Li Yangchen, jieshou city Guji Central School, Anhui Province
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Narrative is mainly narrative. However, in the process of writing people, narratives or objects, we can, according to the needs of theme expression, flexibly intersperse discussions on the basis of narrative description, or directly express the author's feelings and subjective comments on the characters and events written, or express opinions with the help of the characters in the text, or use famous sayings of celebrities to explain our views. On the one hand, it reveals the essence of the problem and deepens readers' understanding of narrative things; On the other hand, it stimulates readers' association and causes them to sing emotionally; You can also get the finishing touch effect, deepen the theme and make the article shine.
There are several common ways of interspersed discussion in narration:
First, discuss first and then narrate.
the article begins with a clear meaning, and points out the narrative center and the main idea of the article with a paragraph of argumentative text, so as to command the following text, so that the meaning of the note written by the full text becomes clear under the prompt of discussion, which causes readers to think and pay attention to the following text. For example, Shen Congwen's article "Yunnan Song Club" begins with the following words: "Yunnan was originally the hometown of poetry, and Lunan and Yixi song and dance were famous all over the country. This time it has enriched my knowledge. " The opening discussion not only points out the long tradition and prosperity of Yunnan folk songs, but also highlights the wonderful Yunnan folk songs, and also reflects the context of the full text and the author's feelings. Another example is the essay "This sentence, I want to tell the soldier" in Shaoyang, Hunan Province in 213. Candidates express the object with the "soldier" in chess, and at the beginning of the article, they use two argumentative sentences: "You can take what you can and give up, you taught me to cherish" and "Go forward, you taught me to be resolute", and then describe related things separately, which has achieved seamless connection with the title and greatly improved it.
second, talk about it first.
the author first concentrates on pen and ink, describes people or things in detail, and then directly expresses his own comments or opinions with very pithy argumentative sentences, which can not only reveal or deepen the theme of the article, but also make the finishing point, and can complement each other with the writer's narrative. For example, in "Watching Dance", Bing Xin vividly described the whole process of the dance of the Karama sisters, and wrote: "After watching the dance of the Karama sisters, people deeply realized the beautiful and long-standing culture and art of India: dance, music, sculpture and pictures are all like branches on the same banyan tree, which droop and take root in the ground. So many branches are closely connected in the earth, absorbing the food provided by mother earth, and this earth is the broad masses of people in India. " This argument interspersed in the article appears to be rooted, which not only praises India's long history, but also tells people that appreciation of dance should be combined with cultural background in order to understand the deep beauty.
Another example is Wei Wei's description of Teacher Cai's feigned anger in My Teacher, and he said, "I think about it today, how beneficial it is for me to get close to literature and love literature." This argument not only points out the significance of the matter, expresses sincere feelings, but also indicates the end of a content level.
third, talk about it.
In the article, people and things are narrated, while comments are made. Narration and comments are closely combined to complement each other and complement each other, which not only helps to reveal the significance of narrative content, but also plays a wonderful role in connecting the preceding with the following, deepening the article layer by layer and enhancing its rationality. For example, in Cang Kejia's "Speaking and Doing by Mr. Wen Yiduo", the first two paragraphs use Mr. Wen Yiduo's "Speaking and Doing" to lead the full text, and at the same time lead the first part of the narrative, and then describe Wen Yiduo's academic research as a scholar. The seventh paragraph sums up the content of the first part, highlighting Mr. Wen Yiduo's "do it before you say it" feature. The discussion sentences in the eighth and ninth paragraphs always lead to the following, and then describe the characteristics of Mr. Wen Yiduo as a revolutionary who "says" and "does", and his words and deeds are consistent. The full text narrates Mr. Wen Yiduo's main events by means of narration and discussion, showing Mr. Wen Yiduo's noble personality of unity in words and unity in appearance.
in a word, the dragon needs a wonderful pen to make the finishing touch, and the literary works need ingenuity to conceive. The discussion in narration is like icing on the cake, which makes our expression more attractive. As long as you master this technique, I believe you can write a beautiful narrative!
lead the way in American literature
Keep an eye on plum blossoms
Wen ∕ Jiang Zhonghua
One day, I saw a traditional Chinese painting calendar in an old bookstall, in which there was a picture of Bai Mei with branches hovering and plum blossoms dotted, which was very artistic. There is a vermilion imprint under the plum blossom. If you carefully identify it, it is the seven words "Keep an eye on the plum blossom". () I was amazed: Does this painter have an eye? One eye is gone, and you still want to see plum blossoms? What an interesting wonderful person! The painting bet on the author: Qing, Wang Shishen. This special seal aroused my interest, so I went back to look for information.
