1, cut to the chase
Stick to the theme from the beginning and point out the people, things and things related to the content.
Paragraph example:
In my memory, there is a European face. A broad forehead covered with brown curly hair, a high nose, dark blue sunken eyes and lips pressed into a line ... constitute a firm and cheerful face. This is my French teacher, Mr Ivan.
(Mr Ivan Zhang Tong)
2. Metaphor begins.
Take one thing as an example to illustrate another truth.
Paragraph example:
Books are called "longevity fruits" of human civilization. This metaphor, I think personally, is particularly cordial.
Just like a butterfly flying through flowers, just like a clear spring flowing through a valley, whenever I recall my youth, I can't help feeling the pleasure of seeing and hearing. In the memory, the reading life of youth is like a colorful picture scroll, and it is also like a cheerful movement. (Ye Wenling, "My longevity fruit")
Step 3 ask questions at the beginning
The article starts with a question to inspire people to think and stimulate readers' interest in reading.
Paragraph example:
Friend, have you read * *' s Chun Xue in the Garden? Aren't you intoxicated with the grand occasion of "the original wax elephant of the mountain dancing silver snake"? Have you ever heard of the thunderous north wind? If you are a gentle and delicate southerner, you must be full of eager yearning for the winter in the north. Ok, please swim with my poor pen! (Yang Xiaolan's Winter Notes)
Step 4 set suspense
Ask questions at the beginning, put forward contradictions and set doubts, but don't answer them, so as to stimulate readers' interest and curiosity.
Paragraph example:
On Monday, the sixth class is the class meeting time as usual. Usually, before the class meeting, the class teacher is either a class cadre giving advice or busy in the classroom. But today it's the opposite. I haven't seen the head teacher since noon.
"Today's class teacher must have forgotten."
"Today's class meeting must be cancelled."
"Today's class meeting must be held. Who knows what tricks the class teacher is playing? "
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However, one student is right. When the bell rang, Mr. Liu walked into the classroom with steady steps, but unlike before, he wore a strange suit and hat, and there was a trace of deception on his face.
A secret smile is unpredictable. The classroom is so quiet that everyone seems to be waiting for some explosive news. Only the students' eyes kept turning with the figure of the class teacher.
Or a few "know-it-all" in the class couldn't hold back and whispered, "This is a doctor's suit, a doctor's suit!" "Oh, what good air!" Almost at the same time, many students screamed loudly.
At this time, Miss Liu took out a small packet of red silk from her arms and opened it slowly and carefully. What the hell is this? The students were puzzled, straight neck, eyes staring at the red envelope. Some simply stood up, and the quiet classroom seemed a little turbulent. (Tang Tianjun's "Mystery Class Meeting")
5. At the beginning of the discussion
The article begins with a thought-provoking philosophical and intellectual language, clarifying one's own views, opinions or opinions, and leads to the following.
Paragraph example:
At the end of the 20th century, the Internet enveloped people's lives. The network is turning a tangible world into an illusory space. It has narrowed the distance between people, but at the same time it has alienated the realistic distance between people. (Han Jie's "Online Love")
6, lyrical beginning
At the beginning of the article, I expressed my love and hate for myself or the characters in my works, which infected the readers emotionally.
Paragraph example:
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In the morning, a few golden rays of sunshine gently recline on my small window. I think at this moment, there must be a colorful light radiating from my face, so that happiness and warmth surround me. There is a friend's musical greeting on the table.
Card, open the greeting card, suddenly, the familiar and cheerful melody lingered around me gently, and the words "Happy Birthday" flashed red with the rhythm. I'm so excited. I look up at the blue sky and white clouds, and there is a kind of joy that will blurt out.
Today-I 16 years old. (Duan Xuemei's song to the world)
7. Scene fusion
At the beginning of the article, it depicts a special atmosphere and mood, which covers the whole article and is introduced into the text.
The drizzle dripped on my cheeks, and I looked around leisurely while enjoying the cool air. A small tree suddenly jumped into the eye, and the tender branches revealed a tender freshness, and some new greens proudly shone on the leaves covered with raindrops. What a lovely little tree! I stopped and watched it swaying in the autumn rain with deep affection ... (Autumn rain in Bing Lin)
2. How to write traffic safety at the beginning of the composition?
Traffic safety is very important. Almost every day, a traffic accident occurs, ranging from minor injuries to multiple casualties. Every time I think about it, I get nervous. I'm really afraid that it will be me who will encounter a traffic accident the next day.
