There is a sound from music, which makes me feel the charm of music; There is a voice from my mother, which makes me feel the greatness of maternal love; There is a voice from my heart, which makes me feel the inner touch.

Sound is everywhere, however, to find the voice that touches people's hearts, we need to savor it carefully.

"Sit up straight, don't get down." Whenever I concentrate on my homework, every 10 minutes, my mother's "nagging" voice comes from behind me. In order not to make my myopia worse, my mother has been nagging ... for several years, I have become accustomed to this sound, and it has even become the background music in my study.

"Be modest, not proud." Every time I do well in the exam and feel complacent, my mother will throw a pot of "cold water" at me head-on. My mother is afraid of my complacency. She often uses this way to cultivate my calm way of doing things and practice my attitude of calmly facing success or failure, which has made me down-to-earth today.

"Have a rest, don't be tired." "Be confident and don't lose heart." ... this kind of voice is enough to compile a family version of "Saint Amethyst" in our family. Mother's voice seems ordinary, but it contains the true meaning of life. Her moving voice is a noble spiritual nutrient. Like breast milk, I am a sucker that benefits endlessly.

These ordinary and extraordinary voices touch people's hearts because they are full of my mother's too much care and love for me. If someone says, "not every flower represents love, but roses do it;" Not every tree can withstand thirst, but Populus euphratica did it. " Then I want to say: not every voice can touch people's hearts, but the voice from maternal love did.

Appreciation of High Score Composition in Senior High School Entrance Examination: Protecting Eggs and Motherly Love

On the eve of Women's Day, our school launched an "egg protection" activity. During these two days' activities, I deeply realized that it is not easy for parents to raise us.

At the beginning of the egg protection activity, all the students thought it was fun. They drew various patterns on the egg, gave it a nice name, wrapped it in cotton and put it in a small box, always protecting it, either on your hand, around your neck or in your close-fitting pocket. After class, the students dare not play around on the playground. Everything is quiet and careful. I am no exception. Not so good. It's over? Haha, the whole egg is my original intention, but what if it is really finished? Not so good. Idiot, bad guy, Ya Dan, happy egg, smart egg, naughty egg ... Alas, I fucked up. Why should I take eggs? Just after the Spring Festival, although the weather is still very cold, spring has quietly come to us. Let's call it "Spring Garden". My proposal was unanimously agreed by everyone. After choosing a name, it's time to dress up the eggs. I painted flowers and butterflies on the eggs with colored pens, dressed up beautifully, and then found a plastic foam net, wrapped it in a small bag and hung it on my chest.

Although we all cherish eggs, several people's eggs were broken in our class in just one morning. Later, some students gradually lost interest in protecting eggs and stopped caring all the time. Instead, I put it in a drawer and often complain that it is too inconvenient to bring an egg to school, even to do exercises and go to physical education class. What a bother! I can't help feeling that this is just a small egg that won't cry or make trouble. It's only been two days, and we're bored. I think, when we were young, we were thirsty, urinating and crying ... it kept adults busy. Taking care of eggs these two days is much easier than taking care of a child, but mom and dad never stop raising them.

Through these two days' egg protection activities, I deeply felt the hardships of parents raising us for more than ten years. On the morning of Women's Day on March 8th, I made a bowl of delicious egg soup with eggs that had been protected for two days, and respectfully served it to my mother, thanking her for raising me and sincerely saying to her, "Mom, I love you!" " Instructor Li Mei

Six skills of writing a high-scoring composition at the beginning

Composition is the highlight of the Chinese exam, and almost half of the scores show its weight. Its success or failure greatly affects the success or failure of Chinese, and then affects the overall situation. Therefore, it has become an urgent desire of many students to understand the writing skills of the senior high school entrance examination and improve their writing and expression skills. Here, combined with the excellent writing examples of students in the monthly exams and mid-term and final exams over the years, some suggestions are made for your reference.

Tip 1: Cut to the chase and get to the point quickly.

