Diary correction comment is short: 1 1. Learning is like driving up a mountain. If you don't advance, you will retreat. The reason why you are smart in your studies is that you still lack initiative. Only by gathering the enthusiasm for learning, being down-to-earth and accumulating constantly can we not bury our good talents.
There is a famous saying in American society: If you don't believe in yourself, who will believe in you? The teacher wants to give you this sentence, hoping to inspire you. In fact, you are a very good child. You should have confidence in yourself, show yourself boldly and keep exercising yourself.
Although you are usually unknown, I can see that you are better at everything. When cleaning, you clean the tiles; When studying, you always concentrate on your study and practice hard, never letting go of a difficult problem; When your classmates are in trouble, you can always extend a warm hand in time. May the flowers you cultivate by yourself be more beautiful!
4. You are active, smart and lively. The class state is not very good. The homework is not neatly written. The effective time of study input is not enough. Willing to accept the task given by the teacher. Solve problems that you don't understand in time. I hope you often take part in sports activities and take good exercise.
5, you are a smart and lovely boy, study hard, finish your homework on time, love labor and love the group. If you don't play tricks and do your homework in class in the future, the teacher believes that in the near future, the teacher will definitely see a better you.
6. Whenever I see your busy figure in the classroom with a broom, I always look in my eyes and enjoy myself. What a good student! Your study foundation is a little poor, but don't have too much pressure, don't be afraid and don't lose heart. "Where there is a will, there is a way", as long as you study hard, work hard and ask if you don't understand. Your grades will catch up. Be confident, teachers, parents and classmates are all concerned about you and supporting you! Waiting for your good news!
7. Talking and laughing are your strengths, and crying and making fun are your weaknesses. Sometimes Siwei is not active enough in class. I do it well every time. Good academic performance, but not top-notch, we should continue to work hard. Can get along well with classmates, but willing to accept criticism from teachers. We should improve the enthusiasm of collective work in our class. I hope I can listen carefully and answer questions actively in the future.
8. You are a smart, kind, simple, sensible and earnest girl. I often see you talking and laughing with many classmates, which shows that you hit it off. You are also a conscious girl. You treat your work meticulously, never neglect your study, and treat the group like life. May all your dreams come true!
9. You are gentle and don't talk much, but you are sincere and polite. You have a healthy attitude and ask for progress. You are eager to make progress in your study, but you still lack the spirit of hard work and correct and effective learning methods, and your academic performance has not improved. May you cheer up, strengthen your confidence, never get tired and make progress forever!
10, you are unpretentious, healthy and active. You are in adversity, but in never back down, you don't pursue enjoyment, but progress in all aspects. I'm very happy for you. I hope you will be a strong man in life, indomitable and forge ahead. I will always support you and bless you! The road ahead is rugged. May you be a fearless soldier and pick the most beautiful flowers!
1 1, you have a kind and tolerant heart, you can become good friends with every classmate, you can always think of others and care for everyone around you. The teacher likes you very much, and it's safe to leave things to the teacher, because you will do well. I can think actively, use my head, speak boldly, ask questions at any time, write neatly and have strong language expression ability. Sometimes you are inefficient because you spend too much time. Even the cleverest child needs proper practice, just like a good knife needs to be sharpened from time to time.
12, you are a good boy with excellent personality, have certain organizational ability and sense of responsibility, can help teachers manage classes, are teachers' right-hand man, get along well with classmates, have high prestige among classmates, love labor, pay attention to hygiene, care for the environment, be honest and brave, be strong-willed, insist on doing two exercises well, study hard and actively, think positively, speak boldly, and be able to complete classroom exercises independently.
13, you clever little boy, because you didn't see the gloating in other classes, I knew you were an unwelcome student. You may be too young to realize that you are growing up, so many habits that should be formed in kindergarten have to be taught from the beginning. Because you don't have good habits, it looks a bit bad to learn to be a man. But you have a good memory, and you can be the best candidate to complete the recitation task at the same time. But because you are absent-minded, you may not win in the end. You play basketball very well, which is the only thing that your classmates are satisfied with you. No one in the class can compare with you when you use your intelligence in your study.
