In a limited time, it is very difficult to write an article that is full of sounds and feelings, so applying a composition template has become a common way for everyone. Let's take an argumentative essay as an example to illustrate that
An argumentative essay must first have a fixed pattern, that is, the legendary three-stage form ~ But this three-stage form does not require you to write three paragraphs, but depends on what it is. Discuss the order of how to do it. First of all, what is it? Be sure to put forward your clear point of view in the first paragraph (or better on the topic). Remember to put forward your point of view as soon as possible, so as to avoid the situation that the point of view appears too late or the point of view is vague and unclear, so as to attract the attention of the marking teacher. The first paragraph of the book must be short, too long will make people lose interest in reading.
Let's talk about how to describe it, and why the biggest highlight lies in the citation of arguments. The most common thing is that you can use sharp contrast. For example, your thesis holds that the world is very beautiful, and why you are in this part can be divided into two paragraphs. The first paragraph first illustrates the darkness of the world, and then the second paragraph comes to a turning point (but xxxxxxxx). ...) this will make your article have a vivid color contrast.
What to do in the end? Don't ignore this step, because many high school students are prone to make a mistake (in argumentative writing) that the argument is very clear and the argument is sufficient, but the final ending is sloppy. You should remember that argumentative writing is an exposition of a problem, and since the problem is raised, there must be a corresponding solution. I once suffered a big loss in my score because of the imperfection of this step. At the end, I must write your views on this issue. For example, if you think the world is beautiful, what can you do to make it beautiful? In this case, the ending will be quite good.
These are the general directions that the whole article needs to pay attention to. There is also a very noteworthy place, that is, your literary talent. The so-called literary talent doesn't need you to have the spirit and knowledge of a great writer. In the composition of the college entrance examination, he only needs you to skillfully use all kinds of ancient poems. Now the argumentative essay not only needs your clear explanation, but also has some feelings if you can slightly modify your article. Then your score will naturally come up. In a word, you should have a sense of the times ~
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Recently, our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC.Here are the results of it.
On one hand, we think KFC has its advantages.It's delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion.It's also a good way to experience western food.
On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages.Most food in KFC is junk food,which is bad for our health.Besides, the food may not be safe because it's not fresh.What's more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.
Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious.To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food.It's a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruits,just as the saying goes, "an apple a day keeps the doctor away." 3. How to write a dream of red mansions
After reading a dream of red mansions, I didn't understand its beauty until I finished reading it recently.
A Dream of Red Mansions takes Jia, Shi, Wang and Xue as the background, takes a fierce struggle between the feudal road and the rebels around Jia Baoyu's life path, and takes the tragedy of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu as the main content. Through a vivid description of the decline process of the feudal family represented by Jia Fu, it profoundly exposes and criticizes all kinds of darkness and decay in feudal society, and further points out that the feudal society has been A Dream of Red Mansions, centered on the upper aristocratic society, vividly describes the whole life of the feudal society in China in the first half of the 18th century.
The book is grand in scale, rigorous in structure, vivid in characters and beautiful in language. Besides, there are some obvious artistic features, which are worthy of future generations' taste and appreciation. The author makes full use of all the excellent traditional techniques of Chinese calligraphy, painting, poetry, songs and music, and shows a social tragedy.
For example, Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu * * * read the West Chamber, Daiyu buried flowers, treasure chai saved butterflies, Qingwen made up fur, treasure Qin set snow, and Daiyu burned manuscripts, etc., which are also reflected in the characterization, such as Lin Daiyu's floating figure, poetic eyebrow eyes, intelligent expression, profound smile, moving sobs, refined taste, and chic literary talent. Cao Xueqin truly reproduces the complexity of the characters in A Dream of Red Mansions, which makes us feel as authentic as the characters in the works. Jia Baoyu in A Dream of Red Mansions "can't say that he is virtuous, stupid, good, evil, fair and aboveboard, a bastard, wicked, clever and talented, vulgar and ordinary", which makes people comment.
