People's personality psychology is rich and colorful: loneliness, socialization, thinking, action, anxiety, optimism, calmness and excitement. Writing activity is the external expression of personality psychology. Since personality psychology is rich and colorful, writing activities should not be like this.
The mode of students' composition is largely due to the long-term exam-oriented education, which makes students accept the hard guidance and utilitarian edification of teachers' composition. This kind of education method, whether reasonable or unreasonable subjectively, has formed a wrong orientation objectively, which makes students bear a heavy psychological burden, trap themselves in the sea of books and lack the understanding of life. When writing, they will naturally lack materials and feelings, and the articles they write will be very boring. Occasionally get inspiration in life, with the spark of inspiration. I dare not "send it once and I can't get it", for fear of violating the "rules and regulations" of the exam-oriented composition.
In this way, students are afraid to write and it is difficult to write innovative and interesting articles. In view of this situation, the reform of teaching content is imminent.
The specific way is to emphasize interest in composition teaching and guide students to write interesting articles from the aspects of freshness, knowledge, image, emotion, philosophy and aesthetics. First, it is people's general psychology to like the new and dislike the old.
It conforms to the law of the development of things. To keep the article interesting for a long time, we must first have new content.
The content is novel, which is mainly reflected in the writing materials, that is, when choosing materials, we should pay attention to the novelty of materials besides those that are conducive to expressing and highlighting the theme. In other words, it is necessary to reflect new people, new things, new achievements and new features, and embody the spirit of the times.
Secondly, the concept is new. It is to let students try to put forward new ideas and new ideas when writing ideas.
To do this, we must cultivate students' creative thinking, encourage students to avoid similarities and write unique ideas. Again, the angle is new.
Everything is composed of many factors, levels and aspects. "Looking horizontally, the ridge edge becomes a peak, and the distance is different."
Whether the angle conception is novel or not is very important to the success or failure of an article. Standing in different positions and observing different levels can form different angles.
Choosing an angle in writing that no one else has written is innovation. Finally, the method is new.
The same theme, the same material, using different expressions, or narrative, or argumentative, or explanatory; Or induction, or deduction, or analogy; Or narrative, or description, or discussion. In a word, we should adopt different expressions according to different objects and different contents to get the best results.
Second, making fun of it is to learn and memorize. Interest and knowledge are inseparable.
The so-called "knowledge" is "the summary of knowledge and experience gained by people in the practice of transforming the world". Knowledge is a kind of information and a cultural phenomenon.
In this sense, various articles are actually introducing knowledge. But the way of introduction is different, that is, the content of knowledge itself is different.
To make people "engrossed in reading" and "impressed for a long time after reading" (in Qin Mu), this requires that the knowledge introduced in the article should be not only extensive, but also fresh and strange. For example, Qin Mu's article "The Beauty of the Banyan Tree" said: "When the air roots of the banyan tree touch the ground, it becomes a trunk. Mother trees and sub-trees are endless, and a single tree can become a forest. "
It can be seen that rich knowledge not only contributes to the author's writing, but also satisfies the reader's thirst for knowledge, making people feel fresh and interesting. Interesting is a knowledge-based article, and only words with content are attractive.
This is just as Qin Mu said in "On Prose Creation": "It is very important for an essayist to have rich materials of life knowledge. Only when a truth is brought into play can there be rich materials to reflect it. And contact with a new thing can also cause rich associations. "
There are many channels to acquire knowledge, which can rely on direct experience or indirect experience. On the one hand, guide students to learn to observe and think, devote themselves to life, care about society and the world, and draw writing materials from life textbooks.
On the other hand, students are encouraged to receive relevant information indirectly from books as much as possible and accumulate knowledge. Enrich your mind with knowledge and use them in your composition.
Third, the interesting shape is image, and the language should be visualized. Visualized language is to write things vividly and vividly, and to put abstract and profound truth in the description of images, so that readers can feel immersive, hear their voices and see their people.
