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1. Dancing in the clouds
The philosopher Wittgenstein said: "I walk close to the ground, not "Dancing in the clouds." We might as well understand this as a choice of life attitude. The philosopher likes to be down-to-earth, so he chooses to walk, and I think that gorgeous posture can also make life perfect - even if it settles in the clouds.
Thinking of Gilgamesh, the heroic king in ancient Greek mythology. His noble status destined him to be disdainful of everything, including himself. He fights for his country. He is bloodthirsty for the sake of light. The only way to end a war is war. It was such an ordinary sword, but he took it to the extreme. As the king of kings, he has spent his whole life tired. He never rested until his death. A frown means a low groan, a tilt of the head means loneliness. Some of them are innate and cannot be thrown away. Until the dancing figure stopped in mid-air, the slightly raised lips were frozen at the corners of the mouth, and the background was the long-lost political world.
There are no traces in the sky, but the birds have already flown. Although Gilgamesh's life cannot be called a classic, it is also dazzlingly gorgeous.
What is equally shocking is that ancient nation - Bohemia. This is a group of dancing souls, wandering souls, and pure souls. They are passionate, passionate and "dishonest". They move with the wind, live by the water, and settle anywhere in the world. You could say they have no country - they are cosmopolitan. Their dancing bodies and moving footsteps turned into a whirlwind sweeping the world. Despite being ignored, ridiculed, and ostracized, this was all in the past. Now the thoughts of all mankind find refuge for a moment in the bosom of Bohemia. That comes from the most primitive desire of human beings - to escape! Escape the prison you have drawn for yourself and go outside to dance. Feel free to express your own passion. Wind the dance of freedom from this mountain to that river. Snowflakes fall, and the sky and earth are pure white.
The magnificence of Bohemia is carried by wandering, and the whole process is breathtaking. Its existence is the eternal miracle called life.
In one's life, one can choose to walk close to the ground and take every step steadily. Let every footprint leave behind your own emotions of effort, joy, struggle, or anger, and then your life will not be in vain. But it might as well be another way. The wild raised eyebrow sword is unsheathed. The unrestrained passion is swaying freely, putting life on the clouds, twisting every step with strength and skill. The passion of water and fire can also show another style of life, another style.
As long as you can dance - what’s the point of standing in the clouds?
Brief comment: This article dares to take the opposite view, and states the point of view at the beginning of the article: gorgeous posture can also make life perfect - even if it settles in the clouds, it can cut to the topic quickly. Then, the materials selected for the examples are novel, which gives readers a bright feeling and also demonstrates the author's broad reading vision. Finally, the author asks again at the end of the article, directly to the topic, echoing back and forth, and integrating seamlessly.
2. Seek steadiness and avoid impetuousness
Philosopher Wittgenstein said: "I walk close to the ground, not dancing in the clouds." When walking on the ground, it is often as calm as a mountain in wind and rain. This is the down-to-earth wind; dancing in the clouds often results in a bruised face and swollen nose, this is the impetuous wind. It can be seen from the famous sayings of philosophers that no matter what we do, we must be practical and avoid impetuousness.
Only when a person has a style of pursuing practicality and avoiding impetuousness can he succeed in learning and gain something.
Guan Ning and Hua Xin were studying at the same table during the Three Kingdoms period. Guan Ning could study calmly and calmly without being disturbed by the outside world, while Hua Xin was very impetuous. A dignitary passed by in a luxurious sedan. Guan Ning ignored him and continued to concentrate on his work, but Hua Xin looked envious and immediately ran out to take a look. Guan Ning then sat down on the mat and broke off all relations with him. In the end, Guan Ning became a highly respected scholar, while Hua Xin was academically incompetent.
An army will be invincible and invincible if it has a style of seeking practicality and avoiding impetuousness.
In the early years, Cao Cao led the army to defeat Zhang Xiu. After the victory, Cao Cao's army was so proud that everyone from the commander to the soldiers seemed very impetuous. As a result, during the second expedition against Zhang Xiu, he lost his troops and generals and was completely defeated. On the other hand, Zhang Xiu was able to accumulate strength and plan plans after the failure, so he finally won the battle. Cao Cao and Zhang Xiu, one win and one loss, aren't they the best explanation of the importance of seeking stability and avoiding impetuousness?
