The first part of writing (30 minutes)
In this part, you have 30 minutes to write a short article entitled the meaning of love, and use an exact example to explain the following metaphor: "Love is light, and the darker it is, the brighter it is." You should write at least 120 words, but not more than 200 words.
Analysis: According to the evaluation criteria given in the internal materials of the CET-4 and CET-6 Examination Committee, this kind of questions examines two aspects: understanding and expression.
The high-scoring composition must be carried out according to the requirements of the topic, including the following contents: 1) the topic, that is, the importance of love (the topic needs examples to support); 2) Comments: Comments on the famous sayings or aphorisms given.
If you only write a part, the highest score of the composition will not exceed 9 points. (Note: The original score was 15. After that, the standard score is converted into 7 10, and the writing part score is 106.5).
From the perspective of preparing six functional paragraphs, there is no essential difference between this composition and the previous examination questions. In the past, the Chinese syllabus put forward the requirements of writing content, but now it is the English form that puts forward the requirements of writing content.
Since they are all propositional requirements, English and Chinese requirements are only formal changes, and the essence is still: write corresponding functional paragraphs according to the topic requirements.
If you write a template composition, this composition suggests the following writing ideas:
The first paragraph: phenomenon (the phenomenon corresponding to this epigram)+comment
Many people find it beneficial and worthwhile to participate in all kinds of love activities. At the same time, there is a metaphor/proverb that describes the meaning of love: love is light, and the darker it is, the brighter it is. In my opinion, people in dark places need more love and even a little help can give them hope.
Many people find it beneficial to take part in caring activities. Moreover, there is a metaphor to describe the importance of love: love is a lamp, and the darker the place, the brighter it is. In my opinion, people in the dark need more love, even a little help can bring them light.
The second paragraph: the exposition of meaning: the exposition of the meaning of love.
Love is the key to building a harmonious society. It can light up dark places like a lamp. (Specific meaning 1: Lexical parallelism) First of all, as a crucial quality, it gives people strength, stimulates their enthusiasm for life and helps them create a promising future. It is love or the help of others that makes people in differences build confidence, courage and hope. In fact, more and more people are beginning to realize the importance of love: love from friends, classmates and family.
Love is the key to building a harmonious society, and love can be a lamp in the dark. First of all, love, as an important quality, gives people strength, arouses people's enthusiasm for life and helps them create a better future. In addition, it is love that makes people accumulate confidence, courage and hope. In fact, more and more people have realized the importance of love: the love of friends, the love of classmates and the love of family.
The last paragraph: illustrate love (that is, phenomenon) with examples+hint.
A case in point is Project Hope. According to a survey, most people in China admit that they are willing to help their children, and they are not affected by tuition fees. Therefore, we should educate, advocate and encourage more people to participate in love activities. If we do our best to do so, the future of our nation will be promising.
A typical example of love is Project Hope. According to a survey, most people in China are in favor of helping children's shoes who can't afford tuition to complete their studies. Therefore, we should educate, advocate and encourage more people to participate in love activities. If we try our best to do this, the future of our country will be better and brighter.
The bold part is a template sentence expression, and candidates are advised to recite it on the premise of clarifying its function. This template can help children's shoes to complete the following theme composition writing:
Strong will (1 1 year 65438+February), self-confidence, optimization, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice (97), full preparation (1165438+February 6 theme), persistence.
The author suggests that the two most frequent paragraphs in CET-4 and CET-6 are phenomena and suggestions. It can be said that the writing of the phenomenon of 2065438+June 2002 is compulsory, and the suggested sentences are compulsory.