The first is to grasp the characteristics of time series. Spring, summer, autumn and winter, the scenery is naturally different all year round or in the morning, afternoon and evening.
The second is to grasp the local characteristics. Articles about scenery should indicate the location.
The third is to grasp the characteristics of the scenery. Different scenic spots have different characteristics. For example, some scenic spots are mainly mountains, some are famous for their strange stones, and some are colored by rivers and lakes. We should grasp these different characteristics and write the personality of the scenery.
Second, the combination of static and dynamic, write the characteristics of the scenery. In landscape composition, there is a difference between static and dynamic scenery.
Natural scenery is always quiet, but it is constantly moving and changing. When writing a scene, we should not only pay attention to the static scene, but also be good at seeing the dynamics in the scene, so as to combine the static with the dynamic.
When describing, either write static and then dynamic, or write dynamic and then static, so that the landscape features in static and dynamic can be presented to readers harmoniously and perfectly. Only in this way can the landscape features in the article "live". Third, view the scenery with emotion and express feelings with scenery.
Writing scenery composition is not about writing scenery for the sake of writing scenery, but its ultimate goal is to express one's feelings. The key is to deal with the relationship between "scenery" and "emotion".
Scenery and emotion blend together, and there is affection in the scene, and there is scenery in the emotion, reaching the state that water is inseparable. In terms of methods, we can use more rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to make the scenery have humanistic characteristics and combine realism and imagination perfectly.
A beautiful article, only by infiltrating the author's true feelings, can better express the center of the article and accurately express the author's feelings, so that readers can truly appreciate the beauty of the scenery and the author's love for the scenery from the beautiful words in the article. Generally speaking, to write a good scene, we must grasp the characteristics of the scene, choose the description method of the scene emphatically according to the characteristics of the scene, expand rich associations when writing, and integrate our true feelings.
Usually, you should observe more and practice more, and write down the most beautiful scenery you see, so that readers can feel immersive.
I don't think writing a composition is actually a matter of ability.
This is your incorrect psychological attitude towards composition.
Don't take writing as a task.
In fact, it is not difficult to express your true feelings.
The most important thing is the following two points:
First of all, can you vent your emotions to the extreme and infect readers?
I want to express my feelings better.
I think we should experience more and think more.
Observe every detail of life carefully.
Feel everything that makes you feel.
This will make your feelings more delicate.
Pay more attention to the things around you.
In fact, these are all good materials for your composition.
There is also whether your article is well-structured, clear-headed and coherent.
Things with more technical content like these are the simplest.
These things are the most superficial and easy to understand than writing about your true feelings.
But you can't say it's not important. On the basis of expressing one's true feelings.
Writing skills are still very important.
Finally, writing a composition does not need to emphasize such gorgeous language.
Don't put all the emphasis on the beauty of language.
Beautiful language can express very limited emotions.
Vocabulary is of course very important.
But this does not mean that only gorgeous language is a good article.
The simplest emotion is better than the most gorgeous language!
Finally send you a word:
"Simplicity has its own original works, and gorgeousness is not necessarily a good article."
3. The main points of writing 1. Writing at the beginning: Everything is difficult at the beginning, so is writing a composition, but the beginning of the article is very important. Commonly used methods are as follows:
(1) background method: explain the time, place, scene and other background of the event.
(2) Character method: explain the main characters or related characters to be described in the article.
(3) Topic syntax: Put forward a viewpoint or argument as a topic to be clarified or discussed in the article.
(4) questioning method: Asking questions leads to the content of the article and attracts readers' attention.
(5) Amazing sense of language: Starting with sentences with amazing sense of language, arouse readers' interest.
(6) Story method: spread the article in the form of storytelling, and spread the article on this basis. Multilingual narrative, but also argumentative.
(7) Data method: citing verified figures to cause topics.
(8) Grammatical quotation: quote famous sayings or commonly used idioms and proverbs as the beginning of the article.
(9) Definition method: it is common to define the topic first, and then explain it in detail through examples, logical reasoning and other methods.
2. Writing of the text
(1) Deduction method:
From general to individual. Put the sentence with universality and generality at the beginning of the paragraph, and the other sentences in the paragraph are the concretization of the topic sentence and the concrete explanation of the topic sentence.
(2) induction:
From special to ordinary. According to specific and individual cases, the general rules are summarized.
Step 3 write it at the end
(1) brief evaluation or conclusion: the last few sentences of the article summarize the full text, further affirming the central idea of the article or the author's point of view.
(2) Repeat the topic sentence: go back to the central idea or topic sentence of the article to achieve the effect of re-affirmation or emphasis.
(3) Ending with a rhetorical question: Although the form is a question, the meaning is affirmative, with obvious emphasis, which can arouse readers' thinking.