Marx's description of capital in Das Kapital is wonderful and vivid. He wrote in the book: "As soon as capital came to this world, it was full of blood and dirty things from head to toe."
In this way, capital is personified, and a very abstract and boring concept is turned into a concrete, sensible and realistic life picture. So how can we make the article both vivid and vivid? First, use visual language.
It is reported that there is a beggar in new york, USA, who has a sign around his neck that says "I was blind from childhood" and earns very little money every day. Later, a poet passed by and changed the beggar's sign: "Spring has come, but I can't see it."
After that, there was a steady stream of charity. The reason is that the poet's vivid language has aroused people's emotional waves: spring, beautiful spring scenery, beautiful birds and flowers, what a beautiful world, but it is dark in the eyes of the blind, which can not help but make people feel pity.
This fully embodies the charm of visual language. Secondly, guide students to use rhetoric as much as possible.
Longanas of Rome said: "We should never tire of saying that proper and eye-catching wording will have amazing power and charm for readers-it's great that we can really say it correctly."
2. Write an interesting composition
My uncles fold quilts and clothes for us. They are neatly folded and square like tofu blocks.
The uncles also performed sprinklers. What a big current! I thought it was the Dragon King! Then, we came to Baimajian Scenic Area.
As soon as I entered the door, I was attracted by the charming scenery. I saw green wicker fluttering in the wind, beautiful magnolia flowers blooming in the branches, white pear flowers smiling, and green grass traitors welcomed us with green "little hands" when we came.
Then, the teacher took us to the clear river. There are several boats floating slowly on the river.
Let's have a picnic here! The students took out their own snacks to share. After a big meal, we skipped around to expand the game area.
We sweated and had a good time. Finally, I had to leave Baimajian Park reluctantly.
This spring outing is really interesting.
How can the composition be lively and interesting? I'll give you a model essay.
Blue dream and quiet rain
Quiet rain, gently knocking on my window;
Blue dream, full of youth, set sail.
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There is a cup of tea on the table. Through the wisps of smoke, I seem to see the feelings of youth. Youth has a blue dream, but light rain will also wet the skirt halfway.
Blue Dream
I am a girl who loves to dream. Before, I always thought that everything with a beautiful label was beautiful. In fact, my youth dream taught me to store happiness, just like storing that lovely paper crane.
"One, two, three. . 999. "No, I obviously folded 1000 paper cranes. I dig out dusty memories, count beautiful dreams, pout and look at the paper crane in front of me. My thoughts fly far away.
At that time, I was still a lively girl who had just stepped into the door of youth. My deskmate told me that if I write my dream on a piece of paper, fold it into a paper crane and put it in a transparent glass bottle, my dream will come true. Silly, I will fold day and night. Finally, a glass bottle full of dreams was born. I think dreams are as beautiful as glass bottles. During the day, I looked at it in a daze, and at night, I slept with it. I thought that in this way, my dream could take root and sprout, blossom and bear fruit. Mother said, "Why weren't you born on the battlefield?" If someone throws your glass bottle into the enemy's base, you may become the second Dong Cunrui. "No matter what they say, I never give up my blue dream.
Static rain
The moment the quiet rain begins, it is the time when the blue dream is broken.
I clearly remember that it was a quiet summer, and I failed in the middle school entrance examination. "Didn't you say that your dream would come true by writing it on a piece of paper, folding it into a paper crane and putting it in a transparent glass bottle?" Why not? "I don't understand. I am very angry. At that moment, I shattered my dream. I picked up the glass bottle and held it in my hand. Then my hands slowly parted. " Bang "is very crisp, very crisp, and the glass bottle containing my dream blooms in the arms of Mother Earth. Splashed glass slag spilled all over the floor like water. I picked up the paper cranes on the ground and let them get wet with tears.
A quiet light rain suddenly began to fall in the originally clear sky, wetting the skirts and dreams. From the moment my mother swept out my broken glass and my dream, I also swept my blue dream into the darkest corner of my heart. I thought I was a girl without dreams.
Final results
Perhaps, in the face of anything, never give up until the last second.
