The title of this article is "Qingshan is not old". How about "Remember that the hero who planted trees grows rich"? , why?
At the end of the article, I quoted the deeds of Hua and the famous sayings of Darwin and Einstein in order to compare the old man with these great men. Do you think this is appropriate? Please analyze it with the article.
The answer to the examination standard is as follows:
1, (1) because both of them have prepared coffins, they have shown the courage to die, and there are similarities (or: Pound's manly spirit sets off Gao Fu's selfless spirit); ② Set suspense to attract readers' attention and increase their interest.
2. Not so good. (1) "Remember to plant trees and be rich" is too straightforward, while "Castle Peak is not old" is full of literary color, implicit and intriguing; (2) Castle Peak highlights the miracle created by the hard work of the old people who planted trees for fifteen years, and turns the barren land into an oasis; "The green hills are not old" has a profound meaning, which means that the lofty spirit of the elderly will remain in people's hearts forever and last forever.
3. Suitable. Although the old people are ordinary and unknown, their dedication and perseverance are the same as those of these great men. The sickbed was still marking papers, Hua died on the platform, and the old man had to plant trees until he couldn't climb. Don't they all devote themselves to their own careers and die? (2 points) Both Darwin and Einstein said that life and death are indifferent to them. The old man is also very calm about life and death. He turned his life into a green mountain. Like Darwin and Einstein, he also reached a state of transformation. Therefore, compared with these great men, the elderly can completely.
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