(4) Put forward a prospect or hope: put forward a prospect or hope for the future and call on readers to act on it.
(5) Quote famous sayings, proverbs and common idioms at the end.
4. What are the main points of writing a composition (1)?
Appearance description: centralized description; Decentralized description; Delicate pen description;
Language description: language description; Dialogue description;
Action description: action description; Detailed description;
(2) Writing
In order of events:
Order: the order in which things develop;
Flashback: the result comes first, then the cause, process, * * and result;
Interpolation: inserting the narrative of other things into the narrative of one thing;
(3) Writing about scenery
According to the description of spatial order:
Write a scene at a fixed point;
Move and change the scenery;
The combination of fixed-point scenery writing and changing scenery;
(4) Writing
Write in azimuth order:
Write according to several aspects of things:
2. Practical writing
(1) letters;
(2) feelings after reading;
3. Explanatory text
Explanation: List numbers, give examples, compare, metaphor, define and classify.
1. Writing at the beginning: Everything is difficult at the beginning, so is writing a composition, but the beginning of the article is very important. Commonly used methods are as follows:
(1) background method: explain the time, place, scene and other background of the event.
(2) Character method: explain the main characters or related characters to be described in the article.
(3) Topic syntax: Put forward a viewpoint or argument as a topic to be clarified or discussed in the article.
(4) questioning method: Asking questions leads to the content of the article and attracts readers' attention.
(5) Amazing sense of language: Starting with sentences with amazing sense of language, arouse readers' interest.
(6) Story method: spread the article in the form of storytelling, and spread the article on this basis. Multilingual narrative, but also argumentative.
(7) Data method: citing verified figures to cause topics.
(8) Grammatical quotation: quote famous sayings or commonly used idioms and proverbs as the beginning of the article.
(9) Definition method: it is common to define the topic first, and then explain it in detail through examples, logical reasoning and other methods.
2. Writing of the text
(1) Deduction method:
From general to individual. Put the sentence with universality and generality at the beginning of the paragraph, and the other sentences in the paragraph are the concretization of the topic sentence and the concrete explanation of the topic sentence.
(2) induction:
From special to ordinary. According to specific and individual cases, the general rules are summarized.
Step 3 write it at the end
(1) brief evaluation or conclusion: the last few sentences of the article summarize the full text, further affirming the central idea of the article or the author's point of view.
(2) Repeat the topic sentence: Go back to the central idea or topic sentence of the article, aiming to reiterate or emphasize the effect.
(3) Ending with a rhetorical question: Although the form is a question, the meaning is affirmative, with obvious emphasis, which can arouse readers' thinking.
(4) Put forward a prospect or hope: put forward a prospect or hope for the future and call on readers to act on it.
(5) Quote famous sayings, proverbs and common idioms at the end.
5. The writing background behind this article is written in 1925, 10, and the other article is 1927 (see Ji Zhenhuai's Chronicle of Mr. Zhu Ziqing).
When talking about writing motivation, the author once said: "I wrote" The Back "because I quoted the sentence in my father's letter. At that time, I really burst into tears after reading my father's letter. My father gave me many benefits, especially the one described later.
I remember, just like before. My article is only realistic. (1947 July 1 answered the editor's question of "literary knowledge") Only its "realism" embodies the value of this article.
The article is about 19 17, which has been written for 25 years. During this period, the social conditions in China were: warlordism, imperialist infighting, precarious intellectuals and working people in dire straits.
Although the author did not stand in the revolutionary position at that time and devoted himself to the struggle against imperialism and feudalism, as an upright, kind and honest intellectual, he was bound to feel depressed in society and feel lonely and desolate. Isn't it? Due to the darkness of society, the author's family is more and more embarrassed. "The situation is very bleak" and "getting worse every day".
At first, the author's father was "idle", and later he was "running around" in order to find a job, and even "depressed" in his old country. All these reflect the reality that intellectuals are busy, have a dim future, have a hard job and are in a miserable situation.
There is a lingering gloom in their hearts, just like the gloomy tone of the article. In this context, the sincere, profound and touching love between father and son written by the author is not only a pure and noble feeling in line with the tradition of our national ethics, but also a consideration for father and son, especially the love between father and son, which combines bitterness and sadness, including the struggle against bad luck and the struggle against the old world with weak human feelings.
Although this is just a kind of resentment rather than angry resistance, it will also cause people's sympathy, sigh and even strong * * * sound.
6. Writing skills of "The Back" "The Back" is very plain in terms of characters, narrative and lyricism, and contains extremely subtle thoughts.
Father's back is the focus of the full text description. In order to write this figure well, the article not only describes the figure in detail, but also arranges many clever foil and bedding around it.
