As we all know, article writing is the key and difficult point in the essay examination. Many students hope that the beginning of their article can catch the eye of the examiner, but they suffer from the lack of clear ideas and no way to start. Then, China Public Education will share some wonderful opening examples with you and analyze them together.

Example 1

With the implementation of the poverty alleviation strategy, China's poor areas have undergone earth-shaking changes: from muddy roads to clean streets, from dilapidated houses to livable life, from From farmland being barren to industrial prosperity... grassroots cadres overcame numerous difficulties and dangers with unwavering faith and achieved this dazzling achievement. At present, the battle against poverty has entered the second half, and the poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "gnawing hard bones and attacking difficulties". It is even more necessary for us to persist in our feelings and dreams in order to achieve greater changes in the countryside!

We noticed that the word "with" in the first sentence is used to clarify the background, and later when it talks about earth-shaking changes, a colon is used to introduce the specific content, and this series of content is all positive. Changes, followed by an overall summary of the above changes using the word "achievement", and then further highlighting the current situation and clarifying the point of view. The overall idea is in line with the "summary" writing idea, which is "point out the background + summarize the problems/achievements + analyze + highlight the general argument."

Example 2

Based on the current situation, my country's agricultural structural adjustment is advancing in an orderly manner, agricultural green development is making steady progress, rural reform is advancing steadily, and agricultural and rural development has made historic achievements. However, the battle against poverty has entered the second half, and the poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "gnawing hard bones and attacking strongholds". Only with the support of unchanging feelings, unchanging beliefs, and unchanging dreams, and not refusing to do anything because of the difficulties, and not shrinking from the heavy responsibilities, can we "gnaw" the last hard nut and win greater changes for the countryside.

Zhonggong Analysis

First of all, we see that the key point of "based on the present" is the current situation, and the subsequent content describes a series of development achievements, which is an explanation of the achievements. Secondly, use "however" to make a logical transition, saying that our development work has entered a difficult period, and then further introduce our theme and clarify our views. The overall idea is a "turning point", which is "description of good phenomena + description of problems + analysis of problems + clear viewpoints". Careful students will find that the content overlaps with the generalization in Example 1. Therefore, to facilitate everyone's memory, it can also be understood as "opposite content expression + generalization".

Example 3

People’s ideals of the countryside include “the land is flat and the houses look like”; The ideal of the countryside is "Yellow hair hanging down, contentment and contentment"... However, there are still many rural houses in China that are dilapidated, farmland is barren, and farmers are weak in spirit. The battle against poverty has entered the second half, and poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "gnawing hard bones and attacking strongholds". Only with the support of unchanging feelings, unchanging beliefs, and unchanging dreams, and not refusing to do anything because of the difficulties, and not shrinking from the heavy responsibilities, can we "gnaw" the last hard nut and win greater changes for the countryside.

Zhonggong Analysis

The first part of this opening will be more attractive than the above two examples because there are more famous quotes in the content and the sentence structure is written in parallel. It is still followed by "however" to make a logical turn, lead to problems, point out the difficulties and obstacles of development, and then clarify the point of view and explain how to do it. There are many fusions in this opening. First, the first sentence is "parallel famous quotes", and then the transition is followed by "question" to analyze the problem and clarify the point of view. The overall idea is a combination of "parallel style" and "turning style", organized into "parallel famous quotes (indicating positive content) + problem description + analysis + bright viewpoints".

The above are the opening writing ideas carefully selected by China Public Education for all students. I hope that everyone will proceed step by step and persevere in preparing for the exam to improve the quality and speed of opening writing!