14, Zheng Qiqi, you seem a little quiet in class. The teacher thinks that you should follow the example of excellent students, learn their fighting spirit and their advanced learning methods, and you will succeed. Looking forward to your progress in the new semester!
15, Cenzi: You are a kind-hearted, clear-minded and responsible child. You can do everything dutifully. You study hard from your good classmates and your grades improve day by day. Teacher likes you very much! Teachers often want to hear your suggestions in class. Can you do it?
Diary correction comments short 2 1, you are a likable boy. Listen carefully in class, and sometimes I can hear your wonderful speech. You take an active part in various activities and are willing to help students with difficulties. But the purpose of your study is not clear enough, which always makes the teacher worry about you. Here, the teacher sincerely sends you a word: learning is like sailing against the current. If you don't advance, you will retreat. If you want to reach your ideal state, you must persevere and make unremitting efforts.
You are a smart and lively boy. Listen carefully in class and answer questions without your participation. Can actively participate in various activities carried out by the school, love labor, care about the collective and unite students. If you are as careful as a friend, make as few mistakes as possible in your studies, and set high standards and strict demands on yourself at ordinary times, you will be excellent.
You are a smart and lively boy. When you meet a teacher, you always greet the teacher politely and treat your classmates sincerely. The homework is meticulous and the handwriting is correct. Reviewing homework is also a wonderful enjoyment. You love cleaning, pay attention to hygiene, and the team leader is serious and responsible. Here, the teacher sends you a sentence: "wisdom is a gem, and if you add humility, it will be more brilliant."
You are an introverted and sensible boy. You listen carefully in class and do your homework meticulously. Teachers are always pleased to see their neat and delicate handwriting. Actively participate in various activities carried out by the school, and you can get along well with your classmates. But the teacher thinks that you still lack "drilling strength" in your study. Make friends with good books at ordinary times, read more books, and remember that "books are the source of knowledge".
In the eyes of the teacher, you are a lovely girl, your voice is gentle and sweet, and your calligraphy is smart and beautiful. You usually don't talk much, but you pay attention to the lecture and finish your homework carefully in class, which is often appreciated by your classmates and teachers. If you can also take hands in the air in class and let the students listen to your unique opinions, so much the better! The teacher is looking forward to …
6. You are an honest boy, you can get along well with your classmates, you can finish your homework on time, and your handwriting is correct, but you are often distracted in class, which leads to unsatisfactory grades. I hope to correct your shortcomings and strive for future progress.
7. You are a smart, quiet and studious child. I can study hard in my study, and I can often hear your crisp and pleasant answers in class; You are proactive and willing to be a teacher's assistant; Always keep good grades; When you get along with your classmates, you always have a sweet smile. If you can read more extracurricular books and write your composition more concretely and vividly, I believe you will win more applause.
8. The songs you sing are euphemistic; The dance you jump out is elegant; The picture you draw is very vivid; Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. You are the only all-rounder in our class. You have a positive talk, unique opinions, excellent academic performance and strong working ability, and you are worthy of being a good example in the eyes of your classmates. The only thing you are inferior to is that you are arrogant sometimes. If you can guard against arrogance and rashness and persevere, you will be better and cuter!
9. Your homework is so earnest and attentive. It can be seen from your homework that you are a clever boy. In every class, you always raise your little hand and answer the teacher's questions. Whenever I am on duty, I always pick up a mop and mop the floor carefully. You work very hard. Although your handwriting is much better than before, you still need to work hard. Try to write a beautiful hand.
10, you are a smart, quiet, generous girl who loves cleaning and learning. You can write a blackboard newspaper in your class, lead gymnastics every day and set an example for your classmates. The teacher wants you to work harder and get better grades.
