Dai wangshu. Worried.

It is said to be the sadness of lonely autumn.

It is said to be acacia in the far sea.

If someone asks me what I'm worried about

I dare not say your name.

I dare not say your name.

If someone asks me what I'm worried about

It is said to be acacia in the far sea.

It is said to be the sadness of lonely autumn.

Netizen appreciates:

1. Iron fence: The glorious period of modern new poetry was around the May 4th Movement. The new poetry absorbs the rhythm of ancient poetry and is full of musical sense, which makes it easier to express feelings and feelings in vernacular Chinese.

During this period, many famous writers wrote new poems in vernacular Chinese, and Dai Wangshu was one of the famous "Huxiang poets" careerists. The difference between these poets' new poems and the advocates of new poems at the same time is that they not only use vernacular Chinese, but also attach great importance to the charm of poetry. Dai Wangshu's "worry" tone is tortuous, just like this feeling of worry in the poem.

Chang Gui: This is the most pertinent analysis I have seen on the Internet. Simple and clear, consistent with the background. ]

2. Author: Your autumn

People without stories only have broken thoughts. They just haven't tried, and they are so afraid of disturbing a person's happiness that they can't let go. If they can, I hope I can go back ten years and meet you again. Because I can't, I can only write this little random text, for you and for myself.

dusk

I'm afraid of dusk, I'm afraid of being late, I'm afraid of getting darker and darker rooms and confused thoughts. So a few simple conversations became the initial stumbling block. I know, I know that you are also disappointed, just disappointed. Emptiness floods like a tide, accompanied by darkness. Waiting for sleep, waiting for dawn, waiting for day after day to fill up. A small window pops up on the screen, you never know.

autumn

It is raining. It rained in spring. It's warm and cold at first sight. You said you like autumn. The cycle of the four seasons slips quietly between your fingers. You can't count how many days there are. There is a word you don't want to touch, but you will lose it if you are afraid of touching it. But you still can't help asking. At that moment, you answered, but why is it just such a moment? Although it was only that time, I remember it carefully and I was very happy. Forget how humble I am, and only face you with a soft side. It seems unforgivable to others. Because of you, everyone has become happy.

fidget

Since when has life become a life without a foundation? Your despair is mine, too Sometimes staring at the wall in a daze, will you die if you hit it? Look at the rope, a lot of sleeping pills. Not for anything, not for anything. Probably just for boredom. But I can't. I'm alive.

song

Is Song the only bright color in life? You listen, so I listen. People in Fengge. "When you come from the wind, you will never stop …", I think it's you. A frowning teenager, a teenager as sensitive as a wind chime. A distant country, a distant city, watching you go away. The moon represents your heart, and you sing it to her. Looking at your attachment from a distance, I feel that you are strong and hazy. That is. Twist the dull pain a little, just like a wound, which is amazing.

then

Understand you slowly. Slowly decide it's time to end it. You have already felt the danger. It's empty and vague, but it's really pervasive. The more you talk, the more attachment you get. It gradually turned into pain, so you slowly cut off the connected clues. You are afraid to disturb you and your girl. The net you knitted. Slowly, I think it is recovery.

Chang Gui: Here, the author allows more feelings to express harmony with poetry.

3. Faint homesickness: The format expression of this poem is cyclic repetition, showing readers their embarrassing feelings. I like the beautiful rhyme of this poem, which reads harmoniously and smoothly.

4. Unknown: Appreciation of masterpieces

In the history of China literature, the poet Dai Wangshu is undoubtedly a unique existence. He wrote a small number of poems (but more than 100), but he occupied an important position in the poetry world. He has no systematic poetics, but his Zero Zagreb Poetics and Wang Shu Poetics compiled by his friend Du Heng are highly praised. He appeared as a modernist in poetry, but at the end of his life, he wrote a real chapter soaked with blood and tears.

Dai Wangshu has his own position in the history of new poetry, but his position is not very high.

