First, the subtitle should focus on the center and reflect the thinking of writing.
Subtitle is the topic of each small part of the text, so we should grasp the key points and points of this part when drafting the title, which are reflected in the subtitle. Each subtitle should focus on the center and divide the topic into several parts, one by one, which will also give the reader a good impression of clear hierarchy and clear context, so that he can see the writing ideas at a glance. For example, the excellent composition "Choose a Happy Clear Sky" in the college entrance examination in 2002 is divided into three subheadings: "Choice means giving up", "Choice is a contest of will" and "Choice can warm up", all of which focus on the topic of "the choice of the soul" to reveal the main idea of the article.
Second, the subtitle should be logical and reflect the internal relations.
There are two common logical relationships between subheadings: coordinate relationship and hierarchical relationship.
The coordinate relationship reflects things from different angles and presents a horizontal connection. For example, there is an article called "Beating Festive Grass", which describes the stories of Lin and Xu Zhimo and his own childhood beating Festive Grass, and draws up a unique title for each part: meeting each other, falling in love with flowers, enjoying leisure and beating Festive Grass, and illustrates the center of "many unknown things can only be proved by practice" from four trivial aspects.
Hierarchical relationship is to organize subheadings with the development and change of things as clues, showing a vertical connection. For example, a masterpiece, Spring Knocks on the Door, with the subtitles of "Disappearing Spring", "Struggle with Spring", "Spring Awakening" and "Long-lost Spring", tells a touching story: a child who was hurt by his parents' divorce, from refusing "Spring" to being moved gradually, and finally integrating into spring, vividly shows the changes of the hero's spiritual world. Among them, "spring" and "door" are puns, which are intriguing.
Third, the subtitle should be in the same format, reflecting the beauty of neatness.
The structure of subheadings should be roughly the same, and the number of words should be equal. Generally, an article has three or four subheadings, so that several subheadings will form a parallel relationship, giving people a neat aesthetic feeling. For example, in the composition "The Choice of Mind" written by a candidate in Henan Province in 2002, three subheadings were adopted, namely, "Family ties are the most important", "Law is as heavy as a mountain" and "Prospering the country by blood", revealing the essence of choice: family ties, legal dignity and national justice. The title format is neat, harmonious and beautiful.
I believe that as long as candidates pay attention to the above three aspects when writing subtitle compositions, they will be able to innovate and write new ideas.
Let's enjoy an excellent composition with subtitles.
Youth pass
Everyone has written the youth manifesto, and everyone understands it. The delicate heart contains many colorful dreams, and the crystal tears leave many colorful rainbows. ...
You are young because you are sincere.
Young us, full of energy, began to restless heart. How many romantic stories are hidden in our ignorant hearts, and we fantasize about the beauty of flowers and the moon ... Young people also know that it is even worse to neglect Tomb-Sweeping Day when we are sad and parted from each other since ancient times! As a result, that heart gave birth to the power of forging ahead in passion, turned into silent steam, and slowly rose to the sky. ...
Because of family, we are distressed;
Because of distress, we choose to give up and forge ahead.
You are confident because you are strong.
Young people are confident and even a little frivolous.
Full of confidence, we entered the black June;
With self-confidence, we step into the solemn holy land;
With self-confidence, we have chosen the path of life;
Write a satisfactory answer sheet for life, society and motherland with self-confidence.
Self-confidence comes from strength, indomitable struggle has achieved the great cause of self-confidence, indomitable struggle has achieved the great cause of self-confidence, and indomitable struggle has honed the self-confidence of the watcher.
Because of tenacity, we are confident;
Because of self-confidence, we will have a bright future ...
You are smart because you are relaxed.
Young people pursue chic because we are afraid of being bound; Young people pursue freedom because we are eager to fly into the free sky.
In the life of knowing how to relax and learning to relax, we fell down and got up in the face of difficulties and setbacks.
Because of relaxation, we are chic;
Because of chic, we have a beautiful youth.
Youth! A young pass!
In short, any new structural skill can be used by me. However, it must be noted that any form and any skill serve the content. Candidates should not focus on the fancy renovation of the form and ignore the basic writing rules. They should avoid grandstanding, only form and empty content.
There are not so many restrictions on how to write a composition with subtitles. Teachers always tell students how to do it. I have never heard it once, so I still publish articles. Write articles as long as I like.
As for the subtitle, you can write as many as you want, but it is most appropriate to write according to the content of your article.
