1. Rhetoric opening, showing literary talent.

Rhetoric is an indispensable part of language use. The use of vivid and appropriate rhetorical techniques can often add a lot of elegance to the language. If you can skillfully use rhetorical techniques in your college entrance examination essays, you will definitely add color and brilliance to your essays. In the following examples,

Both paragraphs of 1 and 1 use parallelism to describe the typical characters, utensils and "my" feelings in Lao She's works respectively, pointing out that this is the "symbol of old Beijing". It not only highlights the topic, but also adds literary talent.

2. Use metaphors and parallelism to make the language vivid, powerful and harmonious.

3. Use personification and parallelism to open the article, making the author's emotions flow out like a bursting river; the language of the article is extraordinary, vivid and friendly. Example 4 uses two metaphors in succession, comparing life to "travel" and "marathon running", pointing out that "you need to pause for a moment before you can move forward better" and "you need to replenish energy in the middle before you can reach the finish line." This cleverly addresses the topic and also Make the language vivid.

Example 1

I saw Xiangzi playing with the foreign car in his hand, thinking about buying a car, talking about his little ninety-nine, the dark body of the old Beijing foreign car next to him , the shiny tile rings were shining; I saw Wang Shunfa busy wiping the table, placing tea bowls and greeting guests, holding a big old Beijing teapot in his hand, the spout slowly spitting out water mist; I saw the clear water ridges in the main room of the Qi family The pomegranates were red, and the old Beijing rabbit on the Eight Immortals table in the courtyard held his head high, and the old man smiled and nodded; I saw the sand dragon looking directly at the disciples without saying a word, and secretly said in his heart: "Don't pass it on! Don't pass it on!", the old Beijing man in front of the hall The escort has a long gun, quietly leaning against the corner, echoing his master from afar... Reading Mr. Lao She's books, one feels like being led by the characters in the book, visiting the streets and alleys of Beijing, breathing the atmosphere of Beijing, appreciating the colors of Beijing, listening to the rhythm of Beijing, and feeling the mood of Beijing... Mr. Lao She's works are the works of old Beijing. Symbol! (20xx Beijing College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Beijing's Symbols - Lao She and Beijing")

Example 2

A. If the young eagle takes off into the sky, it has to experience the blows of wind and rain, then The spirit of fighting against the sky is its sharp eyes; if a horse galloping in the wilderness needs to go through the temper of running thousands of miles, then the spirit of galloping thousands of miles for a long-cherished wish is the iron hooves that help it cross thousands of mountains and rivers; people want to be proud. Standing in the world, becoming a hero of a generation and establishing a great cause for a lifetime, no one else but the courage to fight in all directions is the cornerstone of his success.

Whose spirit can make people rise up. (The 20xx Hunan College Entrance Examination full-score essay "Talk about Spirits")

B. The college entrance examination composition is indeed a critical moment, but then I thought: the method of composition is not as good as walking on the road. Can't help but feel proud secretly.

Composition is just like walking on the road. Some people are walking with their heads held high and their momentum is overwhelming; But remember: no matter how you go, you have to walk on your own path? (20xx Jiangsu College Entrance Examination full score essay "Composition is like walking")

Example 3

Thousands of years of ups and downs, you have quietly stood above thousands of people, looking up to the sky. Hope, only the wordless monument has left your sigh. Stroking the concave and convex monument body, feeling the vicissitudes of life, you just slightly raised the corners of your mouth that were soft and strong at the time. At this time, the wind is still biting and the sky is still vast. You are speechless and the monument has no words, but your extraordinaryness is completely recorded. The history is still flowing for you, but on the seemingly blank monument without words, there are infinite Extending the broadness and wisdom of you, the empress of the Tang Dynasty. (The 20xx Fujian College Entrance Examination full score essay "A Dot of Blanks and Long Thoughts")

Example 4

Life is like traveling. The more dangerous the place, the more beautiful the scenery, the more people want to Move forward, but people's energy is limited and they need to stop for a while before they can move forward better. Life is like a marathon, you need to replenish your energy midway to reach the finish line. (20xx Chongqing College Entrance Examination full score essay "Going and Stopping")

2. Introduction of suspense to attract readers.

Before writing the college entrance examination composition, you might as well spend 3-6 minutes carefully composing it and introducing it with suspense. This will easily capture people's curiosity when reading and attract people to read, thus achieving good results. Example 5 starts with a suspense: Mom says "I" am an angel, but why do I think I'm not? So the reader can’t help but be attracted and wonder, why does he think it’s not? Who is? Why? In this way, this series of questions naturally brings the reader's attention to the following, making the reader eager to know the following.

