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Methods for collecting and processing all aspects of junior middle school Chinese compositions

Narrative writing

1. Be realistic from multiple angles and avoid emptiness

1. Mobilize multiple senses and use artistic synesthesia.

(1) Use multiple senses:

In the text of "Rain Makes Me Intoxicated"

"The rain falls on the ground, and "opens" blossoms of beauty. The flowers are so beautiful. The rain falling on the leaves forms small water droplets. Those small water droplets dance lively and rotate on the leaves. The leaves look more green after being washed by the rain, as if they are "green". It's dripping down Yeats. (Visual)

Shhh, close your eyes and listen to the sound of rain! That's the angel singing, the song is melodious and graceful, and even the heart jumps and dances with it. Accept the blessing of rain! (Hearing)

Hey, a quiet earthy fragrance enters the body with the breath and melts in the heart. It is very comfortable. The body seems to be fluttering in the fragrance and floating to the sky. , travel through the stars. "(Smell) (Feeling)

(2) Use artistic synaesthesia

In the text of "Moonlight over the Lotus Pond"

"The breeze passes by. , sending wisps of fragrance, like the faint singing from a tall building in the distance. "Use the sense of hearing to write about the sense of smell.

2. Combination of front and side views

Example: "It was a spring morning in 1988. I was tired of writing, so I I turned on the TV and wanted to relax. Hey, great, the famous composer Xu Peidong is talking about song creation! His charming phrase "The cowbell rings the spring" has shaken me back to the spring of my childhood hometown several times. Go inside; the tinkling of cowbells on the green fields makes people forget to leave. This time I have to listen to his experience. But - suddenly, a red light flashed in front of my eyes - it was a group of girls dressed as red peppers, rushing towards me on the TV screen like a gust of wind. This pounce completely wiped out Xu Peidong's voice, appearance, and smile. (Using the musical charm of composer Xu Peidong to underline the graceful and charming dance of the red pepper girl)

Their headscarves are red, their clothes are red, their water pants are red, and even their shoes and socks are red. of. This made my heart, which had been dyed red by the red clothes of the new wives who had just stepped off the sedan chair as early as my childhood, start to move with joy again. (The dazzling beauty of the girls is written on the front)

3. The environment contrasts and the scenery is rendered

Example: ""Pa——" A gentle explosion woke me up in "Shou Sui" I, I forced myself to open my eyes. In the middle of the hall, under a large dried tree stump, a red fireball was burning. There was no flame or smoke.

'Poof--' The earthenware pot next to the fire roared. There was a roar, like thousands of troops galloping; the boiling water splashed on the ashes of the fire, and the billowing heat mixed with white smoke and ashes rolled toward the roof. "

"After several huge thunders, "cracking, popping, popping", the sound of firecrackers continued one after another, and the whole world was boiling. The air was filled with the rich aroma of gunpowder, and we ran and jumped to pick up the unexploded firecrackers. Visiting the New Year from door to door. The description of the environment highlights the joy of the New Year.

4. Combination of reality and reality

There are many legends about him!

It is said that he is straightforward. I am happy when I leave the mountain, but I feel like I have lost my soul when I leave the mountain. But once I enter the mountain, I can talk to the rocks, talk to the plants and trees, and sing to the mountain flowers.

He can understand the language of birds and beasts, the birds relieve their boredom with him, the goats talk to him, the little rabbits are willing to sleep with him, and even the blind bear bows to him when he sees him!

says One year there was a mountain fire, and he fought hard to put it out. He himself became a man on fire, and he was still trying to put out the fire. It happened that a mountain rain came down like a torrential rain, extinguishing the mountain fire and drenching him. He looked like a water man. He touched his chin and his beard disappeared and said with a smile: "Hey, I'm ten years younger again!"

5. Writing about changes in time and space

Example: Zong Pu's "February Orchids" describes the February orchids beside the stream next to the Tsinghua University house in his childhood, the February orchids behind the hill where Snow's tomb is located, and the February orchids near my home (space transformation)

< p> "Because of illness and laziness, I often don't leave the house for several days. Flowers bloom and fade throughout the spring. They come and go in a hurry, and some are never seen again. But I always see the February Orchid blooming there calmly, as if waiting at any time to ask: "Are you feeling better?"

