This is a propositional composition with narration and evaluation. The requirement of the topic is different from that of the general material composition. It only needs to "choose an angle" but "choose the right angle", prompting candidates to extract the most suitable point of view when examining the topic. However, in order to extract the deep connotation of this material, we must grasp the commentary text: we must affirm that when we encounter inevitable dangers in life, "it is better to sing bravely than to stop crying pessimistically." This commentary uses a sentence pattern of choice, and advocates "swaggering with heroic songs" when something happens.

So, how to "advance with a heroic song"? The program fragment described in the material gives an effective method and answer, that is, "look up at the blue sky", which is also the central point or core of this paper.

Looking at the wonderful examples in the materials, it is not difficult to find that "looking up at the blue sky" is a very poetic sentence with rich meanings. Compared with "bowing your head", "looking up" is the correct choice. When conceiving writing and lyric reasoning, we can make a positive and negative comparative analysis of why we should "look up" instead of "bow down". For example, it can be analyzed that "bowing down" is easy to amplify difficulties and self-pressurize, although it is a mature life performance of facing danger directly and "looking up" is to regain confidence and temporarily ignore immediate difficulties. We can't simply conclude that it is escape and retreat, but a way to treat life calmly and calmly, and it is the wisdom of life to gain confidence and strength in hope and longing. Only in this way can we take a good life path and keep moving forward. Of course, based on the metaphorical meaning of "looking up at the blue sky", we can know that "looking up" can also refer to other life behaviors and attitudes, such as "looking up", "looking forward to the future", "looking at the positive side of things", "amplifying the optimistic factors in life emotions" and "grasping hope and the future sensitively and tenaciously".

The choice of style is relatively broad, narrative is better to tell one's own experience, and prose should strengthen lyricism and philosophy. Reasoning articles can select a large number of personal cases from historical documents or reality for analysis and comment.

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1, Zeng Guofan: "Everything is expensive and concentrated, and there is specialization in the industry, and it is impossible to learn and expand your knowledge from other ways. There is nothing to study specifically, but it is a big deal to see different ideas moving. "

2. Haizi's Summer Sun: "When you come to this world, you have to look at the sun."

3. Ba Jin: "The power that dominates soldiers' actions is faith. He can endure all difficulties and pains and achieve the goals he has chosen. "

4. Liu Yong's "Accidental Encounter is Your Teacher": "People who take courage by mistake will get narrower and narrower."

5. The lyrics of the singer Yang Kun's "Lighting a Smart Life": "Life is like a rugged and tortuous path/the most beautiful scenery is often not necessarily at the top of the mountain/step by step, and the depth of exploration/falling down again and again, getting up and continuing the journey/lighting a smart life/lighting a smart lamp/lighting happiness and lighting a smart life."

6. Su Shi's Ding Fengbo: "If you don't listen to the sound of beating leaves through the forest, why don't you scream and walk slowly?" Straw sandals are lighter than horses, who is afraid that a misty rain will last a lifetime. The coolness of spring breeze awakens my wine, and the cold begins to be cold, and the peak of the sun is the sun, but it is satisfied in time. Looking back at the bleak land, rain or shine. "

7. The plot of Hemingway's The Old Man and the Sea: The old fisherman Santiago didn't catch a fish at sea for 84 consecutive days. On the 85th day, the old man rowed the boat very far early in the morning and accidentally caught a marlin bigger than the boat. The old man struggled with the fish for two days and finally got it. However, the injured fish left a foul smell on the sea, which attracted countless sharks to compete for it. The old man struggled with the shark, but when he returned to the port, the marlin had only a huge skeleton left. "A person is not born to be defeated. You can destroy him as much as you can, but you can't beat him. " This is Santiago's life belief and the idea that the author wants to express in The Old Man and the Sea. Through the image of Santiago, the author enthusiastically praised the indestructible spiritual strength of human beings in the face of difficulties and hardships.

8. In the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake in Sichuan, Xiao Xue, the "Coke Boy", was trapped under the precast slab, and the temperature was very high at that time. Xiao Xue, who was buried in the ruins, was extremely weak and sultry, which made him fidgety. In the shaking of his left leg, he felt a pile of soft things not far ahead, very cold and comfortable, as if they were the bodies of the dead. He thought for a moment, put his feet on his body, and a cold feeling came from the soles of his feet. He didn't forget the coke and ice cream in the dark, which became an agreement between Xiao Xue and his uncle. At 7 o'clock in the evening, the precast slab pressed on Xiao Xue was finally removed, and Xiao Xue was pulled out of the ruins. After loading the stretcher, Xiao Xue did not forget the agreement. He said, "Uncle, I want to drink coke, not frozen."

