1, the author of this article will think very much. First, briefly introduce the story of the article I read, grasp the purpose of the story and the importance of perseverance, and further expound the truth that life is like a ladder, and only perseverance can reach the end and succeed. A profound experience is a good feeling after reading it.

2. The beginning of the article is novel, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body, making readers produce ... As soon as they meet, the article is coherent and constitutes a complete image.

This article is full of passion, between the lines, I can feel the little author's love for it. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

4. The narrative of the case is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, in a few words, the author showed his feelings about it, which was touching.

Your composition leads to what you want to express from a famous saying, which is very clever. You also compare the contents of the book with the scenes in the movie, and see that there is a profound friendship between Sang Sang and Du Xiaokang. The deficiency is that the content is not vivid enough, and some rhetorical devices can be added appropriately.

6. Yes, sometimes there are some misunderstandings between friends. Just say you're sorry or it doesn't matter, maybe you won't make a big deal out of it. This is called taking a step back and broadening the horizon.

7. Your composition is very good. You associate movies with books and write about your childhood, but the language is a bit dull and the psychological description is insufficient. It would be better if it were modified.

Your composition is really touching. I have also experienced loneliness at home due to illness, and my heart is full of longing for going to school because for me, going to school is a kind of enjoyment.

9. This composition is well written, clearly expressed and vividly described, especially when writing your own case. It also uses the metonymy rhetoric we just learned.

10, you're the first person I've ever met who said he wouldn't learn to cry half to death. I am moved by your persistent learning spirit. I believe that through your own efforts, you will learn better.

1 1. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, and the essence of the event is revealed.

12, the data are mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points. Not in line with the atmosphere of the times, the information is too old and aging.

13, you use parallelism many times in your composition to enhance your tone and deepen your feelings. You compare your case with Sang Sang, which highlights Sang Sang's bravery. At the same time, quote famous sayings and lyrics appropriately to make the composition more vivid. Transitions between segments are also natural.

14, meticulous description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your article, I seem to see Ba Jin in the century.

15, setting off characters' emotions with environment, blending scenes, feelings in scenes, and taking scenes as the most important.