The first lesson of 2022, after-school composition writing guidance (golden sentence+essay), after-school composition writing guidance, includes three parts:
① Beginning: Summarize the content and significance of the program with a few simple descriptions.
② What to watch: Choose to evaluate someone, something or a segment or link in the program.
③ End: Contact with life or yourself, express the gains and feelings gained from it, and express the true feelings.
The first lesson of school: review writing after class.
From the content, the feeling of review is mainly divided into two parts:
One is "check", which means "what do you see".
The other is "feeling", that is, "what I thought after watching the program, what touched or inspired me".
Grasping this general direction, there is basically no problem in writing. Then let's look at the specific writing—
The writing of the feeling of feedback is very flexible, which can describe the discussion, describe it first and then discuss it, or inspire it first and then combine the specific program content.
Generally speaking, it is inseparable from these three parts:
The first part (beginning): time+events+core feelings
At the beginning of the article, you can simply describe "what program I watched, what was the theme, and what was the deepest feeling after watching it"
You can say—
Tonight, my family and I sat around the TV and watched the first lesson of school with the theme of "Struggle for Realizing Dreams". After reading it, I deeply realized that in this new era of strugglers, everyone has the right to pursue their dreams, and everyone is also the builder of dreams.
When writing your own feelings, you can use rhetorical devices such as parallelism and antithesis to write a set of short sentences, just like the example I just gave, and you can also quote famous sayings appropriately, such as:
Strive to realize dreams and create brilliance.
Starlight does not ask passers-by, and dreams do not bear the strugglers.
This will enhance the sense of rhythm of the article, make it catchy to read and play a leading role.
Part Two (Part Two): Meticulousness+True Feelings
After the beginning, I came to the most important topic: what did I see? How do I feel?
Eight-character formula: write a short string and a detailed one.
This year's "The First Lesson of Starting School" is divided into three chapters: "Struggle with perseverance, Struggle with continuity and Struggle with unity". Which character story impressed you the most and moved you the most, please pull it out and describe it in detail. The rest, just a few strokes, no need for heavy color. This can make the article "detailed and brief".
For example, you can write like this:
How many strugglers are there in this era? Needless to say, the Olympic athletes on the sports field and the scientists immersed in the laboratory are just ordinary and great figures that have been rooted in the earth for decades, which has already provoked my eyes to tears. ...
Common sentence patterns—
Needless to say ... (casually), needless to say ... (casually), not to mention ... (casually), just ... (together) makes me feel very profound.
Next, this "together" is the content that needs to be expanded in detail.
When you are writing, you can directly quote the narrator's language, or relate to other similar stories you have learned in books, online and in your life to tell and describe them.
There is a bonus point that must not be missed: write down your feelings when you saw these stories and your true feelings.
For example:
After watching the program, my heart was filled with an indescribable emotion. It turns out that behind today's beautiful life, generations of strugglers are struggling silently. With compassion for the people at the bottom, they measured people's feelings and public opinions with their footsteps, practiced their mission with their initial heart, and put their youth, blood and even their lives in their posts.
I hope all people can eat and wear warm clothes. This is their lifelong dream and their best gift to this era.
The third part (end): Talk about the program inspiration and sublimation theme.
This course is enlightening, so you must sublimate it at the end and talk about what you have learned from the program and what you plan to do in the future.
Struggle is not only in the laboratory, but also in the sports field. Dreams don't just belong to scientists, astronauts and Olympic athletes. As the next generation of the motherland, I will follow their example, devote myself to study with greater enthusiasm, arm myself with knowledge and accumulate strength for my dreams.
After all, the Chinese dream is everyone's dream.
Feedback template: two templates and one template.
Introduction at the beginning
Tonight, accompanied by xx, I watched the first lesson of CCTV in 2022. The theme of the program is "Struggle for Realizing Dreams". After reading it, I deeply realized ...
summary
The program is divided into xx chapters (brief summary), of which xx chapter (choose a story and describe it in detail) impressed me the most.
Viewpoint discussion
After reading the story of xx, I can't be calm for a long time. I realize that we should ... not ... (output of opinions, which can be combined with reality here)
Generalization sublimation
The first lesson of this semester taught me ... in the future, I will ... try my best to realize my dream and write the next chapter.
Template 2
Introduction at the beginning
It was September again, and the first lesson of school came as scheduled.
summary
The program mainly tells the stories of "August 1st Medal" winners, astronauts, scientists and Olympic athletes who struggle to realize their dreams. Among them, the most touching part is ...
Viewpoint discussion
I never knew … anyone who has a dream is great. If it weren't for …, I wouldn't have seen … and we wouldn't have … (here you can simply write about the changes that the strugglers have brought to society).
Generalization sublimation
As XX said in the program, ... in the future study and life, I will inherit their spirit, take dreams as horses and struggle as whips, and take over the mission entrusted to our generation by the times and live up to my youth.