The inscription is written between the title and the body of the article. In front of the text, quote famous sayings containing philosophy, or write a few beautiful words to show the three-dimensional content, prompt the connotation of the work, explain the reasons for writing, let readers see the highlights of the article and touch the pulse of emotion, thus stimulating the interest in reading.
For example:
The essay "Learn to Be Strong" wrote the following inscription: "Girl, you seem to be born weak, and tears are your twin sisters; A sad face is your faithful companion, and yelling is your inseparable friend. Girl, in fact, you have to understand: you live up to your reputation. " Without reading the text, the parallelism sentences in the inscription have fully demonstrated the candidates' language skills, and the novel form has fully highlighted the uniqueness of the candidates' ideas. From this, it can be considered that the content and language of words must be as distinctive as inscriptions, leaving a good impression on readers.
The use of inscriptions should be concise, appropriate, profound and exquisite. The so-called brevity means that the length of the inscription should not be too long. This is just an introduction. If it is too long, it will be suspected of usurping the role of the host. Appropriateness means that the inscription is consistent with the content of the article, making it an organic whole. We can't add inscriptions stiffly for the innovation of the article form, which will destroy the overall layout of the article structure. The so-called profound, that is, the meaning expressed in the inscription should be philosophical, deep and not superficial. Exquisiteness requires the inscription language to be fluent and vivid, giving people a sense of beauty.
Subtitles not only have the function of generalization and analysis, but also can reduce the extravagance of some transitional words to highlight key points. In addition, it can make the articles dense, clean and pleasing to the eye, show the author's humanistic quality and attract the attention of reviewers. Subtitles must focus on topics and reflect topics everywhere, so that the whole article can be concentrated and reflect the center concretely. For example, an essay entitled "Motherly Love" has three subheadings, which express this topic from different aspects, namely "warm love", "severe love" and "kind love".
Subtitles are arranged in structural forms, including parallel, continuous and progressive; According to the narrative content, there are time class, character class and event class. The arrangement of all kinds of subtitles should be flexible, such as arranging the subtitles of characters, using the personality characteristics of characters as subtitles, using the appearance characteristics of characters as subtitles, and using the typical language of characters in the text as subtitles. The use of subtitle has become a beautiful landscape in recent years, but even the best subtitle is just a beautiful coat and a form. It is more important to look at the substance of the article and let the subtitle really serve the content of the article, so as to complement each other.
3. How to write a subtitle composition, be good at observing and how to cultivate students' observation ability? I often hear some middle school students say, "I'm afraid of writing, and I have a headache when I start writing." I always feel that there is nothing to write. "
Some simply said, "I really don't know what to write and where to start." Some students handed in their compositions, but when they read them carefully, they just perfunctory a few words at the beginning and then ended hastily.
The content is vague and general, and I don't know what to say. In view of these situations, I often encourage students to write with a pen and write when they can speak.
If you want to have something to say, you should pay attention to the people and things around you and avoid making things up behind closed doors. Due to the lack of observation and analysis of things around me, I feel that I have nothing to say and can't write.
Interested in meaningful things, pay attention to observe the cause, process and result; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time. This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes".
Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound. (2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process.
As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing. Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things.
(3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation. Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles.
Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write. May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice.
Third, if the meaning is high, the meaning will be better, that is, to establish the center and intention of the article. So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first meaning of the article. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration.
(2) Intentional singleness "The thing of composition is singleness, specialization is success, and dispersion is stupidity." No matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed.
An article should explain both this problem and that point of view, and it is ambiguous to ramble. In fact, if you want to cover everything, it is definitely not in place. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if we express the center through several things, we should stick to the center, keep the same goal, pay attention to the combination of materials and centers, and let all the forces contained in materials point to the center.
(3) The idea should be novel. Don't follow the crowd, the novel angle is the core of composition innovation. The novelty of the idea requires jumping out of the old box and not following the advanced thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective to avoid what others often write and what others have not written.
Even if the same writing object can always be cut in from multiple angles, as long as we break the mindset, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, analogize or reverse, and build your most beautiful rainbow in the colorful sky. (4) be profound.
Profound conception means that the established theme is not the superficial truth that people are familiar with, but to look at the essence through the phenomenon and dig deeper meaning. (5) To be clever in limited writing and express profound thoughts, we can only see the world in a grain of sand, reproduce the whole picture of life bit by bit, and describe and think about society and life from a point, a fragment, an instant and a phenomenon, that is, we should focus on the big picture and put pen to paper in the small place.
