1. Write an essay about father's love or mother's love starting with a noun

Father's love is the wealth of life

Father's love is a mountain that protects life Fire; father's love is a fire, lighting the lamp of hope; father's love is a lamp, lighting the way forward; father's love is the road, leading your life.

I once didn’t understand why my father’s straight spine was curved, I didn’t understand why my father’s handsome face was haggard, I didn’t understand why my father’s thick black hair was gray, I didn’t understand why my father worked hard for most of his life. ...

Until the third grade of junior high school.

That day, the wind was roaring and the vegetation was bleak. I was sitting on the bus, preparing to get off and go home alone. However, I saw a person. In the dark world and the biting wind, that person People were trembling. The wind kept blowing the corners of his clothes - it was his father! Through the window, I could clearly see my father’s white hair. It was either stained by the clear moonlight or decorated with gorgeous words. It was just white hair. It was a piece of white hair. My father’s white hair was touched again and again. The strong wind overwhelmed me but I stood up unyieldingly again and again. I knew who it must be for when I fell down and stood up...

It was my father who was constantly being pushed down and stood up. His white hair or his father’s heart? The bus stopped and I walked quickly. Apparently, my father saw me. He no longer blocked his coat from the wind with his fingers, but ran towards me quickly. His coat completely surrendered to the strong wind, but he But I didn't care at all that the red sweater I was wearing was beating in the inexplicable darkness and running towards me.

At that moment, I clearly saw my father’s fiery heart approaching me in the cold. At that moment, I burst into tears.

My father gently held my hand to warm it up, but what I touched was clearly a big hand as cold as ice. I held my father's hand tightly, but my father was busy. Dodge, "My hands are too cold." I ignored my father's dodge and grabbed those cold hands back. I knew: I was grabbing the wealth of my life.

My father used the aging of his life to turn into mountains, into fire, into lamps, into roads, into bit by bit fatherly love, to accompany me every day, every second, to accompany me in this life. lifetime. Father, your love is the wealth of your daughter’s life. Because of your love, your daughter will not be poor in her life. 2. How to write the beginning of a composition

1. Get straight to the point and get straight to the topic

Narratives that focus on people can directly describe the characters or describe the characters' portraits, dialogues, actions, etc. Go directly to the topic; a narrative that is mainly about narrative can point out the time, place and relevant background of the event at the beginning. For example:

1. Her name is Wang Qianqian, and she was the class monitor when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Although we have been separated for more than a year, the anecdotes of the class monitor are still vivid in my mind and unforgettable. ("There is such a good monitor")

2. Teacher Tang is sick. When the evening class was about to end, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom was as silent as stagnant water. ("True Love")

2. Write the scenery and exaggerate the atmosphere

Start with the description of the scenery, exaggerate the atmosphere, highlight the characters, and unfold the story. Such as:

1. During the flower blooming season, the fragrance is everywhere, but I have no intention of watching it, because at this time I lost my classmate Qiang ("Classmate Friend")

2. The morning sun comes out, and the lake dresses it up; the new moon comes up, and the stars accompany it; the spring flowers bloom, and the green leaves set it off; the birds sing, and the crickets play the piano for it... Everything in the world is telling us Love story. ("Love Forever")

3. The summer night is very deep. Occasionally, the sound of frogs in the water and the sound of cicadas on the trees can be heard, and the breeze blows, bringing a hint of coolness. I pondered and couldn't fall asleep for a long time. When I was in my first year of high school, by chance, my debut novel was published in the newspaper. I was so happy that I forgot about everything. ("Love, Invisible")

3. Lyrical discussion to set the tone

Use a few brief comments and appropriate lyricism to start the article or to impress the readers , or point out the main idea and lead to the following. Such as:

1. Summer vacation is finally here. Like a little bird that I have been waiting for for a long time, I suddenly burst out of the "birdcage" and flew to my grandma's house in the countryside to relax my muscles and breathe fresh air. of air. I decided to learn to roller skate during this summer vacation. ("I Can Do It")

2. Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood at my grandfather's house. Grandpa held my hand and taught me how to walk. It was grandpa who made me understand a lot of truths since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood. ("I Love Grandpa")

4. Set up suspense and lead to the following

Setting up suspense at the beginning can catch the readers' hearts at once, inspire people to think, and play a fascinating role. Effect. For example: 1. The wall clock is walking calmly and rhythmically. "Tick-tock" and "tick-tock" are almost 4 o'clock. Why hasn't mom come back? ("Worry")

2. What will my tomorrow be like? When I am running between two points and one line of life, when I am struggling in the endless sea of ??questions, I often ask myself this.

