First of all, the opening point
This kind of opening is concise, straightforward and vivid, which makes people feel very clear. Examples are as follows:
1. What is happiness? Happiness is carefree and without burden.
-"What is happiness"
2. Opening and closing the door is the most meaningful action in life, and there is something hidden in a door.
-Door
When we are alive, we will always encounter many things that touch our hearts and need us to choose. Please don't be embarrassed. Let love be the master.
-"Let Love Be the Master"
4. In the dead of night, sitting alone under the window, watching a cup of fragrant tea and turning over a roll of famous books. Facing the overflowing tea fragrance and book fragrance, the body, mind and soul began to fly and slowly rose.
-"The Soul of the Book Flying"
The bits and pieces of history are like sand shells scattered on the vast beach. We passed by quietly, greedily looked at these glittering and precious treasures, and sometimes picked up one or two shells that touched our hearts and collected them with love and gratitude as a souvenir.
-"Memorial"
Second, the performance scene
Such a beginning is full of poetry and painting, which shows us a wonderful picture. The artistic conception of prose is beautiful, and the selection of materials is mainly based on natural scenery. Generally, it can control the scenery with emotion, embody the emotion with the scenery and melt the scenery. Examples are as follows:
6. How many childe fluttering white clothes were blown by the wind in the Tang Dynasty; How many women's black temples were wet by rain in the Song Dynasty? That's Zhang Jiuling's "Moon, now full of sea, illuminating the whole heaven", Su Dongpo's "I hope people can live together for a long time", or Li Qingzhao's "Search and find, be cold and clear". They look up at the vicissitudes of life, looking forward to blessings, and eager faces.
-"the bright moon shines on the face"
7. The blossoming snow lotus is placed in the cold wind of hunting, with the biting cold under its feet and the gloomy sky above its head. However, in the wind, frost, rain and snow, it can still overflow a fragrance and sprinkle a purity to nature.
-"Snow Lotus on the Iceberg"
Third, reveal the truth.
This kind of beginning can express the inner world with emotion, clearly express the author's views and feelings, highlight the true feelings and make no secret. Examples are as follows:
8. If I can, I will choose the first light of dawn. I want to be the messenger of light and the embodiment of justice. I want to sweep away darkness and eliminate evil with thunderous momentum, so that all eyes accustomed to darkness can get used to light, and every corner of the world can feel the warmth of sunshine. Under my call, the earth woke up from my dream, the trees spread out, the birds sang in the branches, and the bees began to work hard. I brought light and hope to the world.
-"My Choice"
9. Some people love the blue sky, while others love the towering peaks. Some people love the vast mountains and forests, while others love the vast deserts. But I, love the water, have a soul. I like to walk alone by the stream and listen to the cheerful songs of the stream; I like to sit quietly by the lake and enjoy the scenery in the water. I like to stand by and watch the rushing waterfall and feel the magnificence of "flying down to thousands of feet"; I like lying on the soft beach, bathing in the sunshine, listening to the sound of the sea and feeling the tenderness and vastness of the sea.
-"Never tire of reading water"
10, waiting is a bus that comes late and always appears when you are already disappointed; Waiting is a bud with dew, and only when the time is ripe will it bloom brilliantly; Waiting is a sedative, so that you can have a clear mind to think when you are angry. So, learn to wait.
-"Learn to Wait"
1 1 "Every road we have taken has a reason to have to trudge like this, and every road we have to take has a direction to choose like this." Xi Murong said. In the dark, "not like this" reveals a little helplessness, but what I read is more rational brilliance and inner peace.
-"Peace of mind"
Fourthly, it contains philosophy.
This kind of beginning is full of rational interest, which makes people calm and rational in the sense of life. Its expression is implicit and profound, intriguing, philosophical and enlightening. Examples are as follows:
12, the waterfall chose the cliff, and since then it has become a galloping song; Seeds choose fission bodies, so they make life green; Pinctada chose trauma, which gave birth to bright pearls; The eagle chose to soar in the blue sky and fight the wind and rain. It became the embodiment of courage and strength.