Not only Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu are the protagonists who have entrusted the author with the beauty of personality, spirit and ideal, but even a notorious figure like Wang Xifeng has not written her as "all bad", but some "loveliness" is interwoven with "abomination", thus showing various contradictory and complicated actual situations and forming a "charming reality" of personality. The author is good at revealing its unusual aesthetic significance through those seemingly ordinary artistic descriptions of daily life, and even some unwritten and unrecorded social habits and details are vividly depicted in a dream of red mansions.
A Dream of Red Mansions' outstanding achievements in ideological content and artistic skills have not only become "the insurmountable peak of China's novel literature" at home. Moreover, it has also been paid attention to and studied by scholars in many countries internationally. Some French critics praised Cao Xueqin as: "Cao Xueqin has Proust's keen vision, Tolstoy's sympathy, Miao Sai's intelligence and humor, Balzac's insight and the ability to reproduce the top-down strata of the whole society.
two thoughts after reading A Dream of Red Mansions: one is a fairy flower in Langyuan, and the other is a flawless jade. If there is no strange fate, I will meet him again in this life. If there is a strange fate, how can my mind be empty? One is crying in vain, the other is worrying about nothing. One is the moon in the water, and the other is the flower in the mirror. I wonder how many tears there are in my eyes, how can autumn flow to the end of winter and spring flow to summer! -"Curling eyebrows" and "A Dream of Red Mansions", a tragedy with a smile. A Dream of Red Mansions not only describes the three generations of life of a feudal aristocratic family from glory to decline, but also boldly accuses the feudal aristocratic class of its hypocrisy, fraud, greed, decay and sin.
it not only points out the inevitable collapse and death of this family, but also implies the inevitable collapse and death of the class and society to which this family belongs. The heroes created and loved by Cao Xueqin's brushwork are the two ministers and traitors who dare to judge the dying feudal aristocracy; Those who sympathize with and mourn are the victims under the feudal system; What is criticized and denied is the hypocritical morality and unreasonable social system of feudal society.
On the one hand, it is a marriage of wood and stone, and on the other hand, it is a marriage of gold and jade. On the one hand, it is a halo of fame and fortune that must be pursued in feudal society, and on the other hand, it is a free body that is fascinated.
A Dream of Red Mansions written by Cao Xueqin shows us this silent contest. The tragic love story of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu condensed all the smoke of this contest. "One is Langyuan Xianpa, and the other is flawless jade." The pursuit of quality is clean and clean. "In the face of all kinds of persecution and indifference under feudal ethics, even at the cost of life, the pursuit of quality and purity never gave up.
When we lamented the tragedy of love between Jia and Lin, we saw an important factor that caused the tragedy: Lin Daiyu's lofty personality, which was incompatible with the secular world at that time and could not be "integrated" with the society. Her inferiority complex was the embodiment of her self-esteem and the beginning of her tragedy. In A Dream of Red Mansions, she buried flowers, which is the focus of her personality.
Her inferiority complex, self-esteem and self-pity are completely exposed in her "Funeral Poems": "Flowers fade and flowers fly all over the sky, but who has pity when the fragrance disappears?" "Three hundred and sixty days a year, the wind knife and the frost sword are pressing each other, and when the bright and fresh Yan can be, it is hard to find once wandering. Bloom is easy to see the fall but hard to find. He is worried about burying the flower man in front of the steps, stealing the flower hoe and shedding tears alone, and spilling blood on the upper branches. "
"May Nong have wings on this day and fly to the end of the sky with flowers. The end of the day! Where is the incense hill? If you don't have a trick, you will hide your love with a handful of pure land.
it's better to be clean and clean than to be trapped in a ditch. I'm going to die and be buried, but I don't know when Nong will die. The man who buried the flowers today is laughing, but who did he know when he buried them? Let's see that the residual flowers in spring are gradually falling, which is when the beauty dies of old age.
no sad songs for me, I don't know when flowers fall and people die. " A secular person can't understand her thoughts. "I'm dead and buried, but when will I die?" The person who buried the flowers today is laughing. Who did he know when he buried them? " In the face of falling flowers, she thought of the scene after her death, unable to let go, and shed tears.