("Facing Tomorrow")

5. Quoting poetry to highlight the center

Starting with a witty quote from a poem or a famous aphorism can not only stimulate the reader's imagination and interest, but also improve the The taste of the article; it can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight the characters and events. For example: "A person's biggest enemy is himself. As long as you believe you can do it, you will be successful." This is my favorite quote. Whenever I see it and the report card that is no longer clear in front of my bed, the dreamlike past appears in front of my eyes. ("Past Events") 3. Write an essay starting with "Youth is our pronoun"

The grass and trees have turned green, and the flowers have become brighter. The students stepped into the romantic spring step by step. Unconsciously, it has been two semesters since we arrived at the middle school campus. The plants and trees here, and the smiles of the classmates, are like the shooting stars in the night sky, shining brightly in my memory.

This reminds me of the first time I came to the middle school campus-the new century. It was last September as a prospective freshman. I was very excited to start a new middle school journey. The New Century campus is not big, but very fulfilling; not small, and full of green. Our campus is neither big nor small. “Although a sparrow is small, it has all the internal organs.” is a perfect way to describe the new century. When I saw the bright red flag rising again and the white and blue school flag fluttering in the wind over the new century, I was already familiar with this rich campus and fell in love with it. Our footprints are everywhere on the playground.

"Class 1 is first, come on Class 1!" Our cheers still echoed in the sky.

Looking back on the year of preparation, I really have endless aftertaste. I worked hard with every student in the preparation (1) class and won glory for the class together. We all always remember that we have a glorious name - Class 1! We will persevere for a small honor.

We can’t forget that during the broadcasting competition, we practiced every day. Some students with uncoordinated limbs were trained hard by the sports committee. No matter how hard it was at that time, we had no complaints. On the day of the competition, we did every exercise well. Although we were sweating and our clothes were soaked. When we held the golden certificate in our hands, although we were exhausted, we were so happy and enjoyed the victory. joy. It’s unforgettable, and we laughed and cheered when we recalled the Class 1 class that did the messy exercises. The united Class 1 is like a little bell, playing gently in the memory.

The classroom is my favorite place, and it is also our learning paradise. Listening to the sound of reading quietly, it feels like you are immersed in the scene; taking a closer look at the concentration of the students, and every one of them They are all excited, and their voices resound throughout the entire campus, decorating the beautiful campus and adding to the infinite scenery. The atmosphere of learning is everywhere in New Century Middle School, and it is decorated with poetry and painting everywhere... 4. How to write the beginning of an essay.

Beautiful writing at the beginning of the essay The essay is the highlight of the Chinese language exam, and almost half of the score indicates its weight.

Its success or failure greatly affects the success or failure of Chinese language, and the success or failure of Chinese language affects the overall situation. Therefore, it has become the urgent desire of many candidates to gain insight into the writing skills of high school entrance examination and improve their writing expression skills.

Regarding the beginning of the high school entrance examination composition, I would like to give you some suggestions for your reference. Tip 1: Get straight to the point and get to the topic quickly. Example: The moment the small tree breaks out of its shell from the dark and moist land, it knows that it is the land that gives it life.

So, it overcame many difficulties and obstacles, hoping to grow into a towering tree to repay his mother land. With gratitude, we can, like this little tree, cross all the gaps in life.

("Being Grateful") Comments: The article is straight to the point, goes straight to the topic, unifies the whole text, and has the effect of giving an outline. In the examination room, a good beginning is mostly concise and clear.

Its purpose is to give people a clear and distinctive impression and stimulate the readers' strong desire to read. However, since the writing of examination essays is limited by time and space, it is generally better to get straight to the point and get down to the topic so that people can feel your opinions, thoughts or emotions as soon as they read the beginning.

Be careful not to be mysterious, go around in circles, deliberately make people elusive, enter the "fascination circle", and be unwilling to write the meaning straightforwardly. It seems that this is where the novelty and ingenuity of the article lies, where the level and skill are revealed.

In fact, this kind of mystical approach is precisely the shortcoming of writing. In terms of word count, the beginning and end should not be too long. Generally speaking, about 100 words is enough for standard examination composition paper, and about three or four lines are appropriate.

Skill 2: Literary talent is outstanding and fascinating. Example: From mountains and rivers to rivers, from ancient poems to common sayings. The existence of language is reflected everywhere in life.