1. The new era is inspiring, and the new journey is inspiring.
2. Youth keeps pace with the times, and responsibility is accompanied by struggle.
3. Work hard, hold up your dreams and strive to create brilliance.
4. Concentrate on overcoming difficulties.
5. Struggle to print footprints, and years witness the initial heart.
6. Strive to write a new chapter and dream a new journey.
7. Ever victorious, the struggler first; Qian Fan enters the competition, and the brave wins.
8. Confidence gathers strength and strives to win the future.
9. Strive for a new era and sail in due course.
10. A rising tide lifts all boats, everything is new, and the struggle is just the right time.
1 1. Spring breeze is full of new things, and now is the time to forge ahead.
12. The times call for courage, and it is just the right time to set sail and forge ahead.
13. The journey of struggle has never been smooth, and the road ahead is full of challenges.
14. Struggle is accompanied by hardships, and the harvest is condensed with sweat.
15. The wind trip in Wan Li is vigorous, and the important task is on the shoulder.
16. Only when the sea crosses can you show your true colors as a hero.
17. Develop like a swift river, moving forward day and night; On the journey of struggle, there is no waiting happiness, only wonderful work.
18. Youth is the most active and energetic force in the whole society. The hope of the country lies in the youth, and the future of the nation lies in the youth.
19. It lights up the dream of "this is a lofty ideal that the younger generation should firmly establish" in the Chinese dream, injects the struggle force of "fully demonstrating their ambitions and passions", and opens the door of "being brave in pioneering practice and exploring the truth".
20. We should practice excellent skills, overcome difficulties with the dauntless spirit of "the more difficult it is, the more brave it is", and overcome difficulties with the determination of "never breaking the loulan and never coming back" to realize the value of life in an epoch-making way.
2 1. "Every generation has its struggle and every era has its responsibility." Struggling youth is the most beautiful, and it is the initial mission of the builders of new China to integrate hard work into the torrent of the times.
22. Youth shines because of tempering, and life is sublimated because of struggle. As long as you struggle, happiness will knock at the door. Struggle is the happiest life, and constant struggle is a precious spirit.
30. A person who has no ideal is equal to having no soul. Ideal is the guiding light. Without ideals, there is no firm direction.
3 1. What matters to birds is wings, and what matters to people is ideals.
32. Ideal is the mother of career.
33. The journey is long and there is only struggle; Dreams come true, only hard work.
34. Childhood is the rising sun, old age is the sunset, years are changeable, and ideals are the eternal Beidou of life.
35. Without ideals, life is like a desert, lifeless; Without ideals, life is like night, without light; Without ideals, life is like a maze, with no direction.
36. Life needs an ideal call. When you are lazy, it calls you to be diligent; When you are asleep, it calls you; When you are arrogant, it wakes you up and makes you humble; When you are reckless, it calls you to be cautious; It calls you to stand up when you fall.
37. I am a bee, flying around in the garden of the motherland, tirelessly brewing sweet honey for the motherland;
I am a purple swallow, in the blue sky of the motherland, through thousands of households, to convey the message of spring to the motherland and the people;
I am a raindrop, falling from the sky on the Yuan Ye of the motherland, nourishing thirsty seedlings;
I am a pine tree, standing proudly in the frontier of the motherland, showing a solemn posture.
38. Let's do the flower business and pass on the fragrance to others.
Do the leaf business and push the flowers through our bodies.
Let's do the business of roots and transport nutrients to leaves and flowers;
Let's do the cause of sunshine and give you warmth;
Let's do the cause of the earth together, and raise thousands of deep-rooted flowers in Qian Qian.
39. If you are a big tree, cast a shadow; If you are a clear spring, you will nourish one side of the land; If you are a grass, add a little green. If you are a flower, decorate a corner of the night sky. If you are a white cloud, dress up as a clear sky. If you are a bee, brew a sweet; If you are a ray of sunshine, light up all the darkness. If you are a breeze, blow away the dust in the world. If you are a spring breeze person, blow the crops in the green fields.
Comments on the first lesson of the school (1)
The new semester has arrived, and the bell of the first lesson has finally rung! Today, as in previous years, I watched the opening ceremony of primary and middle school students in China-the first lesson, prepared by Publicity Department of the Communist Party of China, the Ministry of Education and CCTV.
This year's theme is particularly powerful: struggle makes dreams come true. It is divided into three chapters:
Chapter 1: Struggle hard
Chapter II: Continue to struggle
Chapter III: Unity and Struggle
These three titles are like three torches, which illuminate the direction of our efforts in the new semester and point out our mission of striving for growth. Facing the present and future of our country and nation, the heavy responsibility on our students' shoulders is solemn and glorious.
The content of this program is very rich, and the winners of the "August 1st Medal" and "Model of the Times", as well as scientific and technological workers, Olympic athletes and volunteers are invited to the podium to tell us the true meaning of struggle and inspire our confidence in struggle.
From the Olympic champion who fought hard in the Winter Olympics to the academician who has been rooted in land breeding for 50 years; From three generations of foresters on the wasteland to the expedition team exploring the geographical and climatic changes of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau; From heroic carrier-based pilots to chief designers of manned spaceflight projects ... they use stories to inspire our teenagers to struggle in the new era and new journey.