My mother gave me a paper box the day before my freshman year. When I opened the last layer of the package, I was stupid. It contains my dream that I threw away at the right time, and there is a piece of paper with that pair of broken glass on it: "Dreams can't be realized with beautiful shell packaging. You have to work hard and struggle. Maybe efforts may not be successful, but giving up will definitely fail. "
On the morning of registration, the weather was very cool, and a thin layer of smoke on the window glass was like tears moved by last night's dream, crystal clear. I looked up and gave myself the most beautiful smile in the mirror. My eyes turned to the broken glass, which told me a story of youth.
Time "ticks, ticks" goes forward step by step, and the breeze is mixed with a little hope, which is very comfortable to blow on your face. I know I've been chasing my dream, and I won't give up, because life goes on. In fact, what every girl does in her youth is not ridiculous. Every girl has a blue dream, and there may be a light rain halfway. As long as she follows the direction of her dreams, there will always be hope.
Postscript: A white cloud floated in the distance, and I wrote the endorsement of youth: "Blue dream and quiet rain!" " "
Author:
Chongqing Jiangjin Jijiang High School
Shi Yong, Class 1, Grade 20 1 1.
4. What's interesting? It goes without saying that 400 words should be prominent and interesting.
"Reading these idle books again, go to sleep!" The powder keg mother exploded. Hey ~ who told me this is my life! Although I was lying in bed, all I could think about was the plot in A Terrible Travel: What kind of trip would Gronimo have behind him? Hey ~ I really want to see it! Suddenly, an idea came to my mind: why not wait for my mother to fall asleep and read secretly? Good idea! Just do it. I waited and waited. Finally, the light in my mother's room went out. I got out of bed like a thief and walked to the bookcase step by step. As soon as I got the book, my mother sneezed, my hand shrank back and the book fell to the ground. I quickly climbed into bed and pretended to sleep. Mom seemed to hear the noise here, opened the door and saw me sleeping and went back to my room. I absorbed the last lesson and walked carefully to the bookcase. I took the book and turned on the light to "taste" this "delicious meal". Footsteps came, but I didn't know it-I was completely immersed in the world of books. The door opened with a bang, and mother stared at the eyes as big as Neptune. It looks terrible! It turned out that my mother went to the toilet and happened to see the light in my room on. When I opened the door, I was reading extracurricular books!
My mother made me a timetable. I read for an hour every day. Over time, I can enjoy many books!
5. How to write a composition with content, interest and beauty In the actual composition teaching, students' exercises often have short length, few words, no prominent center, no real feelings and vividness.
The reason is that they can't write the material of the article very specifically. So how can we make the article concrete and vivid? This problem is also the biggest confusion for most students in writing.
To solve this problem, we must first understand what the word "concrete" means. In the dictionary, the definition of the word "concrete" is "the details are very clear; Not abstract; Not ordinary. "
To this end, I think we can solve this problem from the following aspects. First, the visualization of abstract concepts.
General abstract concepts such as "heat", "happiness" and "love" are difficult to describe directly. Such an abstract concept should be written to make readers feel concrete, and only with the help of what the image can feel can readers have a concrete understanding of it.
For example, writing "My mother loves me very much, and I love my mother very much" is a general statement, not specific. Readers don't know how much your mother loves you and how much you love your mother.
However, in the excellent composition of the senior high school entrance examination, I remember a blue rain umbrella, which was described by images in a long paragraph: later, on a rainy day, I looked up and talked to my mother, only to find that half of her sky was gray and the wind mixed with raindrops fell into her gray sky. My mother's shoulders are wet, and my hair on my forehead is wet, while I am still in a blue rainless sky. "Mom, the umbrella is crooked," I warned. "No, the umbrella is not crooked."
Mother replied softly, and my eyes rested on the oblique umbrella handle. "It's true, the umbrella is crooked." My mother stubbornly said, "No, really not ..." Later, when she grew up, she didn't want her mother to pick me up in rainy days. The blue umbrella faded year after year in the cupboard, and I once thought I had forgotten it.