When thinking about magnificence, there are golden swords and iron horses, and smoke rising from tiger peaks; when thinking about freshness, there are small bridges and flowing water, and red apricots from the south of the Yangtze River; when thinking about sadness, there are tears streaming down Xiaoxiang, and Qinhuai wind and moon; when discussing philosophy, Then there is the true face of Mount Lu, with dark willows and bright flowers... Chinese language comes to me gently, and then walks gently by me. ("Chinese Language Passed Gently by Me") Comments: The clever use of parallelism and antithesis makes the book catchy and full of charm.

The literary talent is high, and the writing is written from a broad perspective. The majestic, straightforward and vigorous language style shows a profound language skills, which shocks people and arouses a strong interest in reading. The appropriate quotation of classical poetry in the example enhances the expressiveness of the article.

The relevant classical poems are easy to pick up, express freely, are full of content, and have meaningful language, demonstrating cultural taste. Well-trained language is like having a sharp weapon, allowing your composition to gallop and be invincible in the examination room.

The short marking time, usually only about 3 minutes, how to attract the attention of the reviewers? For junior high school students' thinking and expression abilities, language is the biggest breakthrough. Therefore, working on language is the top priority in writing.

In daily life, you should accumulate more good words and sentences, and improve your language expression ability in a subtle way. To dress up your composition, try your best to beautify your language.

Tip 3: Use rhetoric skillfully to enhance literary talent. Example: The joy of life is to face everything with a smile. It comes from the wisdom of Buddha holding flowers and smiling, so smiling becomes an attitude. A kind of understanding, a kind of practice. Because of it, you can be confident but not arrogant, sad but not decadent, old but not rigid, young but not frivolous... ("Facing Life with a Smile") Comments: Rhetoric is an indispensable part of the use of language.

The use of clever and appropriate rhetorical techniques can often add a lot of elegance to language. In the examination composition, if candidates can skillfully use rhetorical techniques to dress up language, they will definitely get good results.

With such an extraordinary beginning, it will naturally make a good impression on the marking teacher. Tip 4: Ask questions cleverly and make people think. Example: Smile is beautiful, it is better than any other expression in the world.

Mona Lisa’s smile is quiet and mysterious; Audrey. Hepburn's smile is clear and friendly; Juliet.

Roberts’ smile is confident and full of energy... Facing these smiles, I can’t help but ask: Why are their smiles beautiful? ("Facing Life with a Smile") Comment: Appreciate a beautiful piece of music. Although the song ends, the lingering sound lingers, leaving endless charm. Likewise, a good article should be informative and informative, and should be inspiring.

And stimulate people's imagination and desire to read. Skill 5: Echo the beginning and end to highlight the main theme. Example: (First) Time passes and time flies.

In the spring and autumn of fourteen years old, my parents and I have visited many places where flowers are blooming and falling. From the beginning of my life I have hurtled irrevocably towards the future at the same speed.

Only when I stopped occasionally did I realize: I have been walking with my parents for the fourteen years that the seasons have changed. 5. How to write the beginning of an essay

For an essay, a good beginning can cheer up the marking teacher, create a good first impression, and thus initially establish the emotional tone of the assessment; a good ending can leave a lasting impression. Fragrance can enable the marking teacher to "maintain" and "refresh" the favorable impression, thereby maximizing the "delete" record of points deductions left in the cerebral cortex by deficiencies in the article. Therefore, it is necessary to work hard to use your talents to write a good beginning and end.

A good beginning usually comes in several forms:

1. Grandma telling stories. Also known as cold water tea type. This kind of beginning is like an old grandmother telling a story, "Once upon a time there was a mountain, there was a temple on the mountain, and there was a monk in the temple." Its advantage is that the elements of the article are clearly explained, the groundwork is solid, and the clues are clear; the disadvantage is that it takes a long time for the marking teacher to "drink" the tea. "Lychee Honey" has this kind of beginning.

2. Martial arts movie type. In order to attract audiences, martial arts movies usually show the most intense fights, the most magnificent scenes, the most stylish characters, and the most difficult to resolve conflicts at the first time. The article can also be like this, handing over the most exciting content to the marking teacher at the beginning. Its advantages are that it can answer questions quickly, is highly attractive, can fully demonstrate one's talents, and gives people a bold and refreshing impression; its disadvantage is that it is easy to leave unclear explanations of secondary factors.

3. Borrow flowers and present Buddha statues. That is to say, borrow famous quotes and songs from famous people as the beginning, and use the social wealth that is prestigious, philosophical, and aesthetic to express your thoughts that are well thought-out in your heart. This is equivalent to inviting great people to help, equivalent to standing on the shoulders of giants. Its advantage is that it gets the upper hand and appears to be rich in knowledge; its disadvantage is that it is difficult to have accurate words and appropriate meaning.