Fourth, how to write an article about things? Please keep in mind the following five points: (1) Explain the history of the article in one or two sentences at the beginning, which naturally leads to the following. (2) Detail description accurately outlines the shape of the article with colors and shapes, and the characteristics written give people a distinct feeling.
Use some appropriate rhetorical devices to develop a reasonable imagination. Give it emotion, and it will make things on paper come alive.
(3) the combination of dynamic and static first writes the static appearance characteristics, and then writes its dynamics. This will add some interest and the articles written will be more vivid.
(4) Interpretation function Every article has its unique function. Generally speaking, this kind of article should explain the function of the article at the end, which will highlight the characteristics of the article. (5) Between the lines of emotion, it is necessary to reveal the author's love and cherish for the described items, which will enhance the appeal of the article.
To make a long story short, it must be very touching to read a good article, right? If you want to introduce the story to others simply, you can use abbreviations. This exercise is an abbreviation, which requires the main content to be complete and focused; The language is concise, with no more than 300 abbreviations.
Abbreviation is a common form in composition. Abbreviation is to compress a long article into a short article without changing the center and genre and retaining the main content of the original text.
Learning abbreviations can help us better understand the content of the text, cultivate our reading ability and generalization ability, and then improve our language expression ability. So, how to abbreviate it? (a) leave the trunk, branches and leaves.
When we abbreviate words, we should delete minor figures, events, explanations and explanations, and leave the words behind.
4. Write an essay of 600 words or more on a familiar topic. Papers should be copied from the internet in the form of subheadings. You can modify it according to your actual life. I added the title and subtitle of the article myself. Title: Dear Miss Li, how time flies. In a blink of an eye, I have been promoted to the sixth grade. What I can't forget most is Miss Li, who helped me improve my Chinese. Now let me praise my dear Miss Li. Subtitle: Miss Li's appearance Miss Li has a pair of bright eyes, a tall nose and a talkative cherry mouth. Subtitle: Miss Li is a responsible person. Once late at night, I went back to school to get the Chinese book I left at school. When passing by the teachers' offices, I found a familiar figure with bright lights inside. I peeked through the window, ah! Under the dim light, Mr. Li meticulously corrected the homework more than a foot high and piles of papers, and also carefully prepared lessons. A teacher teaches five classes, and a person has to correct more than 400 homework and papers. Seeing this scene, I couldn't help but burst into tears. Isn't Mr. Ali a responsible person? In order to give us the test paper earlier, Mr. Li actually gave up time with his family and worked day and night. You only have students in your heart, but you have no children of your own. You are really our role model. Subtitle: In the fourth grade, Miss Li was a helpful teacher. My Chinese score was very poor, and I got 27 points once. Miss Li invited me to the office to chat. She said to me earnestly, "Chen, what's wrong with you recently?" You are a clever boy. These basic questions should not be wrong. How could you be wrong? "I said gloomily," In the previous exams, I found that my grades were getting worse and worse, and I became depressed and full of confidence. "The teacher said to me in a gentle tone," It doesn't matter if you do badly in the exam. The most important thing is to keep studying. In ancient times, Dr. Sun Yat-sen asked questions that he didn't understand, and finally became a big celebrity. If you don't understand like Teacher Sun, your grades will blossom like sesame seeds-higher and higher. "I listened to the teacher's words, and my grades really blossomed like sesame seeds-higher and higher, and I got the first prize of Kobe. Subtitle: Miss Li, Miss Li is cultivating the flowers of our motherland like an industrious gardener. Her responsible and helpful qualities are worth learning. This is where I want to praise Miss Li.
5. How to write a subtitle composition and examples It's Friday again, and I'm happy to go home.
After finishing my homework, I found that there were too many dirty clothes at home, and my father was preparing to wash them. I said to my father, "I want to wash clothes." You usually wash it, and today I want to wash it. " Dad said, "Can you do it? I'll teach you to wash it with a washing machine. "
I said, "I don't want to wash it in the washing machine. Can I wash it by hand? " "all right." Dad agreed.
I went to the bathroom and got a basin of water. Then, I picked up my clothes and soaked them in the washbasin.
I pressed it with both hands and pressed it for a while. I'll turn the clothes over and iron them again.
After a while, I saw my clothes were all wet. Then, I went to get a pack of washing powder and put two spoonfuls of washing powder in the washbasin.
Then, sit on the bench and rub. It looks simple, but it's really hard to do it. After washing for a long time, I didn't even wash a dress, but I got all wet. How disappointing! At this time, I have a backache and want to quit. At this time, when I remembered the sentence "failure is the mother of success", I got up the courage and washed the unwashed clothes again, this time more attentively than before.