-"Choose a cliff, choose a new life"
13, I dare not say what life is, I can only say what life is like. Life is like a river flowing eastward. It originated in the highest place, and ice and snow were his predecessors. He gathered many small streams, synthesized a powerful Hong Tao, and rushed down. He zigzagged between the cliffs, washed down a layer of sand and accumulated soil, ran away happily and bravely, enjoying everything he met along the way.
-Bing Xin's Talking about Life.
14, my foot was worn out, so I simply let the sunset smear the path again, and my hand was scratched, so I simply turned the thorns into azaleas. There is no road longer than feet, and there is no mountain higher than people. This is a poem in Wang Guozhen's "The mountain is high and the road is far", which tells the true meaning of life; As long as you choose a distant place, you will not hesitate, overcome difficulties, and harvest your own fruits with your own hands.
-"Pick your own fruit"
Fifth, set suspense.
This kind of question begins with a sentence at the end, which arouses people's thinking and gives people a sense of freshness. It makes people feel at ease in their thoughts, their minds are on it, and they are complacent. Examples are as follows:
15, everyone is eager for success, eager to exchange flowers and applause with hard sweat, but when the cold reality instantly shattered this perfect idea, how would you choose? Is it to lament the loss of past honor, or to think seriously in front of reality?
-"Fame and Reality"
16, the sun, the moon and the stars are in the morning, one after another, the stars are moving, and the seasons are changing. Since Pangu, everything in the world has followed an invisible arrangement and established feelings of closeness and distance. There is a poem that says, "Time flies like water, what changes is age, but what remains unchanged is emotion." This often makes us think. Will eternal feelings affect our understanding of right and wrong things?
-"Beyond Emotion and Rational Face"
17, stop in front of the Himalayas, and you will marvel at its majesty and handsomeness; Looking up at the skyscrapers in the United States, you will be surprised at their towering; Looking through history books, you will feel that history is heavy; How can you not feel the height of their lives when you walk into the great men of the ancient sages?
-"Feel the height of life"
Sixth, the parallelism is strong.
This kind of neat alliteration at the beginning is quite strong, with extraordinary sense of language, voice and literary talent, which is refreshing and leaves a beautiful and profound impression at the beginning. Examples are as follows:
18, spring gives flowers a door, so in the competition of flowers, it also fills the lonely gap; The night gave the star a door, so at the moment of the star, it also melted its own ice and solemnity; The clear spring water gives the fish a door, so it adds vitality and interest to the fish's comfortable swimming ... For us, it is not a problem to keep a door and all my heart.
-"Leave a door forever"
19, if you forget that it is the ice that disappears in spring, then remember that it is the peach blossom that burns its glory; If you forget that it is a colorful peach petal in summer, please remember that it is a lotus flower with endless leaves in the sky, reflecting a different kind of red in the sun; If you forget that it is a lotus without rain in autumn, please remember that it is the Jin Ju on the branch of Ao Shuang. If you forget that it is a remnant chrysanthemum thinner than the west wind in winter, then remember that it is proud of the independence of snow, with a faint fragrance notice!
-"Four Seasons, Stone Inscribes Soul"
20. I am green. If I am not towering enough, let me shelter you from the wind and rain. If I am not dense enough, let me decorate the branches with countless red lines; If I am not prosperous enough, let me plant grass for you; If ... but I am always green, I can make oxygen for you.
-"green confession"
Although it is important to take the lead, the end of the article is also meaningful. "It's like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think twice." Unfortunately, an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by a bad ending at the end of reading, which made people disappointed! The ending should not only obey the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", so it is difficult to write the ending. From daily writing to exams, although the end of each article is not necessarily wonderful, it is required to be concise, vivid and just right. In order to achieve this effect, you may wish to learn the following ending skills.
First, natural beam collection
After the content of the article is expressed, the full text is naturally wrapped up without designing profound philosophical sentences or carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the problem of gilding the lily and moaning without illness at the end of the article, which is concise and lively.
