1, the time outside the clock is higher than that of Zheng in Class Five. Today's world is modern and scientific, which can also be called "punctuality"! Nowadays, people's sense of time is getting stronger and stronger. Even 24 hours a day and 60 minutes and 60 seconds a year have detailed arrangements, which are nothing more than work and study. Even the time for eating and sleeping is squeezed pitifully, how much can be squeezed out. With the enhancement of people's concept of time, the degree of mechanization is gradually improved. Laughter and crying are no longer emotional catharsis, but just a step in the day. We are about to abandon our true inner feelings and true selves, but we are like walking dead. We wasted ourselves on the way to the time in the clock. Bing Xin said that if life is tasteless, the afterlife is meaningless. It is true that, like today, we plan every second of our lives and arrange it in our own clocks. Everything is careful, for fear of losing any money and being taken advantage of. Everything we do is utilitarian, and we have no time to take care of ourselves and our lover's heart. Why do you have to make a trip for nothing in your life? It's a pity that people have never pursued what they like in their lives. Whether you are crazy or not, it is better than calculating time in a "rational" way. Put aside the clock, enjoy life and face your potential self. Only then did we find that all the beauty, goodness and sensibility in the world have been completely preserved. Here is the Peach Blossom Garden to escape the pain of the world, and there is endless time for endless life to enjoy. Matter will soon disappear in the long river of time, and only the spirit will last forever outside the clock. Love the world as much as possible, enjoy the good time with every flower, and even "waste" some time listening to the voice of every tree, so as to realize the beauty of life. We know that human beings are not the only creatures living alone on earth. We should love the world outside the clock, appreciate the delicious and colorful nature, and read our favorite books instead of soaking in textbooks all day, so that our limited life can play an infinite role, otherwise our day will only be 24 hours. Listen to "Laugh and watch the sky go out, are we Artemisia people?" People who cheat in officialdom should be ashamed! Listen to "Don't hate yourself for a long time, when can you forget camping?" Those who are intrigued in the shopping mall should be ashamed! Abandon the clock, find yourself, and find the time that really belongs to life outside the clock, that is, "the mind is natural, and art can live." (Ending with a famous sentence, vivid, literary and intriguing) [Comment] This article is thoughtful. Unique conception. In fact, one of the most important characteristics of time is that everyone ignores it. That is its privacy and subjective sensitivity in individual life, which is the author's topic. The time outside the clock is the time to construct the meaning and value of life, the time of spirit and aesthetics, and the time to embody the beauty of life. 2. Leave a blank for life. Liu, our life is too busy. People around us remind us all the time, come on! Come on! Otherwise, you will fall behind. Parents and teachers have repeatedly told us that you should seize every minute and rush to your future glory and the end of your life. Therefore, we are used to the fast-paced life, used to two o'clock and one line every day, just to abandon others and bury ourselves in reading. However, when "karoshi" appeared before our eyes, the news that students committed suicide due to excessive pressure flooded our ears, and I couldn't help wondering if we had made the wrong choice. Is the elder wrong? Reason tells me: no, you are not wrong. But my heart is crying: please leave a little blank in your life to make your life more accurate! (Starting from the phenomenon, put forward the viewpoint: leave a blank space for life) Leave a blank space for life and enjoy the scenery along the way. A philosopher once said, "The beauty of life is a process, not a result." However, in countless hurried steps, we left the beauty of life behind. When there is only one goal left in our life, when we sigh that life is boring, we have long forgotten how much we have missed. In fact, once in a while, I stop to think about it. A touch, a care and a smile are all beautiful scenery in life, which is worth savoring. (Explain why you should leave a blank space for life) Leave a blank space for life and let the soul have a rest. We often say that we are tired and hysterical because our hearts are tired. When we encounter setbacks and have nowhere to vent our emotions, we might as well sit down quietly and listen to the sound of "tick-tock" to let our mood settle down. Go for an outing or an outing, let your mind stretch in nature, don't care about such troubles, let yourself calm down and let the heavy mental load disappear in the time left for yourself. (Explain why you should leave a blank in your life) Leave a blank in your life and let your thoughts be released. A sunny afternoon, or a rainy morning, sitting alone in the corner of the room, is there a cup of green tea? Throw away your books, throw away your troubles, and let your imagination wander in time and space. Like a monk. Sakyamuni lived under the bodhi tree for many years, leaving a big gap in his life. In our view, this is a waste and a luxury, but he finally became a Buddha and was told and admired by the world. (Explain why you should leave a blank space in your life) "Life is like a clock, and its perfection lies not in walking fast, but in walking accurately." This is exactly the artistic conception that I want to convey in this painting that I carefully ponder in my hand. (quote. One of the meanings of accuracy is to leave a blank in life, which is not a waste of time, but a better start for us. (Summarizing the full text and expounding the dialectical relationship between blank space and writing) [Comment] is a good argumentative paper that meets the requirements of horizontal discussion. The full text is the structure of the standard argumentative essay of "asking questions-asking questions-solving problems". Clear arguments and