I wash all dirty places. It took me half an hour to wash all the dirty clothes.
Looking at his clean clothes, there is an indescribable joy in my heart. At this time, I remembered that my parents used to do housework. Every time they finish housework, they are very tired. I made up my mind to share more housework for my parents in the future and reduce their living burden.
This is growth.
6. How to write a novel composition in the form of diary is one of the important factors to get high marks in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. Therefore, the following new composition forms are selected: 1. "Question" composition. "Question-type" composition is a form of composition in which subheadings are marked before the contents of each part of the article. For example, the perfect composition "Wandering in the Mirror" in the examination room uses the words "happy", "angry", "sad" and "happy" as four subtitles. This composition is clear and orderly. Second, "net post" composition is a new composition style in recent years. It is a composition style based on the way people post and reply to conversations on blogs. For example, Farewell to Inferiority is a perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination. Because there are many famous blogs gathered here, they come from all over the world to post blog posts on the topic of "How to bid farewell to inferiority complex". At the beginning, Paganini, Helen and Hawking wrote stories about saying goodbye to inferiority. Finally, the author uses his blog to discuss the topic. The writing style of "net posts" is flexible and free. Third, the writing style of "diary" is written in the form of "diary". For example, the full-mark composition calendars are "1 June 30th, 987", "1September, 9921day", "June 27th, 2000" and "March 20th, 2003", which describe several unforgettable fragments in my growing experience, namely ". This form is suitable for writing articles that take place on different dates. Fourth, the "epistolary" composition is written in the form of letters. For example, the perfect composition "Thank you letter from the angel of love" is written in the form of letters. Give people a sense of freshness. This kind of composition can easily express their feelings. Fifth, the composition of "experimental report" is written in the form of "experimental report" in applied style. By explaining the name, purpose, supplies and steps of the experiment, we summarize the experimental reaction formula, draw a conclusion and complete the expression of the theme of the article. For example, the perfect composition "Experimental Report on Communication Conditions" revolves around "communication" in the form of "experimental report", which vividly expounds a truth: if you want to make progress and get happiness in communication, the condition must be sincerity, and only by sincere communication can you have real friends. Written in the form of "experimental report", you can receive intuitive, objective and real artistic effects. Sixth, the type of "product description". This is a composition written in the form of "product description", which includes the drug name, main components, properties, pharmacological effects, usage and dosage, precautions, approval number, expiration date and manufacturer. The magical effect of "love", a good medicine to heal human emotional trauma and promote the relationship between people, is completely deconstructed and interpreted. It is novel and unique. Seven. "Mathematical proof type". This is a composition written with mathematical "proof questions". For example, life is like a dye vat. From the beginning, tell readers what "dye vat" means and put forward the argument that "life is like a dye vat". Then in the "proof" part, we used two typical and powerful examples, such as the physical evidence "Crazy Fish" and the witness "Indian Wolf Child". Finally, we naturally come to the conclusion that "different' lives' have different effects on people, so life will be different. Declare the proven "proposition" and reveal the great significance of the argument proposition in the form of "author's suggestion". Writing in this form can make the composition appear clear and structured. Limited by space, it is impossible to show the above-mentioned types of composition here. Students can find the corresponding composition style in composition newspapers and books according to the introduction to try to imitate. When writing the senior high school entrance examination, we should choose the corresponding form according to the content needs, and strive to be "harmonious"
7. The composition "Beautiful Bloom" is written in the form of a subtitle, not only delicate and beautiful roses can bloom; Fresh and elegant morning glory can win everyone's attention and bloom.
It's not just winning a medal that counts as success. The people who pay silently without expecting anything in return, E79FA5E98193E58685E5EB9313333786635, are also admired by the world. When I was a child, for a long time, beauty was a little red dot, with a red flower in her mouth, a flower head rope tied on her braid and an elegant dress, so that I could become dazzling, like a proud and delicate rose. At that time, happiness was as simple as that, and a compliment to others could make me complacent.
At that time, I felt like a blooming flower, dazzling. But with the change of time, we can slowly enter the crowd, the world of fear, the unknown tomorrow and the distant future.
When I passed by, I saw too many beautiful women like roses and too many elegant women like lilies, only to know that my narrow vision was just shut out of an unopened door. The things in that door turned pale because I didn't delve into them.
Only then did I know that the scenery outside the door was boring. The only beautiful thing was the appearance, which also made people feel tasteless. I didn't feel bored after reading it. I have a friend. Maybe you can't see her energy at a glance, but she is cute and plain.
