Note (1) Self-determination. (2) Style, except poetry. (3) No copying or interplanting is allowed. ④ Don't disclose personal information. ⑤ Write standard and use punctuation correctly.
Many candidates may think that this year's essay topic is just a cliche to persuade everyone to cherish time and make positive progress, and there is nothing new. But under careful consideration, it is still difficult to examine the questions, which reflects the good intentions of the proposer.
This is a sentence title with subject-predicate structure, which consists of three words. Maybe the examinee just grasped the passage of time, but even so, it should be noted that the topic is "passage", not "loss", "disappearance" and "disappearance". In the dictionary, "passing away" has only one meaning, that is, "passing away like running water", which is generally used to describe time, such as "passing time" and "passing years". And "loss" has three meanings: ① It means that minerals and soil in nature are lost by themselves or taken away by water and wind, and it also means that the river flows away in vain; (2) It refers to the scattering and loss of useful things; (3) metaphor personnel leave the local or the unit. "Disappear" means "(things) gradually decrease to nothing". "Disappear" means "disappear". Some candidates may not notice the difference between these words and equate "death" with "loss", "disappearance" or "disappearance". "Time flies like running water" is intended to tell us that the passage of time is both visible and sensible. "Running water fades away from spring", "Time makes people old" and "Time flies away, cherries are red and bananas are green". You can't see how the water of the Yellow River flows into the ocean from heaven and never returns. You can't see the lovely lock in the bright mirror of the high room. Although it is silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night. And so on. In fact, the key word of this topic should be "zai", where "zai" is an adverb and an adverbial, meaning "Zheng". The title means "time disappears from our eyes like running water", and "existence" means a state, which is a progressive tense. The big picture can be conceived from the following two angles.
First, from the perspective of "how to look at the passing of the world". Candidates should be familiar with the proposition of "time", which can often be transformed into the proposition of "life". After all, time and life are twin brothers. They can combine propositions, talk about the passage of time, express philosophical thinking, and raise the writing concept to the height of "life value". There are many materials related to "time" and "life". The famous sentence in The Analects of Confucius said: "The son is in Sichuan: the deceased is like a husband! Don't give up day and night. " The famous sentence in Su Shi's "Red Cliff Fu": "The deceased is like this, but it has never happened; If you are full of emptiness, the deceased is not long or short. " You can also open your mind from another aspect, such as what will change over time? What won't change? Zhang's "Moonlit Night on the Spring River" said: "Who has seen the moon by the river? When did Jiang Yue take the photo at the beginning of the year? Life is endless from generation to generation, and Jiang Yue is only similar year after year. I don't know who Jiang Yue is waiting for, but I see the Yangtze River delivering water. " It is a good reference. Following this line of thought, it is easy to open up the idea of composition, but not all candidates can do it, after all, they must rise to a certain philosophical height.
Second, from the perspective of "what should we do in the face of the passage of time". On this topic, it is easiest to start from the perspective of "how to do it". In fact, the question of how to do it is clear. The positive idea is that time is passing, and we should cherish it and be positive-we can't extend the length of life, but we can broaden the width of life, fight against the passage of time in a positive way, improve the quality of life and enhance the meaning of life. Negative intention is naturally to criticize and deny the behavior of wasting time and life. Of course, it is usually more positive and negative, so it comes naturally. From the perspective of "cherishing time", you can write an argumentative essay or describe something, emphasize the importance of "time" and write a narrative.
Reference example (adapted from User Hydrology)
Time is running out.