Maybe it's a coincidence, another rainy day and that blue umbrella. Under the umbrella, my mother and I hold an umbrella. I am about the same height as my mother. My eyes unconsciously fell on the umbrella handle, and the scene was mixed with the scene when I was a child. My mother is shrouded in a blue rainless sky.
My shoulders are wet and my hair is wet. "The umbrella is crooked," my mother reminded me. "No, it's not crooked."
"It's true, the umbrella is crooked," mom repeated. "Mom, it's really not crooked,no."
There was silence for a long time under the umbrella, but when I turned around, I caught a glimpse of glittering and translucent water droplets across my mother's face and cheeks. "Love" is a very abstract concept, but the author skillfully uses a blue rain umbrella as the carrier of mother's love for children and children's love for mother, which vividly shows mother's love for "I" and "I" love for mother.
"Umbrella" is a tangible object. The author vividly reproduces his deep love for each other through the story of mother and son holding umbrellas for each other in the rain. In this way, the abstract concept is written in a concrete and affectionate way, which deeply touched everyone.
Second, summarize the details. Students' exercises are often a general description of things as a whole.
With such a general description, there is nothing to say in a few words. As a result, the article lacks true feelings, and it is difficult to write long and the center is not prominent. You know, everything is made up of details.
A small detail, but it has the function of penetrating the soul; A seemingly casual detail description has the effect of killing two birds with one stone. Therefore, only by grasping the details can readers have a clear and concrete understanding of this matter.
For example, in the article "I am proud when I think of that", which got full marks in the 2005 senior high school entrance examination, the young author wrote that he blocked the habit of eating snacks: After school at noon the next day, almost every student bought this and that around the canteen. The attractive food packaging and the smell of food floating in my nose made me a little shaken.
Just then, "Don't think about eating snacks, it will affect your health ..." This sentence has been echoing in my ears. I quickly covered my nose, turned my face and walked quickly forward.
But in my throat, I couldn't help swallowing it several times. This lasted for two days.
On the third day, I walked forward as usual. Suddenly, a classmate took my hand and said, "Old classmate, this Cheetos is really delicious. Don't you want to try? " "oh! I ... I ... "My heart is tight and I don't know what to say. Say I have no money, in case he says I am poor, that's not good.
Said I had money, but I couldn't take it out. I rolled my eyes and said cleverly; "I don't like Cheetos."
"oh! Goodbye then! " I waved to him and walked on. Through the description of these two details, I vividly described how I blocked the temptation of snacks, especially when I smelled the fragrance of food, my movements made my expression fascinating at that time, and after reading it, it gave people a feeling as if I had experienced it personally.
Such a description can give readers a clear and concrete understanding, and such an article is concrete. Third, the whole instantiation.
It is not easy to describe the whole thing. We can simplify the complex, seize an example that best reflects the characteristics of this thing, and let readers have a specific understanding of this thing. For example, in 2006, in an essay "Self-confidence Shines the Light of Our Success", the following concrete example was given: stanislavski, a famous Russian dramatist, was rehearsing a play one day, and the heroine suddenly could not perform for some reason.
Stanislavski couldn't find anyone, so she had to ask her sister to play the role. His sister used to be only responsible for the management of costume props, but now she suddenly plays the leading role, which leads to inferiority and timidity, and her performance is extremely poor, causing stanislavski's anger and dissatisfaction.
On one occasion, he suddenly stopped rehearsing and said, "This play is the key to the whole play. If the heroine still plays so badly, the whole play can't go on! " "At this moment the audience was silent, elder sister didn't speak for a long time. Suddenly, she looked up and said, "rehearsal!" " "I swept away my previous inferiority, shyness and formality, and I was very confident and true.
Stanislavski said happily, "We have a new performing artist." Author column.
6. How to write a composition?
1, a good article comes from life, write what you see and hear; Write your own personal experience; Write your true feelings, so that the article will be vivid and touching.