4. Grand celebration type. That is, using gorgeous rhetoric, vivid metaphors, clever symbols, moderate exaggeration, and extravagant parallelism to create a luxurious beginning that will make people enchanted and amazed. The advantage of this kind of beginning is that it makes people think you are talented, but if the main content of the following is not substantial, it will feel bluffing and top-heavy.

5. Straightforward and quick-spoken. That is to state your views, attitudes, thoughts and feelings from the very beginning without any concealment. The advantage is that you have a clear-cut stand, but you must pay attention to what you say from the bottom of your heart, speak from your feelings, and don't make mistakes without any illness. "Praise to the Poplars" is an example of this kind of opening.

A good ending can usually be seen as follows:

1. The melon is ripe and the pedicle falls. Once the thing is written, it ends naturally. No bells and whistles, no unnecessary extraneous matters, the writing style is simple and unpretentious. This is not a lack of words or an exhaustion of ideas. This is a return to nature full of beauty. This is the ultimate in explaining things in a simple way.

2. The picture shows the shape. That is, the chapter shows the ambition and discusses the topic type.

Some articles have finished writing the main body, but it seems that the real intention has not been fully demonstrated and needs to be "finished"; or the emotions are not expressed enough, and it is not pleasant to express; or there is a distance from the required "topic" surface, and an artistic circle is needed... Everyone should do their "hands and tails" skillfully.

3. Leave an aftertaste. As long as the article describes the inevitable trend of the development of things, or clearly hints at one's own views and fully declares one's emotions, the article can be stopped abruptly when it reaches the climax, leaving room for readers to ponder. and room for imagination. This kind of ending is not verbose, fully trusts and respects the readers, appears crisp and has the demeanor of a general. However, it is worth noting that the so-called "leaving an aftertaste" is an artistic treatment, which is to delete the snake's feet, and it is by no means a hasty ending because it cannot be finished. For example, in a feature film, my powerful police force surrounds the small corner where the fugitive is hiding, and it can end with a close-up shot. At most, the criminal raises his hand or points his gun at his head. If it had to be written about the criminal being handcuffed and there was no sequel, it would be a children's feature film; if it was only about the criminal being handcuffed and there was no sequel, it would be Blackout.

4. Singing and dancing to see off guests. Also known as the ceremony closing type. This is an ending that is similar to the beginning of the "Borrowing Flowers to Offer to the Buddha" and the "Grand Celebration" type. It is intended to be the finale that makes people feel that the lingering sound will last for three days. "Ekiji Rika" has this kind of ending.

5. Unexpected type. The preparation of the article has been completed, the plot of the story has been basically written, and the readers have almost guessed the ending. However, the author's writing style surprises the readers, thus producing a dramatic effect. For example, there is a story about a kidnapper taking a hostage: the frantic kidnapper brandished a pistol, pointed it viciously at the back of the hostage's head, and shouted: "One, two--!" The air froze. The sound of "Bang!" tore the hearts of everyone outside the cordon and in front of the TV. Blood flowed from the back of the hostage's head and he slowly fell down. However, his hands were moving and he touched his head. He opened his eyes and glanced at the kidnapper's blossoming head in surprise. He got up and ran out the door.

How to start and end is actually a matter of choice of writing order and language style. Try using "diligence" and "reward" as topics and write different beginnings and endings. 6. How to write the beginning of a composition

[Idea Analysis]

There are generally several ways to start a composition. You can choose different opening methods according to different articles

[Problem-solving process]

Five ways to start an essay:

If the beginning of an article is unique, , novel and unique, often fascinating, and some can also play a role in opening up ideas.

1. Straight to the point method

To get straight to the point is to write down the topic directly. For example, the opening paragraph of Bing Xin's "Ode to Cherry Blossoms" sets the tone of the entire article, which is to praise cherry blossoms and the friendship between the Chinese and Japanese people. It starts with two "firsts", writing that anyone who goes to Japan will always "think of cherry blossoms" and "talk about cherry blossoms". Japanese friends always use cherry blossoms as an emotional bond when receiving guests to express regret or to persuade them to stay. Cherry blossoms, like Mount Fuji, are the symbol of Japan. They connect the friendship between the Chinese and Japanese people. This is the main theme of this article. The article is described around this theme from beginning to end.

When writing an essay using this opening method, you must accurately grasp the theme of the article, that is to say, you must not only determine the center to be expressed based on the material, but also accurately summarize it. The advantage of this starting method is that you can always consider describing the center when composing, which makes it easier to highlight the center of the article. It is also easy for readers to grasp the essentials, master the basic content, and deeply understand the theme of the article.