Walking in the garden after another minor illness. Suddenly my eyes were filled with green, preparing to shield myself from the heat. When we walked to the territory of the February Orchid, we could see no flowers, only the green color that connected directly to the pine wall. It's like there was a large colorful painting that was now lifted up, rolled up, and put somewhere for the coming year. (Time changes)

5. Weather changes

For example, writing about willow trees, writing about willows in cloudy and rainy days, and then writing about willows in sunny days will show the grace of willows more comprehensively< /p>

6. Combination of points and noodles

A debate

The classroom of Class 3 (2) is really lively, and the noise can be heard from a distance. I am a person who loves to watch the excitement. As soon as I heard the noise there, I ran straight in.

Today, Class 3 (2) has become a "daughter country", and all the girls in the class are here.

Some were sitting in their seats, and some were simply sitting on the table, occupying a favorable position, which was really overwhelming. What were they talking about? It turned out that the midterm exam results were announced, and the top 10 in the class were all boys. The "female talent" Liu Tingting ranked 11th. This was a shock. The boys were elated and the girls were crestfallen.

Li Mei, who had a thin face, muttered: "When I was in elementary school, the girls in our class were better than the boys, but that was no longer the case in middle school. Their brains were getting dumber and their grades were getting worse. It's getting worse; boys are improving step by step, and we are retreating step by step. Unfortunately, I am not a man." As she said this, she sighed deeply.

Zhang Wei, the clear-spoken monitor with a crisp voice, disagreed with her and said: "The reason why we are inferior to boys is not because we are stupid, but because we don't work hard and think about dressing up all day long. She loves to dress up and only loves to look at other people’s new clothes. She’s really worthless!”

Lili, who loves to dress up, doesn’t want to hear this anymore: “If you don’t buy new clothes if you have money, how can you dress in tatters? Humph? !" After saying that, she shrugged her nose and twisted her butt, making everyone laugh.

7. Use imagination and association

The scene of competition on Pingba is the most spectacular, and the "autumn battle on the battlefield" may have that kind of style. No, the lineup is similar, not lively enough. It was the scene of a grand holiday game. Just think about it, the sky and the earth are factory buildings, the deep valleys are workshops, the sky covers the ground, and the mountains surround it. Which textile factory in any place in the world has such a scale? You see, the neat rows of spinning wheels and the energetic team of competitors. As soon as the order was given, hundreds of cars roared together. Not to mention anything else, the buzzing sound alone had the momentum of a fleet of planes taking off from an airport. Where there is competition, there are thousands of horses galloping to complete a combat mission together. "Remembering a Spinning Wheel"

8. Use four typical description methods of writing about people

I think he probably won't listen to me. Otherwise, how could he be so mechanical? , never even looked at me from beginning to end! So, I felt an inexplicable sadness. (Psychology)

He looked at me quietly, his eyes filled with surprise, confusion, and uneasiness. He opened his lips a few times, but not a single word slipped from his lips. His Adam's apple trembled a few times, and he finally managed to squeeze out a sentence: "Why don't you speak? Why don't you talk about the situation at school? Why don't you talk about Yao Ming and Su Youpeng?" (expression, action, language) from "Understanding You"

9. Combination of movement and stillness

The willow tree on the street seems to be sick, too lazy to move, curling up on its branches. (quiet). There was an irritating monotonous tinkling sound coming from the copper and iron shop. (Action)

10. Turn big into small

For example, the question "Beginning" is very big. You need to be able to turn it into small, specific to the beginning of a certain aspect, such as bravery, self-confidence. , strong, considerate to your parents, etc., start with something that caused a change in you, instead of writing it in a general way, which will make it empty.

2. How to make language vivid and vivid

A good article not only has a profound artistic conception, but also has exquisite language and rich literary talent, making people read it hundreds of times. And some articles, although they have good intentions and ideas, cannot give people an intuitive impression of the image because of the tasteless language, and it is difficult for them to become masterpieces that others will love to read. Therefore, improving our language expression is crucial to improving the readability of articles. How can we make the language image vivid? You might as well start from the following aspects.

1. Use figurative description instead of abstract explanation

Please compare the following two sentences.

(1) After the busy work, the girl also began to feel homesick.

(2) After busy work, girls like to climb up to the top floor alone, face the direction of home, and read the flying geese formation and the sunset. (Yan Wenjing's "Missing Person")

Although both sentences express "the girl is homesick", sentence (1) only explains that "homesickness" is abstract and vague.

