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Write your own composition from five angles.
1. Anxious

There is a feeling of silence, but it is enough to move people; There is a kind of love that has no regrets, even if it sacrifices everything, it does not ask for repayment.

When the steps in the wind and rain are exhausted, when the life outside encounters difficulties, and when the difficulties in your heart need to be confided, there is always a door open for you. Although this house is not gorgeous, it is enough to keep out the wind and rain outside the window and rekindle your enthusiasm for life.

this is home, a harbor full of love. I remember it was a rainy day.

As soon as the * * * after school rang, students poured out like a flood. I also ran to pick up my grandfather with exciting steps.

suddenly, I felt someone push me violently and I plunged into a puddle. Suddenly, my hands, clothes, shoes and socks were covered with mud.

I'm all wet and cold! The man who pushed me turned and ran into the crowd. I cried "wow" and no one came up to help me.

I walked out of school sadly. Grandpa saw it and immediately took out a handkerchief from his pocket and let me hold it in my hand, which made my stiff hand feel warm.

Then I got on my bike and pedaled away quickly. The rain gradually subsided, and the cool breeze hit my hands and my face seemed to wear through my flesh and blood.

I lie prone on grandpa's back, and grandpa's back is very warm. I can only hear the creaking sound of bicycles, and it is getting more and more urgent.

along the way, grandpa kept asking me "is it cold" and told me not to worry. Finally, when I got home, my grandfather kept helping me change clothes and prepare meals.

My father, mother and grandmother all came to take care of me. Soon my cold body gradually eased and my dirty clothes were changed. I feel the warmth of home.

here, there is no rain, snow and cold, only the stove built by family is burning slowly. Although the wind and rain are whistling outside the window, the warmth of home is enough to melt the frost in your heart. Let the world be full of love, this intoxicating word has created a colorful life for mankind.

The world of love is full of sunshine and colors everywhere. It is hard for us to imagine how terrible it would be without love. Love will create an infinite sky for life.

bathed in the sunshine of love, we can turn indifference into kindness and hatred into tolerance. In life, we really need a love, and we need a kind of tolerant, generous and indifferent feelings bred by love, so that we can see the world better.

when the flower of love blooms in the depths of our souls, all the troubles, disputes and misunderstandings in the world will be wiped out and turned into a kind of warmth like spring breeze and rain. I remember that it was a Friday night. I turned on the TV and tuned to the Literature and Art Station to watch the program "Lightning Star Moved".

This time, we talked about a Fudan University student who was bedridden because of a sudden cerebral hemorrhage and became a vegetable. His parents are ordinary workers and can't afford the huge medical expenses.

But this college student likes listening to Guang Liang's songs very much. Whenever he plays Guang Liang's songs, he will have a reaction. Hands will be raised a little, or mouth will be opened a little. It seems that I am very happy and want to sing together.

Guang Liang immediately wrote a letter to the college student to encourage him and told him that he would definitely wake up. Later, he came to "Lightning Star Touched" and made a program.

In the program, he touched many well-intentioned people with a real case of a sudden cerebral hemorrhage among college students, but he had no money to treat it. They all gave their love to college students. Guang Liang also held a "love auction" to take a dress he wore when shooting the cover of his new album as the auction item, starting at one yuan, and took it out.

At this moment, Guang Liang sang a fairy tale that college students like to listen to most. Once again, everyone donated money for college students, and the scene was very touching.

I also sent short messages to the program group with tears in my eyes, because a short message represents my heart. In the end, Guang Liang successfully raised the medical expenses for this college student.

at this moment, the familiar melody rang again. "... you have to believe, believe that we will be like in fairy tales, happiness and happiness are the endings." 2. Composition materials about self

Know yourself

This motto is written on the door frame of the temple of Apollo in ancient Greece: "Know yourself"

Oberman: For the universe, I am insignificant; But for myself, it is everything.

Marx: The essence of all truth is that people finally know themselves.

Lin Qingxuan: What a person needs when facing the outside world is a window; What a person needs when facing himself is a mirror. You can only see the brightness of the world through the window, and you can only see your own stains by using the mirror. In fact, the window or mirror is not important, what matters is your heart. Your heart is vast, the study is big, your heart is bright, and the world is bright.

People's Theme

Gauguin's oil painting before his suicide in 1897, "Where did we come from? Who are we? Where are we going? 》。 This theme covers the essence of human philosophy.

pope: to know yourself, you don't need god to look at you. only people can know human beings. People in this middle position are smart in ignorance and great in rudeness.