clear thinking. The disadvantage is that the beginning is too long. Briefly, it is in the second paragraph, the second group chooses 1 to explain our views and phenomena, and make good use of the Great Wall of Class 4, Grade 1. Although the time is short, it shows the beauty of life incisively and vividly; The meteor passed by, fleeting, but left a beautiful trace. -Emperors will inscribe inscriptions, earning both fame and fortune. These radiant words are dazzling. But as time goes by, they are all washed away without a trace. Faced with this, we should not lament that life is fleeting, but should be able to grasp the time. Time is fair to everyone, and being able to make good use of time is a necessary condition for success. To learn to make good use of time, we should cherish it and don't waste every minute. When Lu Xun 12 was studying in Shaoxing private school, his father was seriously ill and his two younger brothers were still young. Lu Xun not only often goes to pawn shops and pharmacies, but also helps his mother with housework. In order not to affect his studies, he had to make accurate arrangements. Since then, Lu Xun has been squeezing time almost every day. He said, "Time is like water in a sponge. As long as it is crowded, there is always something. " Because of his extensive knowledge, time is very important to him, and it is precisely because of his practice of "always early, everything is early" that he has become an immortal monument in the literary world. To learn to make good use of time, we must face ups and downs bravely and move towards the set goals. "Where there is a will, there is a way. If you cross the rubicon, 120 Qin Guan will eventually return to Chu; Hard-working people, the sky pays off, go forward bravely, and 3,000 Yue families can swallow Wu. " This is Pu Songling's understanding of the value of life. He failed again and again in his attempts. Faced with repeated blows, he found time to write Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio. Thus, the representative works of classical Chinese novels came out. A frustrated scholar shows the value of life by making good use of time. Learn to make good use of time, don't lament the shortness of life, but create a wonderful life. Yue Fei, a national hero, was killed in Fengbo Pavilion. He is only 39 years old. In the prime of life, God left him too little time. However, in the troubled autumn when the Jin people invaded and the court was partial, he stabbed "Loyalty and Serving the Country" and wrote "Return My Rivers and Mountains", chanting "Don't wait, the young man's head is white and sad." Determined to resist gold, Jin people marveled that "it is easy to shake the mountain, but difficult to shake the Yue family!" His short life is the essence of concentration. How much time did God give us? I don't know and I don't need to know. Make good use of time, our life can also be like a meteor, like a epiphyllum, showing infinite value in a limited time. [Comment] The three sub-arguments are developed at different levels and depths. These three examples all emphasize the time factor, and they should be convincing around the argument. 2. Make good use of time. Class 18 Xie passed away silently with memories yesterday, quietly arrived with hope today, and waited for people brilliantly tomorrow. Some people are immersed in memories and nostalgic for yesterday; Some people are intoxicated in their dreams and look forward to tomorrow. These two kinds of people have forgotten that what should be cherished most is the preciousness of today. (contrast. The key to making good use of time lies in "cherishing today". "Tomorrow is tomorrow, and there are so many tomorrows. I will wait for tomorrow, and everything will be wasted. " A few short poems, however, contain great philosophy and are the crystallization of bitter life experiences of predecessors. The ancients felt this, so they had diligent stories of "hanging the beam and stabbing the stocks", "driving away the snow" and "stealing the wall lightly". Now, shouldn't we cherish today and seize every minute? I still remember some time before the middle school entrance examination, I wrote this sentence on the pencil box to motivate myself and warn myself: to seize today is to seize a bright future. Smart and diligent people deeply understand that time is life, even more precious than life. They will never waste today's precious time for tomorrow. Edison, the great inventor, always cherished time. He used his spare time reported in the car to do experiments. He drank a glass of cold water when he was thirsty. If you are hungry, chew a piece of bread; Sleepy, take a nap at my desk ... Newton, Madame Curie, Einstein and other accomplished people are so good at using their time, working hard and doing more things with less time than ordinary people, which makes them go further than their contemporaries. On the contrary, for some people, time represents the calendar of their lives. They always think that there will be another one after tearing up this one, so they have been watching idly all their lives. If people spend their lives like this, the years that have passed will be like a sad tragedy. What remains in personal memory can only be regrets, pains and tears. I used to think that "tomorrow is tomorrow" led to "everything will be wasted" I also lost no time in saying to myself when I was burning the midnight oil, "Forget it, it's late, it's time to rest", and I specially told my grandfather to "wake me up early tomorrow morning" before going to bed. However, first, yes, I always look forward to tomorrow, and I always look forward to finishing all my courses tomorrow. I have wasted too much time in slackness, complacency and waste. But in the face of the passage of time, what's the use of covering it with your hands? Didn't it just rush off the cover again? "Don't wait for leisure, it's sad for nothing." I still have time, I can work hard, I can race against time, I won't lose. (This paragraph and the previous paragraph are repetitive and meaningless. In view of the phenomenon that young people generally waste time and delay time, compare the advantages and disadvantages, and explain the harm and achievements. 3. Make good use of the forest in Class 1 13.