Wang Shishen, one of the "Eight Eccentrics of Yangzhou", loves plum as much as his life, and paints plum exquisitely. He was blind at the age of 54. This is a very unfortunate and painful thing, but he carved the seal of "I still have one eye to see the plum blossom", thanking God for leaving one eye for himself so that he could see his favorite plum blossom.
the optimism in these seven words makes me deeply moved.
Why does Wang Shishen live happily? I guess, he probably thought that if he was blind, he wouldn't even have a chance to see plum blossoms! How lucky it is to be blind in one eye compared with being blind in both eyes!
coincidentally. Shi Tiesheng, a contemporary writer, suffered from uremia after his legs were paralyzed at the age of 21, and he relied on hemodialysis to maintain his life. Shi Tiesheng had a unique understanding of life in the painful tempering, and wrote in "Broken Pen in the Gap": The experience of illness is to know how to satisfy step by step. Only when you have a fever do you know how refreshing the days without a fever are. When you cough, you realize how peaceful your voice is without coughing. ..... finally wake up: in fact, we are lucky every moment, because any disaster may be preceded by a word "more".
"In fact, every moment is lucky", which is the wisdom realized by Shi Tiesheng. A healthy person may not live happily. Shi Tiesheng, who has been paralyzed all the year round, feels his luck!
Life is always unhappy, and external circumstances often make us involuntarily. Bitterness is also a day, and joy is also a day. Why not choose to live happily? Your own mood can be your own master. Wang Shishen, who is blind at first sight, is delighted in the situation of "looking at plum blossoms with one eye". Such joy and contentment are enough to enlighten us with wisdom-happiness does not give up people, but people themselves give up happiness.
(Excerpted from Shenzhen Evening News)
Analysis of techniques
This is an inspirational masterpiece of American literature, one of its features is that the selected articles focus on the theme of never giving up happiness at any time, and adopt the expression method of narration and discussion. At the beginning, a seal leads to the story of Wang Shishen, pointing out his good mentality, which is the full text. Shi Tiesheng's story is skillfully led out by "unique", and then the fable of half a glass of water is led out by "thinking of a fable". Each case is followed by a wonderful discussion, highlighting the theme from different angles. The final discussion wraps up the full text, which makes the finishing point and deepens the theme. This way, it is natural and ingenious, leaving no trace.
examples of techniques
My happiness comes from growing up.
Li Guoqing
When I was a child, I didn't know what happiness was, so I ran to ask my parents. Dad said, "Happiness means that mom and dad are happy to have a meal with you, and happiness means that mom tells stories to put you to sleep every day." Mom said, "Happiness means that your father helps you up when you fall, and happiness means that your father takes you to the playground." Oh, in this way, I have so much happiness since I was a child! I remember, I remember, I do have a lot of happiness!
In kindergarten, Mr. Li Fang led us to sing and dance happily. When the class was over, she played with us and lost her handkerchief. She threw it behind Tiantian, who picked it up and ran to catch her. Seeing their appearance, I giggled and danced happily. At this time, I feel that life in kindergarten is really carefree and happy!
when I was in the second grade of primary school, I invited my classmates to my home to spend my birthday with me. Mom bought a big cake. Jun Jun smeared a mass of cream on my face, and I quickly fought back and painted her like a clown. When other students saw it, they also imitated our appearance, even eating and playing, not to mention how happy they were. Amid laughter, I had an unforgettable and happy birthday.
unconsciously, I am now a junior high school student. Teachers leave more and more homework, and every night when I get home, I work hard to do my homework, and I have no time to play. But I am still very happy, because I can swim happily in the ocean of knowledge every day, because I have learned more knowledge and deeper truth. Do you think I can be unhappy?
After growing up, I finally know that happiness means studying and playing with my good partners, happiness means that the whole family is happy together, happiness means that someone talks to you, happiness means that someone is with you when you are lonely, and happiness means giving a seat to the grandmother on the bus ... Oh, it turns out that happiness is in my life bit by bit, and every footprint of my growth path is full of happiness.
Online comments
Articles can write the emotional experience of happiness layer by layer in chronological order according to their own growth process, which is rich in content, scattered but not chaotic. In the essay, the author selects rich materials such as parents' care, kindergarten fun, classmates accompanying me on my birthday, and learning knowledge is very happy. In particular, on the basis of narration, the author shows his unique feelings, shows my true experience of happiness, and condenses a strong sense of happiness in rich and informative materials, which is fresh, unique and full of personality. It is embodied in the last sentence of each paragraph, such as "But I am still very happy, because I can swim happily in the ocean of knowledge every day, because I have learned more knowledge and deeper truth." Do you think I can be unhappy? "