Sentence (2) expresses "homesickness" through the specific image of the girl "climbing up to the top floor alone, facing the direction of home, and reading the wild geese array and the sunset." Such "homesickness" is concrete. Sensable. In particular, the image of "wild geese array and sunset" contains the loneliness and desolation of longing, sentimental parting, and can easily remind people of "where can the hometown book reach, return to the wild geese by Luoyang", "ruin a life of haggard, just a few words" Dusk" and other poems, so the impression on people is particularly deep. ?We usually have many similar examples in our spoken language. For example, if a person is "greedy", we use "eat the bowl and look at the pot" to express it. To say that a person is not bloody, we use "three awls will not bleed." Come,” etc., are all examples of using images instead of abstractions. Replacing abstraction with images and appropriately choosing rhetorical methods is an important aspect. Please take a look at the following examples:

(3) This pavilion stands on a protruding corner of the rock. It is empty from top to bottom, as if a goshawk is floating in the sky with its wings spread. (Zhu Ziqing's "Green")

(4) The shining green of Meiyu River attracts us. (Same as above)

(5) It only takes four minutes for a British horse to run around the Place de Mars. Yesterday, it took five minutes for it to run around Miss George.

(Fa? Morua's "Three Dumas")

Example (3) Through vivid metaphors, the shape and momentum of the pavilion can be seen in front of you. Example ④ Use "attract" instead of "attract" to personify the shining green of Meiyutan and bring abstract things to life. Example (5) uses exaggeration to firmly imprint Miss George’s physical image in the reader’s mind. The skillful use of rhetoric can highlight the main characteristics of things, turn abstraction into concreteness, blurryness into clarity, and make things difficult to describe appear before your eyes, which is very helpful in enhancing the vividness of language.

2. Use precise words and strive to be expressive

To use precise words to achieve a vivid effect, the first step is to use accurate words. The French novelist Flaubert said: "No matter what we describe, to express it, there is only a noun; to give it movement, there is only a verb; to get its nature, there is only an adjective." In writing, we Only by finding the "one" word of "only" can it be considered accurate and expressive. In Lu Xun's short story "Medicine", when Hua Laoshuan and his wife were about to buy steamed buns with human blood, the author wrote: "Aunt Hua dug under the pillow for a long time, took out a bag of foreign money, and gave it to Laoshuan...". The word "dig" is used well. It expresses Aunt Hua's cherishment of this bag of foreign money. This hard-earned money is hard-earned, so it must be put aside more carefully. It must be "paid out". If "take" is replaced by "take" or "touch", the meaning will be completely different.

Look at the following sentence: "The fire is getting bigger, the smoke is filling the whole room, and the red tongue of flame is about to lick the floor." Among them, "tongue of fire" is more meaningful than "flame" or "flame" Accurate and more vivid. The word "lick" more vividly describes the scene of flames about to burn the floor, giving people a vivid and concrete feeling.

In addition to being accurate, in order to make the language image vivid, we must also pay attention to turning static into movement, turning the invisible into tangible, and making the language come alive.

"The garden is full of spring scenery and cannot be shut up, and a red apricot sprouts out of the wall." There are no words for special actions, but we feel it is very vivid because the author treats intangible and inanimate things as Write something tangible and alive to give people an image and vivid effect

Avoiding repetition and monotony of words is also a way to achieve vivid effects. Please read an article describing holiday fireworks :

"In an instant, hundreds of flowers bloomed over the square, some like flying geese, some like steel flowers splashing, and some like ears of wheat rippling. This dazzling scene was like a thousand peacocks spreading their tails. "Ru", "Like", "Like" and "Wanru", these verbs have no difference in meaning, but the author's varied use here makes the article's words rich in variety, avoids monotony, and enhances the vividness of the article. .

3. The method of painting vividly

This writing method is to describe the sounds in nature, the shapes and colors of objects in detail, so that people can have an immersive feeling. . Dostoyevsky gave such an example. He said: "A small silver dollar fell on the ground." This sentence is not good enough. It should be written as "A small silver dollar rolled down from the table and clinked on the ground." "It's jumping with a clang" (quoted from Qin Mu's "Yu Lin Caiying") This is vivid; Liu Baiyu's "Three Gorges of the Yangtze River" mainly uses this technique when writing about Qutang Gorge: "...in Qutang Gorge. The current is still surging, the waves are like thunder, and countless whirlpools are formed on the river. The boat rushes through the whirlpools, and only the sound of rushing water is heard. "...The dark clouds suddenly disappeared, and a blue sky floated on the top of the gorge. A few small pieces of golden clouds, and a ray of sunshine fell on the cliff on the left like lightning. "The author uses vivid techniques to describe the steepness of the Three Gorges mountains and the ferocity of the water, making people feel like they are on the scene, thrilling, and giving people a real image. feeling.