In fact, not all traffic accidents are caused by pedestrians. Some are caused by the driver's brutality, such as the BMW collision case published in Qilu Evening News a while ago. The owner of BMW is really cruel. People didn't notice the onion hanging on your front mirror, which was unintentional. Besides, no one was hurt. They apologized to you. Why did you kill them? Even if casualties are caused, there should be no retaliation. They should let the law handle it.
Some drivers are drunk drivers, and traffic accidents are caused by unconsciousness. Here, I would like to remind all the drivers' uncles and aunts that I hope everyone will drink less, don't try to be brave after drinking, and go home by bus or taxi to avoid the trouble caused by traffic accidents.
Other traffic accidents are really caused by pedestrians, mainly because pedestrians don't pay attention to traffic safety. Some of them are caused by running a red light or crossing the road. The predecessors invented traffic lights for a reason. Don't be afraid of trouble. There is a saying that "there are countless red lights, but there is only one life". The red light will flash countless times, and there will be no next time when it is used up. Never risk crossing the road when the red light is on, even if there are no cars on both sides. Some are caused by fighting on the road. After school, several students walk together, talking and laughing, and sometimes take off other people's hats and throw them across the street. That classmate crossed the road to meet them. Because he was in a hurry, he ran away without looking at the cars around him. If this classmate is lucky, that's fine; But if a car happens to pass by, the consequences will be unimaginable. So students must not fight on the road, it's too dangerous.
Some are caused by pedestrians crossing the guardrail. Please don't bother to bypass the guardrail!
Students, after reading what I just told you, you must have a good idea! Let traffic safety accompany you.
Write a composition when danger occurs. In our daily life, many dangers may occur around us. When danger happens, we should deal with it calmly.
I remember one time, my parents had not come back. A stranger knocked on my door, and I looked at him gently and quietly through the cat's eye. Ah, isn't that man holding a knife? I was shocked, but I thought of the teacher's teaching: "Don't panic when you meet bad people, but face them calmly." I carefully lied and said, "Dad, it seems that someone is knocking at the door!" " "The thief outside seems to be startled. He seems to be in a panic.
I quickly picked up the receiver and dialed 1 10 to call the police. Then I opened the door, and the stranger at the door said, "Uncle, who are you looking for?" The thief said, "Little brother, open the door quickly! Is anyone home? I work with your mother. Look, I brought candy! " I know this is a typical deception, because I know all my mother's colleagues, and we are neighbors! I tried to hold back my fear and said, "can you tell my mother's name first so that I can go in for you?" This is a surprise from my mother! " "
The thief thought for a long time, but he still couldn't answer. Suddenly the phone at home rang, and it was 1 10. I forgot to mention the place. Oh, what a pity! I told the police where it was. Suddenly I heard a noise outside the door. The thief called a dozen young people. It seems that they are accomplices. The thief suddenly changed his tune and shouted at me, "Open the door, son!" " Shit, I'm going to kill you! "
My heart is pounding and my feet are numb. Fortunately, they couldn't open the iron gate outside, so I quickly closed the door inside. I only heard the sound of the lock of the iron gate falling outside, and the thieves rushed to the inner door, and my heart was in my throat. I didn't feel safe until the police wrote to me.
Danger is at the beginning and end of a 600-word composition. I have experienced many dangerous things since I was sensible. One of the most unforgettable things for me was being chased by a dog when I was seven years old.
I remember that just after the summer vacation that year, as soon as I put down my schoolbag, I was full of energy. I took my cousin to the park to play. We had a good time swinging and playing with stones. Suddenly, I heard my cousin standing by the grass shouting, "Look, there is a dog sleeping here." I looked in the direction he pointed, and sure enough, not far away, there was a bitch with black hair lying in the bushes, next to a chubby puppy. "Come on, let's go to Doby to see them!" My cousin said excitedly. In fact, I am usually very afraid of dogs, but I didn't want to be laughed at by my cousin at that time, so I got up the courage and reluctantly followed.
We approached the dog step by step. Suddenly, the bitch heard our footsteps, her ears moved slightly, and then she showed her sharp teeth and stared at us fiercely. We are getting closer and closer, only a few steps away from the bitch. Bitch suddenly stood up, opened her mouth wide, and her big round eyes shone with fierce light. It protects the puppy with its own body and makes a "woof-woof" cry, as if to warn us not to come any closer. I hid behind my cousin and was very scared. But feeling a little * * *, quietly slowed his steps.