Example 5

When I was very young, I always liked to see my mother wearing a white dress. She was so beautiful and happy. She was so happy to be held by her little hand. ! At that time, my mother was the angel in my heart. However, my mother loves to call me affectionately: "Angel, you are an angel!"

I am not an angel. Otherwise, how could it be my mother instead of me who is taken into heaven? (The full score essay "I am an Angel" in the Guangdong College Entrance Examination in 20xx)

3. The story comes first and is fascinating.

The college entrance examination composition story comes first and can be fascinating. The story of "Clams Raising Pearls" in Example 6 is a story that many people know. It is concrete and fascinating, and contains a truth about achieving success through hardships and hardships. The story narrated by the author fits the profound meaning of the topic of "Swift Weight Loss" very well. The "it" in the title is a synonym for difficulties, setbacks, difficulties and obstacles, etc. If you break through them, life will become incomparably magnificent. The author starts with this story, which is both fascinating and relevant to the topic.

Example 6

The summer heat is scorching the earth, and before you know it, there are more people swimming on the beach. Looking into the distance, several children seemed to be searching for something. I walked over with curiosity, and found out that they were looking for pearls. A small piece of gravel was unconsciously swallowed by the clam in its mouth. The clam felt so painful. It looked like a sharp knife was stabbing it in the throat. But there is nothing we can do. We can only grind it down and polish it day and night before we can spit it out. Finally one day, the clam washed up on the beach. A little boy found the gravel in the clam's mouth and took it out. But it was no longer rough gravel, but a brilliant pearl. The clam felt relaxed. A lot, and returned to the ocean. From then on, the clam cultured pearls became known to people, and its story was spread by people. From then on, life had a dazzling luster. Every time I went to the beach, I watched the hardships of the clam with high respect. (The 20xx Jiangxi College Entrance Examination full-score essay "Through it, life will be magnificent from now on")

4. Quote the beginning to highlight the theme.

The quotation method is a very common way to start an article. Cleverly borrowing poems, famous quotes, allusions, and proverbs to start an article can achieve good artistic effects. Of course, the quotation must highlight the theme, be accurate and appropriate, and avoid being pretentious or self-defeating. Example 7 begins with a quotation from a famous poem, discussing "spirit" from multiple aspects and angles, enhancing the argumentation effect and highlighting the theme. The opening line of the famous poem quoted in Example 8 not only shows readers the vastness and profoundness of Chinese poetry culture and the beautiful and magnificent scenery, but also reveals a theme: when reading poetry, one must be good at "leaving a little blank space" in order to appreciate the charm. .

Example 7

"It is still strong despite countless blows, regardless of the east, west, north and south winds." It is the green bamboo that shows you its spirit and a kind of penetration. The unyielding and tenacity of life;

"If you don't like to pick up clams on the beach, you will sail to play in the middle of the stream." It is the tide boy on the top of the wave who is showing you his spirit and a kind of prosperity in his blood. Brave and fearless;

"Look up to the sky and laugh and go out, how can we be the people of Penghao?" It is the proud traveler who is showing you his spirit and a kind of support for life and support. A firm confidence that inspires hope.

Vigor, the support of life, the cornerstone of success. (The 20xx Hunan College Entrance Examination full score essay "Talk about Spirits")

Example 8

A quiet path, twists and turns without forgetting to leave a little blank, making people daydream about the "mountain" behind the blank The scenery of "heavy water and doubtless roads leads to a new village, with dark willows and bright flowers" is beautiful.