4. Use argots

The argots mentioned here are somewhat similar to 'disguises or euphemisms in rhetoric, and also somewhat similar to riddles with relatively clear answers. For example, instead of saying "it's September", we say "when the chrysanthemums are blooming"; instead of saying "the sun is setting," we say "the sun is kissing the mountains in the west"; instead of saying "the big trees have withered" , instead of saying "the big tree has lost its youth"; instead of saying "the old age of life", it says "the sunset of life" and so on. These words are neither superficial nor exhaustive, revealing the wisdom of language. The following is a self-introduction by the contemporary poet Zheng Chengyi, which is quite interesting because of the use of lingo: "If I were forty years old, I would be eighteen years old. I fell in the mountains of Zhejiang and moved to a factory in Shanghai. Because my foundation is too shallow, I am old It is not mature enough, and only one leaf sprouts every four years on average - the latest two are "Wan Xian Qin" published in Ningxia and "Lake Island" published in Shanghai. "The author did not directly introduce his age, place of origin, resume and creative situation. ,and. It appeals to readers like a riddle, avoiding clichés and giving people a lively and refreshing feeling.

5. Write sentences that are more playful

If the article is too serious, it will inevitably give people a sense of heaviness and depression; add some humor and say some playful words, which will not only make you feel comfortable when reading Lively and interesting, and make the article vivid and full of literary talent.

Please look at the opening paragraph of Wang Feng's essay "A Little Man in the Family":

"At the end of 2001, on a sunny day, with a not loud cry, the average family member rose by one My dear, I'm honored to be promoted to uncle... The little guy doesn't care about this. He curls his mouth into a gourd shape and just cries with his throat open. I think a man won't let go of his tears, and he will cry. There must be something sad! My sister coaxed me into hugging me, and the little guy opened his mouth as if he knew something, and looked around for the "canteen"; his throat also made a "humming" sound urgently. It turned out that he was hungry. Look With his eating look, he might have lived in the 1960s in his previous life!"

The author's exaggerated wording and advanced communication give the article a unique atmosphere and sentiment. Reading such words, you will definitely laugh. Another example is Sanmao (Deja Vu Swallow Returns), instead of saying "no wind", he playfully said "the wind has gone to sleep somewhere"; instead of saying "the house is full of dust and garbage", he wrote humorously : "There are also dust and garbage, both of which are more capable than light. Even light cannot reach it, but it can visit the humble house every time." The environment is so harsh, but the writing is so relaxed, which shows the author's unique personality charm and innovative ability. It enhances the appeal of the article.

The ancients said: "Words without words will not go far." He also said: "If a worker wants to do his job well, he must first sharpen his tools." The tools of the article< /p>

Tools are language, because it is the only material for describing scenery and shaping images. Therefore, we must pay attention to the learning and training of language and strive to learn the skills of using language. Make the language vivid, so that our articles are meaningful and brilliant

3. Flexible overall expression techniques add color to the articles

1. Suppress first and then advance

Example:

Stinky chrysanthemum

Roulixin, Inner Mongolia

When I was a child, my father and I traveled all over the country China. In this land of flowers, I have seen graceful peonies, noble and colorful lotuses, and even mysterious epiphyllums and blood-like azaleas, but these flowers hardly left any impression on me. After a while, I gradually forgot about it; but last summer, I was on vacation at my second aunt's house. The common smelly chrysanthemum that can be seen everywhere in the northern land made me unforgettable for the rest of my life.

It was August last year. At the invitation of my second aunt, I went to Urqihan Town for a vacation.

When I walked into the yard of my second aunt’s house, I saw flowers everywhere: various flowers were planted neatly on both sides of the spacious courtyard, leaving only the middle part. Walking through a narrow passage: I have always liked flowers, so I couldn't help but squat down and take a look: the golden lotus leaves were trembling in the breeze, and the poppies were looking at the sun delicately... But I soon discovered that these flowers were only There are countless trees planted, and most of the others are stink chrysanthemums: bigger leaves, holding small crimson flowers, needless to say, compared with other flowers, they are much inferior. My aunt saw me looking at the flowers and said to me: "These are all planted by your second uncle." Oh! It's that "silly old man". I thought no wonder, he only planted some broken flowers; my second uncle's appearance appeared in my mind. .

