No matter in school or in society, everyone has dealt with composition. Composition is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed and concise language that one can understand to a developed and standardized grammatical structure that others can understand. Still at a loss for composition? The following is my collection of comprehensive practical activities and composition guidance for roaming the Chinese world for reference only. Let's have a look.
Activity purpose:
(1) Through this language activity, guide students to pay attention to language phenomena related to names in life and realize that there are languages everywhere in life.
(2) By collecting stories related to names, such as the origin of city names, titles, names, etc., we can understand the long history, splendid culture and profound writing art of the motherland.
(3) By designing a name for the bookstore and writing advertisements, we can cultivate students' aesthetic ability, develop students' oral language expression ability and teamwork spirit, and make students realize the importance of cooperation. In the process of learning, further cultivate students' independent inquiry spirit.
(4) Guide students to observe life from multiple angles, discover the colorful expressions of the Chinese world, and write their own unique feelings and real experiences about the use of Chinese in social life.
Activity mode:
(1) Group cooperation
(2) Exchange meeting
Activity preparation:
(1) Collect all kinds of stories related to names before the activity.
(2) Prepare colored pens, paper and double-sided tape for designing the store name.
Activity flow:
first kind
I. Activity Import
When each of us was born, our parents gave us a loud and innovative name. These names are auspicious, or entrusted with parents' earnest hopes, and some have a strong cultural atmosphere. The teacher has a friend named (showing a card with a name on it). His name comes from a poem by Zhu. Students, can you guess which poem this is?
Thoughts on reading Zhu
Half an acre of square pond opened, and the sky was overcast.
How can the canal be so clear? Because there is inexhaustible living water for it.
I didn't expect a small name to have so much knowledge, and teachers are particularly interested in students' names. Would you like to introduce your name to the teacher?
Second, students introduce their names.
Student 1: My name is Chai Qiao. Yes, I was born in Chaiqiao. Because my family name is Chai, my parents gave me this name to commemorate this birthplace. Joe is the homonym of Joe, and in this name, my mother's expectations for me are pinned. they
Members of this research group: Wang Jianping, Gan Hongzi, Zhou Xuxia, Zheng, Sun Huiru, Tong, Xu, Wang Jiong, Ma, Ji Xiaobo.
I hope I can grow up healthily and grow tall and straight.
Student 2: My name is Wang Yueyang. Leap means transcendence, ocean, of course! Mom and dad should be proud of me, proud of me and win glory for our motherland.
The students' presentations were wonderful. I think not only teachers but also students must have a deeper understanding. In fact, it's not just our names that are full of stories, in our country, some buildings, some cities and so on. There is a touching story in their names. Many students collected relevant information before the activity, and now they can't wait to introduce it to you. Let's listen together. )
Third, introduce other interesting names.
(1) What I want to introduce to you today is the origin of Yuanmingyuan. I don't suppose you know how this familiar place got its name? Legend has it that Kangxi handed many important tasks to his fourth son Yin Zhen (Yongzheng) in his later years, but Yin Zhen had two fatal weaknesses: First, he was not good at uniting people; Second, the situation is unknown and conclusions are drawn. Kangxi summed up his life's political experience in two words: Yuan and Ming. So he spent a huge sum of money to build lakes and gardens in private gardens in the Ming Dynasty, named it Yuanmingyuan and gave Yin Zhen a plaque to urge Yin Zhen to remember the politics, and today's Yuanmingyuan came into being.
I want to tell you why Guangzhou is also called Yangcheng. According to legend, a long time ago, five immortals came to the world wearing colorful clothes and riding a fairy sheep, each with a six-spike flour and rice, and gave it to the people of Guangzhou, wishing them a bumper harvest every year and no famine. Therefore, Guangzhou is named Yangcheng and Suicheng, or Sui for short.
