand this. How can I not point them out? When the eagles were older, they opened their mouths and stared at each other, watching me fly around looking for food to feed them. Isn't this a tree model action? When they are old enough, they should practice by themselves. It's no use talking about theory.

Reporter: (thinking) Oh! It is the same as swimming. You'll never learn if you don't get into the water. Should they be allowed to exercise and practice their true knowledge?

Mother Eagle: Yes, but their practical activities are more challenging and adventurous than those of sparrow, cuckoo and magpie.

Reporter: Aren't you afraid that they will never fly again when they hit the lowest point?

Eagle mother: (with tears in her eyes) Poor inheritance wind, her own child, can I not feel bad? But if they don't do this, how can they forge the clank of iron and when can they soar in the blue sky? All this is for survival, for the continuation of life!

Reporter: It is said that adversity makes talents. It seems that this kind of danger can also create talents, and there is no shortage of talents!

Mother Eagle: Yes, I believe my heart and blood will not flow in vain. I am so cruel, the young eagle will understand my pains when he grows up.

Reporter: There is one thing I don't know. Wouldn't you be sad if the young eagle couldn't master the skill of soaring for a while and fell to the lowest point and broke into pieces?

Mother Eagle: (laughs) Actually, it doesn't hurt to tell you. I have laid a thick layer of reeds at the lowest point for a long time. Even if I fall, I won't get hurt. In addition, I will bring them up and let them continue to practice until they learn.

Reporter: I really understand "thinking about change when you are poor". Parents can do whatever they want! Mother Eagle, the purpose of my interview is here. Thank you for accepting my interview. Goodbye!

Goodbye, mother eagle!

After the interview: In order to survive and prolong life, eagles let their chicks learn to fly in danger. The same is true of human beings. The road to survival is full of thorns and bumps. In the face of many hardships, don't back down and don't give up, or you will lose the chance to survive. As long as you are not discouraged and afraid, you can always save the day, learn survival skills and become a strong survivor.

History has entered 2 1 century. Learn to survive, you need to learn more knowledge and skills, and you can survive in a society where the fittest survive. In fact, it is difficult to learn to survive, because to be an excellent person; Learning to survive is also easy, because as long as you adapt to this society.

Comments: This composition in the examination room has a strong color of logical speculation. In particular, the excavation of the connotation of the mother eagle godson is very profound. This paper accepts a new form of expression-interview, to reflect life and express topics. The structural form is refreshing and has the characteristics of the times, which is worth learning. The "post-interview language" at the end of the article can be described as a well-known saying. Well-founded, make the finishing point, effectively sublimate the theme of the article and make people think.

Alternative schools

Other genres are seldom used in our daily writing, such as notices, contracts, advertisements, diagnostic complaints, explanations, electronic announcements, etc. This genre should be based on the specific content, not blindly selected, and generally suitable for satirical articles. For example, in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination on the topic of "family education", one candidate chose the form of contract. This senior high school entrance examination composition is fresh and lively, with light humor and heavy emphasis. The perfect combination of content and form gets full marks.

Contract type:

Family education contract

Contractor:

Hu Dashuang (father) Wang Damei (mother) (Party A)

Hu (son) (Party B)

In order to do a good job in family education and improve Party B's academic performance, Party A signs this contract through negotiation.

1. If Party B fails to score 80 points in each test, Party A will punish Party B for sweeping the floor for one week, and deduct zero 5 yuan. If it fails, the living expenses will be deducted from 5 yuan, and Party B will unconditionally obey.

2. If Party A's relatives and friends come to play mahjong at home, Party B shall not actively interfere. Party B can go out and find a quiet place to study by himself, and the specific environment will be negotiated temporarily.

Seven. If Party B is admitted to a key high school, Party A will reward Party B with a mobile phone (motor wheel 998++). If Party B fails the exam, Party A has the right to deprive Party B of the right to go to school.

8. This contract is made in duplicate, one for each party.

Organizer: Hu Dashuang and Wang Damei (signature) (seal)

Hu (signature) (seal)

April 2004 1 day

Advertising style:

Advertising is a kind of public practical text, and the layout of fake advertisements can often play a diversion role. With the advertisement layout, it can be dynamically presented according to topics, pictures, music with scenery, explanations, subtitles and so on. Multiple advertisements can consolidate the topic and are fresh and unique.

Manchu example

An advertisement for a training course "Unloading the burden"

(omitted. For details, please refer to the third series of "perfect composition in examination room")

Experimental statement:

private clinic

Tell you one thing, I recently opened a "private clinic", and now there are patients visiting, and some of them have recovered. This disease is relatively rare in medicine, and several cases are now announced to promote the reputation of our clinic.

Symptom 1: Civilization disease

Patient self-report: young, always want to play, want to rest. If I remember correctly, I came up with the idea of helping others only after seeing a doctor.

Analysis: This disease is not uncommon, and it is called "civilized disease" in medicine. Civilization disease, symptoms-laziness, want to eat and play all day, don't want to do things, dream of "pie falling from the sky."

Prescription: Send it to military training immediately.

After analysis, I have a deep understanding. It is no exaggeration to say that the form and content of the article have reached a perfect unity.