I only met my second uncle a few times, and that was when he visited my grandma’s house during the Chinese New Year. In my mind, he was the chief of the Finance Section of the Urqihan Forestry Bureau. He always wears a gray tunic suit that wraps around his short body, and his face is wrinkled prematurely. He looks much older than my father. His surname is Han, but my uncles always call him "Old Han." "Everyone understands the implication. I also think he is a bit "stupid". For example, one time during the Chinese New Year, several uncles drank together, and the fourth uncle said to him: "I heard that your Forestry Bureau has a lot of birch bark. I will bring it back next time." How about some?" This little thing could be done with just one sentence for him, but he hesitated for a long time before saying: "I will definitely buy it for you when the invoice is issued, but not now,

It's public. "-Listen, how stupid he is! He made all his uncles look down on him. From then on, I called him "silly old man" behind his back.

Calling him "silly old man" is indeed not unfair. He. Let’s talk about his family. He is quite a big official there. There is a lot of wood in the forest farm, but he doesn’t even have any decent furniture. However, he is quite nice to me, and I think he is. He is sincere and simple, and I respect him very much.

My second uncle likes stinky chrysanthemums. He waters them when he has nothing to do and plays with them endlessly. I don’t understand why he likes these ordinary stinky chrysanthemums. , dark red color, small flowers, with a few petals, they are not eye-catching at all. Other flowers often attract bees and butterflies, but I have never seen a moth fall on the stink chrysanthemum. Smell, ah! What does it smell like? It’s not fragrant, but it smells bad. No wonder it’s called “stinky chrysanthemum”! I asked my second uncle why he likes this flower, and he smiled and said, “Think about it for yourself. "Hmph! This "silly old man"!

Soon, for some reason, the peanuts in the yard were infested with many small white bugs. They were attached to the leaves of the flowers, sucking the juice, and they were densely packed and annoying. Although I often watered them, but the number of white bugs kept increasing. Gradually, the delicate poppies withered, and the golden lotus leaves were no longer able to produce tiny flower buds.

However, I was surprised to find that none of the stinky chrysanthemums in the garden was infected with insects. They bloomed more and more colorfully, and the flowers bloomed more and more. I asked my second uncle why, and he still smiled and said, "Think about it for yourself." Huh! This "silly old man" must not know it himself.

One day, my second uncle came back from get off work with a gloomy face. He squatted motionless next to the flowers as soon as he entered the hospital, staring at the blooming chrysanthemums. Later, several more guests came, and everyone Advise him to be more open-minded. From their conversation, I understood that a few days ago, several of my uncle's leaders used public funds to travel around the world on the pretext of attending a meeting, but they asked him to reimburse them. He thought it was illegal and did not report it. Unexpectedly, today the leader announced that due to work needs, my second uncle would be transferred to the "Family Planning Office". Although I laughed at my second uncle for being so stupid, I felt that he did the right thing, so as soon as the guests left, I went to comfort him.

I was at a loss for words when my second uncle spoke up: "Lixin, do you like this flower?" I didn't comment, and he added: "You asked me before why this flower doesn't grow insects, but now Let me tell you, just because of its unique fragrance, other flowers attract butterflies and bees, but its unique fragrance keeps the insects away." I suddenly understood. many. Yes, stinky chrysanthemum maintains its aristocracy by its unique fragrance. At the same time, it is discriminated against and even called "stinky chrysanthemum" because it dares to retain this unique fragrance. How unfair is this! I suddenly feel Isn’t Second Uncle just like this stinky chrysanthemum? Today, there are more than a few people like Second Uncle. Although they may be looked down upon by others or even beaten, I believe that history will one day do justice. of judgment.

When I got up early the next day, there was a heavy frost. After being attacked by insects, all the surviving flowers drooped their heads listlessly. Only the stink chrysanthemum stood proudly as usual, and its red flowers were even more dazzling. This flower is not afraid of the severe cold!

The second uncle came out with the same expression as usual. When he saw me staring at him, he smiled naively: "It's the same work everywhere." He left and walked towards As the sun rises, his back looks so tall for the first time in my eyes:

As the sun rises, the frost will eventually recede:

I look at the smelly chrysanthemums. Still neither coquettish nor coquettish, neither humble nor arrogant. Frost loses its power in front of it. What a tenacious chrysanthemum!