1 1, you respect teachers, have a smart mind, can write neat and beautiful pencil words, and persevere, which really makes people admire! It's just too boring to see your little hand up. I hope you talk more in class, listen attentively and be more active in your study. Go up a storey still higher through all aspects!
Zhang: You are a clever man. You can have your own unique views on difficult problems and be friendly and United with your classmates. Smart people should develop themselves in an all-round way in moral, intellectual, physical, aesthetic and labor, exercise more in their weak links, focus on one aspect and develop in a balanced way in other aspects, which will have countless benefits for you in the future.
13, Yu You are a quiet little girl, who loves to study, is disciplined, is civilized, cares about the collective and is ready to help others. It's amazing! To the teacher's delight, that timid little lucky has grown up day by day! You can answer questions loudly in class, play games with children happily after class, and sometimes come and whisper to Mr. Wu. Seeing your sweet smile, the teacher feels very happy! Promise me that you will study more professionally in the future, so that you will have stable good grades, won't you? The teacher is your big friend, and I will definitely help you against the wind!
14, sang, you have shown extraordinary talent in both study and sports. Neat handwriting can often be praised by teachers and classmates, and careful habits make you far ahead in the class. You are also a great opponent in track and field. Boys need a more pungent personality, and I believe you will get better and better in the voyage of life!
15, Shao: In the teacher's mind, you are a lively and generous girl and a smart girl. You have a certain talent in all aspects of morality, intelligence and physique. You care about the collective and have a sense of collective honor. Be strict with yourself and seize every opportunity to exercise. This question can't beat you, so you shouldn't beat yourself.
16, Liu Jie: You are a student with all-round development in morality, intelligence and physique. Enterprising spirit, strong will, open mind and studious personality make you have all-round excellent qualities. Performance in learning can often make teachers happy, set a higher goal for themselves and fight for it, because stopping is equal to retrogression.
Xu: You are a clever girl. Always listen attentively in class and actively think about every problem; Homework is always so careful, and beautiful handwriting is appreciated by teachers and classmates; Smart, diligent and studious, so that your grades are excellent; You can actively participate in class activities. As a monitor, be more "spicy" and less sloppy, and overcome one difficulty after another on the way to study!
18, Jesuli Chen: quiet and steady, respectful to teachers, polite, conscientious and responsible, with excellent results. She is really a good girl who is excellent in all aspects. But the teacher has a little advice for you: when you do your homework, you must concentrate and not be influenced by the outside world, okay? It's like reading a book, then concentrate on it, be bold and take the initiative to carry out your work and show your provocative personality. The teacher needs your right hand!
19, Sang Qian: The teacher admires your strict demands on yourself: you will be dissatisfied with your carelessness, actively complete the tasks assigned by the teacher, and boldly accept new challenges. Teachers can say many "you will" in one breath. May you keep forging ahead and let the joy of success always accompany you!
20. Zhang Chaoyang: You are a smart person. You can have your own unique views on the problem, and you can also be friendly and United with your classmates. Smart people should make themselves develop morally, intellectually, physically, aesthetically and laboriously in an all-round way, exercise more in their weak links, focus on one aspect and develop in a balanced way in other aspects, which will have countless benefits for you in the future.
There is no shortcut to success. To realize the value of life, we must have good learning quality and excellent ideology and morality. You have both these conditions at present, and the key point now is that you should find ways to give full play to them. And this process needs your initiative and confidence. You are relatively stable this semester. I hope you can keep your attention to the weak subjects, and at the same time give play to the leading role of the strong subjects, give play to your potential, and meet the challenge of victory with a normal heart.
Although you sometimes make some small mistakes in your homework, you may not be able to answer the questions completely, but the teacher still appreciates your cleverness and boldness. What makes me most satisfied is that as long as anyone needs help, you will definitely lend a hand of friendship. The class work is so serious and responsible, you are really the "little housekeeper" in the class. If you can think twice before you act, you will be admired by more students.
3, color, good job! If you can change your usual carelessness and get rid of this "obstacle" in your study, then the teacher believes you will be better!