To my special surprise, this year's "First Class" invited three astronauts from Shenzhou 14 to show students around the candlestick experimental cabin through augmented reality technology, and also moved the class into Saihanba Mechanical Forest Farm and Xishuangbanna Asian Elephant Rescue and Breeding Center. This program is more exciting than watching movies. I repeatedly told my parents: "This year's program is super good, on weekends.
Listen to my mother, so this is the legendary "magic classroom+real classroom" form. Immersive classroom full of sense of science and technology and times is more lively and interesting than any previous class in school. I secretly set a goal in my mind that I must study all kinds of knowledge well in the new semester. As for whether I will be an astronaut, a ranger, an athlete or a science examiner in the future, we will wait and see!
Strive to realize your dreams! Students, let's cheer together in the new semester, and we will climb the peak of the new era in the future!
Comments on the first lesson in school (2)
Every September 1, the Ministry of Education and the Central Radio and Television General Station will jointly launch the "First Class of School". Since 2008, this inspirational program has been held for more than ten years, and it has become the "first lesson" for primary and secondary school students all over the country, and it has also become a growth ceremony to witness the growth of teenagers all over the country.
Accompanied by the "first lesson", many children grow into energetic teenagers and become a powerful generation of self-improvement. China traditional culture takes root here. The genes of patriotism, tradition and culture grow imperceptibly in our hearts. The positive energy of akg, technology and innovation is also silently formed in our consciousness. This is also the greatest significance of the first lesson!
One of the highlights of this year's program is the invitation of many inspirational role models, which makes us feel what "no struggle, no youth".
For example, Xu, the champion of the Winter Olympics, said, "Don't give up your efforts, keep the mentality of' I want to learn', go forward and work hard." She said so and did the same. Xu insists because of love and is firm because of dreams. He practiced freestyle skiing aerial skills for 20 years, interpreted the Olympic spirit with tenacity, hard work and struggle, and realized his dream of becoming an Olympic champion.
There are astronauts, Liu Yang, Cai and others' space dreams. They have mountains and seas in their hearts and stars in their eyes, and write the glory of the motherland into space again and again. Zhou Jianping, the "chief designer of manned spaceflight project" hidden behind them, is an unsung hero. He realized that China people put on China people's extravehicular clothing and finished their first extravehicular activity. He marched towards the sea of stars and started a new journey in the space industry with his dedication to space. "We will use China's spacecraft to spread human civilization to the sea of stars." This is his further and greater goal in the future, and it is also a better and more upward dream of our people.
These talents are real youth idols, role models for all walks of life, and role models for our primary and secondary school students.
"Without struggle, there is no youth!" The spiritual strength contained in this course gives me great courage. What are the reasons for not studying hard and making progress in the new semester? !
Reflections on the first lesson of school (3)
The autumn wind blows gently, and the golden osmanthus is fragrant. Unconsciously, the long summer vacation went away with the fading cicadas, and we ushered in the school season. September 1 is the first day of school. Of course, such a special day should be spent with "old friends", who are the educational public welfare program "The First Lesson of School" broadcast on time at 20 o'clock in the evening. As a student, I listened to my teacher's instructions, finished my dinner early and waited in front of the TV for the program to be broadcast.
The theme of "the first lesson of school" is different almost every year, but the same is the host Sa Beining. Thanks to his humorous hosting style, the program is a little more interesting. I believe many students like me are deeply attracted.
The reason why The First Lesson of School is an educational public welfare program is that it not only arranges many wonderful programs, but also invites inspirational people from all walks of life to personally tell their legendary experiences on the stage, so that the small audience in front of the screen can understand the truth of life and draw positive energy from the "story".
The theme of this year's "First Class" is "Struggle for the Realization of Dreams", and Du, winner of "August 1st Medal", Olympic athlete Xu, space hero, Liu Yang, Cai and Wang Yaping were invited. These lovely people deserve our respect and study. In them, I see the excellent qualities of self-improvement, self-discipline, self-confidence and perseverance, which I lack.
When I heard their stories with my own ears, I was more convinced of one thing: they were my role models in my future study and life. Examples are like lighthouses of life, and their power is infinite. I hope that under their guidance, I can fulfill my responsibilities as a teenager in the new era, grow into a towering tree, shelter my family from the wind and rain, and contribute to the construction of the motherland.
Seeing them on the screen, they easily talked about their "sufferings" and could not help but burst into tears. How powerful a soul does it take to open these scars easily again and again? I think it may be that they have lofty ideals in their hearts that support them to drift all the way. For this ideal, they are willing to pay ten years of training and struggle on the road full of thorns. As students, we should also cherish our ideals, take them as the vane, go forward in the face of difficulties and not be easily defeated. One day, we can also embrace a bright future.
Looking back on the years since the founding of New China, many predecessors went on wave after wave to build the motherland. As socialist successors, we should actively respond to the call of "the first lesson of school", light up the future with ideals, realize our dreams with struggle, and let the motherland bloom with infinite grace.