After the summer vacation, I asked my second aunt for a lot of flower seeds. I hope stinky chrysanthemums can bloom all over the world.

I love Stinky Ju, and I love people with Stinky Ju’s character even more.

2. Contrast

Germination

When I was enjoying the shade in the yard, I always saw a little boy next door burying the grape pits in a full bottle while eating grapes. soil in the flower pot. At first, I didn't care. After looking at it for a long time, I asked, "Why do you keep burying grape seeds in flower pots?"

"I want to grow grapes." He didn't even look up.

"But grapes are grown from grape vines. You can't grow them like this."

"I know."

"Then why are you doing it? Like this?" I was curious.

"Do you have to use vines to grow grapes? I want to create a miracle." The child raised his head, his eyes full of hope.

Afterwards, I always saw the boy carefully watering the grapes he planted, and then squatting in front of the flower pot in a daze, with hope in his eyes, so that other children in the yard asked him to play, and he also ignore. Clearly, he was immersed in his hope.

The boy’s parents discovered the boy’s weirdness only a few days later. On this day, the family just ran out of soy sauce. The boy was squatting outside the door. His father asked him to buy soy sauce. He called several times, but no one answered. When he went out to take a look, he found the boy squatting in front of the flowerpot blankly. The father asked him to buy soy sauce. Said: "What are you doing squatting here? I can't hear you even if I call you several times. Where is your heart? Go buy soy sauce!" Then he handed the money to the child.

After a long time, the boy still hadn’t bought the soy sauce. The child’s father panicked and hurriedly walked out. As soon as he went out, he saw the child still squatting in front of the flower pot at the door, holding the money he gave him in his hand.

The child's father was angry. He grabbed the child's hand and scolded him: "What did you do? I asked you to buy soy sauce, and you still die here?"

The child's mind was still in the flowerpot. The grape seeds had been buried in the flower pot for a long time and had not yet sprouted. The child was a little disappointed. He said, "I was thinking, why don't these grapes sprout?"

The child's After hearing this, the father became even more angry and said loudly: "I have told you before that it is useless for you to do this. You are really stubborn." As he said this, he slapped the child, lifted the flowerpot and broke it.

The child looked at the dirt and debris on the ground and cried.

The boy was still young after all. After being silent for a few days, he returned to his former liveliness and began to play with the children in the yard again

A week later, he also enjoyed the cool air When I was there, I saw a girl in the courtyard burying the grape pits in a flower pot while eating grapes. I wanted to go over and tell her that grape pits cannot grow grapes, but before I could go over, the boy also saw it. The boy walked over and said to the girl, "Why do you keep burying grape pits in flower pots?"

“I want to grow grapes.

“You need to use grapevine cuttings to grow grapes. You can’t grow them like this. ”

“I know. "

"Then why are you still doing this?"

"Do you have to use grapevines to grow grapes? I want to create a miracle. "The girl raised her head, her eyes full of hope.

"Really. It's useless for you to do this. I've done this before and it didn't work. "

"You need to water every day after planting, did you know?"

The boy nodded, opened his mouth, and wanted to say something, but ran back to the house without saying anything. .

A few days later, the girl’s flower pot actually grew tender grape vines. The girl was very happy. I saw her calling all the children in the yard to see it, and also called the boy. But the boy didn't go. When a group of children were surrounding the flowerpot, the boy hid alone and cried.

I saw the boy crying and walked over. I said, "Why are you crying here?"< /p>

The boy said, “The vine was planted by the girl’s father, and I saw it. "

The boy said again, "Her father is so kind. "As he spoke, the boy burst into tears.

3. Title metaphor, thread of text

Example: Maternal love is a needle thread

Especially Tianchen

When the mother was arranging her son's clothes, she found that the buttons on her son's shirt sleeves were loose.

She decided to nail them.

The son was very young. , but he is already a writer with a growing reputation. His talent and hard work have made his mother proud of this - she is the mother of a writer!

The room was quiet, except for the son typing on the keyboard. The ticking sound accompanied his flowing words. The mother could tell from her son's expression that he was thinking a lot. She didn't dare to make any noise when she was looking for needlework in the drawer, for fear of disturbing her son. , the mother found a thread tube, and the needle was inserted into the thread tube. She took them out and pushed the drawer gently.