2. Lyrical revealing method.

For example, in Wei Wei's "Who is the Cutest Person", the theme is revealed at the beginning of the article. But it also has its own characteristics, that is, it introduces the center step by step in expressing emotions. At the beginning of the article, I wrote about "I"'s uncontrollable thoughts and feelings - I wanted to tell my friends in my motherland everything I felt. The word "but" not only writes a turning point in the meaning of the article, but more importantly, highlights the key point to be expressed: an important experience of thoughts and feelings. So far, although the article talks about "I feel more and more deeply who is the cutest person," it does not point out who is the cutest person. Then use the question "Who is the cutest person?" to further attract people's attention. But he still didn't answer directly. Instead, he first said who was "incredibly cute" and then said who was the cutest person. This kind of beginning is full of emotion, exciting and thought-provoking. It gives people a deep understanding of the theme of the article from the beginning. Another prominent feature of this opening method is to go from the general to the specific, using the general to set off the specific: writing about friends who are moved by everything and want to tell everything to the motherland is to highlight and set off "an important experience of thoughts and feelings"; The purpose of writing "incredibly cute" is to further highlight the "cutest".

3. Flashback method

This kind of beginning is based on the scene in front of you, associating it with past events, triggering memories, and narrating past events along this line of thinking to form a flashback.

When using this opening method to compose, you should pay attention to several issues: first, you must describe what you see in front of you and give people a strong impression; second, you must reveal the meaning of the things you see, using Accurate and concise language summary; third, write down what you associate with it, eliciting a series of vivid memories.

4. Place and time method

For example, the opening paragraph of "Xianglin's Wife" describes the social environment in which Xianglin's Wife lives, which not only reflects the gloomy and gloomy scene at the end of the year. The description, including the grand introduction of the preparation of blessings for each family, and the description of the hypocritical, reactionary, conservative Mr. Lu Si and his study room, reveal the typical environment in which the tragic protagonist - Mrs. Xianglin lives, and provide a perfect example for Mrs. Xianglin. The tragic development provides the background. The beginning of this paragraph is the prologue to the development of the plot. Although it does not directly touch the theme of the article, it has created a suitable atmosphere for the entire article, and explained the place and time of the story, etc., and is extremely closely related to the theme of the entire article.

5. The method of describing scenery

For example, Sun Li's "Lotus Lake" uses light colors and sparse brushstrokes to describe the scenery of Lotus Lake at the beginning. The article ranges from the moon in the sky to the mist on the water; from the white world in the distance to the cool, clean yard in front of you; from the vision - the night view of Lotus Lake, to the smell - the fragrance of lotus leaves. This description of natural scenery from different angles is beautiful in artistic conception and rich in poetry, making people feel a mellow local flavor. This is the beginning, which exaggerates the beauty of the natural scenery of Lotus Lake and highlights the beauty of the inner world of working women in the liberated areas who love new life and love work, and naturally introduces the article into the main text. 7. How to write the beginning of an essay

There are several types of openings: 1. Straight to the point (suitable for starting articles about people and going straight to the topic)

2. Beginning of dialogue (suitable for Used at the beginning of articles about writing things, with character dialogue)

3. Lyrical beginning (suitable for beginning articles about teachers, maternal love, teacher love, and friendship, using parallelism)

A very important aspect of the article is to have an attractive beginning, so that people will want to finish the article after reading the beginning. Therefore, the most important point at the beginning of the article must be consistent with the topic, and the article should not be inconsistent with the title. At the same time, the beginning of the composition should be short and concise, and should not be lengthy, because the beginning of the composition is mainly to indicate the main purpose of the article, and a few short sentences can suffice. Make it clear what the article is about, rather than letting people read it for a long time and still not know what the article is about. There are several ways to start an article: 1. Start with a prompt. That is to say, the main purpose of this article must be pointed out at the beginning of the article. 2. Suspenseful beginning. Start your article by asking a question that will interest people. 3. Start with the question type, that is, start with the question. 4. Start with a quotation. That is, start the article by quoting content related to the title. The quote here can be a direct quote, such as quoting the author's words or quoting classic sentences. It can also be an indirect quote, such as retelling the main idea of ??a story as the beginning of an article. In fact, there are many ways to start an article, but no matter what form of opening the topic is used, don't forget one thing, that is, do what was mentioned before, that is, it should be short, concise, to the point, and attractive.

As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle"!