In China, many cities have aliases. For example, Chongqing is called Mountain City, Harbin is called Ice City, and Guangzhou is called Yangcheng. )
(3) I know the name of the great musician Nie Er. In fact, Nie Er's original name is not Nie Er, but Nie Shouxin. Then how did Nie Er get his name? Here is another interesting story. Nie Er was born with excellent hearing, which can also be said to be a musician's talent. He has not only musical talent, but also acting talent, and is good at imitating the voices and expressions of all kinds of people. Once at a get-together of Yue Ming Song and Dance Troupe, he not only performed dancing, but also imitated the voices of various people. There is also a more exciting program, which shows two ears moving back and forth respectively, which is difficult for ordinary people to do. His behavior made everyone laugh. From then on, he became famous in the song and dance troupe and was recognized as Mr. Er. His good hearing is also one of the reasons for his nickname. At that time, he thought the nickname was humorous, so he simply changed his name to Nie Er and printed ears, ears, ears and ears on his personal note. His name is composed of these four words, which has become a habit, and people have forgotten his original name, Nie Shouxin.
Every day in the street, we can see all kinds of fashionable and beautiful cars. Today, I will introduce the origin of the name car to you. In fact, there was a word "car" in ancient China, referring to the sedan chair pulled by mules and horses. When a large number of western cars entered China, it was the time when closed square cars were popular in the West. At that time, the appearance of cars was as brilliant as that of ancient cars in China. Therefore, people called cars at that time cars.
A Dream of Red Mansions is one of China's four classical novels, also called A Dream of Red Mansions. Why do you call it that? Today, I will tell you the name of the story about the stone: It is said that when Nu Wa tried to mend the sky, she left an unused fragment and threw it under Geng Qingfeng. After exercise, the stone has been spiritualized, but it can be big or small. A monk read it together, and wrote the words "Don't forget, don't forget, immortal Heng Chang" on the stone, and voted to make it Jia Baoyu, the second son of Jia Zheng and Mrs. Wang.
(6) I want to introduce the origin of Baotu Spring. In Liu E's Travels of Lao Can in Qing Dynasty, three springs emerged from the bottom of the pool and rose to two or three feet above the water. According to people at that time, it rose five or six feet high. Because of its spectacular momentum, it is called Baotu Flying and Baotu Spring. Guo Moruo also wrote a poem about Baotu Spring: the underground king formed Baotu Spring. Pearls are everywhere, and gold thread naturally leads. Putian is the first, with a history of 3 thousand? It is a pleasure to know fish in the city, and it is also a happy New Year.
The information collected by students really opened our eyes and benefited us a lot. Just now, the teacher found that many of the students' materials are related to place names. Just now the teacher found several riddles related to the name of the city. Are you interested in guessing? )
Fourth, teachers and students work together in solve riddles on the lanterns.
Next, the teacher asked a classmate to help solve the riddle. You can guess.
Going to sea is a particularly developed city name in our country. (The answer is Shanghai)
Chu Qing Changyu (Guiyang) Four Seasons Warm (Changchun) Man with a Gun (Wuhan)
Five, design shop name and advertising language
A friend of the teacher has opened a bookstore, which will open soon. I haven't decided on a name yet. Let me think of one for you, but I forgot. Would you like to think about the teacher? Design a beautiful store name for her and then make an advertisement for her. Work together in your group. The students acted quickly, prepared paper and colored pens and began to design. Students who have designed it, please post their store names on the blackboard. )
15 minutes later, the whole class designed various forms, and the names of different colors were posted on the blackboard.
There are so many beautiful and personalized names, and the teacher really appreciates everyone. Tell the teacher why it's called this name, will you?