Example 1: Starting point has a sacred beauty to life. It is this beauty that gives people the motivation to move forward, the source of strength, the enterprising mind and the courage to struggle. One new starting point after another, like a beautiful pearl, extends the value and brilliance of life. (the beauty of the starting point)

Ex. 2: When the young tree emerges from the dark and wet land, it knows that it is the land that gives it life. So, it crossed many difficulties and obstacles and wanted to grow into a towering tree to repay Mother Earth. With gratitude, we can cross all kinds of gullies in life like this little tree.

Comments: the article comes straight to the point, goes straight to the subject, and takes the full text as a whole, which has the function of outlining.

In the examination room, a good beginning is mostly concise. Its purpose is to give people a clear and remarkable impression and stimulate the examiner's strong desire to read. However, due to the limitation of time and space, writing a composition in the examination room is generally straight to the point, so that people can feel your opinions, ideas or emotions at the beginning of reading. Don't be mysterious and beat around the bush, it's deliberately unpredictable. I don't want to write the meaning directly. It seems that this is where the article is novel and ingenious, and where I see the level and skills. In fact, this mysterious practice is precisely the disadvantage of writing.

In terms of the number of words, the beginning and the end should not be too long. Generally speaking, the standard test paper 100 words, about three or four lines is appropriate.

Secret 2: Brilliant and fascinating.

Example 3: From mountains and rivers to rivers, from ancient poems to common sayings, Chinese exists everywhere in life. If you think big, you will find a golden careless peak. Want to be fresh, there are small bridges and flowing water, and there are red apricots in Jiangnan; Say sad, xiaoxiang has tears, Qinhuai romantic; On philosophical thinking, there is a true face of Lushan Mountain and a bright future ... Chinese comes to me gently and passes by me gently. ("China people passed me")

Example 4: Chinese rhyme, 5,000 years of splendid civilization; Love China, swing 9 million square meters, run through ancient and modern times, blend north and south, rhyme the sea and love the sky, poetry inherits the blood of the Chinese people and supports the backbone of the Chinese people.

Comments: The clever use of parallelism and antithesis at the beginning of these two poems makes them catchy and full of charm. The literary talent is flying, and the language style of writing from the big place is magnificent, straightforward and vigorous, showing a profound language foundation, which makes people feel shocked and stimulates a strong interest in reading. In Example 3, classical poems are quoted appropriately, which enhances the expressive force of the article. Relevant classical poems are readily available and easy to write.

Example 5: Spring breeze is blowing gently in the corridor, and the green outside the window is full of colors. My eyes can't help being attracted by your elegant demeanor. When I was near you, my heart suddenly danced wildly. Birds are playing, butterflies are flying, geese are flying in the sky, and tigers are roaring in the mountains. The sea is calm. At our feet, the waves gently kissed the rocks, as if sleepy. On the calm and dark sea, the moonlight opened.

Comments: The opening is beautiful, colorful and beautiful, creating a rich lyrical atmosphere and full of poetry and painting.

Practicing Chinese well is like having a sharp weapon to make your composition unrestrained and invincible in the examination room. The shortest marking time is usually about 3 minutes. How to attract the attention of reviewers? Language is the biggest breakthrough for junior high school students' thinking ability and expression ability. Therefore, working hard on the language is the most important thing in writing. Usually, we should accumulate more good words and sentences, and improve our expressive ability in a subtle way. We should make our composition beautiful and try our best to beautify our language.

Tip 3: Use rhetoric skillfully to improve literary talent.

Ex. 6: The joy of life lies in smiling at everything. It comes from the Buddha's wisdom of smiling, so smiling becomes an attitude, an understanding and a practice. Because of it, you can be confident but not arrogant, sad but not decadent, old but not rigid, young but not frivolous. ...

Example 7: Chinese is like a bunch of herbs, which always infiltrates people's spleen and makes people intoxicated; Chinese is like a light rain, always sweet and intoxicating; Chinese, like a pillar, always supports people's hearts and makes them intoxicated. This is China people, it's always walk on by, others and me.