Although you are usually unknown, I can see that you are better at everything. When cleaning, you clean the tiles; When studying, you always concentrate on your study and practice hard, never letting go of a difficult problem; When your classmates are in trouble, you can always extend a warm hand in time. May the flowers you cultivate by yourself be more beautiful!
5, you always smile, as if you have never experienced sadness, your analysis of problems is always unique, and the teacher appreciates your alertness. When you enjoy the joy of success in your efforts, are you worried that you can't finish your class homework well? I hope that while you are thirsty for knowledge, you will constantly improve your working ability and strive to improve yourself.
This semester can be described as your "harvest season". You have won many awards both inside and outside the school. When you hold one award certificate after another, your lovely face is filled with a confident and happy smile, but it can be seen that you are not satisfied. You still have higher requirements for yourself, and you will continue to work hard to make your life more radiant.
7. You are a clever boy, and the animals you draw are so lifelike that even the teacher sighs. After enjoying your vivid works in this exhibition, the students are praising you for secretly admiring you and praising you for singing and dancing. At the concert, your lovely appearance and sweet singing left a deep impression on teachers and classmates. You study well, too In class, you speak actively, and your unique views make students sit up and take notice. At work, you are practical. How many times have you been busy on campus after dark? How many times have you come to the classroom to clean at dawn ... you are such a girl, aggressive and hardworking in all aspects.
8. This semester, you have done well in all aspects, and your academic performance has improved steadily, and you have always been among the best. I have always had confidence in you, and I believe that you can become an excellent person by strength. When you are about to enter middle school, the teacher wants to send you a word: no matter how long the road is, there is an end, don't look back; No matter how happy the heart is, there are also troubles. It doesn't matter, weeds can't cover the sun, and difficulties can't stop courage.
9. You are a kind, simple, sensible and earnest girl. Although he is not good at words at ordinary times, he is full of initiative. You can overcome all kinds of difficulties, constantly overcome yourself and make progress. You are always so serious about your work and always so friendly to your classmates. I hope you can exercise your ability after studying hard and become an all-round excellent middle school student!
10 You are a smart and lovely little boy and a good student in the eyes of the whole class and teachers. You are attentive and studious in class, and usually care about the group and unite your classmates. In this school art festival, you won glory for your class, and the teacher is glad to have you as a student. There is a saying that "modesty makes people progress, and pride makes people fall behind". You must understand that you are smart and believe that our Xiaoping will be an excellent student.
1 1. You are a conscientious cultural and entertainment committee member. Five minutes before class, you are like a little conductor, leading your classmates to sing happy songs. In class, you listen carefully, think seriously and speak actively, which is really a good example for your classmates. I hope you will guard against arrogance and rashness in your future study, and continue to work hard to make your goals higher and farther!
12, you are a person who dares to tell the truth, can do practical things, is good at thinking and has certain ability to do things. You are full of energy and self-confidence, and often bring a youthful and fresh breath to the class. I can get along with my classmates day and night and love sports, but all aspects need to be improved and improved. May you foster strengths and avoid weaknesses, study hard and strive to be a three-good student with all-round development!
13, you respect teachers, love labor, and can do a good job of unity with your classmates, but you lack consciousness in your study. You play word games first, your homework falls behind, and your academic performance is not ideal. Actually, you're not stupid. I hope you can be clear about your study purpose, be an equal with the good students in your class and be an honest boy.
14, respect the teacher, be polite, love labor, and do things seriously, which is the deepest impression you left on the teacher. You can concentrate on the class and finish your homework on time. But I dare not raise my hand boldly and sometimes my homework is not correct enough. I hope I can be bold and try to write correctly in the future, ok?
15, in the eyes of the teacher, you are a lovely girl with a gentle and sweet voice and smart and beautiful handwriting. You usually don't talk much, but you pay attention to the lecture and finish your homework carefully in class, which is often appreciated by your classmates and teachers. If you can also take hands in the air in class and let the students listen to your unique opinions, so much the better! The teacher is looking forward to …
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The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
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