Comments on whimsical compositions for primary schools

In ordinary daily life, many people have written comments. Comments can help the person being evaluated accurately understand themselves and the evaluation target. gaps and clarify the direction of your efforts. How to write a review to make the most of it? The following are the primary school comments on whimsical compositions that I have collected and compiled. They are for reference only. Let’s take a look at them together.

Comments on whimsical composition for primary school 1

1. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.

2. The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and is consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching.

3. The use of contrasting techniques deepens the theme; the plot is also quite original, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is simple and unpretentious, and the line drawing technique is used. The author's love and hate are included in the narrative, allowing readers to experience and think deeply.

4. The introduction of the father in the article is comprehensive, from appearance to heart, from work to life; the introduction of the father is also focused, focusing on the father's feelings. The characters are full and real, full of life. Be proud of such a father. Work harder and don’t let down your father’s expectations!

5. You can associate snow with the pursuit of life, starting from the details of life, and your innovative spirit is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who said that "plain water" is not the best drink?

6. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I agree with your point of view, but if the structure of the writing is more compact, it will be the icing on the cake.

7. This article chooses a brand new angle, allowing your thoughts to run freely here. This is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that through the chaos of worldly affairs, there are always some principles that we can grasp when dealing with the world, so that your thoughts will be deeper, and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

8. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can't help but give people a refreshing feeling. Teachers should really learn from you. Let us promote each other in future Chinese learning, okay?

9. The article is as simple and open-minded as the person you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is also the result of your long-term practice. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.

10. Writing can speak louder than words. I think articles are a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed very tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere to move forward, the crown of success will belong to you.

11. Wen Neng and Qing. You should not regard writing as a burden to yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate writing style.

12. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.

13. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.

14. Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. It can be seen from this article "Accident" that in your heart, you not only hold innocence and books and schools, but also endless concerns about society. This article has twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.

15. The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, highlighting the image of a confidant as a "bookworm" and the feelings of "knowledge" and "self" between "self" and "confidant", smart and elegant. .

16. We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life, and it can disappear in an instant. If you are in a field, walking in a forest, stepping on fallen leaves, and looking up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life, and life needs to care for each other. This is exactly the theme of your "Fragmented Chapter".

17. The article is complex but not cluttered, and can be detailed and focused.

18. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and depicts the key points of the article... in a delicate and vivid manner.

19. ... is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.

20. The content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

21. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It is a good work.

22. The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.

23. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.

24. Appropriate detail and complementation of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of the book...the content is richer and more vivid.

25. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar, and it is worth reading.

26. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and twists and turns, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

27. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

28. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

29. Pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is the key to success.

30. The article blends emotions into the scene, expresses emotions while depicting the scene, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete

31. The article has novel content, reasonable structure, smooth and coherent , naturally accessible.

32. It is based on real life, appropriate selection of materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transitions, full of interest and strong readability.

33. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.

34. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, the emotions are rich and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

35. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it.

36. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines.

37. The article describes the events of... in the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the levels are clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end.

38. This article is short and concise. The language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel friendly when reading it. My child, this semester the teacher has seen that you are writing homework faster and the content of your essays is much more substantial. All of this is the result of your hard work. The teacher is happy for you from the bottom of his heart. Because I see a passion in you, what a joy it is! Come on, kid!

39. The article blends emotion with emotion, expressing emotions while depicting the scenery. There are few family sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article. However, the length of the article you wrote is still high

40. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.

41. The full text has a concentrated narrative, without branches or branches, with simple and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.

42. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it.

43. The author has a clever conception and is good at selecting points to expand on. His writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking.

44. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.

45. The quotations of several common sayings throughout the text are just right, using nostalgia as a clue. This reflects your ideology.

46. Your article is very creative - it uses the form of a geometric proof question to complete the idea.

The full text is very literary!

47. The author has a strong ability to control the "body disperses and the spirit gathers". The whole article is written in one go, and the writing is like flowing water, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!

48. As a casual reflection, your article is quick-witted and full of wishes. The richness of life experience and the delicacy of thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will continue your efforts and form your own landscape in your future writing!

49. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.

50. It’s true that “writing is like a god”. It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting. Comments on whimsical composition for primary school 2

1. The conception is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it cannot reflect the reality of life.

2. The plot has ups and downs, the transition is too fast, and it is not coherent and natural enough.

3. The rhetorical metaphor is vivid and appropriate, and the ontology and metaphor are similar in form and spirit. The interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.

4. Appropriately use techniques such as contrast and comparison to effectively support the center of the article through the disparity and differences between things.

5. Use the technique of parallelism without losing any opportunity to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only enhances the momentum of the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.

6. Skillfully use personification techniques to make the objects in the article possess human behavioral characteristics and human thoughts and emotions, so that they can reflect the spiritual journey of the protagonist in the article from the side.

7. When selecting materials, you can choose themes with typical significance in life, and the events are highly representative.

8. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and sweeps away the pedantic atmosphere, which is refreshing.

9. Although the story is ordinary, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rationality is deep, highlighting the essence of the incident.

10. Although the incident is small, it reflects a profound truth and has certain universality.

11. The materials are selected from many aspects and angles, fully reflecting the personality characteristics of the characters and making the characters full-bodied.

