Simply put, a diary is a record of our life and study activities. As long as you record what you have seen, heard and felt all day, choose the most meaningful one to record, which is a diary. In other words, a diary can write what you see and hear, or your personal feelings.
Student: I see, teacher. As long as you record what you see, hear and feel during the day, it's a diary, right?
Teacher: That's only half right. It is also clear that keeping a diary is not a "running account", so we should pay attention to the selection and tailoring of materials. Every day, there are many things we see, hear and feel personally, and we get many new impressions, feelings and experiences, many of which are also very meaningful, and they are all materials for keeping a diary. However, it is impossible for a diary to write down everything you see and feel, so you must make a choice. You only write what you feel most strongly, have the deepest experience and have the greatest significance to your education that day, and the rest can be omitted. Otherwise, the diary will be bloated and complicated, and the center will not be prominent.
Student: Teacher, can diaries only be written by people?
Teacher: No, the form of diary can be flexible and eclectic. Write down your thoughts, notes, comments, poems and excerpts ... The length and genre of the diary are not limited, and the most
Writing training and fragment practice suitable for middle and lower grade students.
Student: Teacher, so keeping a diary has many advantages?
Teacher: Yes! We can not only check our study and ideological progress through diaries, but also cultivate and improve our ability to observe and analyze things by writing diaries, thinking, refining materials and making sentences. In addition, diary is also a small composition, and writing diary is an effective way to improve our writing ability. In addition, the diary also provides a lot of material for our writing, and it is a material library for our writing.
Student: Teacher, after hearing what you said, we have a new understanding of keeping a diary. We must write this diary well.
Teacher: OK, but you should not only write this diary well, but also keep writing and keeping a diary every day, persevere and never give up halfway. In this way, you can keep a good diary and improve your writing level. However, there is one more thing to remind you that before you start writing a diary, you must review the writing format of the diary. The writing format of diary is different from that of letter. The date of the letter is written at the back of the text and below the writer's name. A diary is to write the year, month and day at the beginning of the text, and then write down the day of the week and the weather for future reference. In addition, when writing a diary, you should think carefully, sort out your daily life and study activities, determine the content of the diary, make a brief outline, and then write it, so that the key level will not be a problem. After writing, carefully revise it to see if the format is correct, and if there are any omissions in the year, month, day, day of the week and weather conditions; See if the contents of the diary are meaningful, whether the words are concrete and vivid, and whether there are any typos or sentences.
Student: Thank you for your guidance. We must keep a good diary.
Diary is a style that is not limited by time, space and writing form. Mainly, the author pays attention to the things around him, carefully observes what people, things, sights and things around him see, hear and feel, and writes it down informally. Diary material comes from our lives.
Diary is flexible, small and diverse. It can be described, described, explained and discussed. It can also be used to write scenes and objects, and it can also be used to record and express feelings. From the starry sky in summer night, the busy market, the flowers and plants on the roadside, the singing of birds, people's voices and smiles, daily life, eating, studying and working, all can be used as the contents of the diary.
Keep a diary, be diligent in observation, persevere and form the habit of observation; Second, we should be good at observation and master the methods of observation; Third, we should be good at thinking and imagining, explore ideas through observation, improve our observation ability and gradually improve our writing level. Fourth, we should write true feelings and oppose falsehood. In this way, we can cultivate our honest and simple personality.
Keeping a diary is the basic training for learning composition. With more training, problems with nothing to say and write can be solved. Because I usually pay attention to observing, recording and accumulating materials, I won't feel unable to write a composition. Comrade Meng Weizai, the author of the novel Yesterday's Battle, has been keeping a diary since he went to the front line of North Korea to resist US aggression and aid Korea in 195 1. He summed up four experiences: first, he exercised his language and writing skills; The second is to exercise observation ability and develop observation habits; Third, enrich vocabulary; The fourth is to develop the habit of writing with a pen. These experiences and experiences illustrate the benefits of keeping an observation diary.
There are two kinds of observation: observation of pictures and observation of life. The lower grades mainly focus on observation pictures, and the middle grades gradually transition from observation pictures to observation of life. Observing life can be divided into observing nature and observing people's social life. Children's observation of life begins with the observation of nature.
Observation is a careful observation of objective things and phenomena. Observation itself includes observation and thinking. In other words, it is necessary not only to look carefully, but also to see the truth clearly. To see the truth clearly, we must learn to use our brains and think seriously. Therefore, observation is also a method of learning.