John? Locke (a famous British ideological educator): There are two kinds of bad manners: the first is coy and shy; The second is misconduct and slightness. To avoid these two situations, we must abide by the following rule: don't look down on yourself or others. 3. How to write

argumentative writing in a composition from multiple angles. No matter whether it is a propositional composition or a material composition, we should broaden our thinking, use divergent thinking, focus on the problems discussed from various angles, analyze them from various aspects, and explore all aspects of the problems as much as possible to seek various answers. Then, from many ideas, choose the best angle, that is, the creative and most effective point of view to express one's thoughts and intentions.

To choose the best perspective, we should compare and compare the advantages and disadvantages of each point of view according to the needs, screen from coarse to fine, and choose arguments from three requirements: small, deep and new. The so-called "small" means starting from small things and seeing the big in small ones.

The so-called "depth" refers to the insight into the depths of things, avoiding simplicity and superficiality; The so-called "new" means having original opinions, getting rid of the common problems of conformity, having a sense of the times and being full of fresh breath. Never glance at the topic or material, draw a conclusion, and start writing immediately. Be sure to watch it several times and think about it several times. Seek differences in similarities and seek novelty in differences. 4. Material composition "Grimm's Fairy Tales" Please draw up five topics from five angles

National Volume I: Comic Writing National Volume II: Path Beijing: looking at the stars with your feet on the ground Shanghai: City and Me Tianjin: The World I Live in Liaoning: Happiness Shaanxi: Three short stories inspire students to talk about the environment for success Sichuan: The Most Beautiful Youth Chongqing: Jiangsu: Green Life, Zhejiang: Between Roles, Jiangxi: Recovering Childhood, Anhui: Writing Articles Based on Philosophical Poems, Guangdong: Neighboring You, Fujian: The Birth Story of Grimm's Fairy Tales, Shandong: Writing Articles Based on Tolstoy's Famous Words, Hainan Province: Participation, Ningxia: Honesty and Kindness (Source: Joint Survey of Business Daily and Tencent.com) Celebrity comments on famous writers and celebrities. Yu Dan, a professor at Beijing Normal University and a lecture room with implications: The topic is very social and very contemporary. Ye Kuangzheng, a famous poet, scholar and cultural critic, is much worse than last year. Lack of social topics: The most shocking composition topic: 21 national I volume composition topic: "Cats eat fish" The most difficult composition topic: 21 college entrance examination Anhui volume composition topic: Xing Wu's miscellaneous poems have the most bad comments: 21 college entrance examination Hunan volume composition topic: "Morning" The most controversial composition topic: 21 college entrance examination Anhui volume composition topic: Xing Wu's miscellaneous poems have the most innovative composition topic. The most moderate composition topic: 21 Guangdong volume composition topic: "Being your neighbor", "The soldiers are unpredictable and the water is unpredictable." Sun Tzu's famous saying of fighting with soldiers is very appropriate for the college entrance examination composition. Judging from the trajectory of college entrance examination composition proposition in recent years, more and more attention has been paid to logical speculation, flashing rational light. It is necessary to look at the problem comprehensively from a dialectical point of view and avoid looking at the problem unilaterally, in isolation and statically. If candidates only pay attention to the problem on the one hand and do not look at it comprehensively and dialectically, it will be difficult to meet the best idea. 5. Ask about your own composition materials

