Example 1

Life is rich and colorful!

The universe is profound, and we humans living on the earth can't fully explore it. But any "signal" and "information" sent by the universe to human beings can enlighten us and draw conclusions.

but there is no unique answer.

You can say that the storm is hateful. It destroyed facilities and destroyed houses. But after that, it was a sunny day, so the crops were stronger and the sky was more beautiful because of colorful rainbows.

Everything is changing, so that its essence and value fluctuate with it.

this is associated with life. People are insignificant to the varied nature; For the change of the universe, time tunnel, life is short. But people are wise, verbal and conscious. So man is the only thinker in the universe.

There is no doubt that life is more colorful!

When the newborn cries, he is full of curiosity about this strange world, so babbling and toddlering became the only joy when he was young.

When he was thirsty for knowledge, he entered the school, so in this world, he had another wish. In the interaction with the outside world, he learned to be self-reliant and self-reliant. So there is a desire to climb the peak of science.

he learned that "if a young man doesn't work hard, the old man will be sad". Hard work and sweat became the capital of his youth. Over time, I am full of confidence in the world and life. In the eyes of young people full of vigor and vitality, a beautiful life, gorgeous seasons and flaming roses always break into my heart.

During the trip, young people will sing loudly, singing their admiration for the wonders, their longing for life and their love for nature.

When encountering failure, young people will encourage themselves because they know that "failure is the mother of success".

Life is full of opportunities and challenges for young people.

The last stop in life is old age. Don't be sad. With the capital accumulated in youth, old age is more colorful.

It's common to see an old man with silver hair fishing by the lake. That one is carefree and beautiful.

Old people often get together to recall the past, the naivety of youth, the fiery youth and the sweetness of love, stretching their wrinkles from time to time and laughing heartily.

a person's life is beautiful and short.

There is no fixed pattern in life. You can be enthusiastic, unrestrained, silent or impulsive. Because life is in your hands.

if you grasp the steering wheel of life, life will be colorful.

comment: this is a hymn of life that keeps striving and making progress. The author puts life in an unfathomable and varied cosmic background, so that readers can multiply the beautiful and short-lived feelings of life. By sighing the colorful universe, the article introduces the richness of life and praises the wonders of life. The growing process of "He" and "He" from childhood to old age is a March of self-reliance and self-improvement, and a fighting drum that loves life. The full text mostly uses short sentences to construct paragraphs, of which 2/3 paragraphs are just one sentence, and some are as short as eight or nine words, which shows the jumping and cheerfulness of thinking and is full of youthful enthusiasm.

Example 2

Saving Life

Almost every family has different amounts of savings. When we count these savings slips, there will be a great encouragement in our hearts. But in my heart, I have a feeling: isn't life also a savings?

a person begins to save family ties from birth, and this savings will accompany us through life. What we have saved is a feeling of flesh and blood, and it is a wealth that transcends time and space. No matter how far away or how long it is, you can withdraw and enjoy it at will. Even if a person is materially poor, as long as he has family savings, he is spiritually rich.

Friendship is also a beneficial savings. This savings, is in trouble to help, is the wrong advice when most needed is least heeded, is the sincere support when falling, is a spring breeze to wipe away tears when suffering. The savings of true friendship is not a one-way withdrawal, but an effort by both sides to increase its weight and enrich its connotation. Any false friendship savings with utilitarian color will not only get no benefits, but also lose all its capital.

Love is a happy and hard savings. Love, of course, requires persistence, but how much understanding, support and tacit understanding are needed to face decades of ups and downs together under the same roof! This is by no means something that can be bought with sweet words. The saving of love is mutual respect and understanding in the trivial matters of life, which requires saving every day, month and year.

the most important thing in saving knowledge is to have the spirit of perseverance. A person from childhood to adulthood, from naivety to maturity, from ignorance to understanding is a process of constantly saving knowledge. We receive education, which is only one aspect of saving. Entering the society, we will have more knowledge of the world. The most important thing for knowledge saving is to be diligent, accumulate over time, and constantly enrich and arm yourself with knowledge.

in fact, saving life is the most important, unforgettable and exquisite thing in saving life, which is the truest, the best and the most beautiful. A person who knows how to save and how to save is actually a kind of happiness.

comment: the author is good at association. He is associated with life by "every family has different amounts of savings". This conception angle is small and novel, which avoids generalizations and Chen Xiangyin. The author is also good at writing essays, saving family, saving friendship, saving love and saving knowledge, each of which is subject to the theme of saving life. At the end, "saving the most important, unforgettable and exquisite things in life, saving the truth, goodness and beauty of life" sublimates the meaning to a new height. The article is short and the taste is long.

Writing Tip: Is it too early for middle school students to interpret life? No, "Young people's minds should be clouded", Xia Wanchun died heroically at the age of 16, Liu Hulan died heroically at the age of 15, Lenin joined the first secret Marxist group in Russia at the age of 18, Maxwell published his first scientific paper at the age of 15, and Steven worked as a coal mine mechanic at the age of 19 ... Middle school students interpret life, inspire their ambitions at an early date, set up a beacon for life at an early date, and be firm in their struggle and belief at an early date. Specific writing, a variety of. You can concentrate on expressing your views on the ideal of life and express your ambition to serve the motherland. You can write your own real emotional experience and your own feelings about life. You can dissect a certain aspect of life and try to talk about it deeply. You can also make up stories about life.