French thinker Voltaire once had an abstruse mystery: "What is the longest, shortest, fastest, slowest, most divisible, least valued and most regrettable thing in the world?": Without it, nothing can be done; It makes all small things disappear and all great things endless. " Have you guessed? It is time. Time is the most wonderful mixture of human beings. It can make people rich and famous, enjoy the vast world, browse the magnificent mountains and rivers, savor the trickle, watch the ebb and flow of the tide, and have no regrets. Time is also an invisible killer of human beings, falling autumn leaves, stumbling old people, exhausted old people, yellowing old photos, time ruthlessly turns childishness into old age, and innocence into old age. In the face of changeable time, should we complain and waste time, or should we seize the time and make good use of it?

Making good use of time means making good use of wealth. Bill, the richest man in the world? Gates will be completely closed for a few weeks every year, thinking only about those important technical issues and excluding all external interference. In this way, he became the richest man in the world. Because he made good use of time and knew how to use it rationally, he used the gap of time to create a lot of wealth. There is a German proverb that says, "Time is the most precious of all natural gifts." Time is always our most precious wealth. Once it is lost, it will never come back. Therefore ... each of us should be a miser of time and cherish every minute. If we can't be good masters of making good use of time, we can only sigh for the time we lost, and even pay for it. Therefore, making good use of time means making good use of wealth.

Making good use of time is to create value. Many years ago, before the United States, Franklin, one of the pioneers, scientists, industrialists and movement leaders of the American Enlightenment, included two proverbs that were widely circulated and caused a sensation in the United States in his book road to riches: "Time is life" and "Time is money". In the early 1990s, a youth delegation from China and Liaoning attended a meeting in Japan. Before going abroad, the head of the delegation prepared a thick stack of speeches, but the meeting schedule handed over by Japanese officials at that time read: "Chinese speaking time: 10: 17: 20 to 18: 20." The speaking time is only one minute. This seems incredible to people who read newspapers for half a day with a cup of tea and a cigarette, but it is very common in Japan. From workers to scholars, Japan has a strong sense of time. Their basic criterion for assessing workers' incompetence is the amount of labor per unit time on the premise of ensuring quality, and the time is generally accurate to the second. Therefore, although time can be ruthless, as long as you know how to follow the footsteps of time closely, the god of luck will follow you, accompany you to create wealth and give fame.

Making good use of time means being kind to life. The French writer Balzac compares time to capital, while the German poet Fred regards time as his own property. Mr. Lu Xun has a deeper understanding of time. He said, "Time is life. Consuming other people's time for no reason is actually tantamount to killing people for money. " After Faraday's middle age, in order to save time, he devoted himself to scientific creation, strictly controlled himself, refused to participate in all activities unrelated to science, and even resigned as the president of the Royal Academy of Sciences. In history, those great masters of science and literature who have created a lot of material wealth and spiritual wealth for mankind have not made their lives rich and meaningful by "cherishing time"? Zhang Haidi, an excellent team member, mastered several foreign languages such as Japanese, English and Esperanto in a short time, and completed the translation work in seaside clinic. A physically disabled person, why can life bloom so brilliantly? Because she seized every minute of the rich time, she could make her limited life glow with infinite brilliance.