Hot materials for the senior high school entrance examination composition: Pay attention to and know yourself. In the composition topics of the senior high school entrance examination in 29, the words "I" and "I" appeared in a large number of full-proposition compositions and semi-proposition compositions. For example, "I was moved by myself" in Hangzhou, Zhejiang, "I was very lucky" in Jiangxi, "I didn't expect so" in Huanggang, Hubei, and "I was so lucky" in Lianyungang, Jiangsu. "Going out of my little world" in Linyi, Shandong Province, "Everything is beautiful in my world" in Shaanxi Province, "Touching me" in one of the selected essays in Hainan Province, and so on. Some of these "self-concern and self-awareness" test questions require candidates to write "I" emotional experience from the perspective of "I", while others require candidates to write "I" from the perspective of "I". The general feature is to focus on the students themselves and their daily lives around them, and strive to let the candidates tell the truth and express their true feelings. It can be predicted that this kind of essay focusing on "I" will definitely continue to appear in the future senior high school entrance examination papers, so this edition will give a special guidance and explanation on this kind of essay, hoping to help the students prepare for the exam. Writing as required. Du Xiaokang, a teenager in Lonely Journey, tempered his body and mind in the hardship of life and spiritual loneliness. He was moved by himself that he had "grown up and strengthened". Everyone was more or less moved by his own maturity, progress and transcendence on the road of growth, which is the starting point of beauty. Being touched by yourself is the sublimation of the spirit. Please write an article of 6-8 words with the topic of "Being touched by yourself". Your mind is self-determined and your style is self-selected. The name of your school and the staff and workers are not allowed to appear in the article. The real names of my classmates and myself. (29 Zhejiang Hangzhou Senior High School Entrance Examination essay topic) Propositional features 1. True feelings vent: the composition content is no longer an artificial obstacle for candidates to write. In 29, the composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province has undergone a change in the propositional form, from last year's topic composition "calendar" to a propositional composition "moved by myself". This topic is somewhat unexpected, but it is reasonable. Due to fraud, copying and plagiarism in recent years, The phenomenon of formulaic and disease-free composition is increasing day by day. Under such a severe realistic background, this propositional composition can be said to be a benign guide to candidates' writing, so that candidates can return to their true emotional world, to their sincere understanding of self-growth, to their profound understanding of life experience, and to the aesthetic purpose of harmony and unity between composition and life. In short, to truth and goodness, The perfect combination of beauty and wisdom. The title is derived from the text "Lonely Journey". By paying attention to the unique inner feelings of Du Xiaokang, a familiar character, it is an important background for the proposition to rely on. On this basis, the proposer strives to make the students' rich, delicate and lively life enter the examination questions and become the main source of the composition, guiding the candidates to write my heart, pay attention to themselves and pay attention to their inner feelings. Express your true feelings. From the writing content, the topic of "being moved by yourself" can be written as being moved by your own soul, your own personality and your own advantages ... In short, you can be moved by all your real events, behaviors and hearts. 2. Pay attention to yourself: "self" has become the focus of the senior high school entrance examination composition. This is a new information provided to us by the composition proposition of the senior high school entrance examination in Hangzhou this year. It is stated in the curriculum standard that writing is a process of knowing the world, knowing yourself and expressing creatively. The topic "Being moved by yourself" guides candidates to observe themselves, know themselves and evaluate themselves from the best angle. Make the examinee's will quality be internalized and improved in reflection. 3. Proposition trigger: The word "Bei" in the title urges the examinee to express his true spiritual feelings. This essay proposition takes Du Xiaokang's life as the starting point of thinking, "firmness" as the emotional base point, "tempering" as the emotional process, and "moving" as the emotional ultimate point. It greatly stimulates the examinee's thinking and emotion. The word "Bei" in the title embodies the value pursuit that writing should have true feelings and urges the examinee to write their real emotional life. The word "Bei" focuses on discovering themselves, on the process of spiritual perception, on the rational analysis of the examinee, and on the introspection process of the examinee. If the word "Bei" is changed to the word "Wei", what effect will this proposition have? Candidates are easy to break away from rational analysis, express their feelings superficially, and their compositions are easy to be false and empty. The thinking orientation of the word "Bei" is mainly reflected in three aspects: the emotion of the article should start from the inner self, take the initiative first, and then be passive; Emotion is directed at oneself, not at others; Emotion is a positive psychological reflection under a certain premise. If there is negligence in these aspects, there will be different degrees of deviation. When candidates write such a topic, they must not simply assemble it with a few model essays. The "Bei Zi" in the title reflects the person, object and protagonist of the candidate's composition. 4. Pay attention to the composition language: the quality of language skills has become one of the important basis for judging the quality of the composition in the senior high school entrance examination. "Without a good expression tool, no matter how beautiful your thoughts and feelings are, they are not well expressed or fully expressed." (Bing Xin's language) It can be said that language ability is the most basic and stable factor in composition ability, naturally, The examination of language ability has also become the main item of composition examination. Regardless of last year's "calendar" or this year's "being moved by oneself", from the content point of view, candidates have a lot to write. In particular, the topic of "being moved by oneself" is closer to candidates' lives and hearts. Therefore, in the case that composition content is no longer a writing problem for candidates, The quality of language skills is particularly important. From last year's "calendar" to this year's "being touched by oneself", the transformation and inheritance of the form of composition proposition conforms to the characteristics of the cultivation of composition ability and the requirements of the times for students' composition, and the language ability of composition has become the value pursuit of the composition proposition in the examination room. Therefore, we should take the tempering of language as an important task in our usual writing. Vivid and personalized language will make the article icing on the cake and make people pleasing to read. Dull language will make the article