But she was in trouble. The embroidery girl of the year couldn't even thread the needle. A month ago, she was threading a quilt, but now she could see the needle hole was there, but she couldn't believe that her eyesight had deteriorated so much. She put the thread into her mouth to wet it again. Use the index finger and thumb of your left hand to twist it sharply and thinly, raise your arm again so that your eyes are closest to the needle, and try again

-----It still fails.

Try again...

The thread has not yet penetrated into the eye of the needle.

The son was doing post-typesetting of the article. He saw his mother reflected on the screen and was startled. He suddenly felt that he was the sewing needle. Although he spent time with his mother, his heart was blocked by endless articles. He could no longer find a "hole" for his mother's thread to come in and out. But she was still unwilling to give up.

The son's eyes were hot. He then remembered that he had not communicated with his mother for a long time and had not cared about her food, clothing and daily life.

Mom. I'll help you. The moment the son left the computer, the thread passed through the needle. The mother's smile was like a flower, and she was stitching buttons for her son with her heart.

The son knew what to do in the future. Done. Because it is easy for a mother to be satisfied. For example, just help her thread a needle and realize her wish to nail a button for you, so that the love she gives can flow smoothly

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4. Unexpected

Example:

Hostage

Hoshi Shinichi (Japan)

Night falls, here It's a corner of the park in the middle of the street. Normally, you can enjoy a peaceful and peaceful scene from here, but it's different now. There are loud gunshots all around, and the sound of bullets flying around with metal objects has just stopped, and then from there. A majestic shout came from the police car’s loudspeaker:

“You are surrounded and you can’t run away. Resistance is useless. If you don't come out with your hands up, we will shoot without mercy! "

The fugitive was a robber who attacked and robbed a huge sum of money alone when the bank was closed. The police chased him here, and he had become a fish in the net. The shouts from the loudspeaker seemed very strange. Confidently announcing that the bandit's end was coming

After a moment of calm, a voice came from the jungle: "Please wait, don't shoot. "

"Okay, just raise your hands and surrender obediently!"

"No, that's not possible. "

"What are you talking about? Do you want to die? Otherwise, we will shoot. "

"Can't open!"

"Why? Do you have any other reasons?"

"Of course, I tell you there are hostages here. ”

The policemen were stunned for a moment, and no one said a word. They really didn’t expect that something like this would happen after they finally caught up here. The robber stood up and shouted loudly with the pride of a winner. Said: "Come on, do you still want to fight? Whoever dares to shoot, this kid will die with me." ”

The child looked very young from the way he was being held.

He cried sadly in a childish and innocent voice: "Hey, please help me! I want to go home."

Hearing this call, the police team did not dare to move forward even half a step and hurriedly discussed As a countermeasure, he started shouting again:

"I know, you are so despicable."

"Maybe I am despicable. But if I don't do this, I will be caught without mercy!"

"Okay, don't be wordy! Hand over the child quickly, you can't hurt him."

"Don't kid me, this can't be done. I want to get out of here ."

"Okay, I'll forgive you this time. But you have to let the child go first."

"Don't treat me as a fool. Can you say, 'Hey, let's go'? I've never heard of such a thing. I won't be fooled."

"What do you think?"< /p>

"Prepare a motorcycle for me, with enough gasoline, and I will drive away. I will carry the child on my back. If you shoot from behind, the bullet will hit him; and, If you do something wrong on the motorcycle, if something breaks down, it will affect the child's life, and you will be responsible for the consequences." After the robber made a detailed request, the child made a sad cry again. A cry for help. Things got to such an extent that the police were powerless and had no choice but to do as they were told.

"We meet your request, but what about the safety of this child?"

"Don't worry. As long as I get away, I don't want to hurt him. I am a robber, but He is not a murderer. I will inform you by phone of the location of the return of the child."

"If you harm the child, we will set up a trap to hunt you down and you will be punished. "

"I understand all this. I just want to get away with the money and don't want to add more guilt to the crime."

"You have to keep your word!"

After a few words of warning, the police agreed to his request and left a motorcycle with the engine running; the police team retreated. The robber held the bag in his hand, jumped into the car, and rushed out of the encirclement at full speed. He couldn't shoot even if he wanted to because he still had the child on his back.

He finally disappeared into the twilight.

Although the arrest failed, luckily, we didn’t get out