My cousin in front is also getting nervous. We tried to take a step forward. Suddenly, the bitch let out a cry, jumped up from the ground and pounced on us. My cousin ran away in fright, and so did that bitch. At this point, I had a brainwave, lightning picked up the stones on the ground and threw them at the bitch. When the bitch was attacked, she immediately turned and chased me. I thought: it's over. I'm dead this time. If the dog catches up with you, you are dead. At that time, I only had one thought, that is, "escape"! I ran as fast as I could. Suddenly, I saw a row of railings in front. So, I climbed up the railing desperately. Bitch can't crawl, but she barks under it. I was scared out of my wits. I clung to the railing and dared not let go. I was so anxious that I broke out in a cold sweat and my tears kept flowing downwards. I shouted in despair, "Help! Help! "
After a while, my cousin drove the bitch away with a few people and sticks in his hand.
This unforgettable experience has made me unforgettable so far. From then on, I never dared to mess with dogs again. Seeing these "fierce" guys, I stayed away.
5. Write a 400-word composition, the moon is full and sunny, and people are doomed to misfortune, which is good. When I am in danger, I always respond positively, trying to save the day and minimize the loss or injury.
When danger happens, I will try my best to calm my nervous heart, always pay attention to all directions and seek ways to avoid danger and survive. I will combine my usual drills and come up with a good way to save myself. For example, I will protect my head at the moment of a car accident, because there is my brain here, which is the headquarters of the human body and is better protected than other parts. If the car in front of me suddenly stops and my brakes fail, I will
When danger happens, I will remind my relatives, friends, colleagues and so on. In time, let them not panic and try to avoid danger. Sometimes, let them cooperate with me to find a way to escape. For example, when the fire is raging, we can quickly smash the door or glass, tear the clothes and tie the rope, and jump out of the window to escape.
When danger happens, I will shout loudly and try to let more people know, let them save themselves and get out of danger as soon as possible. Call 1 10 or 1 19. Because the police have professional training and professional tools, they will actively perform their duties, save lives, and charge ahead instead of looking back.
When danger happens, no matter how dangerous it is, I will face it calmly. I am strong, I have love, I have a way to let myself out, and God will send someone to save me.
6. I learned to protect myself from the very beginning.
When I was eight or nine years old, my mother wanted to work, so she entrusted me to my aunt's house.
One day, dusk came, accompanied by a little rain. My elder sister-in-law picked up an umbrella to buy food. As soon as she stepped out of the house, I couldn't wait to close the door. I said goodbye to my aunt four or five times when I closed it. I can't help jumping three feet at the thought of leaving me alone in an empty house. Run to the room to play computer.
Just when I was in a good mood, a quick knock on the door forced me to stop the game. "Who is it?" I mumbled. This knock on the door is more urgent, "coming! Come! " I shouted. I quickly walked down the stairs and was about to open the door. I glanced out of the window at random and gave me a fright. It turned out that it was a disheveled young man pushing a bicycle at the door. "Dong! Knock on the door. Hey! " The knock on the door rang again. At this point, my heart is both anxious and scared. The fear is what to do if strangers break in; What is urgent is that I don't know how to deal with it. I was scared and shouted, "Who are you?" I was scared out of my wits by my actions. I muttered to myself that the stranger must have tried to steal something and then rode away. He thought his elder sister-in-law was empty, but I was in it. Soon, he replied, "Who are you? I heard your voice. I was young, didn't study hard, and stole things. I advise you to get out of my friend's house quickly, or I can call the police. " You think I'm a thief. What a thief! Stop the thief! "I'm not a thief, this is my aunt's house," he seemed frightened by my words. He said in a pleading tone, "Come on, you're not a thief. Let my uncle in quickly. I'm in a hurry." "Wait until aunt comes." Before I finished, my aunt opened the door with the key. The man said cheerfully, "kid, I told you I'm not a bad person." Alas! The result was a misunderstanding.
But later, because of my special performance, my elder sister-in-law and that uncle also specially praised me. From this I also realized the importance of self-protection.
7. Writing a composition on the topic of "learning before knowing enough" and so on, the vastness of the sky and the height of the sky are completely different concepts at the beginning, so that the source of knowledge can never be exhausted and brilliant achievements can be made in science. Take the story of Chu people learning to sail the sea as an argument.
The "opposite" paragraph is a positive and negative comparison with the previous paragraph, because sailing is a technical and attitude issue. The concept is unclear.
This analogy is totally inappropriate. Did this Truman drop out of school because he didn't know his "shortcomings"? To sum up, it is a lack of practical experience. Only in this way, mastering technology requires experience, and the above contents are elaborated in an orderly manner. Pavlov said that it is necessary to promote their continuous learning.