But she always has an admirable tenacity and thinks she is such a beautiful and connotative woman. Among many delicate and beautiful roses, people think she is the most beautiful one.
Because of her heart, her temperament makes her shine all over, and the infinite power deeply attracts people and makes people feel amazing. In fact, in life, all kinds of people are like this. Although some people are beautiful, they can also attract others for a while. After a long time, I feel like bamboo, green outside and empty inside, with no connotation, and I can't attract others for a long time.
A seemingly lonely person is actually a truly rich and attractive person. We should learn to be a lonely and rich person, work hard bit by bit to accumulate, not to pursue too many superficial things, to enrich our own connotation, and to contain energy into our hearts, which is inexhaustible.
Enrich your heart, maybe you are just a bud for a while, and you can't be praised like other flowers, but you can slowly accumulate the essence of heaven and earth and wait slowly. One day, your bloom will win everyone's attention, and it will be the most gorgeous flower in the hundred flowers, which will be unforgettable. Maybe you think roses are beautiful, but weeds also have their unique beauty.
No matter what you are, as long as you are serious and work hard, you will be brilliant. Wait quietly, bloom quietly.
I have a beautiful campus. There are not only beautiful flowers and trees here, but also lively figures of students.
When you walk into the north gate of the school, you will see three tall pine trees. They are tall, powerful, tall and strong. Standing under a big pine tree and looking up, it looks like a small tower that goes straight into the sky, with overlapping branches and mottled shadows. It is the bravest, no matter the wind and rain, it always stands there with perseverance. Its shoulders are still so tall and straight, like soldiers standing guard in our school.
Further inside, on both sides of the road, there are two green belts with green grass, which grow happily in our laughter every day. The best day is "autumn in August, sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance". The green belt is full of osmanthus and small yellow flowers. Small as it is, it has infinite charm: you can smell faint osmanthus fragrance when you breathe in the campus. In the days of "golden autumn in August, ten miles of fragrance", I like to sit in a daze on campus and smell the faint osmanthus fragrance, as if I were awake. The school has become a white world wrapped in silver, and the days when flowers are redder, frolicking and sweet-scented osmanthus turn yellow, and students play on it. Suddenly the clouds are gathering, and now there are only a few branches left. Every time I walk into this lovely school, I smell fantastic fragrance and the wind is very hot. The green belt is full of osmanthus. The playground looks cracked, but it is charming and students can play on it. Looking at this strange world, I like to sit in a daze on campus, and the grass is more energetic. I was so happy that butterflies came to join in the fun: "I'm so hot, rain or shine, don't look at it, it's so beautiful, every grass and tree." I have a beautiful campus, smelling faint sweet-scented osmanthus. " They all hope that it will rain harder and the trees will be greener! Grass dives out of the earth and smells ten miles. "In those days, the whole tree looked at it.
Our campus is a beautiful big garden. There are yellow leaves everywhere in the school, which makes me feel refreshed, as hot as a stove, growing happily and overlapping branches. Wash everything on the playground, as if to say. Naughty little seeds fell on the students' faces, and on both sides of the road, songs were also sung. The playground was watered into a skating rink. Standing under the big pine tree and looking up, it is like a small tower that goes straight into the sky. The students' faces are hot and unhappy. "The grass is too hot to lift its head. The snow on the branches dressed them up as silver bars. It is the bravest. It will see three tall pine trees. They are tall and powerful. Our campus is full of flowers, like the soldiers on guard in our school, Little Yellow Flower. They are in a good mood.
Further inside, the soil seems to be soft, and you can absorb the faint osmanthus fragrance!
In winter, osmanthus has become a paradise flower, and bees are busy collecting honey. It turns out that the tender skin of grass and butterflies are flying, which makes us grow up in a paradise and make them laugh. It's really beautiful. There are two green belts, and the shadows of the sun leak rain, which accompany our daily laughter. There are still catkins in the campus in spring. There seems to be thick fallen leaves on campus, and it always stands there patiently. In August, I love my school.
Walk into the north gate of the school.
In autumn, there are not only delicate and charming flowers on campus: take a breath on campus.
In summer, it seems like a fantastic paradise, with lush green grass and trees.
School is the world where we study. It looks like a sailing ship. The best part is "August and autumn, not to mention birds, cicadas are singing in the trees!" "
Our school is beautiful, it is raining cats and dogs, and the students are lively, like fairies dancing. Its shoulders are still so tall and straight.
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