(1) Comprehension of materials

This question is an essay question about "the title is derived from the material". The material includes examples and explanations. The entrepreneur's example is that "taking one more step" will bring success. The explanation part points out that "taking one more step" has three results: it may bring success, it may have no effect, and it may cause harm. Generally speaking, "going the extra mile" means being more meticulous, thoughtful, tenacious, and persistent than others. It means paying attention to details, pursuing perfection, persevering, and going all out. No matter life, study or work, no matter individual, group or country, if you take "one more step" in the right direction, it may be easier to achieve your goals. It should be said that "going one more step" is a positive attitude towards life and the right way to do things. Therefore, this sentence has become a popular inspirational quote. The second result is that the effort is not proportional to the gain. Although you take one more step, you still cannot change the result. This situation may be a more common reality, but it does not negate the value of "taking one more step" because the effort may not be enough. Gain, but if you don’t pay, there will be no gain. As for the third result, it should be said that it goes beyond the daily meaning of "taking one more step" and can only be understood as taking a step that should not be taken on the wrong path, such as being greedy and greedy without distinction between right and wrong.

(2) Understanding the title

As a daily spoken language, "take one more step" has two meanings. One is that it actually means taking one more step, and the other is a metaphor that an action can be stopped. There is no stopping, something should end but does not end. When most people think it can be stopped and should end, there is a follow-up action, an exceptional measure. In this title, it can only be understood as a metaphor, because the composition material talks about the relationship between "taking one more step" and success. In other words, this is a metaphorical title. Although the metaphorical meaning is usually very simple, as long as it is a metaphorical title, there is a question of what the actual meaning is. If this actual meaning is not expressed in words, it must be clearly understood by readers.

(3) Grading levels

From a content perspective, the four levels are grasped according to the following standards:

Category 1 paper: ① "Take one more step "The meaning of the metaphor is clear, or it can be written directly, or it can be understood; ② "Go one more step" has a comparison object: either "go one more step" than others, or "go one more step" than before, etc.; ③ "Go one more step" Use "success" or "failure" as the background, and be able to understand the title in conjunction with the material.

Category II paper: The connotation of "going the extra mile" is not accurately grasped. Compared with Category I paper, one or two aspects are not written clearly enough.

Type 3 papers: Compared with Type 1 papers, there are obvious deviations in one or two aspects;

Type 4 papers: The focus is not on writing "going one more step".

(4) Example

Take one more step

Life is a road with no end in sight, and the distance is what every dream chaser dreams of In paradise, people always think that the next stop will have more beautiful scenery and more touching stories. However, as everyone knows, the next stop may be full of thorns, and the next stop may not necessarily bring spring flowers.

Sometimes, if you take one more step, you may miss happiness.

Plato was looking for the true meaning of love on the fields filled with the fragrance of rice. He always thought that there were bigger and fuller ears of rice ahead, so he gave up the choice in his heart again and again. As a result, when he finished walking When we reached the ridge of the field, we were actually empty-handed. Taking one more step made him miss the most beautiful choice.

If a great and wise philosopher is like this, ordinary people like us will naturally be trapped in this "strange circle of hope". Therefore, we are busy with two things throughout our lives: saying goodbye and searching. With the belief that "if you take one more step, you will succeed," we ran forward persistently, running through the spring when birds were singing and the fragrance of flowers, and through the fruitful autumn. In the end, what greeted us was boundless and desperate darkness. Only then did we realize that we had missed the most beautiful scenery in life while running.

Life is not an arena. Taking one more step will not gain you points, but will make you miss out on countless beautiful things.

Life is like a novel, what matters is not the length, but the depth. In today's society, people are impetuous. Everyone wants to go one step further than others. They all think that going fast and far means success. So now "house slaves" and "car slaves" are constantly emerging. There are crowds of people walking in a hurry on the streets, and there are tired-looking white-collar workers in the subway. In order to take one more step, you have to give up all the leisure and comfort in your life, which is not worth the gain.

Taiwanese writer Shu Yuanzhi is an interesting "eccentric" who chose to leave the literary world when he was still young and famous, unwilling to take another step on the road to fame. He began to wander, going to the United States, Switzerland, and England... His life was rich but also simple, and his words were concise and meaningful. He took a few fewer steps on the road to fame and money, but the avenue of his life became broader and richer as a result.

The wisest people are not those who go as far as possible, but those who know how to choose and are willing to stay.

When walking on the road of life, don’t just run and focus on speed. Slow down, look at the scenery on both sides, stop and think about your life.

Learn to be content, and beauty is all around you.

Take one more step

In life we ??often need to take one more step.

Take one more step, and the stars in your heart may become brighter; take one more step, and maybe the exit of the maze is just around the corner; take one more step, and you may inadvertently open up the treasures that life has given you.