The following is a short story observed by Fabres, a world-famous entomologist.
Fables liked to observe insects when he was a child. He often squats aside and quietly observes how spiders weave webs and prey on flying insects. While observing, he thought: why can spider webs stick to flying insects, but spiders themselves will not be stuck? Strong curiosity and thirst for knowledge made Fabres come up with a clever plan: he gently grabbed the spider, "washed" its feet with degreasing solvent, and then put it back on the spider web, and the spider was really stuck. How happy Fabres was when the secret of the spider was discovered!
This story tells us that only through careful observation and careful thinking can we discover something, cultivate our interest, enrich our knowledge, broaden our horizons and inspire us to further explore the secrets of nature.
There should be methods for observation, and attention should be paid to order and level.
First of all, we must move from static to dynamic. No matter what you observe, you must follow a certain order. Exercise example (1) "Shrimp" first writes "This shrimp has six legs and two big clips. The red body is three or four inches long. " Then I wrote about the dynamics of shrimp: "I teased one of them, and it held me up and even stood up." Sometimes it will fall and make everyone laugh. "
Second, from far to near. No matter which method is adopted, we should pay attention to the different scenery observed far and near. For example, in Visiting Liujiaxia Hydropower Station, I first wrote "I can see from a distance" (far), then I wrote down the car and we boarded the dam. ..... "(nearby), and then write" I looked at the high-voltage power line extending into the distance, lost in thought, ... "(near), this is written in two ways: from far and near, from near and far." "Seaside Town" first describes the vast sea, the horizon at the junction of the sea and the sky, then the sailboats and warships on the sea, and then the beaches by the sea, the courtyards, gardens and streets in the city, written from far and near layers, with a clear hierarchy.
Third, from the whole to the part. For example, I love sunflowers. (3) Write the whole sunflower first: "It is not as gorgeous and luxurious as peony, nor as rich and fragrant as osmanthus, and I don't know the strange appearance of autumn chrysanthemum." Then write sunflower stem, sunflower leaf and disk respectively. This is written from the whole to the part, with clear organization and distinct levels.
Fourth, people's social life is complicated. After mastering the method of observing nature, it is not difficult to further study and observe human social life. To observe social life, we should start from ourselves and observe familiar social phenomena such as family life and school life. Examples of exercises (6) Dad's quitting smoking is so real, so real and so touching, which shows that the young author has learned to choose his most familiar life from complex social phenomena to observe, analyze and think, and then write an observation diary.
Examination room composition is a comprehensive test of the composition level of primary school students when they are promoted to junior college or entering higher schools. Because of strict requirements, some pupils are afraid to write in the examination room. In fact, the composition in the examination room is the same as usual, and there is nothing to be afraid of. As long as you pay attention to the following points, you can write your composition well.
First, be calm and don't be nervous.
Although the composition in the examination room is the same as the usual composition, because it is an exam and it is completed independently, there is no guidance from teachers or parents, no reference to any materials, and the time limit is strict, so it is necessary to hand in the paper. There is also the fact that the composition in the examination room determines the fate of their promotion or further studies, so some candidates often have ideological pressure on the spot because they are afraid of not doing well in the exam, so they are nervous and have stage fright. Even if you write well at ordinary times, you can't improvise well, which will affect your exam results. In order to avoid this situation, when writing a composition in the examination room, you must be calm and not have too much pressure or tension. This is the premise of writing a good composition in the examination room.
Second, we should carefully examine the questions and not write them as soon as we see them.
Writing a composition in the examination room is the same as writing a composition in peacetime. You should pay attention to the examination of the topic, find out the meaning of the topic before you start writing, and if you can't see the topic clearly, you should start writing so as not to stray from the topic. Examination method:
1. Find the head word of the topic and specify what to write.
2. See clearly the limitations of the initial words and determine the scope of the composition.
3。 Understand the requirements of the topic and make clear the matters needing attention.
In addition to the theme, there are often sub-topics or precautions in the composition of the examination room, which should be read clearly and examined carefully.
Third, we should pay attention to the selection of materials and not write trivial things.
When selecting materials, you can list the things closely related to the topic one by one, or go over them in your mind, and then choose representative and typical materials to write around the center, which can enrich the content and make the center clear.