202 1 April 21TOEFL Writing Answers and Analysis
Comprehensive writing
Theme: The Living Condition of China Panda.
Read the general argument: pandas are endangered for three reasons.
Reading argument 1: mating is difficult, mating is difficult.
Reading argument 2: food is in short supply, because bamboo has its own growth cycle, growth period.
Reading argument 3: The digestive system of pandas is very fragile.
General argument of listening: Refutation, the panda's survival is optimistic.
Comprehensive writing
Many students who start university must choose a major (the main field of university study), and their parents often give them advice on which major to choose.
Some parents tell their students to choose the major they are most interested in. Other parents tell students that it is best to choose a major that can bring high-paying jobs, even though this major may not be the most interesting for students.
Which method do you think is better and why?
You must use your own words. Don't use examples of memory.
Emphasis: There are three perspectives on education: teachers, students and society. Sometimes society can be transformed into a school. The main body here should be students and universities. It should be noted that most westerners tend to be diversified.
Viewpoint: Students should consider studying their more interesting fields.
1. From the students' point of view
Opportunity choice can help them find their true hobbies and tap their potential before starting their career choice.
Interest is the best teacher. When students have interest, they have the motivation to learn, which can stimulate their creativity.
2. From the perspective of universities
Universities should be a diversified environment, and students should be given freedom and a better platform/stage to show themselves.
The society is also very diverse, and universities should enable students to have various abilities to meet the needs of society.
3. Concession:
The other side's point of view: areas that are expected to significantly increase employment should be studied.
Prerequisites of the other party: it is not easy to find a job in the major you are interested in, but finding a job is the most important.
Refutation:
Each major has corresponding job requirements, 360 lines, each line is the best.
Without interest, students are inefficient in learning, but will waste time.
TOEFL writing skills
Step 1: article logic
Different types of independent writing have different writing logic, so it is necessary to identify the types and write according to the thinking template recommended by the teacher. In addition, it is also important to use logical connectives reasonably and write sentences that contain both concessions and causality.
Step 2: Support the argument with details and examples.
The main paragraph of independent writing needs reasons, examples and details.
Step 3: Smooth and authentic language expression is particularly important.
The essence of writing is communication. Good communication requires the other person to read it in one breath, without obstacles or problems.
In terms of corpus, we should not only recite "famous sayings" and "advanced sentence patterns of network celebrities", but also accumulate authentic phrases and common vocabulary collocations. Students with strong ability can imitate the sentence patterns in TOEFL reading.
TOEFL writing preparation method
Familiar with the topics that may be involved.
The topics in TOEFL independent writing are summarized from the memory of TOEFL real questions and tpo real questions over the years, which can be basically divided into: explanatory phenomena and opposing views.
Give two opposing things or two opposing aspects of a thing, and ask candidates to support one side and explain it.
Or give two opposing things or two opposing aspects of a thing, and ask candidates to explain why they are different or compare their advantages and disadvantages, and give reasons.
Themes can be divided into:
Learning category: (such as self-study or learning from teachers, extensive learning or concentrated learning).
Job category: (e.g. in a large or small company).
Life category: (such as eating at home or eating in a restaurant).
TV movies: (Do you agree if TV movies alienate family members? ).
Consumer category: (such as entertainment flowers or business flowers).
Environment category: (for example, whether the government should invest more in environmental protection than in economic development).
Old buildings: (e.g. whether old buildings should be preserved).
Success category: (If the measure of success is money and glory, what do you think).
Personality: (If smart friends are more important than humorous friends, do you agree).
Form your own answer resource library
After you are familiar with the writing topic, you should prepare your own answer resource library. Your own resource library should include: general views on the same topic, targeted examples (you don't have to recite celebrity allusions, you can use your own materials and be self-sufficient). These contents need to be pondered by themselves and prompted by someone to form a clear framework and writing process.
Linear thinking, total-minute-total
In the new TOEFL independent writing, this total score is the easiest to get high marks, so we must pay attention to the writing structure in our usual practice. TOEFL composition should be written in three levels, that is, after we have established the central idea, we should find three sources to support it. On the five paragraphs of TOEFL composition: the first paragraph is the central idea paragraph; The second, third and fourth paragraphs are support paragraphs; The last paragraph is the summary paragraph. In fact, this thing is not absolute, it has its own ideological content to decide, so the form of eight-part essay should be obscure.
Imitate several high-scoring sentences
There are not many high-scoring sentences, just add oil and vinegar and add color. The source of imitation sentences can be complex sentence patterns in reading. Firstly, the semantic function of long sentences is analyzed: what role does it play in the article, is it summary, transition, example or cause and effect? So, when you use the summary sentence, can you use this sentence in a strange way? After several uses, these sentences will become simple and familiar.