Plain and unpretentious. Of course, the composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. Don't pay too much attention to "form" and "method". As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development. Examples are as follows
1, with the sunset, we reluctantly left Tianmu Lake.
-"Excellent Composition for Middle School Students"
I haven't seen her for years, but as soon as I think about it, her lovely appearance reappears.
-"Excellent Composition for Middle School Students"
Second, echo from beginning to end.
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. Examples are as follows:
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
3. (End) In the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life.
-"Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season"
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
4. (End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness!
-"Guarding the Fire of Spirit"
Third, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". Examples are as follows:
Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
-"Examination"
6. Although you are just a young plant. However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky.
-"No regrets in my life"
7. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success.
-"Towards Tomorrow"
8. The sea loses its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand; If life loses its true direction, it loses its meaning.
-"Smile and Face Failure"
Fourth, famous aphorisms.
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". Examples are as follows:
9. A person's life may burn or rot. I can't rot I am willing to burn!
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10, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing seeds at any time and flowering at any time, so that this long distance is full of fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians who wear branches and brush leaves will not feel pain, tears will not fall, but they will not be sad."
-Life
Verb (short for verb) lyrical comments
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotional waves and arouse readers' resonance, which has strong artistic appeal. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. Examples are as follows:
1 1. A pessimist is defeated by himself first and then by life; An optimist conquers himself first, then life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future; An optimistic person has gone through many hardships and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible; In the eyes of optimists, the impossible becomes possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From extraordinary people, it is easy for us to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows.
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12, the passing days are like withered leaves and petals. What disappears is the innocence and romance of youth. I don't remember how much rain is floating on my chest and the wind is ringing in my ears. I only know that vicissitudes of life have already penetrated my heart and climbed up my face. A person and the pursuit of peers, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions.
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13, maybe the misfortune of fate is doomed to crush his colorful dreams; Perhaps it is the ruthlessness of heaven and earth that finally releases our day-to-day efforts to nothing, or it may be that many incomprehensible but real obstacles and setbacks have already turned our energetic struggle and indomitable front into sadness and loneliness, so please reflect on yourself in suffering!
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14, when the ice and snow cover, we need a fire to keep warm; When the night is boundless, we need a little starlight to keep warm; When the future is boundless, we need a navigation light to keep warm ... In the four seasons, what we can't filter out is worry and sadness, and what we can't get rid of is hardship and pain. In cold weather, what can we use to warm ourselves and stand in the wind? Leave some sincerity to keep yourself warm!
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15, maybe you are just a seedling, but as long as you persevere. Will eventually become a towering tree;
Maybe you are just a trickle, but as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea;
Maybe you are just a young eagle, but as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually fly in the blue sky.
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When writing, we should pay attention to different styles and adopt different methods in one go. The ending is in the same strain as the previous text, and both are indispensable. Don't copy mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in their improvisation and in their "off-poem achievements". The following are some examples of wonderful endings of essays for your reference:
16, if you only see the black spots of the sun, then your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings.
17, the moon is full, sunny and round, people have joys and sorrows, and life changes. There are four seasons in a year. In the long night, you can see the dawn, you can have suffering, you can have happiness, you can endure the cold winter, you can look forward to the Spring Festival without hibernating.
18, without the depth of blue sky, you can have the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own place, our own light source and our own voice.
19, every drop of water reflects a colorful world, every pair of eyes are embedded in a colorful world, and every melodious stream shines with beautiful lights. Don't sigh the helplessness of the world, look at the prosperity and color of the world with a good mood, and savor the beauty everywhere!
20. When the young eagle is still hungry in its nest and looks at the blue sky and white clouds, it has a dream, that is, flapping its wings, fighting with the blue sky and dancing with the white clouds; When the fine horse rested in the fence and held its head high and hissed, it also had a dream, that is, it bravely hoofed the wild and galloped the world.