A country can develop steadily and become prosperous and strong only if it has a style of seeking practicality and avoiding impetuousness.
In the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China, the land of China was in dire straits waiting to be revitalized. Many people hope to achieve success overnight and are eager for quick success, so they have unrealistic goal slogans such as "catch up with Britain in three years, surpass the United States in five years, and achieve communism in twelve years"; then there are radical policies such as large-scale deforestation and large-scale steel smelting. The scene; thus there was such an absurd "fruit" as "a carrot weighs a thousand catties, and two donkeys cannot pull it". As a result, the impetuous "Great Leap Forward" movement not only failed to make a Great Leap Forward, but instead caused the Chinese economy to move toward a "Great Regression."
Whether it is an individual, a collective, or a country, only by staying grounded and avoiding impetuousness can we go further. Every time we marvel at the wonders of mirages, have we ever thought that this castle in the air was actually built brick by brick by human hands in another place?
In today's society, impetuousness is prevalent, and being able to "dance on the clouds" has become a goal that everyone is striving for. So there are people who spend money to publish papers, people who mortgage their houses to speculate in stocks, people who destroy the environment in exchange for GDP data... and so on, and so on. As everyone knows, the more impetuous you are, the farther away you are from success - if you don't see it, those who seek false fame will become a scandal and joke, those who seek wealth through gambling will lose their fortune, and those who are eager for quick success will be severely punished by nature. The down-to-earth wind is like the pines and cypresses on the mountain top, which cannot be blown by the wind and are not shocked by thunder; the impetuous atmosphere is like the weeds on the wall, which will wither when the wind comes and fall when the rain comes. Friends, dancing in the clouds may be graceful, but it is easy to fall; walking close to the ground may be dull, but stable. Why don't we seek to be practical, avoid impetuousness, and follow our own path in life?
Comments: The author agrees with the philosopher's point of view and discusses the importance and necessity of seeking steadiness and avoiding impetuousness from three perspectives: individual, collective and national, which is in line with the meaning of the topic. It lists both positive and negative examples from ancient and modern times to discuss, with detailed materials and substantial content. Being able to explain it in relation to current issues enhances the pertinence and sense of the times of the article. In terms of expression, the structure of "total score, total parallel" is complete and clear, the contrast between positive and negative is clear, the metaphor is appropriate, and the language is elegant, accurate and smooth.
3. Climb to high places
“I walk close to the ground and do not dance in the clouds.” This is a famous saying of the philosopher Wittgenstein. It seems to be telling people that Only by placing yourself in a low place can you be stable. However, I think it is very inappropriate to dare not climb to high places for fear of losing my footing and falling. If everyone has the idea that "as high as one climbs, one must fall heavy", how can individuals progress and how can society develop?
In terms of thought, people should try their best to reach as high a place as possible.
Some people say: "People should have profound thoughts, otherwise they will become a hopeless dry well." Yes, if people cannot ascend to the high ground of thought, what a terrible situation it will be! No matter how big the family fortune is given to him, he will fail miserably. Liu Chan, the Queen of Shu, was such a person. He did not let his thoughts reach high places, so he had no ambitions, lacked independent opinions, spoke hastily, and unclear rewards and punishments, which ultimately ruined the country Liu Bei had built. Only when people think about problems from a higher ideological level can they think about them thoroughly and see further and more accurately than others.
In terms of realm, people should try their best to reach as high a place as possible.
Wang Anshi climbed to Feilai Peak and wrote "Don't be afraid of the floating clouds covering your eyes, just because you are at the highest level". Du Fu wrote on the top of Mount Tai "When you are at the top, you can see all the mountains at a glance" , these all reflect the poet's transcendent realm. Only when people have a higher realm can they have Su Xun's calmness of "not being afraid when Mount Tai collapses in front of him", Tao Qian's detachment of "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence and leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountains", and Li Bai's "born The heroic sentiment that "my talents will be useful and I will come back after all the money I have spent" will give Tan Sitong the awe-inspiring righteousness of "die well and happily."
In terms of status, people should try to reach as high a place as possible.
Napoleon said: "A soldier who does not want to be a general is not a good soldier.
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