(1) The name designed by our group is Happy Bookstore. We hope everyone has a happy childhood and a happy life, and promote their study step by step through reading. Advertising language: Do you want to be a knowledgeable person? Have you thought about the mysteries of the universe? Please come to Happy Bookstore, where the price is low and piracy is rejected! (The whole class applauds warmly)
(2) The name of the bookstore that we helped the teacher think of is the bookworm's house. People use bookworms to describe people who study hard. I hope everyone who comes to the bookstore is modest and eager to learn, and everyone gains knowledge in the book like a bookworm. Bookworm's home, your home, my home, our home together, come on, during the opening period, all of them will be 30% off. (Applause warmly)
(3) Our name is the Golden Study Room. Everyone has a golden childhood, and the golden sunshine shines on the boundless earth, just like the endless knowledge waiting for you to absorb in the golden study, so we call it the golden study. Advertising language: golden learning takes you to the front, happiness is ahead, go on quickly.
Just now, the teacher found a place called Wuwei Bookstore among many names. We know that the place where Mr. Lu Xun goes to school is called San Tan Yin Yue. I don't know what the students who named the bookstore Wuwei bookstore think. Life has five flavors: sweet and sour, bitter and salty, and we all have to experience it on the road. Just as books bring us different feelings, I hope that no matter what difficulties we encounter, we will go on resolutely, make progress diligently and learn more knowledge.
Conclusion: The students' ideas are ingenious and the designs are beautiful. Thank you on behalf of your friends! I also hope that everyone can continue to absorb the nutrients of knowledge and enrich themselves as the classmate said just now. As the saying goes, there is a road to diligence in Shushan, and there is no limit to learning the sea. The students in this activity class must gain as much as the teachers. In the big world of Chinese, there are still many interesting knowledge we don't know waiting for us to explore. Let's observe carefully with our eyes and discover with our hearts.
Second lesson
In this Chinese activity, the careful preparation and creative performance of each group brought laughter, meditation and insight to everyone, aroused everyone's interest in learning Chinese, displayed the achievements accumulated by students at ordinary times, and reflected the diversity and interest of the Chinese world. I believe that as long as you observe life carefully, you will find more magical and wonderful attractions in the Chinese world. Let's learn to live in Chinese and learn Chinese in life.
1, life is full of China enlightenment for me.
[Thinking Guidance] In life, the phenomenon of using Chinese is everywhere. Oral communication between people; Product description of the goods sold; Enterprise company signboard advertisement; Banners and couplets on holidays; Wedding invitations for weddings; Movies, TV, art and so on. When you face this series of China phenomena, can you be indifferent? Feel Chinese in life and learn Chinese in life. Be a conscientious person in life, listen attentively and think with your head. The vast world of Chinese will show you infinite charm.
Learn Chinese in life.
The concept of Chinese has taught us something that is not involved in the traditional classroom, which is much richer and more wonderful than the traditional classroom.
(1) Feel humanistic care from slogans.
Whether you work happily before coming to the factory, or go home safely, or smile and serve or promise love in the service industry, you can strongly feel a deep warmth and deep love between people, which is one of the important concepts conveyed in Chinese class.
(2) Feel the changes of the times from advertisements and plaques.
In the past, the advertisement was "save the best parts", trying to raise the value of the product itself. Nowadays, advertising is more about acting as your consultant and leaving a deep impression on you from the customer's point of view. Such as wedding advertisements: dress up your face and leave a wonderful life; Kodak film advertising: share this moment, share life, etc.
In the past, store plaques directly showed the business items they sold, such as cloth shops, shoe stores and barber shops. Now most of them are comprehensive and large-scale, such as Bafang Square, Hualian Department Store, Shopping Center and so on. We can strongly feel the progress of society and the development of the times.
(3) Feel a happy life from the language of the masses.
In the past, when people met, the first thing they said was did you eat? This still retains the distinctive characteristics of the era of food and clothing. With the progress of society, this greeting has lost its original meaning, but it has just become a communication language that people are still commonly using. Have you lost weight at present? Did you surf the Internet? Did you travel during the Golden Week? It has become a topic that people often talk about, from people's traditional material needs such as food and clothing to spiritual needs such as health and entertainment. This shows the happiness of life.