2. Writing is not accomplished overnight. But in the face of today's exam-oriented education, we might as well learn some skills. For example, recite more paragraphs at ordinary times, with a good beginning and a good ending. To prepare for the exam.
3. Read more, study hard and learn from it. Good articles, good words and sentences, learn to accumulate.
4. Create a novel and unique article title. Sometimes you can get twice the result with half the effort.
5. Keeping a diary can not only practice writing, but also accumulate materials.
6. Learn to quote famous sayings and immortal poems to make your article more convincing.
7. Usage of good words and sentences. Good words and sentences used in the article can add color to your article and sublimate it. But it should be just right, not too much, too much will appear flashy.
8. apply what you have learned, that is, the ability to change, and change with the same.
9, close to nature, go out for a walk more during the holidays, see more and learn more.
10, being close to nature can also make your collected materials more colorful.
7. Write a composition with friends, highlighting two funny features: "Friends have lived together all their lives, and those days have passed, in a word, lifelong love, a glass of wine ..." When I heard the song "Friends", I thought of my good friend Wang. Wang is 10 years old this year. He is very cute, with a smile on his round face. There are a pair of small eyes like black gems under the crescent-shaped eyebrows. When they are very small, they will narrow into a line. When you meet her, you will be moved by her innocent, lively and lovely image. Wang likes playing the violin, and her mother trained her since she was a child. She studies very hard, and no matter which song she plays, she is very focused and never misses a small detail. Once, while she was playing the piano, I was listening. It sounds like stepping into the palace of music, sometimes immersed in high melody. Sometimes immersed in a low rhythm. In a word, I was intoxicated by her wonderful piano sound. Wang not only likes playing the piano very much, but also is a good boy who is reasonable and considerate. The thing is this: one morning, it was sunny outside, but I was sitting alone in the classroom staring blankly. My good friend Wang walked up to me with light steps and said kindly, "Jiaqing, what's wrong with you?" I said with a straight face, "I'm in trouble because I failed the exam." After that, I took out the test paper and showed it to her. She glanced at me and said, "Look, these questions are all caused by carelessness. Just be careful in the future." It's been several days since the exam, so don't look back in the future, because it won't make progress. You should go forward bravely, keep climbing and strive to create your brilliant future! "Her words touched me very much. At this time, I am all smiles and refreshed. She's right. I can't fall down and get up because of a little stumbling. So, how should I face the complicated society when I grow up? This is, I suddenly woke up and said to Wang, "Thank you, Lulu. If you were a calligrapher, what would you write if I asked you to mention words?" Without thinking, she said, "Adversity is absolute and prosperity is relative. We should bravely accept the challenges of life. " As soon as she finished speaking, a ray of warm sunshine shot recently, as if boasting that Lulu was right; It also seems to symbolize the eternal friendship between our schools. From what she said, I understand that there will always be setbacks and bumps on the road of life, so you should face them bravely. My good friend Wang Yongyuan and I are good friends and will always be friends who are United, friendly and help each other. May our friendship last forever.
In the busy study, you can't help but recall your childhood full of infinite happiness and reverie. At that time, you will think of the little friend who spent a happy childhood with you. When I was a child, I had such a small partner that everyone called him Bingbing. It was he who added joy to my childhood. He has a long face of Zhang Yuanyuan, big watery eyes and thick lips. As far as I can remember, when I was in trouble, he always gave me a helping hand. I remember that when I was bullied by other students, he would stand up and help me. He is also very generous. I remember once, during the afternoon recess, I felt very thirsty, but I forgot to bring my kettle. My throat is about to smoke because I drink too much. I slouched at my desk. After a while, he came to ask me what happened and why I stayed alone in the classroom. I told him in a hoarse voice. I took out his kettle at once. When I saw the water, I really wanted to drink as much as possible, but when I saw that the water in the kettle was less than half, I drank a little to moisten my throat. When he saw it, he said to me, "Drink it all. I am not thirsty. After listening to his words, I drank the rest of the water. " In fact, he was thirsty because his lips were peeling. Time flies, and I will leave him in a blink of an eye. Because dad bought a house in the city and wanted to move his grandparents to the city. On the day I left, he came to see me off in the hot summer and asked me to write to him when I arrived in the city. After staying in this city for a year, I wrote him a letter, which said, I realized that I was born beside him. I don't know how many words I wrote in this city this year, but after so long, I am convinced that we still miss each other.