Taking one more step means putting in a little more sweat than others and requires perseverance. Setting the alarm five minutes early every morning means taking one step more than others; warming up in advance for each training session and leaving the field at the end means taking one step more than others; making full use of every free moment and never letting it go means walking one more step than others. step. And if you want to persevere in these for a long time, you must have perseverance, determination and perseverance to grind an iron pestle into a needle. And every extra step you take, once accumulated, can help you achieve success.

Taking one extra step requires not only sweat, but also wisdom. Because taking the extra step is not reckless, but skillful. To take one more step, we need to analyze our own shortcomings clearly. Only by taking such a step can we make up for our shortcomings. Otherwise, it is very likely to go the other way. To take an extra step, we need to clearly understand the road conditions ahead. Just like in a war, we must first understand the enemy's movements before we can deploy tactics. Taking an extra step blindly will only get ourselves into a minefield. Think carefully, and every small step imprinted with wisdom will turn into a river and flow into the sea.

"If you don't walk today, you have to run tomorrow." Taking one more step is paying for the future. There is a motto in the Harvard University library: "If you don't walk today, you will run tomorrow." And the students at Harvard University are very diligent and take every small step that is unknown to others. From the packed seats at four o'clock in the morning, to the other "alternative libraries" in addition to the 100 libraries. It is precisely because Harvard people have the foresight to contribute to the future and are willing to go one step further than others that Harvard's ranking among world universities is determined.

Take one more step to achieve success. "Almighty Soldier" He Xiangmei used his actions to prove to us the power of going the extra step. "When you are a soldier, you must be a soldier who can fight." For his own ideals, he devoted himself to the study of sea, land and air amphibious operations. In addition to hard training, I read a lot of books to improve my knowledge and strength. Finally, he went from the "King of Guns" to the "Almighty Special Forces". He could climb mountains and seas, fly in the sky and escape from the earth, and was omnipotent. Every step he took contributed to his success.

Take one more step, insist on putting in a little more sweat every day, insist on thinking carefully before every step, and think that you are paying for the future. Take one more step, why not?

Take one more step

On this one-way road of life, no one can tell us whether the front is the singing of birds and the fragrance of flowers or the abyss of abyss. If we stop here, we will never know what lies ahead, but if we take one more step, we may be able to achieve success.

If you take one more step amidst difficulties, you may be able to see the dawn of success.

China's Got Talent winner Liu Wei once said: "I can either die quickly or live wonderfully." When he lost his arms and seemed unable to realize his musical dream, Liu Wei struggled in this difficult situation Only by bravely taking one more step did he achieve the success of playing beautiful music with his feet on the keys. Similarly, Wang Baoqiang achieved success by taking an extra step and continuing to use his livelihood money to promote himself when he sent out a hundred personal information but was still not selected.

On the road of life full of thorns, everyone is hit by difficulties and finds it difficult to take another step forward. However, only by experiencing "hard work, tired muscles, hungry body, and empty body" can we make it possible Realize the "ambition of the swan". Take one more step in the face of difficulties, success is just ahead.

If you take an extra step in cooperation, you may be able to reap the fruits of a win-win situation.

The famous musician Schubert lived in such poverty before he became famous that he did not even have the money to buy paper for his creations. One day, Mahler saw Schubert in such a condition, and immediately used the paper and ink he just bought to draw a staff and gave it to Schubert so that Schubert could continue to compose music. Mahler later said that the best work he ever painted was the staff given to Schubert.

If you go the extra mile in cooperation, sometimes you not only give others the opportunity to realize their dreams, but you may also benefit a lot from it. In today's society, it is difficult for a person to succeed. If you take one more step in cooperation, the ladder to success will appear in front of you.

If you take one more step in the competition, you may be able to reach the pinnacle of success.

The famous scientist Tesla invented alternating current, but he had different opinions with Edison, who supported direct current, and thus started the "Current War". It was in this competition that Tesla went one step further and improved alternating current, finally realizing long-distance power transmission and allowing alternating current to enter the homes of ordinary people.

In today's increasingly competitive society, everyone desires success, and in order to stand out, it is particularly important to take an extra step in the competition. Just like "one small step for the moon, one giant leap for mankind", the distance taken one extra step is not just a few meters in length, but the height that connects reality and dreams. Only by taking an extra step in the competition can you stand out and stand out from the crowd.

The gorgeous rainbow always comes after the storm. The goddess of luck always favors those who work hard for their ideals. Fruitful fruits are always produced under the simultaneous action of multiple factors. In the face of difficulties and competition, , take one more step in cooperation, and the ideal sailing boat will lead us to the other side of success.

Other literary and genre appreciation

Take one more step (small novel)

This is the last "Guest Forum" program at the end of the year. I specially invited three Guests from different industries come to talk about a topic program.