The footsteps of time are silent, spring goes and spring comes, and the sky is spinning, and youth will rest in an instant. As middle school students, we should cherish time and make good use of it. 4. Make good use of time (10) Wu Keying should not only seize every minute of the day, but also grasp the important moments in time. -Inscription Li Taibai once said: "Time waits for no one, and it becomes silk in an instant." Time is a familiar and unfamiliar concept. We spend it every day, but we can't tell exactly where it goes. But there is no doubt that if you want to achieve something, you must make good use of your time. So, how to make good use of time? Making good use of time means making a suitable plan. A day is twenty-four hours, and how to allocate it is an art. First, you should write a plan for the day and put the important things first. This can not only avoid top-heaviness, but also reduce the waste of time and spend more energy on useful things. At the same time, some trivial things can also be done. If it takes up too much time, it will be a waste. We often complain that we can't finish our homework. If we plan ahead and finish one thing at a time, maybe we can do more and more important things at the same time, which is like putting a big stone in a cup first, so that it can hold more gravel and water. To make good use of time is to learn to use "corner time". "Don't say inch Yin short, hard to get again. It's hard to be white without a trace. " Time often slips away inadvertently, so we should know how to make good use of sporadic time. Every day, there will always be free moments. Some people let it pass in vain in a daze, while others grasped this short few minutes. Take high school students as an example. After ten minutes of recess, relax first, then you can recall the knowledge of the last class and review it in time. You can recite ancient poems or words when waiting in line in the canteen, instead of just standing; Sitting on the bus home, you can also take out the outline and browse it, right in your head. Use your small time effectively and don't memorize every minute, so you will find that life has become full in the past. Making good use of time is to improve your work efficiency. Mr. Lu Xun told us that time is like water in a sponge. As long as you are willing to squeeze, there is always something. But it's no use just squeezing out enough water. We must know how to improve efficiency. What is done in two hours will never be put off for two and a half hours. Today's task will never wait until tomorrow. Take every minute seriously and devote yourself wholeheartedly. In this way, the efficiency will naturally improve and the use of time will definitely be higher. Making good use of time is not running around the clock, but doing the most useful things with the least time, so that we will not feel that life is short, but that life is long and beautiful. People are used to chagrin the past and fantasize about the future, but they often ignore today. Make good use of time. From now on, let your life shine because you have grasped the time. The third group of essays, 1, the speed is higher than one (10), and Chen Si's art of war says that "the soldiers are expensive and fast" is about the speed of fighting; The proverb "haste makes waste" and "haste makes waste" tells the true meaning of slowness. "Fast" and "slow" are like a pair of enemies, each with its own half. And I said that speed has its own advantages, and the combination of speed and speed is the best policy. (Simply quote materials and put forward your own opinions) (The following points describe the respective values and functions of fast and slow) Fast is a symbol. It represents the pace of the times. This is the only way to walk in the fast-paced today. We pursue speed and speed, and come and go in a hurry. Although sometimes we are helpless, we also enjoy it. Look at how much high morale has been inspired by the "Shenzhen speed" since the reform and opening up; Watching games again and again, Bolt and Phelps used speed to conquer opponents, audiences and write history again and again. Fast is a kind of progress, a kind of ability and an art, and we are closely following it, feeling the breath and charm of fast step by step. We need to hurry. We have to hurry. Slow is a kind of accumulation. Don't look back at the modern history of China defeated by slowness, and don't worry that "quickness" will cool the warmth of the world. Walking through Qian Shan to play with water, slowness has already precipitated a coolness, which has made an open mind. Chew slowly, carve carefully, and slowly create eternal fine products, and slow fire is enough. It took 13 years for Sima Qian to write Historical Records, 19 years for Sima Guang to write History as a Mirror, and 20 years for Li Shizhen to write Compendium of Materia Medica. Cao Xueqin dreamed of a dream of red mansions for ten years ... this masterpiece was completed in this way. Openness and wisdom in slowness have already penetrated into the drip. Enjoy slowly, enjoy slowly, brew slowly, and gain a calm attitude towards life. As we all know, the perfect combination of fast and slow is a kind of wisdom and an art of life. While enjoying the fast and slow, we should find their intersection. (Further clarify and improve your own point of view) (The following is demonstrated from two angles) The Chu River and the Han Dynasty, officials and horses, each show their magical powers. Is "pawn" fierce or "car" fierce? One step at a time, but also brave, never looking back, fearless. What can you do if you go deep into the hinterland? This car is very aggressive and on the rampage. Anyone who sees it is afraid of three points. But in the bonfire battlefield, everyone is indispensable, and no one can tell whether it is fast or slow. At this time, the battlefield is the combination of the strength of the car and the soldiers, the speed is complementary, and the front is in charge. (The combination of different roles is fast or slow) Is it faster to read a good book or chew words? Read quickly in one breath, grasp the main idea of the text and understand the essence; Read slowly, feel between the lines and feel the subtlety between the