12. The selection of materials is too popular and not necessarily representative, with old themes and old ideas.

13. Although events in life with certain narrative value were selected, due to insufficient analysis It is thorough but does not dig deeply, and the underlying truth of the incident cannot be deeply reflected.

14. The selection of materials is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and childish, has no new ideas, and is difficult to profoundly reflect the authenticity of the contemporary life.

15. Failure to reflect big principles through small things, and the expression technique of "seeing big things from small things" is not skillful enough.

16. There is a lack of multi-angle portrayal of characters, but a narrow theme is selected to one-sidedly display a certain aspect of the character's personality characteristics.

17. The emotions are strong, like a volcano erupting, gurgling out, and can deeply move readers.

18. Sincere feelings and deep affection are like mellow wine, making people drunk without drinking.

19. The emotions are genuine and natural, without any pretense, and the true feelings can be realized with a calm heart.

20. The inner process is real and delicate, and the characters’ thoughts and attitudes are clearly visible to the readers. Comments on whimsical compositions for elementary school 3

1. Your elegant and refined handwriting reveals your intelligence and wisdom. Striving for stability while making solid progress is the direction of your future writing efforts.

2. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you are constantly growing in the world of writing. The road to writing in the future is still long. I hope you can think hard and continue to innovate.

3. 31. Although writing is not something you like very much, you take every step steadily like a snail, insist on writing, and never stop writing.

Your spirit is truly admirable, and you will definitely carve out a world of your own with your personality.

4. Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has become globalized, so you should invest in collective life with a new attitude and adapt to the development of society.

5. There are always many fantastic stories written in the life of a young man; there are always many magical yearnings in the heart of a young man. This short article is like a small boat full of dreams, carrying the author's childhood dreamy yearning and just beginning to mature, heading for the distance.

6. The article ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless.

7. The full text has a concentrated narrative, without branches or branches, with simple and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.

8. There are many remarkable sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.

9. The language is simple, the center is clear, the conception is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.

10. Being able to write the inner activities of characters very vividly is indeed very valuable and leaves a deep impression on people. The article is connected from beginning to end, with a clear center and complete structure.

11. The article is well-founded, persuasive, highlights the personality of the characters, has natural context transitions, is clearly organized, refers to the beginning and end, highlights the topic at the end, and highlights the central idea.

12. The author observes carefully, describes delicately, uses lively language, and has innovative expression techniques. The full text has simple language and natural structure. ...The article has a rigorous structure and echoes from beginning to end.

13. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the beginning and end echo well. Although this article is short, the content is vivid and specific, the paragraphs are clear, the language is simple, and it is easy to understand.

14. A series of verbs expressing the actions of characters in the article are used accurately, and foil techniques are used well.

15. This article adopts the first-person writing method, which has a great advantage. It plays a good role in shaping the characters and expressing the center, and it reads in a friendly, natural and credible way. The thinking is clear and the pace is fast. Comments on whimsical compositions for primary school students 4

1. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching. They are indeed words from the author’s heart.

2. Seek the gains and losses in life from self-reflection, reveal true feelings in repentance, and the words are sonorous and powerful, shocking.

3. The language is simple, the feelings are flat, and the affection is not deep enough.

4. The emotion is too strong, and it does not seem to come from a deep feeling. Instead, it is just a pretense and self-inflicted.

5. The emotion lacks depth, fails to express feelings through scenes, and fails to create emotions from things. , although feelings are hidden in the text, they cannot be deeply explored.

6. The psychological portrayal is not vivid and specific enough, and fails to effectively express the character’s ideological attitude, likes and dislikes.

7. Shishi repeatedly emphasizes the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear intention.

8. Citing classic examples of famous quotes is more persuasive and can express the author's point of view more effectively.

9. The arguments are sufficient and powerful, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the philosophy is strong.

10. The examples are rich, the materials are properly selected, the descriptions are detailed and appropriate, and it is more convincing. Comments on Fantastic Essays for Primary School 5

1. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality traits.

2. The details are improperly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.

3. The content is mostly line-based outlines and lacks point-based detailed descriptions.

4. It is inconsistent with the spirit of the times and the content is too outdated.

5. The theme is focused, the center is clear, and the intention is clear.

6. The views are clear and the likes and dislikes are clear, making it clear at a glance.

7. The theme is directly highlighted in the content, clear and concise, without any redundancy.

8. The theme is serious, the thoughts are noble, and the ambition is strong.

9. The center is not clear enough and the intention is not clear enough.

10. The theme is vague, the meaning of the text is vague, and the purpose of writing is unclear.

11. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough and the words are not true.

12. The expression is not clear and persuasive.

13. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in the thought.

14. The plot has twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curves and beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

15. The plot has strong twists and turns, and unexpected things happen in ordinary life, which can attract readers' attention.

16. The changes in the plot do not fall into the clichés. Occasionally, suspense arises suddenly, and the twists and turns are unexpected. The development process of the events reflects the author's innovative ideas.

17. The plot develops relatively slowly and lacks a certain ups and downs.

18. The plot changes are bland and lack new ideas.

19. The plot is straightforward, without any suspense, and the narrative is straightforward and straightforward, like a running account.

20. The process is detailed, but the ending is brief and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable and gives people a feeling of anticlimactic;