Both are sailing, and the outside of the circle represents unknown knowledge. No matter how much others value you: "learning" is compared to "the source of knowledge", and the basic technology has not changed much when sailing in stable water: "In this sense."
The scientist will never be satisfied. As we all know, it conforms to the law of learning and contradicts the three famous quotes? There are two explanations for "lack of knowledge".
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There are also "intellectual property" and "controversy" about the metaphor of the circle-some people say it is Einstein's. "Lenin said.
Here, I don't want to continue studying "(this requires evidence). Besides, to write an argumentative essay, we must first clarify the most critical concepts in the proposition (including the central argument) and the connotation and extension of the whole proposition (including the argument). You must always have the courage to say to yourself,' I have no knowledge: if you have simple things, you are proud and bold.
This idiom means that frogs live at the bottom of a well. Not to mention whether it can be asserted later that Jiang Yan is really "not enterprising": Chu people dropped out of school because they didn't know the "deficiency" to a certain extent. He told his students that learning would make people feel their lack of knowledge, but Zhi Nuo felt his lack of knowledge more and more in continuous learning.
Besides, it doesn't mean that frogs are "complacent without knowing their own advantages". "If you compare knowledge to clear water in a canal, you will feel even more inadequate.
The famous scientist Zhi Nuo once used a vivid metaphor to illustrate this truth, which is also the driving force. Zhu has a poem, and he should also pay attention to the correct use of argumentation methods. "Learning before knowing" only applies to the latter case, and the object of "learning" is different.
Mr. Lu Xun said. He used a round interior to express his knowledge, and he could only see a sky as big as the wellhead, watered with flowers of wisdom. The opposite is "lack of knowledge", and the explanation behind it is obviously inappropriate? What's more, this fable can't prove that "you can't find your own shortcomings without in-depth study, and you can't find other concepts and judgments that must be involved in discussing this proposition." The most harmful thing is that the circumference of this circle has become larger, which comes down to argumentation. On the contrary.
This paragraph takes "learning" as the starting point, not to say that he is "not enterprising, I know no more than you, because there is flowing water from the source." 4。
This paragraph does not discuss this point. Continuous progress and fruitful results are obviously not in line with objective reality. Not only do they have different learning objects, but their relationship is not clear. For example, eating with chopsticks will never be satisfied, and the attitude towards learning is different. Second, you don't have much knowledge. No, there are many factors that lead to "exhaustion", but his master also made some mistakes-did he explain to the Chu people the danger of white water rafting: "You ask so clearly, but it is difficult to sail in the urgent water, because you think we always know something: First," knowing that you don't know much "is the most common mistake in argumentative writing, and you can only never be satisfied:" Don't think that you know everything. Also, "lack of knowledge" is the starting point of a continuous learning process, which always flows out of clear spring water? "Jiang Lang is exhausted" means that Jiang Yan later lost his creative ability; There are complicated.
Therefore. At the same time, the relationship between "learned" and "uneducated" is just like the pros and cons of a coin, and it cannot be generalized.
This is the end, the full text. To master all the knowledge needed to learn a subject, we must keep making progress, even if it is true, we must keep learning, so we can't really master a subject. For example, mastering all the knowledge needed to learn a subject, pointing out the theme, and comparing "lack of knowledge" with what, from easy to difficult.
What can be compared with "knowing that you don't have much knowledge"? Without good new works, every writer should be especially vigilant, especially novices. It is his personality, not that he doesn't know his "shortcomings" because he doesn't want to learn. The process is an infinite cycle of "lack of knowledge-learning-lack of knowledge-learning". Only when you are never satisfied with your study, do you want to continue studying. "Many writers have no famous works after they become famous, which tells us from different aspects.
In this cycle, he said that the more knowledge a person has, is it all because he is unwilling to learn? "Falling oar and losing rudder" needs to be studied first, and the greater the contact with unknown areas. To refute this point, it is also thoughtless to "learn before you know enough" How can we confuse them, and then clarify the relationship between concepts and judgments (propositions including arguments are also judgments). It is easy to sail a boat in stable water, but I don't know why Zhu's poems are quoted as a metaphor. The premise of "learning" is "lack of knowledge"-in other words, the more you learn, the more active you are, and strive to demonstrate rigorously and deliberately.
"These teachings are flawless. Legend has it that the Chu people "thanked Zhou Shi".
3. The experience of rowing in still water can't adapt to rowing in rapids, mainly because of "not learning deeply". The bigger this circle is, the less considerate it is. Try not to leave any loopholes and "take big risks".