lines. Obviously, both are indispensable, and each has its own advantages. This is the wisdom of unity. A lot of things in life go hand in hand with speed. Controlling rhythm and speed is a superb knowledge and wisdom. You can't blindly pursue speed or slow beat. When we are fast, we are fast, and when we are slow, we are slow. You know, the right speed is the real state. (Summarize the general situation extended to life) Our life needs a combination of fast and slow, and so does life. Grasp the balance between fast and slow, and you are the real winner. (once again, the argument is strong. ) [Comment] Chen Si's article is clear in organization and perfect in structure, which is the best example of college entrance examination composition. At the end of the first article, point out the argument at three points. Deduct the topic. The middle part is developed in strict accordance with the relational proposition. Firstly, the respective value functions of fast and slow are expounded, and then the dialectical relationship between them is expounded, and my own views are put forward. When demonstrating that speed is indispensable, it is discussed from two angles, from ranking and reading examples to the height of life. Zhang Shou is measured, organized and level. What is lacking is the lack of examples of slow opening and wisdom, and the lack of hierarchical development. 2, fast and slow grade one (10) class Ouyun rushes forward, which is not suitable for trickle, just like Jing Ya Spring is not suitable for swallowing the sea. -Inscription The eagle is obsessed with the galloping in the clear autumn, but the wild crane is endowed with the tranquility of walking in the mountains. Fast and slow can determine the attitude and height of life. However, there is always a flurry of floating clouds to help me untie the Liuhe River, and there is always calm and caress when I am angry, so that I can wake up, and only with a moderate combination of speed and speed can I appreciate the early Xiaoyun on the coastline, which is deeply hidden in the flowers. (figuratively speaking, start a topic quickly and then slowly and put forward an argument. ) Sun Tzu's art of war always pays attention to the speed of soldiers, and Yuan soldiers used speed to break through the layers of checkpoints in the Southern Song Dynasty. Speed seems to be the heaviest burden on a soldier's shoulders. Until the end of their lives, they have the right to walk slowly and see the end of the day, but they don't know where the township gate is. There is a saying on the court: "whoever controls the speed will control the whole game." In this age controlled by speed, speed is like the exit of life. The rapid rise of tall buildings and the ever-changing things have become a natural balance. Hands move quickly on the keyboard, and emails that can be sent quickly in a short time have disdained to wipe away the dust of the red lettering journey. (Three common cases presented quickly are the basis for promoting slow life. However, looking at the gentlemen who pursued fame and fortune all their lives but were abandoned in the corner of history, watching the loneliness and helplessness of Genghis Khan, the grassland overlord who rode wild horses into Europe, and watching the exquisite makeup of white-collar workers walking on the edge of the city, they can't help but feel sorry: the urgent March on the road of life made them miss a lot of scenery of life. Give three more examples to point out the shortcomings and shortcomings of fast life, and get motivation for slow life again, right? Isn't the tortoise better at telling the scenery on the road than the rabbit? Bi Shumin said, in fact, the years have been passing. Will today's gains become tomorrow's losses forever? (A fable, a quotation explaining the value of slowness) So, where do we put slowness-the idle clouds, the clear spring and the spice of life? I want to tell a story: there was a man who was very afraid of his own shadow. He kept running every day, but no matter how fast he ran, the shadow always followed him, and soon he died of exhaustion. An old man sighed and said, "In fact, it's easy to get rid of your own shadow. Just find a cool place to sit down and rest. " The words of elders are meaningful and meaningful, and the wisdom of elders in life is beyond the reach of many people. The twists and turns in writing illustrate the necessity of slow stories for the elderly. Each of us needs a slow pace. When you are tired, just slow down and walk, or have a cup of floating green ants, or make tea with green tea, and make the pine music into the melody of the sky and compose it into our own chords, so that the tranquility behind us can render the prosperity of life step by step. With the rapid development of the city, the wind came and the ship moved. (Put forward opinions) Combine fast and slow, arrange time properly, do things seriously at a determined speed, and taste life with Koizumi's indifference. (Explain the relationship between fast and slow again and improve the argument) You will find that in the distant and desolate world of birds, perhaps only the dust and sand lying quietly are its only dry food. (The conclusion is elegant, the image is implicit and thought-provoking) [Comment] Ou Yun has read a lot of books, and his articles are eloquent and full of wonderful pictures. The advantage of the article comes from this: rich association. Brilliant literary talent, subtle and chic; Disadvantages also arise from this: the viewpoint is not very clear, and some narratives are miscellaneous, repetitive or irrelevant to the central performance. In this way, the idea needs the reader to be organized, and the external inundates the internal, and the form is greater than the content. This article has the characteristics of lyrical and argumentative prose, which is very distinctive and unique. Getting a high score in the exam is a good embryo, which the average student can't reach. But poor development will make you go downhill. Therefore, we should pay attention to strengthening the training of thinking and expression, that is, the training of logical thinking in argumentative writing. Only by organically combining rationality and sensibility can we become excellent works.