The last pinch of snow curled up in the ravine finally couldn't stretch out, fell into the grass, turned into a trace of water, merged into a spring and flowed into the stream. Time goes hand in hand with it, and it also passes to the depths of time ... Yes, what else can explain time as eloquently as a river, and what else can switch between the "three States" of the universe as freely as a river? Unpredictable time can't be directly described, so people have to use magical rivers to describe it. So there was a sigh of "Zi Yuechuan: the deceased is like a husband". When flying north and south, we know the changes of seasons; From hair to hair, I know the passage of time. "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow" is mostly because their understanding of time is still in a chaotic state. Without the weak crown, they naturally have the regret that their clothes are getting slower and their years are getting later. So there are many regrets related to time. For example, in a certain period of time, love didn't come out, but it became loved by others. In the lost time, filial piety is not exhausted, and relatives are not left. Time is 24 hours a day for everyone. But everyone's attitude towards time is very different. Some people say that they have too much time, so they throw it away, so they soak in the feast, lie in ecstasy and sit next to the "Great Wall on the table". Time just flowed away in the glass, disappeared in luxury and lost at the gambling table. These people believe that today's wine will lead to tomorrow's worries, but they don't know that "when spring comes back, flowers will bloom again", which is just a seasonal cycle. Spring is not the spring of yesterday, and flowers are not the flowers of the past. The wise man understands that time is infinite, but the length of human life is limited, but the width of life can be extended. Qian Xuesen, a master of Neo-Confucianism, never wrote an inscription, attended banquets or appraisal meetings all his life. He said, I don't have much time. I still have a lot of things to do. Yes, the difference between people lies in whether they cherish time. If they do more useful things in a limited time, they will inject a core into life. At the end of his life, people will say that his life is solid and heavy. At that time, Xin Qiji had no way to serve the country, sighing that times had changed. Although he patted the railing all over, no one knew his "intention to board the ship". So he sang a poem "It's a pity that the years fly, the wind and rain are sad, and the tree is still like this". This is Wu Gou's heroic tears. Time and tide wait for no man. Time is running out. Although there is snow every year and spring every year, these are just passengers left by the fleeting train. Because water was snow last year, spring was winter yesterday. Over time, we must express our love, fulfill our filial piety, and do things well ... Seize the opportunity and seize the day. Although we can't slow down the passage of time, we can stir up waves in the long river of time, even if there is only one. Time is running out. My home is on the fifth floor, and there are several windows facing the street. Before dawn, I vaguely heard the sound of sanitation workers sweeping the street over and over again. I turned over and adjusted my sleeping position so that I could sleep more comfortably. It didn't seem long before the loud sound of getting up prevented me from trudging into a deep sleep. My will is struggling on the edge of half dream and half awake, just like a seesaw battle. In the end, of course, reason prevailed-I opened my eyes and held it firmly in my hand 24 hours a day. When I walk on the way to work, I am absolutely full of energy. I put myself into the work of the day with the right attitude, high morale and full enthusiasm. Work nourishes me and greatly enriches my life. I can't be irresponsible and treat my work casually. Who says time is the most impartial, 24 hours for everyone; Time is also the most private, not anyone's 24 hours. Seemingly contradictory words, but full of philosophy. I am deeply touched by this. Survival in eight hours, development in eight hours. Everyone's hobby is development beyond survival. The time after work is entirely ours. How to use the time beyond eight hours? In a small way, it is a matter of time preference, and in a big way, it is a matter of expanding the height and width of life. Many people spend their eight hours comfortably in bars, chess, chatting and endless TV plays, which is called killing time. Time seems to be something that walks too much. If you don't kill it, you won't be reconciled. Only killing it is the best way to let it go. I often stand at the window and look into the distance. I saw the sun rise and the sun set; I saw farmers sowing, managing and harvesting; I saw women file into the chess room in twos and threes in their spare time in the afternoon; I saw idle people fighting and chatting with the landlord in the ventilated corridor, from sunrise to sunset ... once, I thought I cherished time. I like reading and writing. I didn't play cards or chat. I have been writing. In fact, time is still slipping away from my fingers, from my eyes, from my hesitation and procrastination. I suddenly realized that I can't control it well, not only 24 hours a day, but also beyond eight hours. For example, when I was buried in a book, I was worried about my thoughts. I didn't read a word, just staring blankly; I want to knock down the casual words when I open the document, but I can't help wandering around the major forums and websites ... Not far from the train lane, a brightly lit train roared by, and I suddenly realized that the hour hand had pointed to zero! My son said in Sichuan that the deceased is like a husband, not giving up day and night! I sit in front of the screen, and the mouse runs around like a small animal! Spring doesn't blame the east wind evil. In the face of the passage of time, I regret and helpless, only emptiness and sadness! ! -when the vacuum is sad? Go, go to work, advance, let's go.
20 1 1 Anhui college entrance examination composition topic has been published, and there are many water test compositions on the internet. Some of these compositions were written by front-line teachers and some were written by professionals, which shows that the writing quality is good. First, arrange some excellent articles as follows. The attached brief comment is just my own opinion, just for fun, please give me your advice. -Zhang Fei
Time is running out.