At the beginning of the article, the father and son went home together to attend the funeral. On the surface, it seems that it only shows the beginning of the matter, and has nothing to do with it. This opening actually sets a gloomy atmosphere and a sad environment for the whole work, in which the father's back appears. This gloomy atmosphere and sad environment are in sharp contrast with the full warmth of the father to his son, showing the loftiness of the father's love. At that time, my father was bereaved, unemployed, pawned and borrowed money. However, even in this bleak situation, the father did not complain, and always loved his son and did one thing after another for him. What kind of things are those? There are some things he doesn't need to do, such as sending his son to the train; Some things are not what he has to do or what he can do, such as climbing the railway to buy oranges. But in my father's mind, these things must be done by myself, which is his unshirkable responsibility, so it is easy to feel uneasy not to do them. He tried his best to do it one by one, so seriously, so naturally and so willingly. For example, crossing the railway and climbing up and down are obviously so laborious and difficult. However, after finishing, he "jumped on the dirt on his clothes and felt very relaxed." In order to take good care of his son, he ignored any disaster and fatigue. What a father does for his son in this difficult adversity is many times more precious than what he usually does, especially in the good times. The father's back is different from the ordinary back that can be seen everywhere, but full of feelings and profound meanings.
The father sent his son to the station for a while, and then wrote letters from the father and son. On his father's side, he thought twice that he had to see his son off in person, but on his son's side, he didn't think so. What he thinks is that he is "twenty years old and has been to Beijing two or three times. It doesn't matter." He didn't care much about his father's farewell and didn't understand his father's mind. So, the father bargained with the porter, and the son "always felt that he didn't speak well"; The father asked the waiter in the car, and the son laughed at him for being "pedantic". A father is sophisticated, but he knows better than his son that "they only know money, and it's really useless to entrust it to them", but it is because he loves his son that he knows what he can't do. However, the son thinks his father's behavior is offensive, which makes him feel embarrassed. This is naturally not that the son does not love his father, but that the son does not understand his father after all. Later, the back appeared, and the son clearly saw that his father was doing incompetent work for himself, and finally fully understood his father's love for himself, so that he shed tears. This is a tear mixed with gratitude, regret and shame. The differences and changes in the inner feelings of the father and son in this process make the article ups and downs, and also show the touching power of the father's back.
Father bought oranges and finally left. At this point, the article seems to be over. But then I wrote a story about my father's sufferings in recent years. This paragraph can be said to be a deepening of the following description. On the one hand, it played a role in echoing the original atmosphere and emotional appeal, reflecting my father's bumpy life path and revealing the bleak society at that time, on the other hand, it continued to strengthen my back image. In his later years, his father was in a bad situation. Sometimes he treats his son worse than before. He is old and weak. He can't work hard for his son as he used to, but his heart of loving and caring for his son hasn't changed. "He just thought of me and my son." If a father used to do his best for his son, now in his later years, he has done it. The son saw his father's back in crystal tears. It should be said that the figure in his mind at the moment is not only the reappearance of his father's figure in the past, but also the figure of his old father. This figure entrusted his son's deep yearning for his father and deepened the reader's impression of the full text.
7. The composition describing the background is 258 words. I don't know when it started, but I began to like sitting there at dusk every day.
It's not beautiful there. Only two lonely swings, an old tree and two small stone stools are scattered there gently.
After school on Friday afternoon, I didn't go home on time because I was playful. On my way home, I was stopped by a magical force.
The orange light shines warmly in the yard, and the whole yard looks warm in Yang Yang. There are two gray-haired old people sitting on the small stone bench, and the silver silk on their heads bears witness to the perfect years that have passed. The old woman wore thick reading glasses and held an old newspaper in her hand. I don't know when it was, but she looked at it affectionately. The old man sitting on one side sometimes smiles and sometimes nods. The orange sunset became their most beautiful background.
On the tree-lined path leading to the yard, a pair of lovers walked hand in hand with a happy face. They hand in hand to convey warmth, so that the beautiful picture and the beautiful background at dusk are more romantic.
On the swing, a little girl wears a ponytail high, a small crown is lightly inserted on her head, and her chubby little hands hold a colorful lollipop tightly, just like a happy little princess. In the shade of a tree, a little boy is struggling to bury something. After a while, the little boy ran quickly to the little girl, pulling her chubby little hand to the tree. Then he pointed to the high hill and said, "Sister, I planted it. Today next year, you will see many morning glories, which will bloom more brightly than your smile. Both children's little faces are filled with happy smiles. At this time, the child's mother gave a gentle cry, and both the little boy and the little girl turned their heads with a smile. Clever mother seized the opportunity and gently pressed the shutter with her finger. There was only a click, the picture was frozen, the sun shone warmly on the children, and the children smiled brightly, competing with the sunset glow, a flower that opened late.
Take a good look at the beautiful background of the sunset!