There is Chinese in life, and Chinese is learned in life. This is a big classroom for Chinese learning. As long as you pay attention to life, you will learn knowledge and skills that traditional classrooms can't.
[Practice example]
Learn Chinese by watching TV.
Some people think that knowledge is in books and learning is in the classroom, which is wrong. In fact, knowledge exists not only in books and classes, but also in textbooks of real life.
Take middle school students as an example, their reading and writing skills can be exercised not only in class, but also in writing or revising articles. When watching a drama, a movie or TV, it is also a good training as long as you pay attention. For example, when we watch News Network, we should consider how journalists report news, how announcers explain pictures, which news reports are praise reports, which reports are criticism reports and which reports are full of journalists' feelings. When we watch Focus Interview, we should pay attention to what hot news there are in the society, what people's livelihood and public opinion are reflected, how to treat these problems, what are the inevitable problems in social development and what are human errors. When reading Happy Dictionary, we should master some comprehensive knowledge such as astronomy, geography, literature, history, art, etc. When watching some film and television works, we can think about it: Does this work focus on storytelling or lyricism? How was it chosen? What kind of central idea should it show? What characters were created? What expressions did the author choose? Is it exaggeration or contrast? What is the success of this work? What is the reason for its failure? If I were a director, what would I do? If it's a series, I can also find out what the main line runs through the work. Moreover, I have increased my knowledge in entertainment. It is really entertaining and killing two birds with one stone. Long-term persistence will definitely improve reading and writing ability. Unfortunately, most students didn't notice this, but regarded watching movies and TV as entertainment and pastime, or only paid attention to wonderful scenes and dangerous scenes, ignoring analysis and thinking, which made many good learning opportunities miss in vain.
Therefore, it is necessary to remind everyone here that reading newspapers is learning, watching TV movies and learning. Knowledge is everywhere as long as you put your heart into it. Please make up the reading and writing class during the break!
[Opinion] There are languages everywhere in life. Just observe with your heart and think with your brain. As the most popular mass media at present, TV provides people with rich spiritual food. The author of this article tells us how to link watching TV with learning Chinese while enjoying TV programs. Considered very carefully, reflecting our dedication and thoughtfulness. Life is an extension of the classroom, and those who are good at learning in life will certainly improve in the classroom.
I learned Chinese from it (horizontally, it can be newspapers, movies, games, chats and other words. I want to be specific and write down your gains.
The topic gives some hints about the selected content, and students can choose what they are familiar with and interested in to write. But choosing what content requires some skill. Generally speaking, the content suggested in the topic must be familiar to students, and students are more likely to choose newspapers, movies and games to chat. Smart students, students with a broader life and innovative consciousness will start from angles that ordinary people can't notice, such as market signs, roadside shops, mountains, computers, internet cafes and so on. , so that they will be better at content selection. If you learn Chinese from math and physics classes, it will be relatively new, but it is generally difficult to write vividly and brilliantly. The key word of this article is learning. To write clearly, you have learned Chinese knowledge and cultivated Chinese ability in a place that is not a Chinese classroom. Beware of writing about how to use Chinese knowledge, nor the importance of learning Chinese well through a certain class or thing, let alone confuse learning Chinese with learning to be a man.
[Practice example]
I learned Chinese in the deep forest.
It is also the day when spring grass grows and warblers fly. I secretly made an appointment with my partner and rode my bike to a beautiful mountain forest.
Our intrusion broke the silence of the mountain forest, and countless birds rang through our ears, bringing unspeakable joy. My heart is close to nature!
Sitting in the suffocating classroom for countless times, looking at the chimney smoking black smoke outside the window, depicting the birds singing tactfully with boring brushstrokes. But I don't know, the sound of nature here can never be truly described, even if it is experienced from famous articles. There have been countless descriptions of flowing water, passionate hearts and withered red flowers, but there is always a voice in the soft soil of the mountain: falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more. I have sung for freedom and praised for happiness countless times, but I have never listened to nature so attentively. When the birds return to their nests, the warmth revealed by the mother when feeding the chicks; Ants struggle to carry food together, showing tenacity and unity; Can everything created by trees, grass and vines be simply understood from textbooks? Even the wonderful pen of flowers can't explain the mystery of nature.