Wu Yaoxin, hanshan middle school City, Anhui Province
"Time is fleeting, cherries are red and bananas are green", which is the passage of time in the poet's eyes; "Confucius said in Sichuan: the deceased is like a husband, not giving up day and night", which is the passage of time in the eyes of philosophers; "Listening to the passage of time" is the passage of time in the eyes of literati. And the passage of time in my eyes means "no regrets about yesterday, no complaints about today, no fear of tomorrow". Time is running out. For yesterday, I chose "Let bygones be bygones" without any regrets. For yesterday's past, some people say that memory is the beginning of forgetting and forgetting is the end of memory. Some people say that the past should be remembered, not forgotten. Some people say that people who are nostalgic are good people who are unhappy now. And I have always insisted on my original opinion. I remember in a pre-test psychological counseling class, faced with youthful faces full of regrets, I said emotionally, "If youth is a book that is too hasty, then we should turn (music) into (Liao!" " Yes, for each of us, no matter how glorious and unbearable our past is, when we face them directly, we can only choose to let go. In fact, you can only pull away, turn around and leave, and then start over! Two days ago, I asked my students to write a paper about "My Three Years". Many children are regretting their wasted time, their youth and ignorance, and their chagrin is beyond words. What I want to tell them is that living a life without regrets is the pursuit of each of us. For a young man, it is to think and do! In this way, when we are old, sitting by the warm fire and looking back, every wrinkle on our faces will smile and say-I have spent my life without regrets. Time is running out. For today, I choose not to complain about "letting nature take its course". For today's present, many people are dissatisfied: those who are angry and rushing to the crown have it, those who are angry and angry have it, and what's more, they deserve it. What I choose is the calmness of "clouds floating in the sky" and the carelessness of "smiling and spending flowers in front of the court". I only pursue, not demanding! In a discussion with young teachers, I said: "As young people, we should be more energetic and less resentful;" More self-confidence and less arrogance; It is true that "be more energetic and less angry": in work and life, it can be said that "everyone is in trouble, and everyone is suffering". But we can't complain, we can't complain! As the saying goes, "If you complain too much, you should be open-minded." If you complain too much, you will complain that others have not made progress, and you will "make excuses for failure, not find ways for success." Ordinary people are like this, especially young people. So I often teach my students to say, "Never complain about things that can't be changed, but take actions to change things that can be changed." Time is running out. For the future tomorrow, I am not afraid to choose "Let the future come". I am not afraid of tomorrow's future, because "future or future" is a motto on the blackboard behind the classroom in Class 2, Grade 3, Senior High School. It is also an attitude towards life that I admire. Engaged in psychological counseling for 89 years. Most of the visitors I received were anxious patients: exam anxiety, occupational anxiety and emotional anxiety. . . . . . Give a few examples, but the high anxiety about the future is the characteristic of these people, which is actually their real reason! According to some data, anxiety has become the most common psychological problem in our society. I don't know whether this is the characteristic of a transitional society or the price of social development, but I clearly know that if a person always lives in fear of the future, he can't be happy! Although I dare not say that the future is mine, I know that the future is not illusory, and the future is today's tomorrow; I don't want to say that tomorrow will be better, but I understand that tomorrow will be very different as long as you work hard; I won't say that the world is not worth having fun with me, but I know that life is not about being born and living, but about polishing your dreams, billy elliott. Time is running out. For yesterday, I chose to "let bygones be bygones" without regret. For today, I choose not to complain about "letting nature take its course"; For the future tomorrow, I am not afraid to choose "Let the future come". What is your choice? Comments: The article takes "time is passing" as the main line, and launches the full text from how to treat the differences in the past, present and future. At the beginning, use famous sentences to lead topics, highlight ideas, echo from beginning to end, have clear ideas and rigorous structure. (Zhang Fei) Time is running out. Qingdao Jiao Youtian has kept an old handkerchief in my desk drawer for many years. It is made of the kind of white coarse cloth that is rare now. On the handkerchief, there are two naive white rabbits embroidered with red and yellow silk threads. Those bright silk threads have begun to fade. I remember when I was in primary school, my classmates all had a small handkerchief with a beautiful pattern, but mine was cut by my