A slight wave, leaving a little blank space after the turbulent waves, makes people wander in the majestic, majestic and exciting scenery of "the stars hang down on the vast plains, and the moon surges on the rivers".

A piece of poetry, lingering and pathos, does not forget to leave a little blank, allowing people to appreciate the long roar after the blank, inducing the poetic sentiment of "rocks piercing the sky, stormy waves crashing on the shore, and rolling up thousands of piles of snow" To Bixiao. A pure land, silent without forgetting to leave a little blank space, rendering people a wonder of "the lonely smoke in the desert, the sun setting over the long river". The blue sky has left a blank space, so that there can be waves of "the clouds make tricks, the flying stars spread hatred"; history, because you have left a blank space, there are green tombs and endless reverie. (The 20xx Fujian College Entrance Examination full score essay "Finding the blanks and finally seeing the scenery")

5. Start with a question to make people think deeply.

At the beginning of the college entrance examination composition, you should ask questions around the theme. The questions and answers can make people think deeply and highlight the theme. Example 9 begins with the theme "Even if you face bitterness, but after bitterness there will be sweetness". Through a series of "questions" and "answers", it opens up the mind and highlights the theme.

Example 9

If you were a seed, tell me, what would you do? Are you waiting for the call of spring, or are you forced to struggle with the cold winter? If you were a clear spring, tell me, what would you do? Should we let the wind blow us, or should we dare to stir up the waves? If you were a grain of sand in the vicissitudes of life, tell me, what would you do? Whether it is to be turned into a wisp of dust and smoke by the rain and wind, or whether to dare to rub out crystal pearls, all successful people will choose the latter. Even if they face bitterness, there will be sweetness after the bitterness. (The 20xx Jiangxi College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Cutting out a tacit understanding of success")

6. Destroy the "old" at the beginning to contrast the theme

The so-called "destroying the old" means using reverse thinking , break old ideas and concepts from a new perspective and propose new ideas. Breaking the "old" at the beginning is to first write down the old ideas and concepts, then deny them and put forward new ideas and concepts to reflect the correctness of the theme. Example 10: First, write down Liu Yuxi’s point of view: “Although it is hard work to search for thousands of miles, you will only get to the gold after blowing all the sand.” Then deny it and put forward the author's new point of view "Sometimes it is good to choose to stop", which contrasts the correctness of the theme and is refreshing.

Example 10

Liu Yuxi said: "Although it is hard work to search for thousands of miles, you will only get gold after blowing all the sand." However, is this really like this in real life? That's not necessarily the case. No matter how tenacious and strong the sail on the giant ship is, it will sometimes be blown away by the strong wind. The same is true in life. If you continue on your own path, it only shows that your willpower is stronger, but it does not mean that you will definitely succeed. So sometimes it is good to choose to stop. (20xx Chongqing College Entrance Examination full score essay "Going and Stopping")

7. Bixing opens the chapter to highlight the theme.

"Bixing" is a traditional technique in Chinese poetry creation. College entrance examination compositions can also use other things to start the chapter. Of course, the other things used must be intrinsically related to the "words chanted".

Starting from the natural world, moving from things to people, he clearly puts forward his own point of view - "Be yourself and give yourself a sky." The "Bixing" here is consistent with the "words chanted" - "Be yourself and give yourself a sky", thus enhancing the theme.

Example 11

If I am born as a forest tree, I should be happy and prosperous; if I am born as a grass, I should be luxuriant and green. If it's grass, don't envy the towering trees, you can still grow into a patch of green; if it's a sparrow, don't envy the eagle's fight and flight, you can still find happiness among the branches; if it's a stream, just Don't envy the waves of the sea crashing on the shore, you can still flow freely in the mountain streams. As a human being, don't envy other people's God-given opportunities. Be yourself and give yourself a sky. (20xx National Paper 1 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Give Yourself a Sky")

In short, the beginning of the article for a full score college entrance examination essay should be determined according to the content and style of the article.

The general principle is to use a good opening chapter to make the main idea of ??the article clearer, the structure more rigorous, the content richer, the materials more novel, and the language more vivid.