On September 20th10/010/October 13, the world focused on the San Jose copper mine in the desert of northern Chile. On August 5th, 69 days ago, the world's deepest mine disaster happened here, and 33 miners were trapped 700 meters underground. 13 is the day of their rebirth, and they all walked out of the ground alive. These miners experienced unimaginable anxiety and fear. But they finally defeated the demon of death with the belief of survival, came back alive, kissed the earth again, and hugged their wives and children again. Such a miracle between people is unforgettable!

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Be a colorful snail.

Tan Hubei aerospace high school

Facing the howling wind and rain, Haiyan will spread its wings in the wind; Facing the roaring thunder and lightning, the seeds will head up and break through the ground at sunrise; In the face of thorns, vines will curl up comfortably What do you do when you face adversity? Cower, avoid? No, it's all useless. The only thing we can do is to be a colorful snail-if we can't change the outside world, then change ourselves and face it bravely!

In order to survive and change themselves in danger, the color of colored snails living in groups in Cuba's tropical forests will change with the environment: sometimes, they are like a crystal jade; Sometimes, it is like a beautiful ruby. To be a colorful snail is to change your mentality if you can't change the environment of foreign objects. Only in this way can you face it calmly.

Having said that, I can't help but think of the temple people who once sang "The River of No Return, the Romantic Man of the Ages" under the Red Cliff. At this time, I am afraid that he is not only lamenting the romantic figures of the ages, but also worried that he will be demoralized by "waves"! How brilliant he used to be, but now he has changed from a talented person admired by everyone to a guest in Huangzhou, and instantly fell into the lowest valley of his life. But from his dream of becoming immortal, I obviously felt the determination to choose to be a colorful snail and change my mind to adapt to the environment. Therefore, even in the bleak town of Huangzhou, he still has the open-mindedness of "never changing, things are infinite". Even if he embarked on a hopeless career, he still had the silence of "completely washing away the glitz of life and looking for great philosophers and beauty in the world" Learn to be a colorful snail, learn to change your mind to face it, and all adversity looks pale and powerless in front of his free and easy.

However, in the face of adversity, we should not only learn to be a colorful snail to adapt, but more importantly, we should change ourselves and keep a positive and optimistic attitude at all times. Only in this way can we get out of the predicament. Just like the extraordinary sister Lin in A Dream of Red Mansions, although she is ready to change her mind in the face of doomed love, she is always suffering from negative emotions of suspicion. Faced with this love dilemma, she is destined to be "in a state of anxiety and illness" for many years. Tired of love, but still unable to get out of this predicament.

Be a colorful snail and face and adapt to the unfavorable environment with a positive and optimistic attitude, because only positive and optimistic can get through the danger and turn the difficulties in the danger into a ladder of success.

Speaking of which, I seem to see the unyielding face in the messy prison. Because of an honest word, I was tortured by life, and my life can rest in peace! But I clearly heard the voice in his heart that "death is more important than Mount Tai, but lighter than a feather" and saw the flower of his heart blooming on his face. "When he wrote history and studied heaven and man, he learned from the changes of ancient and modern times and became a family statement, which was manifested in later generations." He is Sima Qian, a brave man who overcame his psychological limit with optimism and took optimism as the ladder of success. Perhaps his hard work contributed to his achievements, but who can deny that optimism helped him through the difficulties? If he doesn't change his mind to adapt to the adversity of the death penalty and face it positively, who can guarantee that there won't be another body in the chaotic grave?

I remember the Swedish poet Strindberg once said, "People will encounter adversity when they are alive." Since adversity is inevitable, then we will learn to be a colorful snail, change our mentality, face optimistically, and turn the difficulties in adversity into the driving force for progress!

An example comments on the content of this article, and it makes sense to use a combination metaphor at the beginning: "If you can't change the external environment, change yourself and face it bravely!" To the point, I choose Colorful Snails, Su Shi, Lin Daiyu and Sima Qian as examples for positive and negative comparative analysis, and finally quote Strindberg's famous words concisely, so that this article can well reflect the author's cultural accumulation. In addition, the thought of "If you can't change the external environment, you should change yourself and face it bravely", "If you can't change the external environment, you should change your mentality so that you can face it calmly" and "Only by being positive and optimistic, you can get through the danger and turn the difficulties in danger into a ladder of success" is gradual, which also makes this article clear and rational.