Example 8: When I was a child, my parents brought an old man to me and told me that his name was China. I looked at him. He has white hair, but he is old and vigorous, and his manners are no less than those of young people. Later I learned that he was thousands of years old. From Xia, Shang and Zhou dynasties to 2 1 century, the wisdom in his mind was never heard, so I urged him to give it to me. (China people walk by me)

Comments: Rhetoric is an indispensable part of language use. Clever and appropriate rhetorical devices can often add a lot of elegance to a language. If candidates can skillfully use rhetorical devices to dress up their own language in the examination room composition, they will receive good results. In the above cases, Example 6 uses parallelism, Example 7 uses metaphor and parallelism, and Example 8 uses personification to vividly explain his own views and express his true feelings with beautiful language.

Tip 4: Ask questions skillfully and make people think.

To be honest, when I first saw this topic, I felt a little puzzled. Facing life with a smile, in the present life of grade three, there are mountains of textbooks and exercises, and life has made us breathless and exhausted. How can I face life with a smile? ("Face Life with a Smile")

Example 10: A smile is beautiful, which is better than any expression in the world. Mona Lisa's smile is quiet and mysterious. Audrey Hepburn's smile is beautiful and kind; Juliet Roberts' smile is full of confidence and vitality ... In the face of these smiles, I not only have to ask: Why are their smiles beautiful? ("Face Life with a Smile")

Comments: Appreciate a beautiful piece of music, with lingering sound, leaving people with endless charm. Similarly, a good article should have substance in words, and it should be instructive. Starting from the examples in students' life, asking questions can stimulate people's interest in reading, and seeing the author's unique ideas will naturally attract people to read; Example 10 Cut to the chase. After enumerating the charming smiles of several famous people, this paper puts forward the question of "Why smiles are so beautiful", skillfully deduces the topic, and stimulates people's imagination and reading desire.

Tip 5: Widely quoted and colorful.

Example 1 1: The ancients said, "Reach the peak, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.." ; Philosophers say that "the higher you stand, the farther you see"; And I said that the scenery of "hillside" is unique because it shows beauty in the process.

Example 12: Looking for eternity in a short life, Plato said. -inscription. ("Wings to Fly Far with Dreams")

Example 13: The Yangtze River flows eastward, and the waves wash away all heroes, and success or failure turns empty. The green hills are still there, and the sunset is a few degrees red ... ("Heroic Poetry")

Comments: It is a good strategy to make the language beautiful. There are many famous sayings, sayings and proverbs in ancient and modern China and abroad. If you can quote them skillfully, it will certainly add a lot of color to the article. Here are a few examples of quoting poems, celebrity speeches and lyrics of film and television dramas, which not only increase literary talent, but also deepen the artistic conception of the article or increase the depth of thought.

Tip 6: Respond from beginning to end and highlight the main idea.

Example 14: (1) Time flies, time flies. Fourteen-year-old, has been traveling with his parents for several years. From the beginning of my life, I rushed irretrievably to the future at the same speed. Occasionally, I stop to find that I have been walking with my parents for fourteen years. On the contrary, I grew up.

(End) I think we will continue to walk for a longer time, probably their whole life. We will sigh that time flies and time flies. In the next few decades, I will go with my parents. Old is time, not people; The constant is love. ("I walk with my parents")

Comments: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in examination room writing. Generally speaking, the author first puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, thus making the center of the article stand out. Example 14, the beginning and the end are expressed in simple and affectionate language, which is not brilliant, but the affection between the lines makes this article full of emotions, the last one of the beginning and the end. They all use the same sentence pattern, but skillfully change the words, which forms the care before and after, arouses the inner touch, affectionate exuberance and harmonious voice, and highlights the theme of this paper-walking with parents all their lives and loving each other forever.

The above points are summarized in my daily teaching and students' writing practice. They are not "panacea" or "high score cheats", but if they can help senior high school students make key breakthroughs, master the writing essentials at the beginning and train well, I believe there will be more and more beautiful points in the article. I also hope that students can be familiar with more excellent chapters, learn more writing skills, enrich their reference library, and make writing no longer an obstacle. We must remember this.