When talking about his successful experience, an entrepreneur said: ‘I just took an extra step. ’ Yes, if you take one more step on the road of life, you may achieve success. However, sometimes taking an extra step won't change anything, and may even bring bad results. "I paused for a moment and then looked at the expressions of the three guests with a smile and continued, "'Going one more step' has advantages and disadvantages. Please speak freely based on your own life experience and insights. ”

“When it comes to ‘taking one more step’, I have the most to say. That year, I graduated from college and went south to Guangzhou to find a job with unlimited hopes. When I was waiting at the train station, I put my luggage on the bench where passengers were sitting. I looked after my luggage while curious about the scenery outside, because Guangzhou was so attractive. It was my first time here again, so I moved away from my luggage step by step. When I came to my senses, my luggage had already disappeared. This ‘taking that extra step’ taught me such a profound lesson that I have my college diploma in my duffel bag! Mr. A shook his head and said, "That's not all. It rained all night when the house leaked. I walked out of the train station dejectedly. Within a few minutes, a health inspector handed me a fine of ten yuan. He said that I didn't "go the extra mile" to put the waste paper into the trash can and threw it on the ground. ”

“Mr. A’s first trip to Guangzhou was indeed unforgettable! "I said it very seriously, but everyone couldn't help looking at Mr. A and laughing.

"It's really unforgettable. This time'taking one more step' is better than my ten years of studying. This kind of education completely destroyed the bad habits that had been stored in my bones for many years. The creed of "taking a step back to open up the world" that I had just begun to firmly believe has encountered a serious challenge. It is really "a dilemma." Mr. A said with a wry smile.

“I also learned a profound lesson, but just the opposite of Mr. A, when I first came to Guangzhou, just because I took one more step, I found an ideal job that my classmates dreamed of. Work. We went to the units where we submitted our application letters for several days to inquire whether we were admitted, but each unit disappointed us. The next day, several exhausted classmates did not want to continue and decided to go home. But I was unwilling to accept it, thinking that if I took one more step, I might have hope. The next day, I took one more step and was actually accepted by a foreign-funded company. "Mr. B rushed to take over the topic, and he seemed very excited. , that joyful energy was in sharp contrast to Mr. A’s full of grievances.

"Mr. B, if you take one more step, you will achieve your ideal!" I remained serious.

"Yes, if you take one more step, the light is ahead! We must dare to take one more step!" Mr. B said with confidence.

“As for taking one more step, what I saw was a farce: a middle-aged man threw most of the remaining watermelon rinds at the gate, and it happened to land on a passing girl. The girl then yelled and cursed. , 'Can't you take one more step? Throwing things is so rude! 'If you took one more step, how could the watermelon rind fly to you? ' The middle-aged man didn't show any weakness, and the man and woman started to argue with each other. "

"I see, that middle-aged man should be you, right?" As soon as Mr. C finished speaking, the humorous Mr. B couldn't help laughing.

"No, I don't have this kind of self-cultivation. I was just lucky enough to be a bystander." Mr. C said seriously.

“It seems that not ‘taking one more step’ in daily life will often cause some troubles. ‘Take one more step’ has great connotations and is closely related to our daily life. Sometimes taking one more step leads to the realm of It’s all out, sometimes taking one extra step will have disastrous consequences.” Seeing that the half-hour “Guest Forum” program was coming to an end, I decided not to take another step and had no choice but to make my customary summary.

"Yes, yes, the topic chosen today is so meaningful and worthy of our deep thought." Naturally, the guests didn't have the chance to take another step, so they just echoed me and blew the whistle. The forum ended with the charge number.

“I remember a philosopher once said: Compared with 80% of losers, successful people are often one step more confident, one step more diligent, one step more persistent, and one step more optimistic in their mentality. One more step is the difference between 20% of the winners and losers. One more step is heaven! I wish you all a happy life in the future." Amid the sweet sound of the charge horn, I took the opportunity to take another step. step.

The author briefly comments that this article has made some attempts in the following aspects:

First, it strives to meet the meaning of the topic. The article closely follows "taking one more step" to develop the storyline. There are many times in the article The iconic language "go one more step" appears, giving readers a feeling of being asked questions everywhere.

The second is to compose an essay in line with the topic requirement "please combine your own life experience and feelings". The three guests talked about their own personal experiences and insights. And "I" myself experienced and gained insights from the stories of the three guests.

Third, the choice of style is unconventional, using a short novel to adapt the style of guest communication, giving people a refreshing feeling; in particular, it can reflect the different results of "taking one more step" in this style, giving people It provides a comprehensive warning to people.

Fourthly, the content of the article is relatively rich. The three guests talked about their experiences and insights on "taking the extra step" from different perspectives, which not only made the article rich in content, but also authentic and persuasive.

2. Writing training

"Block" is a word that is frequently used in life. It can refer to brave and decisive actions, timely remedial measures, and it can also describe traffic. Not smooth, unhappy...it will trigger a lot of associations and thoughts in you.

Please write an argumentative essay of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Blocking".

Requirements: ① Select the angle; ② Customize the intention