If it weren't for that trip and that bold move, I wouldn't be so excited and happy to write those words that made me excited. I won't use this to praise myself. I proudly and faithfully say: in the vast forest, I found a lot and realized a lot. I realized this famous saying with the purest heart: the extension of language equals the extension of life.
Who dares to deny that Chinese comes from life?
Writing requirements:
(1) Select the appropriate entry point. Generally speaking, the starting point should be smaller, newer, and use angles and materials that others have never used, so as to make the article stand out in reality and novelty.
② Make full use of the information at hand. When writing a narrative, we should focus on vividly describing the colorful China phenomenon in life; When writing an argumentative essay, you should reasonably state your views.
③ Pay attention to the individualization of language expression. You can design your own composition style according to the characteristics of the selected language phenomenon and the theme of your own article, and you should be good at using vivid life language. (Selected from Reference of Chinese Teaching in Middle Schools, No.6, 2003, p.50)
Attached are two excellent works:
I learn Chinese from publications.
As the saying goes, reading is like writing. As a fan of short stories, I naturally benefit a lot from reading. What I see most now is the works about the campus life of youth, which is the most touching.
For example, The Reader is one of my favorite magazines. As long as I have time, I will read with relish. Some people compare a scholar to a mentor, but I think it is more like a pair of eyes to see the world. He taught me how to read this wordless life book attentively. From these articles, there are countless good words and sentences.
When I was a child, I only thought about how to have fun, and I didn't care about the beautiful language around me. Readers have taught me sincerity and fraternity. Now I have got rid of my previous childishness. Through this publication, I began to learn to observe the world in front of me carefully, because writing needs observation.
Yilin is also one of my favorites. It takes a story that changes my life to see the big picture. Everything in the book contains profound philosophy. He taught people to know themselves, know the world and transform the world. He recorded the civilization and glory of human beings, and also recorded lessons and so on, from which he learned something that he could not learn in Chinese class.
Writing creates inspiration by experiencing life. What's the point of living if you know nothing about the outside world? Therefore, you should learn about it through publications and other tools.
In fact, writing is not difficult, as long as you read more good books, read some good words and sentences, change them into your own things through revision, and use them when useful. I believe your Chinese will be very good. It can be seen that you can learn a lot of good things about Chinese and write good works by reading more publications when you have time.
I learn Chinese from TV.
I especially loved watching TV when I was a child. You see, my glasses have gained weight round and round, but I haven't lost weight. It is 300 degrees. But some TV programs are tailored for us, such as Oriental Children, Big Windmill, Blue Cat 3000 Question, Lucky 52 and so on. To tell the truth: I learned Chinese for the first time from TV programs!
I remember when I first learned to walk, my parents said they would buy a TV set. From then on, I became a TV fan. One day, as soon as I turned on the TV, I saw Sister Moon teaching children pinyin. Sister A opened her mouth wide, and I couldn't help watching the action. Isn't that what happens when the doctor shows you his throat? I couldn't help opening my mouth. Then I learned the sound o, which sounded like a rooster crowing! After learning only two Chinese Pinyin, I became interested in Chinese Pinyin and longed to learn the third Chinese Pinyin. The third one is e, which reminds people of the sound of geese in the throat when white geese swim. I finally learned the two sounds of I and U, and mastered the rules of pronunciation. Although the pronunciation is not standard, I have basically learned it. That's how I learned aoe. I'm no stranger when I stepped into the school gate and saw them in books.
I will always remember the strong feeling when I first learned Chinese Pinyin on TV: the Chinese world is full of curiosity and vitality.
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