mother with white cloth. I pestered my mother, hoping that she could buy me a beautiful flower handkerchief. Mother smiled and said, "Draw a picture on your handkerchief and I will embroider it for you. "So I drew two white rabbits on my handkerchief. My mother was a master of embroidery here when she was young. So she easily painted me as two white rabbits, and embroidered me vividly. Although the handkerchief is made of rough white cloth, the students are envious. Because the lovely pattern on it was designed by myself ... decades passed in a hurry, and that old handkerchief seemed to be a special gift from time to time. Every time I open it, my eyes will suddenly penetrate those yellowed memories, as if I saw those two lovely white rabbits ... Once, I picked up that old handkerchief and came to my mother's bed, and my mother gently stroked it with her active palm for a while. Later, she smiled and said, "I embroidered this for you in the third grade of primary school." "It rained that night, and it was harder for you to buy a new handkerchief than the rain." Mom's memory of it is so clear! I couldn't help crying and quietly turned to wipe it off. With the passage of time, my appearance has become old, but my personality seems to have not changed at all. In my heart, I still have the courage to roam the world from time to time, eager to find spiritual freedom. At the same time, I have always retained the kindness of my childhood. Occasionally, when I get together with my classmates, they always say to me, "It's just that your personality hasn't changed much, and you still like listening and silence as before." Is it a coincidence that I collected that old handkerchief and my present state of mind? I hope, just like that handkerchief, I can still cherish my warm feelings and remain true to myself when I get old with time. Comments: Taking the "old handkerchief" as the clue (central image), the full text is launched around the established proposition. The breakthrough point is specific and clear, and many sincere and moving details in the article show the nostalgia for the mother and the long-term affection for the family. (Zhang Fei) Time is running out. Xia Aihua in Urumqi is like an hourglass, sliding to yesterday one by one. I keep reaching out my hands, but I can't catch any. Time, like fireworks, gorgeous the whole night sky, but disappeared in an instant. Time is like a melodious song lingering in my ears, gentle and tender, and it lasts for more than three days. Looking back, I realized that the singer had left. Time should be as short as spring, right? If we look at the fisherman's pride, which was copied by the poet Zhu in the Song Dynasty, we can better understand the "ruthlessness" of time and how sad it is: "There are thousands of willows in the smoke. Love trees can't afford to fly when they are wet, autumn is boundless, and spring pays east. How much time can there be in 90 years? Scarabs left nothing they wanted. I sent a message to Dongyang wine market, and I was drunk. Now I am very happy to cry for him. " It turns out that spring has only three months and ninety days and nights. On a beautiful spring night, I lingered in poetry. Ear, clearly came a warm and poetic Jiangnan minor, picturesque, infiltrating people's hearts: "In the sound of light and shadow, it is still cold, and the water is still cold. In the dream, the silk and bamboo sang softly, and the outsiders outside the building, the mountains outside the mountain, and the building mountain did not return. People haven't returned yet, Yan Yu looked back and forgot Sichuan long ago, and the piano player was in tears. The drizzle fell on my shoulder. Shoulder-length, cold flute, residual window shadow. In the sound of smoke, where is Jiangnan? " No matter how much I love every second, no matter how much I want to keep time, let it stop and let me wander freely, as if I were in a sweet and gentle country. But time still passes relentlessly, from spring to summer. My heart tears, condensed on my chest. I hope time can see how affectionate and attached I am to it. I even complain from the heart, time, you are too cruel, you are too heartless, you are too indifferent, you are too selfish. On a beautiful morning, standing in front of the window of the season and gently opening the window of the heart, I feel relieved. It turns out that summer is more beautiful, flowery and poetic. It turns out that summer is more elegant and covered with green trees, bringing a cool season. It turns out that summer is more abundant, and there is a window of mountains and seas for me to hug. Originally, inadvertently, time has blossomed into a flower in June, fragrant with my life and enriching my soul. It is full of my imagination and my passion for life. Let time bloom into a flower in June, stop in the flower of time, and I smile like a flower. Comments: This young writer's test article is so brilliant that I'm afraid the average student can't imitate it. The article first writes about the passing of spring, and then writes about the prosperity of summer. Life is just like this, and what flows away is irreversible. We don't have to worry or hurt. Looking at today or tomorrow, you will find that the world is so wonderful. (Zhang Fei) Time passed thousands of years ago in Liuzhou Qingsi. Su Shi sighed in "Red Cliff Fu": "I admire the infinity of the Yangtze River by the moment of my life." Compared with the endless Yangtze River, life is only a moment. Time, like the vast Yangtze River, is dynamic. Only by following its footsteps closely can we not be left behind. Only by riding on the river and fighting against it can we feel the pulse of life, observe the breath of society and understand what we are going to do. If you just look at the river bank, you will only get sadness. In the face of the passing time, we will never find another way. The only thing we can grasp is to make full use of time reasonably. The premise of all this is that you have a clear plan for your life and a firm belief. Even if you encounter setbacks, you can't look back, you can only be more depressed. You should always have a dream. Without dreams, there is no effort, and you will only live like a warm swallow. Time means different things to different people. For the wise, it is the best gift from heaven, because it can make the wise see more wonderful life and learn more knowledge, so that life and spirit can go to eternity; But for fools, time is like a lingering nightmare, empty and unreal. Without clear goals and beliefs, it is inevitable to get lost, and it can only be numb and wasted, day after day, year after year, until it can't be repeated. Although it is not an easy task to locate the direction and coordinates of life, I always believe that as long as I go on unswervingly according to my own beliefs, I can also walk out of a world. Because, anyone who has a clear plan for life often has a better grasp of time and can maximize the effectiveness of time. Ningyue in the Warring States period is a famous example. Ning Yue is a farmer, pulling the cow's tail every day. Unable to bear the hardship, he asked others how to change this lifestyle. He was told that only by studying for 30 years can he avoid such hard work. So Ning Yue has been studying hard while others are playing. After fifteen years of hard work, he finally became the master of the king. Although we don't have to agree with this kind of life, we can try to prove another answer and find another interpretation of life. This is the dialectics of time and life. Only by making good use of time can life be efficient and make life more exciting and vivid. Comments: The article believes that in the face of the passage of time, sadness and wandering are futile; We can do it reasonably and make full use of time. Most of the articles are reasoning. If we can enrich the articles with some examples, the argumentation of the articles will be more powerful. (Zhang Fei) Time is running out. Han Haoyue asked a fifth-grade child, "Do you think time passes slowly?" He looked sad: "It's too slow. When is the summer vacation? " Ask the same question to a teenager who is in adolescence. The expression on his face is very complicated: "A month feels like a year …" One night deep in my memory, I suddenly woke up and couldn't sleep. The faucet in the kitchen drops a drop every three to five seconds, which falls on the edge of the pool and on the heart of an easily felt teenager. At that moment, I felt the speed and weight of time. In the process of waiting, three to five seconds become as long as three to five minutes or even thirty to five minutes. Light water drops pass through the eardrum and reach my heart, just like a horde. After a long time, people are desperate. It's like the Black Sea that quietly covers the beach at midnight, but you are like a weak fish that has lost all its strength. You just need to breathe a little oxygen before being submerged. When time is so slow, there is indeed a feeling that life is being swallowed up; But on the other hand, isn't time a gift to life? It will leave a mark on every soul. Take days as a unit, print equal scales, and between scales, you can write every minute and second calmly. When your soul is dragged by flying desires and oppressed by heavy life, you will miss the simple days when your soul was stocked. When did the time suddenly rise? 25 years old? 30? Or forty or fifty years old? No one can find that node, but I suddenly feel that the herbivore who is always carefree on the hillside has suddenly become a fast-moving and insatiable carnivore. It is most interested in fighting and tearing. Some people panic, some people are helpless, some people are angry, and some people struggle. Time divides a person's life into two halves, as the poet wrote: "Half is light and half is darkness". As the song goes, "One day to live, one day to die". The attitude towards time determines the quality of our life, what we spend time on, and the direction of our life. Time, please stop-we can only use our emotions to heat the cold time. I believe that many people in this world have mastered the secret and knack of "retaining time". They are people who regard life as a "picture book". In this "album", ideals, pursuits, life, emotions ... Comments: Professional writers' articles are mostly based on talents, and ordinary students "expect" and don't have to "talk". Time makes people "desperate" and "long", but it flies. Our attitude towards time determines the quality of our life; How we treat time determines the direction of life. People should warm the cold time with ideals, pursuits and emotions. (Zhang Fei)