8. How to write a composition about fun? The interesting composition of the college entrance examination is skewered.
Last year, I held your hand and walked through different seasons. I thought I could go on like this with you. No matter what happened or what happened, I wouldn't let go.
At first, I believed that I had found a clear water in my heart. Since then, I have lived a poetic life. Finally, I realized the cruelty of life. The distance between step and life is so ridiculous. You always talk about something, but you never say anything. What you don't know is that I actually know everything. No matter how you hide it, anxiety and hesitation have come out of your eyes. It's not easy to say I love you, and it's even harder to join hands. It's just because we are of the same sex.
Secular, prejudice, how ridiculous. But this is the reality.
"Let's separate. Good for you and me. " If this is your wish, I will let go.
When you turn around, it's like "walking in the disappearance …". At that moment, "the bright starry sky above us" didn't change like last year ... So what changed? Is it human heart? It's still us
Your back stopped. You finally don't want to give up. Just like me ...
The rain in spring, the starry sky in summer ... "Time won't change the memory into the sky", it will only become more mellow with the passage of time.
How could you forget? How can you give up?
Running time is only a moment, a step, as if it were a lifetime.
Hold your hand ... don't let go this time.
This time last year, I said to you, "I want to hold your hand."
This year, I want to say that we must cross this hurdle-the college entrance examination.
Parents say we shouldn't fall in love early. In 10, when the "bittersweet college entrance examination" is about to take place, the first "mother tongue"-Chinese test paper has a four-star difficulty index, and even the composition "On the Innovation and Creation of Scientists" can't stop me. When the list comes out, you and I will "see mom" together. As long as we "persevere", my mother will let us walk through a happy life hand in hand!
Interesting composition of college entrance examination: people know themselves.
Everything in the world has its own strengths and weaknesses. However, it is not easy to know your strengths and weaknesses. Otherwise, why has there been a saying since ancient times that "people are expensive and self-aware"?
In fact, this kind of self-knowledge is that discovery can be found. Your own strengths and weaknesses, your own strengths and weaknesses, so that you can decide what to do and what not to do according to your own conditions, and choose your own goals or ideals with rational strategies, and your chances of success are much higher.
Of course, most animals have no self-knowledge, especially when they are young. Some people have never found themselves in their whole lives, and they don't know their own shortcomings or their own advantages. This phenomenon is not surprising, as long as you have serious insight, you can see it everywhere in your life.
For example, the eagle, with its sharp claws, hooked mouth and fierce impact, when it swoops down on the sheep, the sheep have to give in easily under such a powerful opponent. However, when crows watch, the situation is very different. Crows have no eagle's claws, no eagle's beak, no eagle's fierce impact. Therefore, in the eyes of sheep, this is not terrible.
When the crow pounces on the sheep, first of all, the sheep will not panic, and even laugh at it: You mediocre black bird, how dare you touch the ground on my head? It's a toad trying to eat swan meat. At this moment, the sheep, facing the crows from the raid, can achieve the effect of defending the crows confused by interests by ignoring the countermeasures. As a result, the crow not only did not attack the sheep, but became the prey of the shepherd.
The crow failed to attack the sheep because it had no self-knowledge. Crows only see the success of the eagle hunting sheep, but they can't see the unique strengths and advantages of the eagle. Of course, it can't find its own shortcomings and deficiencies. Originally, crows did not have the conditions to hunt sheep, but they had to do this kind of hunting, and the result could only be failure.
In life, the reason for failure is often that the parties have no self-knowledge, neither the mystery of the objective world nor the length of the subjective world. After all, I still don't know myself, just don't know this.
Tragedy and heavy cost are caused in this way.