Around the May 4th Movement, the torrent of science and democracy awakened generations of intellectuals. The fierce contradiction between the beautiful ideal and the dark reality enveloped their sensitive hearts. The sense of social mission of "knowing what you can't do" has enveloped a huge "worry" group. Dai Wangshu is one of the most faithful worries in the world from the real world to poetry. He wrote many worried poems, and this poem is excellent.

This poem comes from Dai Wangshu's collection of poems, Wang Shucao. As an important poet of "Modernism" school in China in 1930s, Dai Wangshu's poems focus on describing the spiritual track of modern people's life perception and emotional experience. In the journey of life, there are sunshine-like euphoria and excitement, as well as rainy-day sadness and troubles. So, what are the worries that are smouldering in the poet's mind at the moment? The poet didn't show it directly.

Clear autumn is the season of pregnant people, and the sea is full of endless lovesickness, which makes people sad to read. Coupled with "loneliness" and "remoteness", the poet's lonely and helpless lovesickness is more profound and detailed, and a feeling of "heartbroken people in the end of the world" arises spontaneously. However, in this sad and lonely situation, the author had a whim and someone asked him. Do you want to come clean, tell each other all your worries, or keep it a secret? Although you have the freedom to choose, but you are asked by a caring friend, can you play dumb? So, how to express this embarrassing psychology? "I dare not say your name." The word "dare not" does express the author's ambivalence and leads the reader to endless reverie. The above four sentences, just 36 words, vividly describe the author's deep nostalgia, fierce struggle, the taste of "wanting to say goodbye" and unforgettable acacia, which is both meaningful and intense.

The following four sentences, the above four sentences are reversed. They are rough and seemingly palindrome poems, but they are not simple repetitions, nor are they as mysterious as gestures. Instead, the author's endless and increasingly surging thoughts are indulged and vented. The first sentence is like repetition and truth, and contact and concern are impenetrable. Although it is fierce and contradictory, it is so urgent to pour out his feelings. The author provides us with a broad imagination space, so you might as well have a perceptual fugue here. The whole poem ends with "relieving worries", but it just expresses the unusual way for mature thinkers to express their complex mentality in the popular language of "crisp autumn".

The whole poem consists of two groups of eight sentences, which are symmetrically arranged, orderly in form and harmonious in syllables. This is the result that the author is deeply influenced by China's traditional cultural metrical poems. The rhyme of the first four sentences sets an opportunity for the repetition of the last four sentences, so it is catchy to read and gives people a pleasant feeling of leaving fragrance on their teeth and cheeks.

Chang Gui: This is a search in Baidu. We should analyze the successful and thorough poetry criticism from the background and subjectivity of the poet and the poetry trend at that time. This evaluation is more in line with reality. The first few paragraphs are well-founded and well-analyzed, but there is a suspicion of exaggeration in the back. The author imposed some personal feelings. For example, this sentence: "More and more surging thoughts are being vented" is actually a poem with a strong sense of rhythm.

5. Presenting a tortuous emotional world in the form of palindrome poems.

-Dai Wangshu's "Trouble"

Author: long river sunset

This poem comes from Dai Wangshu's collection of poems, Wang Shucao. As an important poet of "Modernism" school in China in 1930s, Dai Wangshu's poems focus on describing the spiritual track of modern people's life perception and emotional experience. In the journey of life, there are sunny euphoria and excitement, as well as rainy worries. So, what are the worries that are smouldering in the poet's mind at the moment? The poet did not show it directly, but lied to people that it was the trouble caused by nature, which was due to the change of time and space: in time, it was the sadness of autumn ("the melancholy of lonely autumn"); In space, it is the memory of a distant place ("the memory of the distant sea"). In fact, the poet knows that these worries are only illusions, and the real cause of anxiety comes from the pursuit of love. It is the memory of "you" and the confusion about the love between "you" and "me", which has caused endless troubles and worries in my heart.

This love poem adopts a unique expression form of palindrome. The second paragraph of the poem is exactly the same as the first paragraph, but the arrangement is reversed to form a palindrome. This palindrome writing not only describes the poet's emotional cycle, but also explains the poet's lingering thoughts, vividly depicting the poet's infatuation with love and the pain of love. This palindrome expression reflects poetry.