Before the feudal ethical code, her inferiority aroused her self-esteem. When Baoyu was beaten, Xue Baochai, who was skillful in calculation and worldly affairs, sent pills, and also used the tone of training to persuade Baoyu to change his ways. However, as a supporter of Baoyu, a rebel of feudal ethics, Lin Daiyu, who is kind and aloof, just cried blindly. 4. Mencius composition in my mind
Mencius in my mind crossed the river of time at 12: 4 on June 8, 28, and he is still admired by the world. It hasn't changed for more than two thousand years. In the long river of history, it is the light of his thoughts that shines.
Mencius in my mind is kind. In the face of the reality of years of campaigns in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, Mencius inherited and developed Confucius' thought of "benevolence" and made it a political ideology, which had an extraordinary impact on the history of China's feudal society for two thousand years. Mencius' theory of "benevolent governance" is based on maintaining the feudal system, but it has many progressive significance for stabilizing the economy, developing production and reducing people's burden.
Mencius in my mind is also naive. Mencius lobbied among countries and careerists. Faced with their ambition for hegemony, yearning for domination and desire for conquest, Mencius tried his best to influence them with "benevolence". However, the enjoyment of the ruling class was based on the suffering of the lower class. Who is willing to give up this right easily? Therefore, there is no doubt that Mencius was also naive.
Mencius in my mind is even greater. Although Mencius' political ideas have not been put into practice, he put forward a systematic ideology of self-cultivation, and this contribution is indelible. How many people still have such accomplishments as "wealth can't be lewd, poverty can't be moved, and power can't be bent"? The teachings he taught thousands of years ago still apply today.
He is a giant standing above history, and he deserves the name of "Yasheng". May his shining thoughts continue to shine
How to treat the implementation of Mencius' thought of "benevolent governance" in the light of the current state governance? 5. The problem of copying six compositions in the college entrance examination
Four articles using the same material
Chen Qian of Central South University was deeply impressed by a writing experience in middle school: "Our class had a Chinese test. After the test, the teacher copied the excellent composition with a score of more than 49 points and sent it to us. Chen Qian said that no matter what the composition is, it adopts the same model, follows the standards of dragon head, pig belly and phoenix tail, explains the general argument at the beginning, then lists three sub-arguments, matches three examples, and finally sublimates the theme with famous sayings.
In fact, in the examination room, this phenomenon of composition copying is very serious. Some Chinese teachers said that if you look carefully at the excellent compositions from all over the country over the years, many of them are surprisingly "deja vu". Nowadays, students who take part in the college entrance examination recite a lot of materials as a method of composition, and "applying" has become a common phenomenon in the structural composition of the college entrance examination. Many candidates have similarities in composition structure, writing ideas, language expression and so on, and there are even many imitations. This is the case in all provinces of the country.
Writing fictional mother's death is contagious.
Not only is interplay popular, but there are also false expressions such as distorted personality and lost values in the examination composition. It is reported that candidates often fabricate stories of suffering in narratives, trying to make their articles more sad and infectious. They will make up stories about their mother or family members' death or describe their disabilities. Not long ago, educational experts analyzed the Chinese test papers of senior high school entrance examinations in cities and states in our province, and found that the composition was generally "false, big and empty".
Many people can't accept the examinee's fictional mother's death in the composition. "I think this kind of person's humanity has deviated somewhat. Although it is understandable to say that the composition is fictional, it is not good for you to say that your mother died of illness." Yan Li of Hunan Institute of Mass Communication said.
"It's disappointing. Although it's not entirely the children's fault, it's really chilling that parents have worked so hard to bring up their children." Ms. He, who lives in Gao Qiao, has two daughters. My sister is in Grade Two this year, and her sister will be promoted to junior high school next year. She admits that she doesn't want her children to write this for high marks.